讀后續寫語料積累之如何表達驚訝背誦與測試（詞-句-文）講義

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背誦積累區：背誦遷移舉一反三

一、必背單詞

1.驚訝類形容詞：

astonished十分震驚的，非常驚訝的surprising令人吃驚的

amazed感到驚訝的shocking令人震驚的

surprised感到吃驚的thunderstruck極其驚訝的

shocked感到震驚的astounding令人驚駭的

stunned因驚訝、震驚而）目瞪口呆的staggering令人大吃一驚的

startled受驚嚇的speechless（因驚愕）一時語塞的

astonishing令人吃驚的incredible難以置信的

amazing令人驚喜的dumbfounded目瞪口呆的

2.驚訝類名詞：

shock令人震驚的事；震驚；休克

astonishment驚訝，驚愕

surprise意外之事；驚奇

amazement驚奇；驚愕

3.驚訝類動詞：

shock使震驚；使驚愕

astonish使吃驚，使驚訝

surprise使詫異；使感到意外

amaze使驚喜

4.驚訝類動詞：

surprisingly驚人地，出人意料地

amazingly令人驚喜地；驚奇地（褒義）

二、高頻語塊

l.beseizedbyshock震驚

2.beyondone'sexpectations出乎意料

3.speechlesswithshock驚得說不出話來

4.throwsb.intoastonishment使某人震驚

5.comeasashocktosb......讓某人很震驚

6.gaspinastonishment吃驚地倒吸一口冷氣

7.itamazes/astonishesmethat...令我驚訝的是..

8.beshockedbeyondwords驚訝地說不出話來

9.raisetheeyebrows/frowninsurprise驚訝的皺眉

lO.jawalmostdropped/fellinastonishment驚掉了下巴

ll.besurprised/amazed/astonished/shockedat/by…對感至！J驚訝

12.Whatamazes/astonishesmemostis…最讓我吃驚的是..

13.freeze/standstill/stopdead/benumbwithshock驚得當場呆住了

14.asparkofsurpriseflashed/passedacrossone'seyes眼中閃過一絲震驚

15.inastonishment/surprise/shock/amazement/disbelief吃驚地/震驚地/驚異地

16.toone'sshock/astonishment/surprise/amazement令某人震驚/吃驚/驚異的是

17.widentheeyes/eyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment吃驚地睜大了眼睛

三、佳句賞析

l.Hewasthrownintoastonishment.他大吃一驚。

2.Ourmouthsdroppedopeninsurprise.我們驚訝地張大了嘴。

3.Alookofsurprisespreadoverherface.驚愕的表情在她的臉上蔓延開來。

4.Hejustgluedhiseyestome,utterlydumbfounded.他只是兩眼盯著我，完全傻掉了。

5.Hewastoosurprisedtospeakoreventothink.他驚訝得說不出話來，甚至腦子都不靈了。

6.MyjawdroppedinastonishmentwhenIsawthesizeoftheaudience.當我看到這么多觀眾時，我驚訝

得目瞪口呆。

7.ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment.我——打開盒子，就驚

奇地睜大眼睛。

8.1tgavemeashockwhenIrealizedthatmychildrenpreparedgiftsforme.當我意識到孩子們為我準備

禮物，我大吃一驚。

9.FanslookedoninamazementasRobbinsmissedathirdgoalfortheteam.球迷看著Robbins第三次錯失

進球機會，驚愕不已。

10.Everyonegaspedinastonishmentasthecarscamearoundthelastbend.汽車轉過最后一個彎道時，人

人都驚得倒吸了一口氣。

11.Thewholebuildingshaking,Rubystoodinherbedroomstiffeningwithshock.整個屋子都在搖晃，

Ruby嚇得站在臥室里僵住了。

12.Hearingtheunexpectednews,Marywasnumbwithshock,asifrootedtotheground.聽至U這個意夕卜的

消息，Mary呆住了，動彈不得。

13.Frozenwithshock,weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasasix-year-oldboy.我們靠近，

發現車主是一個六歲男孩，都驚呆了。

14.Speechlesswithshock,weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasasix-year-oldboy.我們靠近,

