高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習莫斯科街頭迷路遇雨，期待天使降臨指引1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文Themoreyoutrustandbelieveinangels,themoretheywillpourtheirblessingsuponyou.ItwasourfirstdaytoexplorethecityofMoscowonourown,withoutafriendortourguideleadingtheway.MyhusbandandIhadcompletedaweek-longtourandfeltconfidentthatwecouldwanderthroughthestreetsbyourselvesnow.Wehadenjoyedafulldayofexplorationwhensuddenlytheskyturnedfromclearbluetogray.“It’stimetoheadback!”Isaid.Aswewentonalongtheroadtoourhotel,Kvart,thestormcloudscoveredtheentiresky,andthefirstraindropsbegantohitourheads.4續寫原文“Shouldwegrabataxi?”Iyelled,therainbeingsoloudthatIhadtoraisemyvoice.“No,wecanmakeit,”myhusbandboomedback.“It’sonlyatwenty-minutewalk.”Astherainandwindincreased,sodidourfootsteps.Thestreetshadturnedintoroaringriversthatquicklysoakedourshoes.Suddenly,thebiggesteruptionofthunderIhadeverexperiencedsoundeddirectlyaboveus!Ithoughtmyhearttrulystoppedfor-thatmoment.Wehurriedforward,butitwasn’tlongbeforewerealizedthatwehadbeenwalkingmuchlongerthanitshouldhavetakenustoreachourhotel.Whereonearthdidwetakethewrongturn?Wehadnotboughtinternationalphonecards,sowecouldn’tcallforhelp,andthestreetswereempty.5續寫原文Suddenlywenoticedsomelightsonatagasstation.Great,atleastwecouldasksomeonethereforhelp!Asweapproachedit,twomenwererefuelingtheirChevroletcar.WeaskedthemhowtogettoKvart.Theydidn’treplybutmanagedafriendlynodandsmile.WewentontoexplainthesituationwiththefewawkwardRussianphraseswehadjustlearned.Theylistenedintently,butitwasobviousthattheywerebecomingincreasinglyconfused.Wehadtotryourluckbackonthestreet,prayingdeepdown,“Please,sendangelstoleadusback.”6段首句Paragraph1：ThenafamiliarChevrolet-carpulledupbesidesus...Paragraph2：Finallytheyunderstoodwhatwemeant.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9作者夫婦在莫斯科自行游玩一天后遇暴風雨，決定步行回酒店Kvart。雨大風急，他們迷路且無法求助。看到加油站有燈光和加油的人，上前詢問卻因語言不通未獲有效幫助。此時他們祈禱天使相助，故事充滿緊張與期待，展現了他們在異國他鄉的困境及對幫助的渴望。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：ThenafamiliarChevrolet-carpulledupbesidesus...這時，那輛熟悉的雪佛蘭車在我們身邊緩緩停下。車窗搖下，之前在加油站的其中一位男士探出頭來，用不太流利的英語問我們是不是還沒找到路。我們急忙點頭，眼中滿是希望。他熱情地招呼我們上車，說要送我們一程。上車后，我們感激不已，向他詳細描述酒店周圍的環境。他一邊聽一邊點頭，然后拿出手機，打開地圖開始查找。車子在雨中緩緩前行，我們緊張的心情也稍稍放松了一些，心里默默祈禱著這次能順利找到酒店。11續寫思路分析Para2：Finallytheyunderstoodwhatwemeant.終于，他們明白了我們的意思。司機通過手機翻譯軟件和我們進一步交流，確認了酒店的位置。他根據地圖指引，駕駛著車子在雨中穿梭。一路上，我們看到了一些熟悉的地標建筑，心中越發確定方向是對的。不一會兒，酒店的輪廓出現在眼前，我們激動得熱淚盈眶。下車時，我們想要給他報酬表示感謝，他卻堅決拒絕，只是微笑著說這是應該做的。我們懷著感恩之心走進酒店，深刻體會到了陌生人的善意。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現ThenafamiliarChevrolet-carpulledupbesideus.Thewindowrolleddownandoneofthemenfromthegasstationstuckhisheadout.HeaskedusinbrokenEnglishifwestillhadn'tfoundourway.Wenoddedeagerly,fullofhope.Hewarmlyinvitedustogetinthecar,sayinghewouldgiveusalift.Aftergettinginthecar,wewereextremelygratefulanddescribedthesurroundingsofthehoteltohimindetail.Henoddedwhilelisteningandthentookouthisphoneandopenedthemaptosearch.Thecarmovedslowlyintherainandournervousnesseasedalittle.Weprayedsilentlythatwecouldfindthehotelsuccessfullythistime.14范文呈現Finallytheyunderstoodwhatwemeant.Thedrivercommunicatedwithusfurtherthroughatranslationapponhisphoneandconfirmedthelocationofthehotel.Hedrovethecarthroughtherainaccordingtothemapguidance.Alongtheway,wesawsomefamiliarlandmarksandbecamemorecertainthatthedirectionwasright.Soon,theoutlineofthehotelappearedinfrontofus.Weweresoexcitedthattearsfilledoureyes.Whenwegotoutofthecar,wewantedtopayhimtoshowourgratitude,buthefirmlyrefused.Hejustsmiledandsaiditwaswhatheshoulddo.Wewalkedintothehotelwithagratefulheartanddeeplyfeltthekindnessofstrangers.15升級版范文呈現Then,afamiliarChevrolet-carpulledupalongsideus.Thewindowsliddownandoneofthemenfromthegasstationpokedhisheadout.WithasmatteringofEnglish,heinquiredifweremainedlost.Wenoddedvigorously,brimmingwithhope.Hecordiallybeckonedustoboard,assuringusofaride.Onceinside,wewereprofuselygratefulandelaboratedonthehotel'senvirons.Henoddedattentively,thenretrievedhisphoneandlaunchedthemapforasearch.Asthecarinchedforwardthroughtherain,ouranxietyabatedsomewhat.Silently,weprayedforasuccessfulhotelhunt.16升級版范文呈現Finally,theygraspedourmeaning.Thedriverconversedfurtherviaatranslationapp,confirmingthehotel'swhereabouts.Steeringthroughthedownpourasperthemap'sguidance,wespottedfamiliarlandmarksenroute,bolsteringourconfidenceinthedirection.Soon,thehotel'ssilhouetteemerged.Overwhelmedwithexcitement,tearswelledinoureyes.Uponalighting,weprofferedpaym