2023年新高考英語應用文寫作提分技能(模板+素材+策略)類型模板之建祝賀信(2008年，全國卷I）假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（panda）,一直通過有關網站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。現在蘇琳即將三歲。請根據以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：自我介紹；祝賀蘇琳生日；感謝工作人員；索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數100左右；2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3、開頭語已為你寫好。DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChian!I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.I’vebeenapandaloversinceIwasachild.AboutthreeyearsagoIwasdelightedtolearnthatBaiyungavebirthtoherdaughterSulinandI’vebeenwatchinghergrowonyourwebsite.Nowshe’sgoingtobethere.I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS.Bytheway,couldIhaveaphotoofSulintakenonherthirdbirthday?Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua【范文點評】本文寫作的內容要點如下：1.自我介紹；2.信息來源；3.祝賀生日；4.感謝照顧；5.索取照片；6.合適的結尾。這封信格式正確，行文規范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結尾、結束語均表達到位。文章行文要活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準確，注意結合簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡。亮點詞匯：.delightedadj.欣喜的，快樂的2.expressv.表達3.givebirthtov.產生，生育亮點句式：I’dliketowishherahaybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahayandhealthylifeintheUS.我祝福它生日快樂并且對你們的辛勤工作表達我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。評析：定語從句的使用。開頭常用句式Itwasexcitingnewsformetolearnof…Pleaseacceptmysincere/hearty/warmcongratulationson…Itwasagreatpleasuretosendyoumycongratulationson…Iwasdelightedtolearnofyoursuccess/achievementsin…Iamreallyhappytolearnthatyouhavebeenelected…結尾常用句式Wishyougoodluck!Wewishtoshareyourhonorandjoy.Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead.Mayallgowonderfullyinyournewpost!Mayeveryhappinessbeyours!Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer!Mayeachsucceedingyearbringyougreathappinessandprosperity.Everygoodwishtoyouformuchhealth,happiness,andprosperity!模板①Dear______,Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______（祝賀事由）.Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______.Youmustbe______.AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.______（所取得的成績）isquiteexcitingnews!Iknowthisissurelyowingto______（被祝賀人過去的努力）.Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______（被祝賀人的優點）.Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou______（咨詢對方何時有空）.Ihope______（表達自己的愿望）.Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_____________,Goodnewstravelsfast!Itwasdelightfulformetohearthat______________.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationstoyour___________.Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehowmucheffortyouhaveputin.Nowyouprovetomeamaturedandwell-rounded________ineveryrespect.Judgingfromyourcurrentsuccess/achievement,Iamconfidentthatinthefuture___________.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yourssincerely,LiHua模板③Dear_____________,Congratulationsonyour_______.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Iunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardwork/yourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Thisnewposition,ontheotherhand,addsanewdimensiontoyourlifeandisboundto________.What’smore,Ialsobelievethat.Mayallgoesbeautifullyinyournewpost!Yourssincerely,LiHua日常生活中，無論是親朋好友畢業、晉升、獲獎、開業，還是訂婚、結婚、生日，都需要寫上一封信向對方表示祝賀。信中應表示為對方而高興。祝賀信應當充滿真誠和熱情，收信人讀后會感到喜悅和振奮。祝賀信既可以正式寫，也可以隨便寫，具體視場合而定。對不太熟悉的朋友適合正式寫，以表示禮貌和尊重；對熟悉的朋友則可以隨便一些。但無論采用哪種方式，祝祝賀信是社交中的一種禮儀性信函。祝賀信通常包括以下幾個方面的內容：說明祝賀事由，表達熱烈、誠摯的祝賀；圍繞祝賀事件表述賀喜內容；表達美好祝福。祝賀信寫作分三步走:說明事由并表達自己衷心的祝賀->展開評論事件、贊揚收信人->再次表達良好祝愿。在寫作主要內容的時候，可以重點贊揚一下當事人的優秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他將來的美好發展前景等。賀信必須表達由衷的感情，而且寫信要及時。Dear_______,(1)Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______.(2)Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson____.(3)Youmustbeveryproudofyour______.(4)AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.(5)_____isquiteexcitingnews!(6)Youarereally__.(7)Iknowthisissurelyowingto___.(8)Itisarewardyoudeserveforyour__.(9)Withyour_____,Iamsurethatyouwillbeasuccessinwhateveryouundertake.(10)Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou____.(11)Ihope.(12)Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.SincerelyYours,LiHua(1)獲悉值得祝賀的消息，說出祝賀事由(2)表達祝賀(3)描述對方的心情(4)表達自己的心情(5)被祝賀人所取得的成績(6)對對方的贊美(7)對方取得成績的原因(8)對對方取得成績的肯定，說出被祝賀人的優點(9)被祝賀人的優秀品質，表達對對方的祝福(10)咨詢對方的情況和時間(11)表達愿望(12)表達自己真誠的祝福假如你是高三學生李華，得知你的英國筆友Reed被劍橋大學(UniversityofCambridge)錄取，請你給他寫一封電子郵件。要點如下：1.向Reed表示祝賀；2.介紹自己目前的學習情況；3.請教學習方法注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，使行文連貫；DearReed,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearReed,Iamveryexcitedandinspiredbythenewsin