發現車主是一個六歲男孩，目瞪口呆。

15.Withourjawsdroppingtotheground,Weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasa

six-year-oldboy.我們靠近，發現車主是一個六歲男孩，驚掉下巴。

16.WhenIwashavingmyoralexam,Igotsotongue-tiedthatitwasamiraclethatIcouldutteracomplete

sentence.當進行口語考試時，我非常瞠目結舌，以至于能說出一個完整的句子就是一個奇跡。

測試鞏固區：分級測試步步為贏

一、高頻語塊漢譯英

1.震驚

2.出乎意料

3.驚得說不出話來

4.使某人震驚

5.讓某人很震驚

6.吃驚地倒吸一口冷氣

7.令我驚訝的是……

8.驚訝地說不出話來

9.驚訝的皺眉

10.對感到驚訝

11.最讓我吃驚的是……

12.眼中閃過一絲震驚

13.吃驚地/震驚地/驚異地

14.令某人震驚/吃驚/驚異的是

15.吃驚地睜大了眼睛

【參考答案】

l.beseizedbyshock震驚

2.beyondone'sexpectations出乎意料

3.speechlesswithshock驚得說不出話來

4.throwsb.intoastonishment使某人震驚

5.comeasashocktosb.....讓某人很震驚

6.gaspinastonishment吃驚地倒吸一口冷氣

7.itamazes/astonishesmethat…令我'原訝的是.

8.beshockedbeyondwords驚訝地說不出話來

9.raisetheeyebrows/frowninsurprise驚訝的皺眉

10.besurprised/amazed/astonished/shockedat/by…對感至！H京訝

11.Whatamazes/astonishesmemostis...最讓我吃驚的是..

12.asparkofsurpriseflashed/passedacrossone'seyes眼中閃過一絲震驚

13.inastonishment/surprise/shock/amazement/disbelief吃驚地/震驚地/驚異地

14.toone'sshock/astonishment/surprise/amazement令某人震驚/吃驚/驚異的是

15.widentheeyes/eyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment吃驚地睜大了眼睛

二、佳句賞析漢譯英

L他大吃一驚。

2.我們驚訝地張大了嘴。

3.驚愕的表情在她的臉上蔓延開來。

4.他只是兩眼盯著我，完全傻掉了。

5.他驚訝得說不出話來，甚至腦子都不靈了。

6.當我看到這么多觀眾時，我驚訝得目瞪口呆。

7.我一打開盒子，就驚奇地睜大眼睛。

8.當我意識到孩子們為我準備禮物，我大吃一驚。

9.球迷看著Robbins第三次錯失進球機會，驚愕不已。

10.汽車轉過最后一個彎道時，人人都驚得倒吸了一口氣。

11.聽到這個意外的消息，Mary呆住了，動彈不得。

12.我們靠近，發現車主是一個六歲男孩，都驚呆了。

13.我們靠近，發現車主是一個六歲男孩，目瞪口呆。

14.我們靠近，發現車主是一個六歲男孩，驚掉下巴。

15.當進行口語考試時，我非常瞠目結舌，以至于能說出一個完整的句子就是一個奇跡。

【參考答案】

l.Hewasthrownintoastonishment.他大吃一驚。

2.Ourmouthsdroppedopeninsurprise.我們驚訝地張大了嘴。

3.Alookofsurprisespreadoverherface.驚愕的表情在她的臉上蔓延開來。

4.Hejustgluedhiseyestome,utterlydumbfounded.他只是兩眼盯著我，完全傻掉了。

5.Hewastoosurprisedtospeakoreventothink.他驚訝得說不出話來，甚至腦子都不靈了。

6.MyjawdroppedinastonishmentwhenIsawthesizeoftheaudience.當我看到這么多觀眾時，我驚訝

得目瞪口呆。

7.ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyesgrewwideingreatsurprise/astonishment?我——打開盒子，就驚

奇地睜大眼睛。

8.1tgavemeashockwhenIrealizedthatmychildrenpreparedgiftsforme.當我意識到孩子們為我準備

禮物，我大吃一驚。

9.FanslookedoninamazementasRobbinsmissedathirdgoalfortheteam.球迷看著Robbins第三次錯失

進球機會，驚愕不已。

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10.Everyonegaspedinastonishmentasthecarscamearoundthelastbend.汽車轉過最后一個彎道時，人

