高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習雙犬護主顯忠誠，愛與理解延續1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文DogsnamedHeroandTorasavedtheirowner’slifeinMarch.Theyremainedbyhissidethroughtwocoldnights,foughtcoyotes(土狼),andwaitedforhelp.Theirstoryhaswontherespectoftheworld.AcharitydonationcampaignwaslaunchedbythevictimandthelocalshelterTaberLostPawsSocietytohelptheinjureddogs.Thestorybeganwithanattack.WhenapasserbynamedCurtisDahlwaswalkinghisdoginafieldofmuddygrassnearthesugarfactoryinthetownofTaber,anareathatisquiteremote,notwell-traveled,andquitecoldinMarch.Suddenly,Herocamerunningupandbithisdogaroundtheneck.DahlclaimedhefoughtwithHerofortenminutes,tryingtogethimoffhisdog,andhisfingerwashurtbytheendofit.Callingpoliceandanimalserviceswithacomplaint,hetoldthemaboutHero’spresence,butwhentheofficersarrivedandsawHerolyingdownthere,badlyhurtandtiredout,theysuddenlyheardacryforhelp.4續寫原文Arriving,theyfoundamanlyingonhisbackinaditch(溝渠),tremblingandunabletomove.Hetoldpoliceheis61andlivesaloneandthathewaswalkinghistwodogsHeroandTorawhenhefelldown.He’dbeenstucktherefortwodaysandhisdogsprotectedhim.Themansaidthatwhenhefelldown,ToraandHerostayedwithhimtokeephimsafeandwarmforsometime,andthenToraranoff.“Iknowshewenthometofindsomehelpforme,buteverytimeshecameback,verysad,”saidtheman.Torawentbackandforthfromthesitewhereherownerwasandherhomeseveraltimes.BythetimeDahlwalkedbyandrescuersarrived,Torahadjustgonebackagain.5段首句Paragraph1：ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.Paragraph2：Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.6Part2題目分析7續寫原文分析8三月，兩只狗狗赫羅和托拉拯救了主人的生命。它們在寒冷的夜晚守在主人身邊，與土狼搏斗等待救援。故事始于路人柯蒂斯?達爾的投訴，他稱赫羅襲擊了他的狗。但警察到達后發現受傷的赫羅及呼救的主人。原來主人獨自散步時摔倒，被困兩天，托拉往返家中求救，赫羅守護主人與土狼對抗。之后，達爾知曉真相后態度轉變。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點9續寫思路分析Para1：ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes.主人回憶起赫羅和托拉如何保護他免受土狼的侵害。“那些土狼在周圍徘徊，饑餓的眼神讓人膽寒，它們一直尋找機會靠近我。但赫羅和托拉毫無懼色，始終堅定地守在我身前。赫羅尤其勇猛，每一次土狼試圖靠近，它都毫不猶豫地沖上前去，發出低沉的吼聲，露出鋒利的牙齒，用自己的身軀為我筑起一道防線。在一次激烈的對抗中，一只體型較大的土狼從側面突襲，赫羅為了保護我，被土狼抓傷了背部，鮮血染紅了它的毛發，但它依然沒有退縮。托拉也在一旁不斷地吠叫，分散土狼的注意力。它們的勇敢和忠誠，支撐著我熬過了那艱難的兩天。”主人說著，聲音哽咽，眼中滿是對兩只狗狗的心疼與感激。10續寫思路分析Para2：Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.了解事情的經過后，達爾對赫羅沒有了絲毫的怨恨。回想起當時赫羅的狀態，他意識到赫羅并非無端攻擊，而是出于對主人的極度擔憂和尋求幫助的急切心情。達爾深感愧疚，決定去動物收容所看望受傷的赫羅和托拉。他精心挑選了營養豐富的狗糧和可愛的玩具，滿懷誠意地來到收容所。看到受傷的兩只狗狗，達爾的眼眶濕潤了，他輕聲說道：“對不起，是我誤會你們了。你們是真正的英雄。”從那以后，達爾經常來照顧它們，還會向身邊的人講述這個感人的故事，希望更多的人能感受到動物們的忠誠與愛。