不要過分關注白紙中的小黑點文

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Linda,ahighschoolgirl,wasfeelingdepressedaftershehadfailedhermid-termexams.Shedidn’tanswerherteachers’questionsactivelyinclasslikesheusedto.（沖突）Instead,shebegantolowerherheadandgotabsent-mindedeasily.（沖突）Herfriendsandclassmateswereworriedabouther,butshedidn’tfeelliketalkingaboutitwiththem.MrsGreen,herEnglishteacher,noticedherchangesanddecidedtodosomethingbeforeitgotworse（解決方法）.

Oneday,MrsGreenenteredtheclassroomandaskedherstudentstoprepareforasurprisetest（解決方法）.Theywaitedanxiouslyattheirdesksforthetesttobegin.MrsGreenhandedoutthequestionpapers,withthetextfacingdownasusual.Aftershehandedthemallout,sheaskedherstudentstoturnthepageandbegin.Toeveryone’ssurprise,therewerenoquestions,justablackdot(點)inthecenterofthepage.（沖突）MrsGreen,seeingtheexpressiononeveryone’sface,toldthemthefollowing:

“Iwantyoutowritewhatyouseethere.”

Thestudents,confused,gotstartedonthetask.

Attheendoftheclass,MrsGreencollectedalltheanswerpapersandstartedreadingthemaloudinfrontofallthestudents.JustasMrsGreenhadexpected,withnoexception,allofthemdescribedtheblackdot,tryingtoexplainitspositioninthemiddleofthesheet,etc.（解決方法）MrsGreenthenpickedoutLinda’spaperandadded,“Linda,Ilikeyouridea.Wouldyoupleasefollowmetotheofficeandtalkaboutit?”

“Er...Yes,madam!”Lindawaspuzzledbecauseshethoughtherideawasnobetterthananyoneelse’s.（沖突）Likeothers,shealsodescribedtheblackdotonlyandignoredthewhitepartofthepaper.Paragraph1：

Feelingnervous,LindawentintoMrsGreen’soffice.Paragraph2：“MrsGreenisright.Ishouldfocusmoreonthewhitepartofthepaper!”（解決方法）Lindagotrefreshed.思

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快讀文本獲取信息故事發展線索:Linda期中考試沒有考好,心情低落→MrsGreen想幫助她→一天,MrsGreen讓學生進行一次特別的測試,試卷上只有一個黑點→學生都描述那個黑點,包括Linda在內→MrsGreen說她喜歡Linda的想法→Linda感到困惑Step

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細讀續寫段首句合理推測根據續寫第一段首句設問:(1)WhatwouldMrsGreensaytoLindaintheoffice?(2)HowwouldLindareact?根據續寫第二段首句設問:(1)WhatwouldbeLinda’sreflection?(2)WhatwouldLindadecidetodoafterthetalk?推測:MrsGreen會告訴Linda不要注意那個黑點,要注意范圍更大的紙上的白區。這個黑點就像是一次失敗,不要讓失敗使我們忽視生活中其他更多的美好的事情。Linda聽了老師的話以后會做出改變——變得樂觀、豁達。最后根據續寫第二段的首句進行主旨升華。恢復精神的表現：眼中閃過一絲希望1234512345Para.2:“MrsGreenisright.Ishouldfocusmoreonthewhitepartofthepaper!”（解決方法）Lindagotrefreshed.續寫框架：五五拍戲法Para.1:Feelingnervous,LindawentintoMrsGreen’soffice.承上老師的反應：微笑著安排她坐下滿懷希望地離開辦公室希望：指出應該關注白紙的白色部分談心：指出這個黑點就像是一次失敗承上不要讓失敗使我們忽視生活中其他更多的美好的事情她終于在期末考試中取得好成績她意識到過去忽視了很多生活中的美好故事結局改變態度，開始積極參與課堂啟下情感態度價值觀升華①⑥⑦②③⑧⑨④⑤她明白了老師的用意，點了點頭逐句寫作第一句：老師的反應：微笑著安排她坐下MrsGreensmiledwarmlyandaskedLindatositdown.MrsGreensmiledwarmlyandgesturedforhertositdown.第二句：和她談心：指出這個黑點就像是一次失敗第三句：希望：指出應該關注白紙的白色部分ShepointedatLinda'sanswerpaperandsaidgently,"Linda,lifeislikethispieceofpaper.Theblackdotrepresentsthechallengesanddifficultiesweface,butthewhitepartrepresentstheopportunitiesandpossibilitiesthatsurroundus.Don'tletthesmallthingsovershadowthebigpicture."第四句：她明白了老師的用意，點了點頭Lindanodded,feelinginspired.Lindanodded,hereyesshowingunderstanding.第五句：滿懷希望地離開辦公室ShethankedMrsGreenandwalkedoutoftheofficewithanewfoundsenseofhopeanddetermination.第一句：她眼中閃過一絲希望Aglimmerofhopesparkedinhereyes.Shefeltanewfoundstrengthwithinher.第二句：她意識到過去忽視了很多生活中的美好Onlythendidsherealizethatshehadbeentoofocusedonhermistakesandfailures,ignoringthemanypositiveaspectsofherlife.第三句：改變態度，開始積極參與課堂Withnewfounddetermination,shedecidedtochangeherattitude.Shedecidedtoletgoofthepastfailureandembracethefuture.Shestartedtoactivelyparticipateinclassagain,readytofillthewhitespaceofherlifewithcolorsofsuccess.第四句：她終于在期末考試中取得好成績Shemadesteadyprogressinstudyandeventuallygotthebestgradesinthefinalexams.主題升華：不要讓失敗使我們忽視生活中其他更多的美好的事情Afterthisexperience,Lindadeeplyrealizedthatsometimeslifecanbehard,butweshouldalwaysbepositiveandlookatthebrightside.Don'tletfailurepreventusfromnoticingthemanyotherwonderfulthingsinlife.Failure

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aspects.范文1Feelingnervous,LindawentintoMrsGreen’soffice.MrsGreeninvitedhertoshareherideas.Afterthat,MrsGreensmiled,“Haveyouevernoticedthewhitepartofthepaper?”Lindashookherheadconfusedbecauseitneveroccurredtoher.MrsGreencontinued,“Theblackdotisjustlikethefailureinlife,onlyasmallpart.Ifwefocusonlyonit,wemighteasilyoverlookthehappinessoflife,thebiggerpart.”Suddenly,Lindaunderstoodit.Tearswellinguphereyes,sheexpressedgratitudetoMrsGreenbeforeleavingtheoffice.“MrsGreenisright.Ishouldfocusmoreonthewhitepartofthepaper!”Lindagotrefreshed.Onlythendidsherealizethatshehadalotofadmirableteachers,belovedfamiliesandfriendlyclassmates.Thefailureoftheexamswasjustasmallpart.Fromthenon,Lindabecameactiveintheclassagain.Shemadesteadyprogressinstudyandeventuallygotthebestgradesinthefinalexams.Afterthisexperience,Lindadeeplyrealizedthatsometimeslifecanbehard,butweshouldalwaysbepositiveandlookatthebrightside.范文2Feelingnervous,LindawentintoMrsGreen’soffice.MrsGreensmiledwarmlyandaskedLindatositdown.ShepointedatLinda'sanswerpaperandsaidgently,"Linda,lifeislikethispieceofpaper.Theblackdotrepresentsthechallengesanddifficultiesweface,butthewhitepartrepresentstheopportunitiesandpossibilitiesthatsurroundus.Don'tletthesmall