人都驚得倒吸了一口氣。

11.Hearingtheunexpectednews,Marywasnumbwithshock,asifrootedtotheground.聽至U這個意夕卜的

消息，Mary呆住了，動彈不得。

12.Frozenwithshock,weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasasix-year-oldboy.我們靠近，

發現車主是一個六歲男孩，都驚呆了。

13.Speechlesswithshock,weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasasix-year-oldboy.我們靠近,

發現車主是一個六歲男孩，目瞪口呆。

14.Withourjawsdroppingtotheground,Weapproachedandfoundthedriverofthecarwasa

six-year-oldboy.我們靠近，發現車主是一個六歲男孩，驚掉下巴。

15.WhenIwashavingmyoralexam,Igotsotongue-tiedthatitwasamiraclethatIcouldutteracomplete

sentence.當進行口語考試時，我非常瞠目結舌，以至于能說出一個完整的句子就是一個奇跡。

三、情感表達片段運用

請運用以上必備單詞或高頻語塊，把下面的語篇補充完整。

Ithrewmyselfontheground,screaming,"Iwantthattelephone.9,overandoveragain.Allthe

Christmasshopperslookedon1（震驚地）.2

（臉上閃過一絲驚奇），sheorderedangrily,4tGetuprightnow."Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfull

tantrum.3（令我震驚的是）wasthatmymothersuddenlylaydownbesideme

onthefloor,likewisekickingandscreamingoutforastringofsuchitemsasshewaseagertopossess.

Seeingthat,4（我呆住了，動彈不得）.Alltheon-lookersgluedtheireyestous,5

（驚掉下巴）.6（目瞪口呆）initially,theythenburstintothunderous

applause,showeringpraiseonmymother.

【參考答案】

Ithrewmyselfontheground,screaming,"Iwantthattelephone.overandoveragain.Allthe

Christmasshopperslookedoninastonishment.Asparkofsurpriseflashedacrossmymother'sface,

sheorderedangrily,“Getuprightnow."Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfulltantrum.What

shockedmewasthatmymothersuddenlylaydownbesidemeonthefloor,likewisekickingand

screamingoutforastringofsuchitemsasshewaseagertopossess.Seeingthat,Iwasnumbwith

shock,asifrootedtotheground.Alltheon-lookersgluedtheireyestous,withjawsdroppingtothe

ground.Dumbfoundedinitially,theythenburstintothunderousapplause,showeringpraiseonmy

mother.

四、情感表達語篇運用

1.（2023上?浙江?高三校聯考階段練習）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構

成一篇完整的短文。

JeffandIhadmanyconversationsduringtheyear,butIwillalwaysrememberthetimehetoldmeabouthis

family.Hisfather,asuccessfulphysician,wascoldandstrictinJeffswords.Hisfatherhadevenpavedtheway

forJefftoattendthesamecollegefromwhichhehadgraduated.

Jeffwastwenty-sevenandasuccessfulbusinessplanneratacompany——withoutadegree.Hispassionwas

skiing.Whenhegraduatedfromhighschool,hedecidedtodeclinehisfather^offerand,instead,toworkwitha

skipatrol（滑雪巡邏隊）.Withpaininhiseyes,Jefftoldmehestillrememberedthedaywhenhetoldhisfatherhe

wasgoingtogiveupcollegeandtakeajobataskiresort.

HearingJeffsdecision,hisfatherlookedoffintothedistance.ThencamethewordsthatstillechoedinJeff's

mind:"Youlazykid.Nosonofmineisgoingtoworkwithaskipatrolanddoesnotattendcollege.Ishouldhave

knownyou'dneveramounttoanything!?,Thetwohadnotspokensincethatconversation.

Later,hewasbackintheareanearwherehegrewupandhecertainlydidnotwanthisfathertoknowhewas

attendingcollege.Hewasdoingthisforhimself,notforhisfather.Hesaiditoverandoveragain.Jeff'ssisterhad

alwaysremainedsupportiveofJeffsdecisions.Shestayedincontactwiththeirfather,butJeffhadmadeher

promisethatshewouldnotshareanyinformationabouthislifewithhim.

