讀后續寫原文中文翻譯Inthespringsun,myauntandIheadedforherflowershop.NormallyIwouldbedelightedtohelpinhershop,butnotrecentlybecauseofRosa.Rosawasmysister,justonemonthold,whowassettledinmyoldbedroom.Fortenyears,thesmallroomwasfullofmytoysandbooks.Butnowitwastransformedintoherbabyroom,decoratedlikeagardenwithpinksandyellows.

Myspace,myoldlife,wasgone.春光明媚，我和大姨向她的花店走去。通常情況下，我很愿意幫她打理花店，但最近因為Rosa的原因，我不再那么想去了。Rosa是我只有一個月大的妹妹，現在她住在我以前的房間里。十年來，這個小房間里滿是我的玩具和書。但現在，它已經變成了她的嬰兒房，裝飾得像個花園，粉色和黃色的裝飾品點綴其中。我的空間，我的舊生活，儼然不再。"Hereweare!"Wearrivedattheshop,awaveofcolourandsweetsmellwashingover

auntsaidIcouldpicksomeflowersforMumandDad.Iusedtolovethis,buttodayIwassooverewithtirednessandenvy.（二胎，家里老大會吃醋？）WhybothertobringthemflowerswhentheywereenjoyingRosaathomewithoutme?"我們到了！"我們到了花店，滿眼都是五顏六色的話，撲鼻而來的是花的芬芳。大姨說我可以為媽媽和爸爸挑些花。我曾經很喜歡這個，但今天我卻被疲憊和嫉妒所淹沒。當他們把愛都給了Rosa的時候，我為什么還要費盡心思給他們送花呢？SilentlyIhelpedmyauntarrangeflowers."Yourmumtoldmetherehasn'tbeenmuchshuteyerecentlyforanyofyou.""Notmuch,sinceRosathealarmclockwasinstalled(安裝)."Iplainedwithahugeyawn(哈欠).我默默地幫大姨擺花。"你媽媽告訴我，你們最近都沒怎么睡覺。""自從有了Rosa，她隨時會醒來哭鬧，導致我們確實沒怎么睡。"我打著哈欠抱怨道。"Irememberhavingtocreep(躡手躡腳地走)aroundlikeawornoutmousewhenyourmumwasababy.Ispentthefirstmonthshatinghersomuch.""ButyouandMumseemsoclose,"Isaid,guiltilyhidingawaymyenvyofRosa."我記得當你媽媽還是個嬰兒的時候，我要像一只疲憊的老鼠那樣躡手躡腳地走。我度過了最初的幾個月，都在極度討厭她。""但是你和媽媽看起來很親近，"我說，內疚地隱藏起對Rosa的嫉妒。"Nowweare.Butittookmeyearstogrowintotheroleofbigsister.Fewflowersblossom(綻放)overnight,youknow."Shepulledmeinforasidehug,glancingupattheclock,andsuggestedItakeawalkoutside."現在我們確實很親近。但是我花了好幾年的時間才適應大姐姐的角色。你知道，很少有花能在一夜之間綻放。"她把我拉過來側抱一下，看了一眼鐘，建議我出去走走。Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmychildhoodmemories.IrememberedhowI'dsitwithDad,makingflowerchains,crowning(授予)eachotherwiththesilliesttitles:QueenofJunkFoodandKingofMess.Mysmilegrewwider.Theshining

yellowflowers

remindedmeofthecolorinRosa'sbabyroom.Wassheawake?Iwondered.在她的花店后面是田地,地里生長著一些花（迎春花？)。我踏進田地，開始采摘小花。這就像重拾我的童年記憶。我記得我曾經和爸爸一起坐著，串起花鏈，授予對方傻傻的頭銜：垃圾食品女王和邋遢大王。我笑地很開心。那些閃亮的黃色花朵讓我想起了Rosa的嬰兒房里的顏色。她醒著嗎？我在想。續寫第一段：SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.

續寫第二段：Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.突然，我看到兩個熟悉的身影向我走來。Rosa在野餐毯子旁邊的嬰兒籃中醒著。主要內容：妹妹Rosa的出生不僅霸占了我的房間，還有爸爸媽媽的陪伴，我非常嫉妒我妹妹。阿姨通過親身經歷告訴我，需要時間才能成長成一位大姐姐。Problem:

我如何消除對Rosa的嫉妒，并學會接受和喜愛她。文本特點話題為親情類，學生較為熟悉，矛盾沖突明顯。文本中較多環境、動作和情緒等細節描寫。學生習作問題1.

難以讀懂原文，理解原文情節2.

沒有很好抓住原文矛盾沖突3.

沒有很好進行原文回扣和主題升華本文的高潮部分（高潮小段落截取并請翻譯）

Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmychildhoodmemories.IrememberedhowI'dsitwithDad,makingflowerchains,crowning(授予)eachotherwiththesilliesttitles:QueenofJunkFoodandKingofMess.Mysmilegrewwider.TheshiningyellowflowersremindedmeofthecolorinRosa's

babyroom.Wassheawake?Iwondered.她的店鋪后面是一片春花盛開的田野。走進田野，我開始摘小花。這就像收集我的童年記憶。我記得我是如何和爸爸坐在一起，做花鏈，授予彼此擁有最愚蠢的頭銜：垃圾食品女王和混亂之王。我的笑容越來越燦爛。閃閃發光的黃色花朵讓我想起了羅莎嬰兒房里的顏色。她醒著嗎？我想知道。進展:Then,whathappened?IheadedforflowershopwithauntIhelpedmyauntarrangeflowersauntsuggestedItakeawalkoutsideIbegantopicklittleflowerswonderedRosawasawakeConflicts:IenviedRosabecausemyoldroomwastransformedintoherbabyroom,andmumanddadwereenjoyingRosaathomewithoutme.Solutions:Ilearnedfromaunt'swordsandlearnedtobeabigsister.Theme:Lovebetweenfamilies語言積累：Readforlanguage環境描寫Butnowitwastransformedintoherbabyroom,decoratedlikeagirl’sroomwithpinksandyellows.Wearrivedattheshop,awaveofcolourandsweetsmellwashingoverme.Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmy.TheshiningyellowflowersremindedmeofthecolorinRosa'sbabyroom.動作、心理和話語描寫Iusedtolovethis,buttodayIwassooverewithtirednessandenvy."Notmuch,sinceRosathealarmclockwasinstalled(安裝).Iplainedwithahugeyawn(哈欠)."ButyouandMumseemsoclose,"Isaid,guiltilyhidingawaymyenvyofRosa.Nowweare.Butittookmeyearstogrowintotheroleofbigsister.Fewflowersblossom(綻)overnight,youknow."Shepulledmeinforasidehug,glancingupattheclock,andsuggestedItakeawalkoutside.Mysmilegrewwider.參考范文：SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.Itwasmyparents

withRosain

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new

babybasket.

Inmyfather'shandwasafamiliarsight,mymother's

old

flowerbasket.IfeltatuginmychestasIsawthem,realizinghowmuchI'dmissedtheirpany.

Theyweresmiling,lookingalittlewearybutfullofadorationforthetinybeingthathadturnedourlivesupsidedown.

Even

thoughIwasconsumedwithjealousyjustmomentsago,seeingthemapproach,

Ifeltarushofmixedemotions—resentmentandexpectation.Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.

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glancedaroundthesurroundingswithcuriosity.

Whenshecaughtsightofme,shestared

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sharingmylifewithmylittlesisterwouldnotbeasbad