【2022年湛江一模讀后續寫題】閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。“Besuretohangthedecorationshigh,"saidPolly.mystepmom.“Jakemightmistakethecolorfulglassballsforhistoysandtrytobitethem."JakewasnewtoourfamilythatChristmas.Hewasabeautifulbrown-and-whitedog.And,ofcourse,hewasloadedwiththecuriositythatmadeeverythingatoy.TwoweeksbeforeChristmas,webroughtouttheboxesofdecorations,manyofwhichhadbeeninPolly'sfamilyforages.Amongthemwasaspecialboxthatheldanentiregingerbreadfamily(姜餅人).Theywererealcookies,hungwithredribbons(絲帶)andmademanyyearsearlier.Everynowandthen,Ioroneofmylittlesisters-RuthandSue-wouldpretendweweregoingtoeatone,knowingthatPollywouldsay,"You'llbreakatooth!They'resooldthatthey'rerock-hard."Wedidn'treallywanttoeatthem,butweenjoyedmakingfunofPolly.Sincewedidn'tknowhowJakewouldreacttothedecorationsortheChristmastree,wewerecarefultoputthedecorationsuphigh.Jakesniffed(嗅)thetreealot.Thosefirstcoupleofdays,Pollycaughthimstartingtoliftalegonthetreetwice.Buthelearnedquicklyandsettledforsniffingfromadistance.TheweekendbeforeChristmas,DadandPollytookustowatchthenewholidaymovie.Excited,wejumpedintothecarwithbagsofhome-madepopcorn,andoffwewentforagreatevening.Afewhourslater,wereturnedhome,onlytofind...aterriblemess.Itwasn'ttheChristmastree.Infact,weweren'tsurewhatitwas.Westoodjustinsidethedoorstaringatthemess.Asitturnedout,itwasJake'sbed,whichhe'ddestroyed.Leftaloneforthefirsttime,hemusthavegottenbored,attackeditandleftitfordead.Wedidn'tknowthatthebedwasnottheonlyvictim.注意：

1．續寫詞數應為150左右；

2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置。

Thenextmorning,wegirlswereplayinginthelivingroomwhereRuthletoutaascream____________________________________________________________________________

“Itwasn’tme,”Isaid,incaseanybodythoughtI’damidnightsnackofrockharddecorations._______________________________________________________________________

【前文分析】在圣誕節前夕，我們掏空心思地為節日裝飾，在這些裝飾物中，有繼母Polly珍藏許久的一套圣誕“姜餅人”。我和我的妹妹Ruth和Sue會時不時假裝要去吃這些姜餅，Polly知道后，開玩笑地說：“姜餅很硬，吃了會掉牙的。”而我們家庭新成員Jake——一只漂亮的小棕狗似乎對我們的圣誕節裝飾物非常感興趣，并且把所有的裝飾物都當成玩具。在圣誕節前的周末，Dad和Polly帶我們外出看電影，我們回家之后發現房間一團糟，那時我們并不知道Jake的床不是唯一的受害者，第二天早上我們發現......

【續寫情節問題分析】1.不少學生未能充分理解前文，不明確gingerbreadfamily是掛在圣誕樹上的，導致續寫情節與前文不融合。2.本篇讀后續寫命題涵蓋“人與自我”和“人與自然”兩個主題語境，蘊含重組家庭的成員之間和諧相處及對動物的愛護的正能量主題。有些學生續寫情節是繼母Polly對“我”懷疑、指責、刁難、虐待，“我們一家人”嚴厲懲罰狗狗Jake，嚴重違背了主流價值觀。這是在后期備考中教師必須糾正的大問題。參考范文：Thenextmorning,wegirlswereplayinginthelivingroomwhenRuthletoutasuddencry.Thencameherangryvoice,"Whohadeatenthegingerbreadfamily?"HardlyhadshepointedouttheChristmastreewithouttheginger-breadfamilyhungonitwhenPollycameover,withhereyesfixedontheChristmastree.ltseemedthatshewasbrimmingwithdisappointment,whichmadeusfeelsosorry.Sueimmediatelyexplainedthatshedislikedthesecookiesandshedidn'teatthem.Atthatmoment,alltheeyesarrowedintome.“'ltwasn'tme,"Isaid,incaseanybodythoughtl'dhadamidnightsnackofrock-harddecorations.Honestaslwas,wordsfailedtoconveymyinnocence.HoweverIwasabouttoburstintotearswhenJakerantowardsus,barkingatthetree,Suddenly,anideahitPolly.Observingthecookiecrumbsscatteredonthefloor,PollyannouncedItwasJakethatbitthegingerbreadfamily!"Thestoneinmyheartfinallyreachedtheground,lhelpedPollymakethenewcookiesforChristmashappilywithmysisters.Withthenewgingerbreadfamily,wefamilyhadawonderfulChristmaswithourcuriousdog.點評:該篇文章亮點很多,語法結構不僅運用自如且十分高級，更難能可貴的是語言“原汁原味”,銜接很合理。1、高級語法結構:本文多次使用倒裝如首句"Thencameherangryvoice”,Para1第二句'Hardhaddone…whendid”;以及Para2無靈主語的使用，'wordsfailedto…”。這些都可看出作者對語法結構的運用口。2、街接地道,情節合理:Para1末句'alltheeyesarrowedintome’自然引出Para2首句；Para2結尾做姜餅人小過圣誕情節可補全，使故事結局圓滿。總而言之,該'篇文章是值得反復品味的佳作!默寫版：Thenextmorning,wegirlswereplayinginthelivingroomwhenRuthletoutasuddencry.Thencameherangryvoice,"Whohadeatenthegingerbreadfamily?"______________________________________________________________________________________________________她剛一指那棵沒有姜面包家族掛在上面的圣誕樹，波莉就走了過來，眼睛盯著那棵圣誕樹.ltseemedthatshewasbrimmingwithdisappointment,whichmadeusfeelsosorry._____________________________________________蘇立即解釋說，她不喜歡這些餅干，也不吃Atthatmoment,alltheeyesarrowedintome.“'Itwasn'tme,"Isaid,incaseanybodythoughtI'dhadamidnightsnackofrock-harddecorations.___________________________________________________盡管我很誠實，但言語無法表達我的清白.HoweverIwasabouttoburstintotearswhenJakerantowardsus,barkingatthetree.Suddenly,anideahitPolly._______________________________________________________