Thedaywhenthegraduationceremonycame,Iwalkedaroundtalkingtopeoplebeforeitstarted.Inoticeda

manwithaconfusedexpression.

“Excuseme,^^hesaidashepolitelyapproachedme."Whatishappeningheretoday?”

"It'sgraduationday,“Ireplied,smiling."Well,thafsodd,“hesaid,"mydaughteraskedmetomeetherat

thisaddress.^^Hiseyessparkledandhesmiled."Maybeshecompletedherassociate'sdegreeandwantedto

surpriseme!^^

Ihelpedhimfindaseat.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Paragraph1:AsIlefthim,hesaid,"Thankyou.Bytheway,myname'sDr.Holstrom.^^

Paragraph2:Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.

【滿分范文】

AsIlefthim,hesaid,“Thankyou.Bytheway,myname'sDr.Holstrom."Thenamerinqincinmymind,I

frozeonthespot.JeffHolstrom!Couldthisbethecold,stemfatherwhodemandedhissonattendcollegeor

neverenterhishomeagain?Curirsityanddoubtbubblingup,IturnedaroundtogetaglimpseofDr.

Holstrom,attemptingtofindsomefacialresemblances.Beamingandscanning,Dr.Holstromseemedtobe

lookingforhisdaughter.Speechesgiven,thedeanbegantoreadthenamesofthegraduates,invitingthemonto

thestageonebyonetoreceivetheirdiplomas.

Jeffwasthelastpersontocrossthestage.Havingreceivedhisdiploma,heturnedtowardtheaudience,

radiantwithjoy.Suddenly,alonefigurepoppedintohiseyes——Dr.Holstrom.IwasnotsurehowJeffspotted

himinthecrowd,butIcouldtelltheireyesmet.Dr.Holstrom,口azinnatJeffthoushtfuHyforafewseconds,

openedhisarmsasiftoembracetheairaroundhim.Foramomenttimeseemedtostandstill.Jeffcame

down,smilingwithtearsineyes."Myfatherishere/hewhisperedtome,"IthinkI'mgoinghome.^^

【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Jeff告訴作者很多關于他的家庭的事情，Jeff愛好滑雪，高中畢

業時沒有按照父親的意愿上大學，而是去了滑雪巡邏隊工作，此后兩人不再聯系，后來Jeff回到家鄉上大

學，他依然請求家人瞞著父親，畢業典禮那天作者遇到一個滿臉困惑的男人，作者幫他找了一個座位。

【詳解】1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“當我離開他時，他說：‘謝謝你。順便說一下，我是Holstrom醫生可知，第一段

可描寫作者意識到他就是Jeff的父親以及畢業生上臺接受畢業證書。

②由第二段首句內容“Je任是最后一個穿過舞臺的人。”可知，第二段可描寫Jeff拿到畢業證書后看到了父

親，父親做出擁抱的動作，Jeff告訴作者自己想回家了。

2.續寫線索：僵住—意識到他的身份——畢業生上臺接受畢業證書——Jeff看到父親——父親做出擁抱

的動作——Jeff流淚說要回家

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①回響：ring/echo

②試圖做：attempttodo/makeanattempttodo

③映入眼簾：popintohiseyes/comeintoview

情緒類

①懷疑：doubt/suspicion

②喜悅：joy/enjoyment/pleasure

【點睛】[高分句型1]Couldthisbethecold,sternfatherwhodemandedhissonattendcollegeorneverenterhis

homeagain?（由關系代詞who引導的限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]IwasnotsurehowJeffspottedhiminthecrowd,butIcouldtelltheireyesmet.（由連接詞how弓I

導的賓語從句）

2.（2023上?福建泉州?高三校考期中）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成

一篇完整的短文。

Sam'sbirthdaywasapproaching,andtheexcitementthatusuallyfilledhisheartwasnowreplacedwith

disappointmentandstress.Turningelevenwasabigdeal,andhehadalwayscelebrateditwithagrandparty

surroundedbyhisfriends.However,thisyearwasdifferent.Theburdenofexcessivehomeworkandhisparents5

strugglingbusinessweighedheavilyonhim,forcingSamtomakethedifficultdecisionofnothavingabirthday

party,eventhoughitwasaneventheenjoyeddearlyeveryyear.

