高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習懂事男孩杰里米的愛與憂1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文Jeremywasaconsiderateboy.Hisdayswerefilledwithasenseofresponsibility,whetheritwasspendingtimeplayingwithhisbabysisterSuzy,assistingMomwithcookingdinner,ordryingdishesforDadaftersupper.ButJeremy’sfavoritejobwasfeedingFletch.Fletchwasthefamilycat.Withitsbeautifultiger-stripedcoat,Fletchwasmorethanjustapet;itwasaloyalcompanionandprovidedemotionalvalueduringhisstressfuldays.Theirbondwasunbreakable.4續寫原文WhenFletchwashungry,ithadauniquewayofconveyingitsneedstoJeremy-bybumping(碰)hisheadonJeremy’slegs.AndJeremywouldimmediatelyattendtohisfriend.Tohim,sharinghouseholdchores(家務活)andcaringforfamilymemberswerenotjusttasks;theywerefilledwithjoy.Oneevening,asthefamilygatheredfordinner,littleSuzyrealizedshehadlostherfavoritedoll.Hertearswereabouttointerruptthepeacefulatmosphereofsupper.Mom,whowasalwayscaring,gentlytaskedJeremywithfindingthedollinthebackyard.Withouthesitation,Jeremysprangintoaction,determinedtobringasmilebacktoSuzy’sface.5續寫原文Underthedim(朦朧的)moonlight,hesearchedcarefullyandeventuallyfoundthebrightreddollamongthegrass.Withasmileonhisface,hereturnedhurriedly,bringingasenseofrelieftotheentirefamily.However,Jeremy’sjoywasshort.Ashepreparedforbed,herealizedthatFletchwasmissing.ItwascertainlyarestlesseveningforJeremyasheanxiouslysearchedeverycornerofthehouseforFletch.Startinginthebathroom,hequicklymovedontothehallway,hisheartpoundingwitheachstep.Findingnosignofthecat,herandownthestairs,hiseyesscanningeveryinchofthehouse,andpanicsetinashesearchedeverywhere,onlytodiscoverthebackdoorwideopen.Tearswelledupinhiseyes.ThethoughtthatFletchwasnowheretobefoundhithimcrazily.6段首句Paragraph1：HehurriedtothekitchenwhereMomwaspeacefullysippinghertea.Paragraph2：Asdawnbroke,Jeremyrusheddownstairs,andopenedthebackdoor.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9文章講述了杰里米是個懂事的男孩，他日常會幫忙做家務、照顧家人，最喜歡喂家里的貓弗萊奇。一天晚餐時，妹妹的玩偶丟了，杰里米幫忙找回，可晚上準備睡覺時卻發現弗萊奇不見了，后門還開著，他焦急地四處尋找無果。后來他向媽媽求助，兩人找遍各處也沒找到。第二天黎明，杰里米下樓打開后門，驚喜地發現弗萊奇回來了，原來它只是出去經歷了一場小冒險，一家人又恢復了往日的平靜，杰里米也明白了不要輕易放棄希望。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：HehurriedtothekitchenwhereMomwaspeacefullysippinghertea.他匆忙跑到廚房，媽媽正安靜地喝著茶。杰里米眼眶泛紅，聲音帶著一絲顫抖，向媽媽訴說著弗萊奇不見的事情。媽媽放下茶杯，輕輕拍了拍他的肩膀，安慰他別著急，然后和他一起開始在房子里仔細尋找。他們先是檢查了弗萊奇平時愛待的角落，又在家具底下查看，可每一處都沒有弗萊奇的蹤影。杰里米的心里越來越慌，他擔心弗萊奇是不是遭遇了什么危險，媽媽則一直輕聲安撫著他，兩人在夜色中不放過任何一個可能的地方。11續寫思路分析Para2：Asdawnbroke,Jeremyrusheddownstairs,andopenedthebackdoor.當黎明破曉，杰里米飛奔下樓，迫不及待地打開后門。陽光灑在門口，他的眼睛急切地四處搜尋。突然，他看到弗萊奇正安靜地坐在臺階上，毛發有些凌亂，看起來像是經歷了一番奔波。杰里米激動地沖過去，一把將弗萊奇抱在懷里，嘴里不停地念叨著“你終于回來了”。弗萊奇“喵喵”叫著，用腦袋蹭著杰里米的臉，似乎在訴說著昨晚的經歷。杰里米帶著弗萊奇回到屋里，一家人都圍了過來，看到弗萊奇平安無事，大家都松了一口氣，杰里米也暗暗發誓以后一定會更加小心，不讓弗萊奇再走丟。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現HehurriedtothekitchenwhereMomwaspeacefullysippinghertea.Withhiseyesbrimmingwithtearsandhisvoicequivering,JeremyinformedMomaboutFletch'sdisappearance.Momputdownhercupandgavehimareassuringpatontheshoulder,tellinghimnottoworry.Thentheybegantosearchthehousemeticulously.TheycheckedthecornerswhereFletchusuallylikedtostayandlookedunderthefurniture,buttherewasnosignofFletch.Jeremy'sheartwasfilledwithgrowingpanic,fearingthatsomethingbadhadhappenedtoFletch.Momkeptsoothinghimgentlyastheycontinuedtheirsearchinthedarkness,leavingnostoneunturned.14范文呈現Asdawnbroke,Jeremyrusheddownstairsandflungopenthebackdoor.Thesunlightstreamedin,andhiseyesscannedtheareaeagerly.Suddenly,hespottedFletchsittingquietlyonthedoorstep,itsfurabittousled,lookingasifithadbeenthroughanadventure.Overwhelmedwithjoy,JeremydashedoverandscoopedFletchintohisarms,murmuring"You'rebackatlast."FletchmeowedandrubbeditsheadagainstJeremy'sface,asifrecountingtheeventsofthepreviousnight.JeremycarriedFletchbackinside,andthewholefamilygatheredaround.RelievedtoseeFletchsafeandsound,JeremysilentlyvowedtobemorecarefulinthefuturetopreventFletchfromgettinglostagain.15升級版范文呈現HehurriedtothekitchenwhereMomwaspeacefullysippinghertea.Eyesglisteningwithtearsandvoicetrembling,JeremybrokethenewsofFletch'svanishing.Mom,settingasidehercupwithagentleclink,placedasoothinghandonhisshoulder,murmuringwordsofcomfort.Together,theyembarkedonapainstakingsearch.EverynookandcrannythatFletchhadfrequentedwasscrutinized;underthefurniture,behindthecurtains,yetallinvain.Itwasasifthecathadvanishedintothinair,leavingJeremy'sheartpoundingwithdread.16升級版范文呈現Asdawnbroke,Jeremy,likeaboltoflightning,rusheddownstairsandflungopenthebackdoor.Bathedinthegoldenraysofthemorningsun,theresatFletchonthedoorstep.Itsfur,ruffledanddisheveled,borewitnesstoitsnocturnalescapade.Withanexclamationofsheerrelief,Jeremyscoopedupthefeline,holdingitcloseasifitwerethemostprecioustreasure.Fletch,purringcontentedly,rubbedagainsthim,asilentreassuranceofitssaferet