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Organizationofanewsreport

Anewsreportshouldalwayshaveaneye-catchingshortheadlinewhich

introducesthetopic.Itshouldalsobedividedintowell-structuredparagraphs,thatis:a)anintroductionwheredetailsaboutthetime,placeandpeopleinvolvedintheincidentaregiven;b)amainbodyconsistingoftwoormoreparagraphswheretheeventisdevelopedindetail,givinginformationaboutthereasonithappenedanditsresult;c)anendingwherecommentsoractionstobetakenarebrieflymentioned.PassiveVoiceandDirect/ReportedSpeechcanbeusedtomakethenewsreportmoreinteresting.

Introduction--Paragraph1

Summaryoftheevent(time,place,peopleinvolved)

MainBody--Paragraph2–4

Developmentoftheeventindetail,causes,consequences

Conclusion--FinalParagraph

People’scomments/actiontaken

※寫(xiě)作評(píng)析

如果你是某同學(xué)英文報(bào)社小記者，請(qǐng)按照下列表格內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇英文新

1.句子結(jié)構(gòu)精確?????，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，可適當(dāng)拓展

2.字?jǐn)?shù)100-120

優(yōu)秀作文FireworksSetFireinBar

Fivepeoplewerekilledinafireaccidentat11:00p.m.onDec.20,2022inXiaosaBarinHangzhou.

Thefirebrokeoutwhenabouttenseniorhighschoolstudentswerehavingapartyandsetoffsomefireworksinsidethebar.Someonepresentatoncecalled119andcalledinthefirefighters.Thepoliceandthepeopleinthebartriedtocometohelpbutitwastoolate.

Altogetherfiveliveswereclaimedand34peoplewereinjuredinthefire.Alloftheinjuredarenowinhospitalundertreatment.Itisestimatedthatthefirehascausedalossof10millionyuanandithasattractedalotofattentionfromthelocalgovernmentandthewholesociety.

問(wèn)題作文

FireworksSetFireinBar

OnDec.202022,afirebrokeoutinthe1XiaosaBarinHangzhou,at23:30,whichwascausedbyadozenofhighschoolstudentswhoheldabirthdayparty,setting2offfireworksinsidethebar.Hundredsoffirefighters,soldiersandlocalpeoplefoughtbravely3thefireuntilit4finallyputout.Thefirecausedalossof10millionyuanatleast.Moreseriously,itcost5deathsaswellas34badinjuries.Notonlyareallthepeopleconcernedaboutthefire,butalsothelocalgovernmentisthinkingofthelessontheygetfromthefire.5

1去掉the,專出名詞前無(wú)需加冠詞。

2分詞用法不當(dāng)，可以用“and”與前句合并成一句“helda…andsetoff….”

3Bravely后加上against,fightagainstthefire。

4應(yīng)當(dāng)為被動(dòng)句…untilitwasfinallyputout.

5全文要點(diǎn)均提到，但缺少新聞報(bào)道寫(xiě)作的基本步驟；詞匯運(yùn)用不夠生動(dòng)多樣。

Exercise1

I按照所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容從A、B、C三個(gè)選項(xiàng)中挑選最佳選項(xiàng)

1.Whendidthetwomenseetheunidentifiedflyingobject?

A.Yesterdayevening.

B.OnSaturdayevening.

C.LastFridayevening.

2.WhatwerethetwomendoingwhenseeingtheUFO?

A.Walkingtheirdogs.

B.Waitingforthespaceship.

C.Flyingkitesonthemoors.

3.Howdidtheydescribetheobject?

A.Itwaslikeabrightball.

B.Itwasaroundsilverobject.

C.Itgaveoutpleasantmusic.

II按照你所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容填空

UFOovertheYorkshireMoors

TwoYorkshireresidents,StevenBruceaged35andJamesMurray,aged38,①________seeinganunidentifiedflyingobjecthoveringoverthedesertedmoorslastFridayevening.

Thetwomenwerewalkingtheirdogswhen②thewholeskywaslitupbyabrightlightandawhizzingsoundwasheard.③latera④silverobjectappearedinthesky.Theobjectfloatedabovethemforaboutfifteenminutesandthen⑤.Bruceimmediatelycontactedthelocalpolicestationtoreportthe⑥.Itappearstheywerenottheonlywitnesses.“We⑦overfortycallsbetween7:30pmand8:45pmfrompeople⑧tohaveseenaUFO,”admittedpolicesergeantJ.F.Stable.

Expertsare⑨t(yī)heYorkshiremoorsforanycluesinanattempttoexplainthesightings.Asa⑩oftheincident,hundredsofUFOfanaticscametothemoorsonSaturdayeveningtowatchtheskyandwaitforthespaceshiptoreappear.

III寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練

你是校報(bào)記者，請(qǐng)按照以下所提供信息給校報(bào)寫(xiě)一新聞稿。

When:earlyyesterdaymorning

Where:atthejunctionofMillRoadandWrightsLane,Westbridge

Who:JackieHill,anightnurse,22,drivingayellowNissanCherryalongMillRd.

WilliamStephens,27,drivingadeliveryvanoutofWrightsLaneWhat:Thecarcrashedintothevanatthejunction.

Why:notrafficlightsatthecrossroads;notseeingthestopsign

How:Twowereinjuredseriously.

寫(xiě)作要求：

1.句子結(jié)構(gòu)精確?????，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，可適當(dāng)拓展

2.字?jǐn)?shù)100-120

Exercise2

I按照所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容從A、B、C三個(gè)選項(xiàng)中挑選最佳選項(xiàng)

1.Whatisthenewsreportabout?

A.Acaraccident.

B.Agasexplosion.

C.Afirebreakout.

2.Howmanypeoplewereinjuredintheaccident?

A.14.

B.2.

C.16.

3.WhatisHeatherFowlesinthetext?

A.Acleanerintheshoppingcentre.

B.Ashopassistantintheshoppingcentre.

C.Thebossoftheshoppingcentre.

II按照你所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容填空

GasLeakResultsinTragedy

IntheearlyhoursofSaturdaymorning,theWestCrossShoppingCentre.Wolverhampton,wasdevastatedbyagasexplosion.①,nobodywaskilledintheblast,butfourteenpeoplewere②,twoofthemseriously.

Eighthoursbeforetheblastoccurred,shopassistant,HeatherFowleshadcalledtheGasBoard,asshehadnoticedthe③ofgas,buttheGasBoardworkersdidnotdetectany④.

“Theexplosionwaslikeaflashof⑤,”saidcleaner,IrisAdams,oneofthelessseriouslyinjured⑥.Shestatesthatshesawherboss,JohnWilson,beingliftedintotheairandthrownagainstawallbytheblast.MrsAdamsandMrWilsonwere⑦undertherubbleformorethananhourbeforefire-fightersmanagedto⑧them.

Policeinspector,DavidChamberlain⑨t(yī)hatseveralothercomplaintshadbeenmadeaboutthesmellofgas.The⑩continuestoday.

III寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練

如果你是某報(bào)社記者，請(qǐng)按照所提供的的日記內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇新聞報(bào)道。

寫(xiě)作要求：

1.用新聞報(bào)道的格式，涵蓋文中的主要情節(jié)

2.行文通順，連貫；字?jǐn)?shù)120左右

3.文章開(kāi)始已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

ItallbeganonehotafternoonwhileIwasonasailingholidayintheMediterraneanwithmyparents.AsweapproachedthecoastofProcida,weallagreedthatitwastimewedroppedanchorandstoppedtohavelunch.

WewerejustabouttostarteatingwhenDadpointedoutafishingboatthathadstoppednearourstopullinitsnets.Aswewerewatching,Isuddenlynoticedafinstickingoutofoneofthenets.Icouldhardlybelievemyeyes:itwasadolphin.

Immediately,IgrabbedaknifedivedintothewaterandswamtowardsthefishingboatasfastasIcould.AssoonasIgotthere,Icutaholeinthenetsothatthedolphincouldswimaway.Thecoastguardlatertoldusthatnotonlywasthefishermanusingillegalnets,buthehadalsobeenfishinginaprohibitedarea.

Aftertherescue,Ifeltsadthatpeoplecouldbesocrueltosuchintelligent,friendlycreatures,butatthesametime,IwasgladthatIhadsavedthedolphin.

Sixteen-year-oldAndrewTrumanwaspraisedlastnightforhisbraverywhenhesavedastrandeddolphinjustoffthecoastofProcidalastMonday.

Exercise3

I按照所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容從A、B、C三個(gè)選項(xiàng)中挑選最佳選項(xiàng)

1.Whatismainlytalkedaboutinthereport?

A.Asleddograce.

B.Afishingrace.

C.Aswimmingrace.

2.Howlongwastheracecovered?

A.1,500km.

B.25,000km.

C.1,600km.

3.Whenwasthelastrecordset?

A.In1980.

B.In2000.

C.In1985.

II按照你所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容填空

Recordsetinsleddograce

FishermanCharlieBouldingwontheYukonQuestSledDogRaceinrecordtimeThursday,①the1,600kmroutefromWhitehorse,Y.T.,15hoursfasterthaneverbefore.

About200people②Boulding,wholivesinthebushnearNenana,Alaska,ashecrossedthefinishlineonthe③ChenaRiverin10days,20hoursand12minutes.Hebrokethe1985record④byJoeRunyan.

“Itwasa⑤easyrace,”saidthegreybeardedmusher.“Butyouallgotto⑥menow.I’vegottotakecareofmydogs.”

