高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習從嫌棄到接納，善意的轉變之旅1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文IwasbusilypreparingforourSaturdaynightbarbecue(燒烤),aweeklytraditionthatbroughtourfamilytogether.Suddenly,ourdaughterRikkistormedinthroughthefrontdoor,herfacecloudedwithanger.Withoutaword,shemarchedstraighttoherroom,leavingmewithasenseofanxiety.IlookedoutofthewindowandsawherclassmateLexiwalkingawaysadly.Mymother’sintuition(直覺)toldmethatthissituationmightneedsomegentleguidance.SoIcalledRikkiouttothekitchen,hopingtostartaconversationaboutwhathadhappened.Rikkistoodbeforemewithastubbornlookonherface,thekindthatkidsgetwhentheyknowthey’vedonesomethingwrongbutaretooproudtoadmitit.“InoticedthatLexicameover,butshedidn’tstaylong,”Isaidgently.“She’syourageandgoestothesameschoolasyou.Whydoesn’tshestaylonger?”4續寫原文Rikkisaid,“Idon’tlikeher,Iwishshewouldstopcomingoverhereallthetime.Shedressesterrible,andsometimesshedoesn’tsmellgood.”Isighedandsaid,“That’snotherfault,Rikki.Maybeshedoesn’thaveanyonetohelpherwiththingslikethat.Somekidsdon’thavetheextrathingsthatyouandyourfriendshave.Butthatdoesn’tmakethemanylessworthythanyou.Everyonedeservestobetreatedwithkindnessandrespect.”Rikkinoddedbutherexpressiondidn’tchange.Herfatherhadbeenwatchingfromthebackyardwherehewasgrilling(燒烤).Hedidn’tlikethewayRikkihadtreatedLexi,sohedecidedtotakeaction,Hecameovertomeandsaid“Let’sgoandseeLexi.”ThenhecalledRikkioverandaskedhertogetinthecar.TogetherwedrovestraighttoLexishouse.5段首句Paragraph1：AtLexi’shouse,Rikkiwasshockedtoseehowdifferentherlifewas.Paragraph2：RikkiinvitedLexitocomeoverandhavedinnerwithus.6Part2題目分析7續寫原文分析8每周六晚的家庭燒烤是“我”家傳統。一天，女兒瑞奇氣沖沖回家，徑直回房?！拔摇笨吹剿耐瑢W萊克西難過離開，便詢問瑞奇。瑞奇表示不喜歡萊克西，嫌棄她穿著和氣味?！拔摇毕蛩忉屵@并非萊克西的錯，每個人都值得尊重。瑞奇的父親也看不慣她的態度，決定帶大家去萊克西家。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點9續寫思路分析Para1：AtLexi’shouse,Rikkiwasshockedtoseehowdifferentherlifewas.到了萊克西家，瑞奇被眼前的景象深深震撼。狹小昏暗的房間里，家具擺放雜亂，且大多破舊不堪。墻壁上有幾處脫落的墻皮，顯得格外寒酸。萊克西的媽媽正忙里忙外，神情疲憊，她不僅要照顧家里，還要操持各種家務，顯然沒有多余的精力去顧及萊克西的穿著打扮?？吹竭@一切，瑞奇內心滿是愧疚。她回想起自己之前對萊克西的種種嫌棄，覺得自己實在太過分。她開始反思自己的行為，意識到不能以貌取人。10續寫思路分析Para2：RikkiinvitedLexitocomeoverandhavedinnerwithus.懷著滿心的歉意，瑞奇真誠地邀請萊克西來家里吃晚餐。萊克西有些意外，但還是欣然答應了?；氐郊液螅鹌鏌崆榈乩R克西，向家人一一介紹。燒烤過程中，瑞奇不停地給萊克西夾菜，和她分享有趣的事情。萊克西也漸漸放松下來，臉上露出燦爛的笑容。兩人相談甚歡，就像多年的好友。從那以后，瑞奇和萊克西的關系愈發親密，瑞奇也徹底改變了自己的看法，懂得了尊重和關愛他人的重要性。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現AtLexi’shouse,Rikkiwasshockedtoseehowdifferentherlifewas.Thehousewassmallandshabby,withold-fashionedfurnitureandpeelingpaintonthewalls.ShesawLexi'smother,whowasbusydoinghouseworkwhilelookingexhausted.RikkirealizedthatLexididn'thavetheresourcestodresswellorsmellnice.Shefeltashamedofherpreviousjudgment.Shestartedtothinkabouthowunfairshehadbeen.Sheunderstoodthatitwaswrongtojudgeothersbasedontheirappearance.13范文呈現RikkiinvitedLexitocomeoverandhavedinnerwithus.Lexiagreedwithashysmile.Backatourplace,RikkiintroducedLexitoherfamilywarmly.Duringthebarbecue,RikkichattedandlaughedwithLexi.Shesharedstoriesandfoodwithhernewfriend.Lexiwasnolongerthegirlshehaddislikedbefore.Instead,theybecameclose.Rikki'sparentswerehappytoseethechangeinher.Fromthenon,RikkitreatedLexiwithkindnessandrespect,andtheirfriendshipgrewstrongerdaybyday.14升級版范文呈現AtLexi’shouse,Rikkiwasstruckwithastonishmentuponwitnessingthestarkcontrastofherlife.Thedwellingwasdiminutiveanddilapidated,itsfurnitureantiquatedandthewallsadornedwithpeelingpaint.There,shebeheldLexi'smother,toilingawayathouseholdchores,hervisageetchedwithweariness.ItdawnedonRikkithatLexilackedthemeanstodonelegantattireormaintainanimmaculateappearance.Ashamedofherpriorhastyjudgment,shebegantoreflectontheinjusticeofheractions.Onlythendidshegraspthefallacyofjudgingothersmerelybytheiroutwardappearance.15升級版范文呈現RikkiextendedaninvitationtoLexitojoinusfordinner.Withabashfulsmile,Lexiacquiesced.Uponreturningtoourabode,RikkiintroducedLexitoherfamilywithexuberance.Amidstthebarbecue,RikkiengagedinanimatedconversationsandheartylaughterwithLexi.Sheregaledhernew-foundfriendwithstoriesandsharedthedeliciousfood.GonewastheanimosityRikkionceharboredtowardsLexi;instead,theyforgedaclosebond.Rikki'sparents,observingthistransformation,werefilledwithdel