TheHiddenTreasure--ForeshadowingandEchoesWhenWhereWhoWhatSummerMr.Donovan’sfarmMr.Donovan,LeighAnnandISpendtimewithDonovananddiscoverhistruenaturePreview

testSettingTitle:TheHiddenTreasurePlotBeginningEndingRisingActionClimaxFallingActionAStoryParagraph1-3RumorsParagraph4-5ExperienceParagraph6CommunicationStructure—plotlinePreview

testPara.1:RumorsPara.4-5:ExperiencePara.6:CommunicationAfraidFrigentenedSurprisedFavoriteTheHiddenTreasureThesweat,kindhearthiddenbehindhisgruffvoiceEverysummer,wewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim.Thenextwinter,wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied.EmotionlinePreview

testBytheendoftheclass,Iwillbeableto1.understandthemeaningofforeshadowinganechoes;2.locatetheforeshadowingbydiscussion;3.writetheechoofeachforeshadowingbyraisingandansweringquestion;4.appreciatethesampleandreviseyourcomposition.LearningObjectivesLead-inWatchavideoandunderstandtheforeshadowing.There'saguninthedrawer.Whatwouldhappenlater?Thewomankilledamanwithagun.Foreshadowinghappenswhencluesinastoryhintatfutureevents.Foreshadowinghappenswhencluesinastoryhintatfutureevents.Forexample:Para1:Atleastthat’swhatweheard.Para2:Itheldtwotreasures.Onewashisbeautifulfruit.Workingroupsanddiscussthepossibleforeshadowingyouunderlined.ForeshadowingForeshadowingPara1Atleastthat’swhatweheard.Para2Itheldtwotreasures.Onewashisbeautifulfruit.Para3Idare...becauseofthehorriblerumors...Para4Wewerealmost...inagruff,lowvoice.Para5Heheldoutseveralripe,juicy,redapples.Para6Wehadfoundtheotherhiddentreasure:thesweat,kindhearthiddenbehindhisgruffvoice.Para7&8Everysummer,wewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim.Thenextwinter,wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied.Foreshadowing(whatweknow)Echoes(whatwewanttoknow)Atleastthat’swhatweheard.Idare...becauseofthehorriblerumors...Itheldtwotreasures.

Onewashisbeautifulfruit.Wewerealmost...inagruff,lowvoice.Heheldoutseveralripe,juicy,redapplesEverysummer

thenextwinterwewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim.

wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied.What‘stheothertreasure?——Thesweat,kindhearthiddenbehindhisgruffvoice.——ThethemeIsittrue?Ifitistrue,thenwhatwouldhappen.Ifitiswrong,thenwhatwouldhappen?Andwhatcanwelearnfromit?Whatwashishealthcondition?Didithasanysymbolicmeaning?Theremaybeaspecifictimeinbetween.visit:Whatdidwedo?talk:Whatdidwetalkabout?Howdidwefeelwhenweheardthenews?Whatwouldhappen?Predicttheechoes.EchoesSummaryandsublimation(升華)1.don’tjudgeabookbyitscover.3.don’ttaketherumorslightly,oryoumaymisshishiddentreasures.1.don’tjudgeaheartuntilyoucontactit.2.don’tjudgeapersonbyhisvoice.2.--hiskindheart,whichshallneverdieawaywiththepassageoftime.rumorsHiddentreasureWritedowntheechoesonebyone.Atleastthat’swhatweheard.Idare...becauseofthehorriblerumors...Wehadfoundtheotherhiddentreasure:thesweat,kindhearthiddenbehindhisgruffvoice.Languagehealthconditions面容枯槁witheredface臉色蒼白palefacesunken/hollowedeyes眼睛凹陷雙目無神dimeyes骨瘦如柴skinand

bone頭發枯如稻草straw-likehair頭發花白greyhairActiondescription行動遲緩moveslowly呼吸不暢feeloutofbreath微弱咳嗽faintlycough步履蹣跚walkinastaggering/stumblingwayWewerealmostthroughthefarmwhenweheard,“Hey,girls!”inagruff,lowvoice.Thenextwinter,wordgotaround…haddiedappearancedescriptiontoolAsymbolofDonovan’slifeorhiskindheartwhatwedidinDonovan’sfarm有一年夏天，我們像往常一樣去看望他，卻發現門廊里空無一人，果樹也枯萎了。Onesummerwewenttovisithim（像往常一樣）,