Oneday,duringbreak,hisbestfriend,Jim,withacuriouslookinhiseyes,approached.tcAreyougoingto

haveabirthdaypartythisyear?^^Jimasked,sensingSam'ssadness.

“No,"Samsighedandrepliedsadly,"There'sjusttoomuchgoingonandmyparentsaregoingthrough

financialdifficulties.^^

Hesmiledweakly,tryingtoconcealhisimmensedisappointmentandstress,butJimsawthroughhis

pretence《發裝）easily.Jimnoddedthoughtfullyanddidnotsayanything.Afterthebreak,Samsawhistalkingto

oneoftheirclassmates,Sarah,secretively.Curious,Samwentovertothem,butassoonasJimsawhim,he

quicklywalkedaway.SamwasstartledbyJim'sstrangeactionsandturnedtowardsSarah.

“Whatdidhesay?”Samasked.

However,SarahsimplyshruggedandwalkedawaywithJim,leavingSamstandingthere,feelingleftoutand

anxious.

Whatishappening?Sanwonderedanxiously.Aretheykeepingsomethingfromme?

AsSam'sbirthdaydrewnearer,Jimwasoftenfoundchattingsoftlywithhisotherclassmates.WheneverSam

wentovertothem,theywouldjustwalkawayortellhimthattheyweretalkingaboutasecretwhichSamwasnot

allowedtoknow.Jimhasneverkeptsecretsfrommebefore,Samthought.Hisheartfell.Evenhisfriendswere

distancingthemselvesfromhim!Heswungbetweenconfusionandsadnesswitheachpassingmoment,

desperatelytryingtofigureoutwhatwashappening.Whywerehisfriendsdistancingthemselvesfromhim?And

whatweretheyhiding?

注意：L續寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

OnthedayofSam'sbirthday,hewenttoschoolandfoundhisclassroomintotaldarkness.

TearssprangfromSam'seyesandhisfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.

【滿分范文】

OnthedayofSam'sbirthday,hewenttoschoolandfoundhisclassroomintotaldarkness.Awaveof

confusionwashedoverhimashesteppedhesitantlyintotheroom,hisheartDOimdin。.Hereachedforthelight

switch,butbeforehishandcouldfindit,achorusofvoicesbrokethesilence."Surprise!”,hisclassmates,ledby

Jim,jumpedoutfromallsortsofhidingplaces.Astheroomfloodedwithlight,Sam'seyeswidenedinsurprise

anddisbelief.Theclassroomwasdecoratedwithballoonsandstreamers,abeautifulcakesatontheteacher's

desk,andinthecomer,apileofpresentswaitedtobeunwrapped.

TearssprangfromSam'seyesandhisfacebrokeintoaradiantsmile.HeturnedtowardsJim,whowas

grirniin口fromeart。ear."Weknewyoucouldn'thaveapartythisyear,sowedecidedtobringthepartytoyou,^^

Jimsaid,hiseyestwinklingwithmischief.ThecloudofconfusionliftedfromSam'smindasherealizedthat

hisfriendshadn'tbeendistancingthemselvesfromhim,theywereplanningthissurpriseallalong.Thesadness

thathadbeenloomingoverhisbirthdaydisappeared,replacedwithjoyandgratitude.Ashecutthecakeand

openedhispresents,Samrealizedthatthiswasindeedagrandbirthdayparty,justliketheonesheusedtohave.