Bouldingwon$25,000USfromtheQuestorganizationandamatching$25,000fromadog-foodcompanyforusingits⑦.

BruceLeeofDenaliPark,Alaska,wassecond,fiveminutesbehindBoulding.Hewas⑧withhisfinish,runningwiththeminimumeightdogs.

“BeingdowntoeightIdidn’thaveenough⑨t(yī)opushthem,”hesaid.

JohnSchandelmeierofPaxson,Alaska,finishedin⑩place.

III寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練

假設(shè)你是李華，在英國(guó)參與夏令營(yíng)時(shí)成為下圖中的交通事故的唯一目擊者，請(qǐng)按照?qǐng)D中信息加上合抱負(fù)象陳述事故發(fā)生的時(shí)光、地點(diǎn)、緣由、過(guò)程和結(jié)果，寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道向報(bào)社投稿。詞數(shù)控制在120—150之間。

Exercise4

I按照所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容從A、B、C三個(gè)選項(xiàng)中挑選最佳選項(xiàng)

1.Howmanyvehicleswereinvolvedintheaccident?

A.Two.

B.Three.

C.Four.

2.WhatwasthespeedofMr.Amberly’scarwhenhesawthevanbehind?

A.80mph.

B.90mph.

C.100mph.

3.Whatistoblamefortheaccidentaccordingtothepolice?

A.Thehighspeed.

B.Theircarelessness.

C.Thetrafficjam.

II按照你所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容填空

“….Therehavebeenfurtherroadaccidentsfollowingyesterday’sheavyrain.

Earlylastnighttwomotoristssufferedserious①inanincidentinvolvingthreevehicles.

MrReyAmberlyfromNewdenwastravelingalongPykeRoadataround90mphwhenhe②thevanbehindhiscardrivenbyMrJosephBrown,movingoutto③him.MrAmberlybrakedslightlyinordertoletthedriverofthevan④,butinsteadofslowingdown,hiscar⑤ontheslipperysurfaceand⑥intoathirdvehicle,comingfromtheother⑦whichwasdrivenbyMrLukePorter.Allthreevehicleswereseverely⑧inthecollisionandthethreedrivershadtobetakentohospital.

Policebelievethatthecrashcouldhavebeen⑨ifthedrivershadnotbeentravellingsofastundersuchdangerous⑩.

III寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練

按照下面所給的材料寫(xiě)一新聞報(bào)道。

寫(xiě)作要求：

1.應(yīng)涉及材料中的全部要點(diǎn)

2.行文連貫穿順，可適當(dāng)拓展

3.字?jǐn)?shù)120左右，開(kāi)始已給，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)

一天下午你在一水上公園目睹了一起溺水事故。一個(gè)不會(huì)游泳的七歲小女孩，在沒(méi)有穿著任何飄蕩設(shè)備的狀況下，從兒童水區(qū)來(lái)到深水區(qū)，被路人發(fā)覺(jué)時(shí)已失去知覺(jué)，送當(dāng)?shù)蒯t(yī)院后數(shù)小時(shí)后死亡。而據(jù)救助人反映當(dāng)初保安則在水區(qū)的另一端觀察水上籃球賽，在救助人數(shù)聲的大喊后才趕來(lái)幫忙。據(jù)保安說(shuō)誰(shuí)都不知道小女孩不會(huì)游泳。此事警方已介入調(diào)查。

Girl,7,drownsinpoolatwaterpark

(Friday,May30,2022)-AtSplashZonewaterparkinEnid,Oklahoma,a7-year-oldgirlwasfoundunconsciousand…….

Exercise5

I按照所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容從A、B、C三個(gè)選項(xiàng)中挑選最佳選項(xiàng)

1.Wheredidtheaccidenthappen?

A.InWashington.

B.InItaly.

C.InHollywood,Florida.

2.Howmanychildrenwereontheridewhentheaccidenthappened?

A.5.

B.6.

C.14.

3.Whatmightbethereasonfortheaccident?

A.Therewerenoadultscaringforthechildren.

B.Thechildrenweretooheavyfortheridetocarry.

C.Thegroundwasverywetwithrecentrain.

II按照你所聽(tīng)到的內(nèi)容填空

Carnivalridetipsover;6injured

(April17,2022)--AtthePuyallupSpringFairinPuyallup,Washington,fivechildrenandoneadult①minorinjurieswhenakiddyridecalledtheLollySwingtippedover.②childrenwereontherideatthetimeoftheaccident,mostofwhomsufferedminor③orbruises.

TheridewasmanufacturedbyZamperlaofItalyandis④byFantasticTravelingShowsofPortland,Oregon.Itpassedastate⑤onWednesday.

Inspectorssaiditcouldtakeweeksbeforetheexact⑥oftheaccidentisdetermined.Somehavesuggestedthe⑦thattheground,whichhadbecomewet⑧rain,mayhavecollapsedunderthe⑨oftheride.

