主題四交通出行(TheWaysofTransportation)

隨著城市現(xiàn)代生活水平的日漸提高，城市的交通問題也愈來愈成為人們必須關(guān)注的問題了。由于私家

車的增多，交通法規(guī)的遵守與否而引發(fā)的交通阻塞、交通事故等，已經(jīng)成為我們亟待解決的問題。所以有

關(guān)這一主題的討論也是中考作文的重要考核點(diǎn)之一。

一.主題詞匯

begettingmoreandmoreconvenient

causeseriousairpollutionandnoisepollution

takebusesortheundergroundinsteadofdrivingcars

followthetrafficlaws

allthetime

befilledwithcountlesscarsandbuses

morefly-overs

二.有用句型

1.Itishardtosay...

2....isgettingmoreandmoreconvenient.

3.Inmypointofview,weshould...

4.Inthepast,...,butnow...

5.Inordertoimprovethetraffic,mysuggestionis...

三.模擬試題

請以“Trafficinourcity”為題寫一篇短文。

參考句型：

1.Whatdoyouthinkofthetrafficinourcity?

2.Whydoyouthinkso?(Giveatleasttworeasons)

3.Whatis/areyoursuggestion(s)toimprovethetrafficinourcity?

要點(diǎn)分析

1.這是一篇夾敘夾議的文章。

a.必須寫出你眼中的城市交通狀況（可以是好的，也可以是糟的）。

b.必須寫出你為什么認(rèn)為會是這樣的現(xiàn)狀。（至少給出兩條理由）

c.必須寫出你對改善交通現(xiàn)狀的建議。

2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

寫作素材

(1)TrafficinShanghaiisveryheavybecauseShanghaiisaninternationalcity.

(2)It'shardtosaythetrafficinourcityisgood.Actually,it'sterribleenough!Everyday,therearelotsoftraffic

jamsinthisbusycity.

(3)Trafficplaysanimportantroleineverycity.

(4)Thetrafficinourcityisgettingmoreandmoreconvenient.

2.造成城市交通現(xiàn)狀的原因的句子

(1)Thenumberofprivatecarsisbecominglargerandlarger.Moreimportantly,thissituationcausesseriousair

pollutionandnoisepollution.

(2)InShanghai,trafficisabigproblemnowadays.Thecityisalwayscrowdedinthemorningandintheevening.

Thestreetsarefilledwithcountlesscarsandbuses.What*sworse,somepeopledon'tfollowthetrafficlaws.They

makethetrafficevenmoreterrible.

(3)Inthepast,wecouldonlygettoChongmingIslandbyferryandittookusalotoftime,butnowwecango

therebycaranditonlytakesusanhour.Moretunnelshavebeenbuiltsothatwecantravelinthecitymoreeasily.

(4)Somecarownersdrivetheircars,eventhoughtheyhaven'tpassedthedrivingtest.Thisisagainstthelaw.

(5)Carshavepollutedtheenvironment.Peopleinfactoriessaytheywanttomakecarsthatpolluteless.Butothers

saymakingcarsthatpollutelesswillneverbeasgoodashavingfewercars.

3.提出一些合理建議來改善城市交通的

(l)Inordertoimprovethetraffic,mysuggestionistowidentheroads.Theroadsherearesonarrowandcrowded.

(2)1hopetherewillbemorefly-oversinthefuture.!thinkthetrafficinourcitywillbebetterandbetter.

(3)Inmyopinion,weshouldtakebusesorundergroundsinsteadofdrivingcarswhenwegoout.Wemustfollow

thetrafficlawsallthetimeaswell.

(4)Inmysuggestion,weshouldbegreenconsumers.Wecantrytoridebicycleseveryday.Itisthebasicwayto

improveacity*straffic.

(5)Tosolvetheseproblems,thegovernmentshouldlimitthenumberofprivatecarsandencouragecitizensto

choosepublictransportation.

(6)Thegovernmentshouldpassalawwhichasksallcarstotakeatesteverytwoyears.Thistestistomakesure

thatthecarissafeandingoodcondition.

(7)Isuggestpeopleusepublictransportduringtherushhours.

(8)Thegovernmentshouldalsotakesomemeasurestosolvethetrafficproblems,suchaswideningtheroads,

buildingoverpassesandsoon.

4.結(jié)束語

(1)Ifwedothisasmuchaspossible,Ibelievethatourtrafficandenvironmentwillbebetter.

(2)Weshouldobeythetrafficrulesaswell.Bettertraffic,betterlife!

(3)IfallthecitizensofShanghaicandothesewell,thetrafficwillnolongerbeaprobleminthefuture.

(4)Aslongaseveryonedoesitwellandthegovernmenttakeseffectiveactions,!believetheproblemabouttraffic

jamscanbesolvedsoon.