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現ThemanrecalledhowHeroandToraprotectedhimfromcoyotes."Thosecoyoteswerelingeringaround,withtheirhungryeyesmakingmetremble.Theywereconstantlylookingforachancetoapproachme.However,HeroandTorashowednofearatall.Theyfirmlystoodinfrontofmeallthetime.Herowasespeciallybrave.Everytimeacoyotetriedtogetclose,itrushedforwardwithouthesitation,growlingdeeplyandshowingitssharpteeth,buildingadefenselineformewithitsownbody.Duringafierceconfrontation,arelativelylargecoyotelaunchedasurpriseattackfromtheside.Toprotectme,Herowasscratchedonthebackbythecoyote,anditsfurwasstainedwithblood.Butitstilldidn'tretreat.Torawasalsobarkingcontinuouslybeside,divertingthecoyotes'attention.Theircourageandloyaltysustainedmethroughthosetoughtwodays."Theman'svoicechokedupashespoke,hiseyesfullofdistressandgratitudeforthetwodogs.13范文呈現Knowingwhathappened,DahlheldnoillfeelingstowardHero.RecallingHero'sstateatthattime,herealizedthatHerodidn'tattackhisdogwithoutreason.Instead,itwasoutofextremeworryaboutitsownerandeagernesstoseekhelp.DahlfeltdeeplyguiltyanddecidedtovisittheinjuredHeroandToraattheanimalshelter.Hecarefullyselectednutritiousdogfoodandlovelytoysandcametotheshelterwithfullsincerity.Seeingtheinjuredtwodogs,Dahl'seyeswelledupwithtears.Hesaidsoftly,"I'msorry.Imisunderstoodyou.Youarerealheroes."Sincethen,Dahloftencametotakecareofthemandwouldtellthistouchingstorytopeoplearoundhim,hopingthatmorepeoplecouldfeeltheloyaltyandloveofanimals.14升級版范文呈現ThemanvividlyrecalledtheharrowingmomentswhenHeroandTorashieldedhimfromthemenacingcoyotes.“Theretheywere,thoseravenouscoyotes,lurkingontheperiphery,theireyesglintingwithhunger,sendingshiversdownmyspine.Theyincessantlyprowled,seekinganopportunemomenttopounce.Butmyvaliantcompanions,HeroandTora,remainedsteadfast,theirunwaveringresolveevidentastheystoodresolutelybeforeme.Hero,inparticular,wasaparagonofcourage.Eachtimeacoyotedaredtoencroach,itsprangforwardwithunbridleddetermination,emittinggutturalgrowlsandbaringitsformidableteeth,usingitsownbodyasalivingbulwarktosafeguardme.Duringoneparticularlyintenseskirmish,alarge-sizedcoyotelaunchedasurpriseflankingattack.Inaselflessactofsacrifice,Herointerceptedtheassailant,sustainingadeepscratchonitsback.Thesightofitsfurstainedwithbloodwasheart-wrenching,yetitrefusedtoyieldaninch.Meanwhile,Torabarkedfuriously,divertingthecoyotes'attentionandaddingtothedefensivefront.Theirunwaveringloyaltyandindomitablespiritweretheverylifelinesthatsustainedmethroughthosearduoustwodays.”Theman'svoicequiveredwithemotion,hiseyesglisteningwithamixofpainandprofoundgratitudeforhisfour-leggedsaviors.15升級版范文呈現Uponlearningthefullextentofthestory,Dahl'sinitialanimositytowardsHeroevaporatedcompletely.ReflectingonHero'sdesperatestateduringtheencounter,hefinallygraspedthetruemotivebehindtheseeminglyunprovokedattack.ItdawnedonhimthatHero'sactionsweredrivenbyanoverwhelmingsenseofurgencytoprotectitsinjuredownerandsecurehelp.Overcomewithremorse,Dahlresolvedtomakeamends.Hemadeabeelinefortheanimalshelter,arme