【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了Sam每年都會辦生日派對，可是今年由于諸多原因，Sam不能辦

生日派對了，心理很難受。好朋友Jim得知后，為Sam舉辦了一個驚喜派對。

【詳解】L段落續寫：

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①由第一段首句內容“Sam生日那天，他去學校，發現教室里一片漆黑。”以及第二段首句內容“淚水從Sally

的眼中涌出，臉上綻出燦爛的笑容。”可知，第一段可描寫Jane為Sally舉辦了一個驚喜派對。

②由第二段首句內容“淚水從Sam的眼中涌出，臉上綻出燦爛的笑容。”可知，第二段可描寫Sam非常感

動，度過了一個非常難忘的生日。

2.續寫線索：Sam每年都舉辦生日派對——今年，由于家中經濟困難，Sam無法辦生日派對——好朋友

Jim得知了這個消息，安慰了Sam—Sam發現同學們好像都在疏遠她，心里更加難過——生日當天，當

Sam來到教室時,發現了同學們為她舉辦了驚喜派對——Sam非常感動,也很感激Jim為自己準備的驚喜。

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①決定：decide/determine

②計劃：plan/intend

③消失：disappear/fade

情緒類

①驚奇：surprise/amazement

②開心：joy/delight

［點睛］［高分句型1］Awaveofconfusionwashedoverhimashesteppedhesitantlyintotheroom,hisheart

pounding.（運用了as的狀語從句以及獨立主格形式）

［高分句型2］HeturnedtowardsJim,whowasgrinningfromeartoear.（運用了who引導的非限定性定語從句）

3.（2023上?重慶渝北?高三重慶市渝北中學校校考階段練習）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭

語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

Ourchurchcongregation（集會）inTorontohasawayofassistingthosewhohavefinancialdifficulties

withoutmakingthereceiverfeelshameorguilt.Moneyisdroppedintoanofferingboxwithonlythenameofthe

receiverontheenvelope.Theenvelopesarethendistributedtothosememberswithoutthemknowingthenameof

thegiver.

TherecameatimewhenmyhusbandandIwereamongthoseinneed.Bothofuslostjobsatthattimeand

therewaslittlehopethatwecouldbeemployedwithinashorttime.Ofcourse,outofself-esteem（自尊），wedid

nottalkaboutourfinancialdifficultywithanyoneelse.Theonlyreasonourchildrenknewwasthatwehadtocut

backonmanythings.Still,wehopedtheywerenotawareoftheextentofourneed,norofhowmuchtheirfather

andIweresufferingbecauseofit.Wedidnotwanttoburdenthemwithaproblemtheycoulddonothingtosolve.

Withtimegoingby,oursituationwasn'timproving,andmyhusbandandIknewthatwewouldhavetolook

foroutsidehelp.Inthatcoldwinter,justaswereachedthepointofdespair,ourchurchgaveusagiftenvelopethat

hadbeenleftintheofferingbox.Youcouldn'timaginehowoverjoyedwewereonreceivingsuchavery

substantialamountofmoney,whichwasenoughtobringusthroughthatdesperatetime.Wecouldn'thelpbut

wonderwhohadgivensuchagenerousgift.Wewereextremelyrelievedandenormouslygrateful.Inthisway,we

couldsurvivethistoughperiodwiththemoney.Besides,weneedn'tworryaboutourson'suniversitytuition,that

is,heneedn'tapplyforanyloanbecausehehadtakenapart-timejobandworkedhardtoearnsomemoneysince

hewasnineyearsold.HehadbeenapapercarrierforTheTorontoStar,acarwasher,adishwasherandsoon.He

hadbeencarefulforhissmallearningssowehadtrustedhimtoleaveallhiswageswithhiminsteadofputtingit

intothebanktowardshiseducation.

Paragraph!:

Ayearlater,oursonwasapplyingforastudentloan.

Paragraph2:

Finally,intears,andwithgreatunwillingness,mysontoldusthetruth.

【滿分范文】

Ayearlater,oursonwasapplyingforastudentloan.Itwasthenthatwediscoveredhissavingsaccountwas

almostempty.Whatdisturbeduswasthathemightabusethemoney.Therefore,werequiredhimtotelluswhere

themoneyhadgoneinaveryseriousmanner.Hesitantandwordless,heloweredhishead,withhandstichtly

claspedandfaceblushing.Thescenethathekeptsosilentlikeastatuefueledmyanger.Countlessdoubts

roaringinmymessymind,Iexplodedandyelled“tellmethetruthnow”.