例文分析

TrafficinShanghaiisveryheavybecauseShanghaiisaninternationalcity.Withthedevelopmentof

transportation,thenumberofprivatecarsisbecominglargerandlarger.Theroadsarealwayscrowdedinthe

morningandintheevening.Thestreetsarefilledwithcountlesscarsandbuses.Inaddition,somepeopledon't

followthetrafficlaw.Theymakethetrafficevenworse.

Forthesereasons,Ithinkthattheproblemoftheheavytrafficmustbesolved.Wecangotoschoolbybusinstead

ofbycar.Ifwedothisasmuchaspossible,Ibelievethatourtrafficandenvironmentwillbebetter.

四.寫作操練

1.現(xiàn)在由于種種原因，交通事故在逐年增加，所以我們每個(gè)公民都應(yīng)遵守交通規(guī)則。請

以"Obeytrafficrules”為題寫一篇短文。

參考范文與答案：

Obeytrafficrules

Withthedevelopmentoftechnology,nowadays,moreandmorefamilieshavetheirowncars.Butmore

accidentscomewithit.Caraccidentsarehappeningaroundus.Wecanusuallyhearthenewsofthetraffic

accidentsbetweencarsandcitizens.Tokeepourselvessafe,weshouldobeytrafficrules.Whenwecrossaroad,we

shouldmakesurethetrafficlightisgreen,andthenweshouldnoticetherearenocarsdrivingfastorturningleftor

right.Ontheotherhand,driversshoulddriveslowlywhentherearepeoplecrossingtheroad,orwaitandletthem

gofirst.Inaddition,theyshouldneverdriveafterdrinking.Ibelieveifeveryonecandohispartwell,accidentswill

happenlesssothatwecanbesaferinthefuture.

2.擁有私家車的利與弊已經(jīng)成為大家都熱切關(guān)心的社會熱點(diǎn)問題之一。請以“Myviewonowningacar”為題寫

一篇短文。

Suggestedquestions:

a.Doesyourfamilyownacar?

b.Areyoufororagainstowningacar?Why?(Giveatleasttworeasons.)

參考范文與答案：

Myviewonowningacar

Todayfamilycarsarebecomingmoreandmorepopularbecausethey'reconvenientand

fast.Butcarsmaybringustrouble.SoIamagainstowningfamilycars.Firstly,trafficbecomesbusierandmore

accidentshappen.Trafficaccidentskillthousandsandthousandsofpeopleeachyear.Secondly,carsdrinkuphuge

amountsoffuelandthrowouthugeamountsofpollutants.Thenoisetheymakealsopollutesthe

environment.Furthermore,withtheincreaseofcars,parkingplaceswillbeabigproblem,too.Inaword,I'magainst

owningfamilycars.

3.請以“Sharedbike,anewwayoflife!”為題寫一篇短文。

Questionsforreference:

a.Whydoyouthinkitisanewwayoflife?

b.Couldyougivesomesuggestionsonmakingbetteruseofthesharedbikes?

參考范文與答案：

Sharedbike,anewwayoflife!

Bicycle-sharinghascomeintopeople'slifeinChina.Itsclearthatbicycle-sharinghasalotofadvantages.It

enablespeopletosolvethe“l(fā)astmileHproblem.Sharedbikescanbefoundalmosteverywhereatanytime,soitisof

greatconvenienceforpeopletotravelaroundanditdoesn'tcostmuch.Mostimportantly,cyclingmeansagreen

wayoftransportation.Themoreyouusesharedbikes,thelesspollutionyou'llproduce.

However,aftertheuseofthebike-sharing,people'swrongdoingshavecausedsomeproblems.Someusers

parkthebikesinwrongplaces.Furthermore,somepeoplekeepthebikesastheirown.What'sworse,afewusers

evendamagethebikes.

Allofusshouldtrytoobeytherulesandtakecareofsharedbikeswhilemakinguseofthem.Thegovernment

andcompaniesshouldalsoimprovetheirmanagement.

4.社會發(fā)展與人們生活水平提高的同時(shí)也引發(fā)了不少問題，比如交通阻塞現(xiàn)象。那么如何解決這一問題呢？

你有哪些好的建議？請以“Howtosolvetrafficjams”為題寫一篇短文。

參考范文與答案：

Howtosolvetrafficjams

Withthedevelopmentofthesocietyandtheimprovementofpeople'slife,privatecarsaregettingmoreand

morepopular.Asaresult,therearelotsoftrafficjams,andtheairbecomesmoreandmoreterrible.

Ithinktherearesomemeasurestosolvetheseproblems.First,weshouldrideabikeortakeabustogoto

schoolorworkfortheyaremoreenvironment-friendly.Isuggestweshouldusepublictransportduringtherush

hours.Thegovernmentshouldalsotakesomemeasurestosolvethetrafficproblems,suchaswideningtheroads,

buildingoverpassesandsoon.

Aslongaseveryonedoeshisbitandthegovernmenttakeseffectiveactions,!believetheproblemsabout

trafficjamscanbesolvedsoon.

