WritingUnit4Whydon’tyoutalktoyourparents?ObjectivesStudentscanlearnaboutmoreadvantagesanddisadvantagesofafter-schoolclasses.Studentscanusehamburgerstructuretoshowtheiropinionsinaletteronafter-schoolclasses.Shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?CathyLindaDr.AliceforagainstagainstShouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?CathyforTheseactivitiesareimportantforherchildren'sfuture.Shereallywantsthemtobesuccessful.Whydon'ttheyjustlettheirkidsbekids?

Peopleshouldn'tpushtheirkidssohard.LindaagainstShouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?ParentsarealwayscomparingtheirkidswithotherChildren.Toomuchpressureisnotgoodforachild'sdevelopment.Alltheseactivitiescancausealotofstressforchildren.Dr.AliceagainstShouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?Dr.AliceagainstKidsshouldhavetimetorelaxandthinkforthemselves.Althoughit'snormaltowantsuccessfulchildren,it'sevenmoreimportanttohavehappychildren.Shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?Foryou,

shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?agreedisagreeForyou,

shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?agreeAfter-schoolclassesare_________________________.Theycanhelpchildrengetinto_________________andlater__________________.goodforthechildren’sfuture對孩子的未來有好處agoodhighschoolagooduniversity進入一所好高中一所好大學Freetalk:morereasonsForyou,

shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?agreeSomeclasseshelpchildren____________________nottaughtatschool.（學校不教的）Peoplelearnbetter_______________________learnimportantskills.學習重要的技能atayoungerage.在一個更加年輕的歲數。Foryou,

shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?agreeChildrenhavemoretimethanadults（成年人）,sotheyshouldlearn___________________.Someclasseshelpstudentsto____________________.asmuchastheycan盡可能多地發展他們的特長developtheirspecialityForyou,

shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?disagreeAfter-schoolclassestakeawaythechildren’sfreetime.Childrenhave____________________.Theseclassestakeaway______________________.notimetorelax.沒有時間放松children’schildhood.孩子們的童年Freetalk:morereasonsForyou,

shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?disagreeTheseclassesmay___________________and_____economicburden（經濟負擔）forafamily.Kidsare________________forthemselves.Theycan’tplantheirfutureclearly.costtoomuchmoney導致花費太多錢causetoobusytothink太忙了而不能思考Foryou,

shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?disagreeTheseclassesgivestudents______________________.Studentsmaylosetheabilityto______________________.太多壓力toomuchstress/pressure.learnindependently.獨立學習3bWritealettertothemagazinetoexpressyouropinionsonafter-schoolclassesforchildren.Usethefollowingexpressionstohelpyou.Trytowritetwoparagraphs.First,sayifyouagreeordisagree.Dear...,Idon'treallyagreewith...because...Althoughsomeparentsarerightabout...,Ithinkchildrenshould...Then,explainwhy.Inmyopinion,itisimportantforchildren/parentsto...Ibelieveitisbetterifchildren/parents...sothat...Perhapschildren/parentsshould/could...Ifchildren...,theywill...adv.可能;大概1時態一般現在時2人稱3第一/三人稱體裁書信；議論文審題Doyoustillrememberhamburgerstructure?agoodstructureforargumentation議論文TopicsentenceReason1

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Reason2ConclusionShowopinionandintroducethereaderstothetopicofthepassage.Addsomereasonstosupportyouropinionandtellwhyyouthinkso.Stateyouropiniononceagainandtellthereadersyouhavefinishedwriting.Supportingreasons/examplesSupportingreasons/examplesSupportingreasons/examplesTheymakethereasonsmuchstronger.Theyshouldbereasonable.TopicsentenceReason1

