書面表達話題寫作（二）物品介紹篇【話題點睛】

(1)涉及的話題主要有:物品介紹、失物招領等。(2)涉及的要點:學習用品、生活用品、發明物等在外形、顏色、功能、用途、操作步驟以及特點等方面的介紹。典例分析書包伴我們學習,伴我們成長!某英文報以“Myschoolbag”為題,舉辦中學生征文活動。請根據下面的圖表信息,寫一篇短文。內容包括:書包的外形特征、用途和書包背后的課業問題以及課余你期望做的事情。[提示](1)短文應包括圖表中的全部信息,條理清楚,行文連貫,段落分明;(2)短文中不能出現真實的人名和地名;(3)詞數:不少于80,開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。

MySchoolbag

Ihaveaschoolbag.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點撥】1.要點提煉:主題是對書包進行描述,文章主要有4個要點:(1)書包的外形特征;(2)書包的用途;(3)書包背后的課業問題;(4)課余期望做的事情。2.確定時態:一般現在時3.確定人稱:第三人稱【寫作架構】【基礎寫作】Ⅰ.寫主干句(根據所給提示補全下列各句。)1.書包總是陪伴在我們的身邊。(always)Theschoolbagis

byourside.

2.然而,它也給我們帶來許多麻煩。(however)

,italso

usmanyproblems.

3.不是享受精彩的周末,我們被迫用它上額外的課。(insteadof)

enjoyingthewonderful

,weareforcedtohaveextraclasseswithit.

4.如果我們有更多的空余時間,我們能參加活動、做運動。(if)

wehavemoresparetime,wecan

activitiesandplaysports.

alwaysHoweverbringsInsteadofweekendIftakepartin5.此外,我們也能夠培養愛好和興趣。(aswell)

,wecandevelophobbiesandinterest

.

6.作為一名中學生,我希望我的書包能分享我的樂趣和快樂而不是變成一種負擔。(ratherthan)

amiddleschoolstudent,Ihopemyschoolbagcan

myjoyandhappiness

becomeaburden.

BesidesaswellAsshareratherthanⅡ.句子升格(按括號中的要求完成句子。)1.Iuseittocarrytheschoolthings,suchasbooks,pensandsoon.(改為被動語態)2.Itlookslikealuggage.Theluggagealwaysaccompaniesmeintheworldofknowledge.(合并為含有定語從句的復合句)3.Wehavetodomuchhomework.Wecannotgetenoughsleep.(用so…that…將兩句合并為一個復合句)Wehavetodosomuchhomeworkthatwecannotgetenoughsleep.Itisusedtocarrytheschoolthings,suchasbooks,pensandsoon.Itlookslikealuggagewhich/thatalwaysaccompaniesmeintheworldofknowledge.【連句成文】MySchoolbagIhaveaschoolbag.Itisusedtocarrytheschoolthings,suchasbooks,pensandsoon.Itlookslikealuggagewhichalwaysaccompaniesmeintheworldofknowledge.Theschoolbagisalwaysbyourside.However,italsobringsusmanyproblems.Wehavetodosomuchhomeworkthatwecannotgetenoughsleep.Insteadofenjoyingthewonderfulweekendweareforcedtohaveextraclasseswithit.Ifwehavemoresparetime,wecantakepartinactivitiesandplaysports.Besides,wecandevelophobbiesandinterestaswell.Asamiddleschoolstudent,Ihopemyschoolbagcansharemyjoyandhappinessratherthanbecomeaburden.拓展積累【相關短語】looklike看起來像;assmallas…和……一樣小；themostuseful最有用的；forexample比如；suchas比如；withthehelpof在……的幫助下；inorderto為了；fromthenon從那以后；bring…tosb.給某人帶來……；learnabout了解【參考諺語】1.Somethingislearnedeverytimeabookisopened.開卷有益。2.Aletterfromhomeisapricelesstreasure.家書抵萬金。3.It'smycupoftea.那恰是我所喜歡的。4.Youcannoteatyourcakeandhaveit.魚與熊掌,不可兼得。【物品來源表達】1.Thereisawashingmachineinmyhome.2.ItwasinventedbyanAmericantannernamedJohnLoudin1888.3.Mymotherboughtthescarfformeasagift.【物品用途表達】1.Itiseasytowashdirtyclothesandotherthings.2.Theelectronicschoolbagislikeacomputer.3.Computersareuseful,convenientandtheyhavemorefunctions.4.Forexample,youcanlistentomusicandwatchmoviesonit.5.Theballpointpenisoneofthemostusefulinventions.6.Theballpointpenreallyhelpsuswritefasterandmakesourlifeeasier.【物品特點表達】1.Theelectronicschoolbagsareeasytocarryandchildren'sbacksandnecksmaynotbehurt.2.Andthepriceofitisusuallylow.3.Thebookisjustlikemybestfriend.【物品外觀表達】1.Ballpointpensarebecomingsmallerandlighter.2.Myhandbagisredandsmall.3.Thespecialcuplookslikeasmallfootball.實戰演練A

[2018·株洲]假定你是李華,你在美國的筆友Sam給你寄來一本英語詞典,你給他回贈一件具有中國特色的禮物,并發送一封電子郵件,包括以下內容:(1)說明你覺得他的禮物怎么樣;(2)介紹你回贈的禮物的中國特色;(3)邀請他來中國觀看冬季奧運會(theWinterOlympicGames)。[注意](1)詞數:80左右;(2)可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;(3)文中不能出現可能泄漏考生真實身份的任何信息。________________________________________________________________________________________One

possible

version:DearSam,Iamverygladtoreceiveyourletter.YousentmeanEnglishdictionary.Itisnewandspecial.Ilikeitverymuch.IwillsendyouaChineseknotinreturn.AChineseknothassomespecialsymbolsoftheChinesenation,likewell-being,happinessandgoodfortune.Inancienttimes,peopleusedittorecordtheevent,butnowitisusedmainlyfordecorativepurposes.Theknotmeanslove,marriageandreunioninChinese.Aknotisoftenusedforjewelryasagiftexchangeorprayforgoodluckandkeepingoffevilspirits.ThisformofhandicraftsfromgenerationtogenerationhasbecomeincreasinglypopularinChinaandaroundtheworld.What'smore,thetwenty-fourthWinterOlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing,Chinain2022.WelcometoChinatotakepartintheWinterOlympicGames.Yours,LiHuaB

[2018·東營]在你的成長歷程中,一定收到過禮物。有件禮物不一定貴重,但是在你看來卻非常珍貴。某英語雜志以“APreciousPresent(一件珍貴的禮物)”為題舉辦征文活動,請寫一篇短文,跟大家分享。[內容包括](1)這件禮物是什么?(2)你為什么覺得它珍貴?(3)它背后有什么故事?[要求](1)詞數:100左右;(2)文中不得出現真實姓名及校名。___________________________________________________________________________________________________One

possible

version:APreciousPresentIhaverece