Finally,intears,andwithvreatuewiHinqness,mysontoldusthetruth.'Isentittotheofferingboxwith

yournames”,hemurmured,tearsstreamingdownhisface.Hiswordssuddenlyhitme1汰elightening.Iwas

cluedtothespot,speechless,withalumpinmythroat.Thefollowingmomentwitnessedmewrappingmyson

inmyarmstightly,sobbingandapoloqiziiig.NeverinmylifehadIbeenawareofmyson'slove,silentbutpure

anddeep,whichhadcarriedourfamilythroughthetoughtimeandnowwarmedmylifelikesunshine.

【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者和丈夫因為失業有了經濟困難，幸虧得到了教會的幫助。他

們可以用這筆錢度過這段艱難的時期，并且不需要擔心兒子的大學學費。結果一年后發現兒子正在申請學

生貸款，追問才得知兒子把自己的積蓄當作禮物送給了急需用錢的父母。

【詳解】1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“一年后，我們的兒子正在申請學生貸款”可知，第一段可描寫作者發現兒子的財務狀

況有異樣以后的反應。

②由第二段首句內容“最后，我兒子帶著極大的不甘，流著淚告訴了我們真相。”可知，第二段可描寫兒子

坦白積蓄放在了捐款箱里，以及作者和丈夫感動。

2.續寫線索：發現儲蓄賬戶是空的一擔心錢被濫用一追問兒子一得知真相一感動

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①發現：discover/find

②要求：require/request/ask

③大喊：yell/shout

情緒類

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①激發我的怒火：fuelmyanger/arousemyannoyance

②喉嚨哽咽：withalumpinmythroat/withmythroattightening

【點睛】【高分句型1】Whatdisturbeduswasthathemightabusethemoney.（由what引導d主語從句，that

引導d表語從句）

【高分句型21NeverinmylifehadIbeenawareofmyson'slove,silentbutpureanddeep,whichhadcarried

ourfamilythroughthetoughtimeandnowwarmedmylifelikesunshine/由which弓I導d非限定f生定語從句）

4.（2023上?河北張家口?高三河北省尚義縣第一中學校聯考階段練習）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給

段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

Anotherschoolyearwasbeginning.Ihadthirteenexcitedfirstgraderseagertolearnandreadytofillmy

classroomwithgiggles（咯咯笑），tears,andeverythinginbetween,IrealizedthatIhadauniquelysmallclasssize

andgotexcitedaboutthespecialprojectswecoulddo.OneprojectthatIhadbeenparticularlyinterestedinwas

adoptingmilitarymembersaspenpalsformystudents.

1beganbysendingoutane-mailtoourschooldistrictemployeesaskingfornamesandcontactinformation

ofanymilitarymemberstheyknewof.Iwasabletogatherfourdifferentcontactsandsentanemailtoeachone

askingifwecould“adopt"them.

Astheschoolyearprogressed,Ieagerlyawaitedresponsestomyemails,hopingtoestablishconnections

betweenmyfirst-gradestudentsandmilitarymembersservingabroad.Theinitialexcitementgavewaytoabitof

uncertaintyastherewasnotanyreply.

However,oneindividual,Sergeant（中士）Allen,emergedasabeaconofhope.Herespondedtomyemail,

expressinghiseagernesstoparticipateinourpenpalproject.Hesharedthathewascurrentlystationedoverseas

andhowmuchheappreciatedtheopportunitytoconnectwithyoungstudentsbackhome.

SergeantAllen'sinitialemailintroducedhimselftotheclassandoutlinedhisexperiencesanddutiesasa

soldier.Myfirstgraderswereabsolutelythrilledtoreadhiswords,andtheirfaceslitupwithcuriosityandwonder.

Theyimmediatelybegandraftingtheirfirstletters,fullofquestionsaboutlifeinthemilitary,hisdailyroutines,

andwhatitwasliketobesofarfromhome.

SergeantAllendidn'tjustrespondtoourinitialletters;hebecameadedicatedandcompassionatepenpal.He

answeredeveryquestionfrommystudents,sharingstoriesofhisdailylife,andthechallengeshefaced.

Myfirstgradersbegancraftingcolorfulcards,drawingpictures,andwritingheartfeltletterstoSergean