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Reason2ConclusionI(don't)think/believe/agree/disagreethat...;inmyopinion,inaword/allinall/inshortSupportingreasons/examplesSupportingreasons/examplesSupportingreasons/examplesReasons:becauseExamples:forexample/forinstancesuchasfirstly/first/firstofallsecondly/second/what’smore/besidesfinally/atlast/intheend...Howtomakeitmorelogical?DearSir,Inmyopinion,it'snecessaryforustotakeafter-schoolclasses,becausetheseclassesaregoodforourdevelopment.Firstofall,after-schoolclassesaregoodforthechildren’sfuture.Theycanhelpchildrengetintoagoodhighschoolandlateragooduniversity.What'smore,someclasseshelpchildrenlearnimportantskillsnottaughtatschool.（學校沒教的）Theseskillsmayactuallyhelpchildrenrelax,suchasplayingsportsorplayingamusicalinstrument（樂器）.Lastbutnotleast,I

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peoplelearnbetteratayoungerage.Childrenhavemoretimethanadults,sotheyshouldlearnasmuchastheycanbeforethegettoobusytolearnnewthings.Inaword,ifchildrenaregladtohavetheseafter-schoolclasses,theywillbenefitalot（獲益良多）

fromthem.Yourstruly,Linda+example+supportingreason+supportingreasonDearSir,Inmyopinion,Idisagreethatchildrenhaveallkindsofafter-schoolclassesontheirweekendsorholidays.Ihaveseveralreasonsforthis.

First,Althoughit’ssometimesgoodforchildrentostartlearningfromayoungage,childrenshouldhavetimetorelaxandthinkforthemselves.Second,Parentsshouldlettheirkidsbekids.Muchpressureisnotgoodforchildren.It’sevenmoreimportantforchildrentobehappyandrelaxed.Inaddition,Studentsmaylosetheabilitytolearnindependently.Iftheyonlyimprovegradesbyhavingtheselessonsinsteadoflearninghardatschool,theywillnevermakeprogress（取得進步）bythemselves.Allinall,it’simportanttohaveahappychildthanasuccessfulone.Yourstruly,Linda+supportingreason+supportingreasonlinkingIt’simportant/necessary/fair/unfairforsb.to…Thereisnoneedforsb.todosth.although............sothat.....AsfarasI’mconcerned...

據我所知GivereasonsGiveopinionsWhenthey…theycan…Ifthey…theywill…(Taking)after-schoolclasseshelp(kids)to....Nowit’stime

foryoutowrite.Shouldkidstakeafter-schoolclasses?項目標準自我評價同伴評價教師評價結構（1-3分）段落合理(3段)，結構完整，書信體銜接自然（連接詞）內容（6-7分）要點：1.是否贊同學生上課外輔導課;2.添加至少3個原因，以及適當添加支撐部分原因的理由和例子；

3.總結觀點語言（3-4分）時態：一般現在時句法正確，語言優美,內容豐富卷面（1分）書寫工整1Fillintheblanksusinguntil,sothatoralthough.1.Youshouldeatmorenow________youwon'tbehungrylater.2._________youmaynotliketodochores,youshouldhelpyourparentsaroundthehouse.3.Youcouldsavemoremoney_______youcanbuyagiftforyourfriend'sbirthday.4.Kidsshouldn'tplaycomputergames_______lateatnight.Theyshouldrestearly.5._________manypeopleliketoeatjunkfood,theyshouldreallyeatmorefruitandvegetables_______theycanbehealthy.sothatsothatAlthoughuntilAlthoughsothatSelf-check1.MybestfriendandIhadafight,andnowshewon'tspeaktome.A.Youshouldkeeptryingtotalktoheruntilshetalkstoyou.B.Whydon'tyouwaitafewmoredaysbeforetalkingtoher?

Myadvice:____________________________________________Youshouldlookforachancetosaysorrytoher.2.Foreachproblem,choosetheadviceyouagreewithmore.Thenwriteyourownadvice.2.Myfriendwantsmetogotoapartyontheweekend,butIwanttostudyformyexamsnextweek.A.Whydon't