AccordingtotheSeattleTimes,aLollySwingtippedoverinHollywood,Floridain1997,injuringfivepeople.Thataccidentwas⑩onmetalfatigue(疲勞).

III寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練

以下是一篇來(lái)自報(bào)紙的新聞報(bào)道，請(qǐng)按照中文描述，寫(xiě)一篇英文報(bào)道，字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。

一對(duì)母女在烏敏島(PulauUbin)騎腳踏車時(shí)，失控滑倒，造成一死一傷。

警方說(shuō)，一名40多歲的華族婦女前晚8點(diǎn)半左右，騎腳踏車載著女兒，前往烏敏島碼頭途中，在一處斜坡失控滑倒，導(dǎo)致頭部受重傷。

她被送往樟宜綜合醫(yī)院接受治療，但在昨天凌晨12點(diǎn)10分左右傷重不治。

據(jù)了解，死者的10歲女兒也受了輕傷

參考答案(Unit9)

Exercise1

I.C2.A3.B

II.①reported②suddenly③Seconds④round⑤disappeared

⑥incident⑦received⑧claiming⑨examining⑩result

III.Possibleversion

Junctionaccidentwithtwoinjured

TwopeoplewereseriouslyinjuredinacollisionatthejunctionofMillRoadandWrightsLane,Westbridge,earlyyesterdaymorning.

JackieHill,22,wasdrivingayellowNissanCherrywhensheapproachedthejunctionandcrashedintoadeliveryvancomingoutofWrightsLane.AlocalresidentwhowitnessedtheaccidentsaidthatitwasobviousthatMrsHillhadnotseenthestopsignatthejunctionasshehadnotevensloweddown.

Mrs.Hillwasonherwayhomefromherjobasanightnursewhentheaccidenthappened.SheissaidtobeinaseriousbutstableconditionatStMichael’shospital.Thedriverofthevan,WilliamStephens,27,isbeingtreatedforheadandbackinjuries.

Aneighborhoodassociationspokesmancommentedlater,“Thisisthefourthaccidenttohappenatthecrossroadsinthepastmonth.Wehavebeenlobbyingforasetoftrafficlightsthereformonths,butsofarnothinghashappened.”AccordingtocitycouncilorDavidWilkins,plansarebeingmadetoputuptrafficlightsatthejunctioninthenearfuture.

Exercise2

I.1.B2.A3.B

II.①Fortunately②injured③smell④leak⑤lightning

⑥victims⑦trapped⑧rescue⑨revealed⑩inquiry

III.Possibleversion

Sixteen-year-oldAndrewTrumanwaspraisedlastnightforhisbraverywhenhesavedastrandeddolphinjustoffthecoastofProcidalastMonday.

AndrewwasonasailingholidaywithhisfamilyintheMediterraneanwhentheincidentoccurred.Theywererelaxingontheiryachtwhenanearbyfishingboatbeganpullinginitsnets.Lookingcloser,Andrewnoticedthatadolphin’sfinsweretrappedinthenets.Withouthesitating,Andrewdivedoverboard,swamtotheotherboatandcutthroughthenettoreleasethedolphin.

“Dolphinsareintelligent,friendlycreatures,”saidAndrewwhenaskedabouthisexperience.“Fishermenshouldbemorecarefulwhenusingtheirnets.”

Theownerofthefishingboatwasarrestedforusingillegalnetsandfishinginaprohibitedarea.Manysimilarcaseshavebeenreportedrecentlyandthe

governmentisthinkingabouttalkingstrictermeasurestowardstheprotectionofdolphins.

Exercise3

I.1.A2.C3.C

II.①finishing②cheered③frozen④set⑤pretty

⑥excuse⑦brand⑧disappointed⑨power⑩third

III.Possibleversion

Itwassofrighteningasight．Acarwasgoingpeacefullyinitslane．Suddenlyafoxrushedacrossthestreetquiteclosetothecar，whichsurelybroughtashocktothedriver.Greatscreamsofhardbrakegavemyearsalotofsuffer．Itwasapparentthatthefoxhadanarrowescape.Eventhoughthedrivermanagedtostophiscartoletthefoxcross,unfortunately，hebrakedthecarsosharplythatitgotoutofcontrolandranintoatreenearby.BeforeIwasabletocollectmyself，thefoxwasoutofsight．Asaresult，theanimalwasallright，whilethecarwillhaveitsrepairs.

That’sthesceneIwitnessedat3：40pm，July26.Idon’tthinkitwasthedriver’sfault，butwhathedidprovedthatheisananimal-protector.

Exercise4

I.1.B2.B3.A

II.①injuries②noticed③overtake④pass⑤skidded

⑥crashed⑦direction⑧damaged⑨avoided