（卻發現）theporchemptyandthefruittreeswithered.as

usualonlytofind我們盯著荒廢的門廊和光禿禿的果樹，耳邊回蕩著老人粗啞的聲音。Westaredattheporchandbarefruittreeswiththeoldman’sgruffvoiceinourears.desertedechoingHeheldoutseveralripe,juicy,redapples.visit:Whatdidwedo?talk:Whatdidwetalkabout?Hardlydidwemeethimwhenhesurelygaveussomesweetandjuicyfruitstosatisfyoureager.我們愉快地與他分享在學校有趣的故事，而他則以他成熟多汁的水果招待我們。InsightalwayscamethelusciousfruittreesandDonovan’ssun-likesmile.Wesharedinterestingstoriesatschoolwithhim,andhetreatedushisripeandjuicyfruits.rapturously映入眼簾的總是甜美的果樹和Donovan陽光般的微笑。我們一見到他，他就給了我們一些又甜又多汁的水果來滿足我們的渴望。(Hardly...when)Everysummer,wewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim.Thenextwinter,

wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied.upfronthintsHowdidwefeelwhenweheardthenews?Whatwouldhappen?Howdidwefeelwhenweheardthenews?悲傷Adj.SadSorrowfulUpsetGrievedBroken-heartedDepressedBlueDownDejectedgloomy…Phrases:Downinthemouth/Downinthedumps垂頭喪氣，情緒低落Reducedsb

totears某個人或某件事讓你難過落淚Holdbackone’stears…強忍眼淚Sinkintogloominess/silence陷入悲傷/死寂Icanfeelmytearsbuildingup…我能感覺到我的眼淚在積聚……Lumpinyourthroat如鯁在喉feelthesorrowgrowing,bubblingupinsideusAsenseofgrieffilledmyheart/sweptoverme,...…Workingroups,chooseatleast2foreshadowingandwriteechoesforthem.(Atleast2sentences)WriteSentencepatterns:OnlyatthatverymomentdidIrealizethat...ItwasthisexperiencethattaughtusWithafaintcough,...Hardly...when.../Nosooner...than...Sinkintogloominess/silence陷入悲傷/死寂Lumpinyourthroat如鯁在喉...Foreshadowing(whatweknow)Echoes(whatwewanttoknow)Atleastthat’swhatweheard.Idare...becauseofthehorriblerumors...Itheldtwotreasures.Wewerealmost...inagruff,lowvoice.Heheldoutseveralripe,juicy,redapplesEverysummer

thenextwinterwewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim.

wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied.Itwasthisexperiencethattaughtus(OnlyatthatverymomentdidIrealizethat)don’tjudgeaheartuntilyoucontactit.Heleftusahiddentreasure——hiskindheart,whichshallneverdieawaywiththepassageoftime.SlowlyoutfrombehindthedoorcameMr.Donovan,whosevoicewasevenhuskierthanbefore,likesandpapergrindingatable.AsymbolofMr.Donovan’slife.Onesummer(Turningpoint)Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearswellingupinmyeyes.lookafterthefruittreesandsharedsomeinterestingthingsthathappenedatschoolWorkingroups,chooseatleast2foreshadowingandwriteechoesforthem.(Atleast2sentences)Write

Everysummer,wewouldvisitMr.Donovanandtalktohim.Wesharedinterestingstoriesatschoolwithhimrapturously,andhetreatedushisripeandjuicyfruits.Asweknewhimdeeply,outofnowheredisappearedthemeanoldman.Neverhadweanticipatedthatweweresostupidthatwemisunderstoodhimformanydaysandmissedsuchahiddentreasure.Butonesummer,whenwewenttovisithim,theporchwasemptyandthefruittreeswerewithered.SlowlyoutfrombehindthedoorcameMr.Donovan,whosevoicewasevenhuskierthanbefore,likesandpapergrindingatable.Toourshock,onlyafter10minutes’talkingdidMr.Donovanshowhistiredness.wehopedthathewouldrecoversoonbutthingsdidn’tgoasweexpected.visitandtalkEverysummer,thenextwinterTool:asymbolofMr.Donovan’slifegruff,lowvoiceAppreciationThenextwinter,wordgotaroundthatOldManDonovanhaddied.

Asenseofgriefoverwhelmingus,mysisterandIcouldn’tbelieveituntilwewenttohishouseandsawhissmilingfaceonthewall.Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearsstreamingdownourcheeks.Weedgedoutofhishouseandstaredatthedesertedporchandbarefruittreesw