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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使其構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Surprise(timestwo)!MyfriendOlliehaslivedwithhisgrandmother,Abuela,sincehewasababy.Abuelaisthekindest,smartest,funniestpersonimaginable!OnthemorningofMother’sDay,Iinvitedthemtomyhouseforaparty.“Iloveanykindofpartyifthere’sacake!”O(jiān)lliesaid.“Ofcourse.”Ichuckled,“Imadeacardformymom,butIstillwanttofindsomepresenttogowithit”.OlliealsowantedtobuyrosesforAbuela,buteverythingissoexpensiveattheflowerstorethathecanbarelyaffordaleaf!Justthen,ourneighbor,Mrs.Nishikawawhowaswateringhergarden,wavedandcalled,“Goodmorning,kiddos!”O(jiān)lliewavedback.“Goodmorning,Mrs.Nishikawa!Yourgardenisalwayssopretty.”“Oy!It’samess.”Shegroaned.“Mybackhasbeenactingup,andIhaven’tweededfordays.”O(jiān)llieandIwereeagertoofferhelp.Halfanhourlater,bothofushadabigpileofweeds.Mrs.NishikawasmiledandsaidwecouldchoosewhateverflowerswelikedforMother’sdaybouquets(花束).Weclipped,arranged,andwrappedeverythinginbigsheetsofsparklypaperandstring.OllieandIbothsaidthattheselookjustasgoodastheonesatthestoreandevenbetter.Asweheadedbackwithflowersinarms,wecameupwithaplan.Nobodywouldthinktolookinmybedroomcloset,aperfectplacetohidethese,exceptmytwocats.Itwasagoodideathatattheexactrighttime,wewouldshout“Surprise!”andamazeeverybody.Butyouknowperfectplansdon’talwaysworkoutperfectly.Everybodyelegantlysippedteaandnot-so-elegantlygobbledcake.ThenwetookturnssayingthingswelovedandappreciatedaboutAbuelaandmymom.Rightwhentheywerechatting,OllieandIsnuck(溜走)offtogetoursurprise.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。“NO!”Iyelledassoonasourcatsdashedoutofthebedroom._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Howcanyougetsobeautifulflowers?”Abuelaandmymomasked.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:這篇文章講述了作者和好友奧利為母親節(jié)準(zhǔn)備驚喜的故事。奧利和祖母阿布埃拉一起生活,他們被邀請(qǐng)參加作者家的母親節(jié)派對(duì)。奧利想為祖母買(mǎi)玫瑰,但花店的價(jià)格讓他望而卻步。幸運(yùn)的是,鄰居尼西卡瓦太太的花園里有許多花,而且她因?yàn)楸惩礋o(wú)法除草。奧利和作者幫助她除草,作為回報(bào),他們可以從花園里挑選花來(lái)制作母親節(jié)花束。他們精心制作了花束,并計(jì)劃在派對(duì)上給所有人一個(gè)驚喜。然而,當(dāng)他們準(zhǔn)備實(shí)施驚喜計(jì)劃時(shí),作者的兩只貓從臥室里沖了出來(lái)。幾處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng):伏筆包括奧利想為祖母買(mǎi)花但缺錢(qián)、尼西卡瓦太太的花園需要除草、以及作者和奧利計(jì)劃的驚喜。在續(xù)寫(xiě)中,這些伏筆得到了回應(yīng),尤其是貓的出現(xiàn)打亂了他們的計(jì)劃,而他們?nèi)绾谓忉尰ǖ膩?lái)源也成為了一個(gè)懸念。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)(分兩段):第一段:描述貓破壞了驚喜計(jì)劃的情況,以及作者和奧利如何應(yīng)對(duì)這一突發(fā)狀況。第二段:描述阿布埃拉和作者的母親對(duì)花束的贊美,以及作者和奧利如何解釋花的來(lái)源。感情線:文章中的感情線是家庭成員和朋友之間的愛(ài)與感激,以及年輕人對(duì)長(zhǎng)輩的尊敬和感激之情。故事線:故事線是作者和奧利為母親節(jié)準(zhǔn)備驚喜的過(guò)程,包括幫助鄰居除草換取花束,以及在派對(duì)上實(shí)施驚喜計(jì)劃。主旨升華句:"Intheend,it'snottheperfectionofourplansthatmatters,buttheloveandeffortweputintothem."參考范文一:“NO!”Iyelledassoonasourcatsdashedoutofthebedroom.Thesurprisewasruined,orsowethought.Thecatshadknockedoverthecarefullyarrangedflowers,scatteringthemacrossthefloor.Laughtereruptedfromtheguestsastheysawthechaos.Despitetheunexpectedturnofevents,thejoyandloveintheroomonlygrewstronger.Wequicklygatheredtheflowers,andthepartycontinuedwithevenmoremirthandwarmth.“Howcanyougetsuchbeautifulflowers?”Abuelaandmymomasked.Withgrins,OllieandIexplainedourgardeningadventurewithMrs.Nishikawa.Theireyessparkledwithdelightastheylearnedaboutouractofkindnessandtherewardthatfollowed.Theflowers,thoughabitwiltedfromthecatincident,becamethecenterpieceofourMother'sDaycelebration,asymboloftheunexpectedsurprisesandthekindnessthatbloominourcommunity.參考范文二:“NO!”Iyelledassoonasourcatsdashedoutofthebedroom.Thefelineescapeeshadruinedourperfectlylaidplans.Thecats,intheirhaste,hadsentthehiddenflowersflying,andtheoncepristinebouquetsnowlayindisarray.Ourguests,however,foundthesituationamusing,andtheunexpectedcatcaperaddedatouchofhumortotheday.“Howcanyougetsuchbeautifulflowers?”Abuelaandmymomasked.Werecountedthestoryofourmorning'sworkinMrs.Nishikawa'sgarden,howwehadtradedourlaborfortheflowers,andhowthecatshadnearlyupstagedus.Thetalewasmetwithsmilesandnods,andtheflowers,thoughabitbattered,werestillcherishedastokensofourappreciationandlove.Thedayendedwithlaughter,gratitude,andtherealizationthatsometimes,thebestsurprisesaretheoneswedon'tplan.范文“NO!”Iyelledassoonasourcatsdashedoutofthebedroom.Thesightthatmetmyeyeswasbothamusingandalittleheartbreaking.Whileourcarefullycraftedbouquetswerenowachaoticblendofpetalsandstemsscatteredalloverthefloor,thecatswerecompletelyunawareofthemesstheyhadcaused.OllieandIstoodthere,momentarilystunned,asoursurprisewasunveiledinthemostunexpectedway.Theguests,includingAbuelaandmymom,quicklyrosefromtheirseats,tryingtocontain
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