5.每逢黃金周七天小長假，越來越多的人們涌入旅游者的行列。你覺得在黃金周旅游是否值得推崇？請發(fā)表

你的觀點(diǎn)。請以"MyviewontravellingduringGoldenWeekholiday”為題寫一篇短文。

Thefollowingpointsareforyourreference:

a.IstravellingduringGoldenWeekholidayagoodidea?

b.What'syourview?(Givesomeadvantagesanddisadvantages)

參考范文與答案：

MyviewontravellingduringGoldenWeekholiday

Forthe7-dayGoldenWeekholiday,travellinghasalreadybecomeapartofpeople'srelaxationactivities.Some

peopleareinfavorofthisdecision,whileothersdonotagreewithit.Ihavemyownviewaboutit.

TherearesomeadvantagesfortravellingduringGoldenWeekholiday.First,theholidayeconomywillgreatly

raisepeople'sconsumption.Inaddition,itbenefitstourism,transportation,hotelsandserviceindustriesandenables

themtothrive,whichinturnaddsfueltotheoveralleconomicgrowth.

However,italsohassomedisadvantages.First,thetravelcrazeputsaheavyburdenonthetraffic

system,causingserioustrafficjams.Besides,thousandsoftouristsfloodintoscenicspots,jammingrailwaystations

andairports,causingsomesafetyproblems.

Aboveall,Isuggestthegovernmenttakeeffectivemeasurestosolvetheseproblems.Wehopetravellingin

GoldenWeekholidaywillmakeourlifemorewonderful.

6.交通與安全是息息相關(guān)、不可分割的兩個(gè)大問題，如何安全出行、文明駕駛、解除危險(xiǎn)

隱患是大家密切關(guān)心的。請以“Whosedutyisoursafety?”為題寫一篇短文。

參考范文與答案：

Whosedutyisoursafety?

Therehappenedalotofaccidentstoourmiddleschoolstudentsinthepastfewyears.Ourteachersandparents

arealwaysworriedaboutoursafety.ManypeoplethinkitisourschooVsdutytokeepussafewhileothersthinkit's

ourfamilies'.ButIthinkitismainlyourownduty.Asweknow,ourteachersandparentsoftenaskustokeepsafe

whetherwhenweareatschoolorathome.Theyoftentellustokeeptotherightontheroad,nottoeatjunkfood,

nottotouchelectricitybuttons,nottoswimindeepwater,nottogotodangerousplaces.Wehaveaccidentsmostly

becauseweforgetwhatourteachersandparentshavetoldus.Sodon'tcomplainmuchaboutothers;thinkmore

aboutourownduty.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesatanytime.

7.隨著社會的發(fā)展和進(jìn)步，解決交通問題已經(jīng)迫在眉睫，請你以LiLei的名義，以“A

letteraboutdealingwithtrafficproblems”為題給CityDaily的編輯寫一封信談?wù)撨@個(gè)話題。

Aletteraboutdealingwithtrafficproblems

DearEditor,

參考范文與答案：

Aletteraboutdealingwithtrafficproblems

DearEditor,

I'dliketoexpressmythoughtsondealingwithourcity*strafficproblems.Asyouknow,thestreetsinShanghai

areusuallycrowded.Therearehundredsofprivatecars.That'sbecausethepublictransportisn'tconvenientenough.

It*stooslowforpeoplewhoareinahurry.Asaresult,manycitizenschooseprivatecars.Butwithsomanyprivate

cars,theairpollutionwillbeworse.Inmyopinion,peopleshouldn'tdriveprivatecarstoooften.Ibelieveifthe

publictransportisimproved,therewillbelesstrafficinthecity.Ihopeyoucanhelpspreadtheimportanceof

publictransportbytheCityDailyNewssothatmoreandmorepeoplewilltakepublictransporttotravel.Andthen

Ithinkourenvironmentwillbecomebetter.

I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.

Yours,

LiLei

8.為了緩解城市的交通壓力，越來越多的城市引入了大量的共享單車，但之后出現(xiàn)了諸多問題，比如共享單

車被亂扔、被破壞等。請以“There，salwayshope”為題寫一篇短文談?wù)勀銓鉀Q這些問題有什么想法。

參考范文與答案：

There'salwayshope

Torelievetrafficjamsandairpollution,manycitieshaveintroducedbike-sharingservices.Butproblemskeep

showingup.

Atfirst,whenpeoplearedoneusingthebike,someofthemjustthrowitontostreets,somebikesarestolenor

lockedupinchains.Besides,thedamagetotheORcodesonthebikeshasbroughthugelossestobike-sharing

companies.

Toimprovethissituation,there'salwayshope.NowIhaveagoodsuggestion.Bike-sharingcompaniesshall

have100creditscoresforeachuser.Penaltypointswillbetakenincaseofusers'badbehaviors.Furthermore,

bike-sharingserviceswillworkwellonlyifpeoplefollowtherulesandshowrespectforthebikesandotherusers.

However,punishmentmaynotbethebestwaytostopsharedbikesfrombeingstolenordam