書(shū)面表達(dá)之求助信答案(2019·遼寧省六校協(xié)作體高三期初聯(lián)考)假定你是李華，將參加學(xué)校舉行的英文演講比賽，已寫(xiě)好演講稿。給教你英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)一年并已回國(guó)一個(gè)月的外教Mr.Daniel寫(xiě)封郵件，請(qǐng)他幫你審核稿件并做出必要的修改。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。審題(Review):1.體裁____________________________________4.要點(diǎn)__________參考句式首段※I’mLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.※I’mLiHua,astudentfromyourwritingclasslastterm.※IamLiHua,astudentcurrentlystudyinginyourwritingclass.※I’mapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyduringthesummervacation.※Withthesummervacationaroundthecorner,Iintendtoapplyforapart-timejobinacertainforeigncompany,whichIbelievewillbeagoldenopportunityformypersonalgrowth.※Ihavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume.※Ihavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume,whichhasbeenattachedtothisletter.3.寫(xiě)作目的※I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance.※I’mwritingtoseekyourassistance,hopingthatyoucankindlyoffermesomerevisiontipsregardingmyapplicationandresume.※I’mwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavortooffermesomerevisiontips.中間段1.主旨句※Herearemyproblems.※Herearetheproblemsthathavebeendisturbingmelately.※Iwishyouwouldbesokindastogivemesomesuggestions/helponthefollowingproblems.2.要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容1）文字※Foronething,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmeimprovemyvocabularyandgrammarusedinmyapplicationletter,whichisofgreatsignificancetome.※I’mafraidthattheremightbesomethegrammarandvocabularymistakesinmyapplicationmaterialsasaresultofmothertongueinterference(干擾).2）格式※Foranother,wouldyoubesokindastotellmeifmyapplicationletterhasbeenwritteninthecorrect(appropriate)format?※There’slikelytobesomethingwrongwiththeformatconsideringthatit’smyveryfirstattemptatthistypeofformalwriting.結(jié)尾段Hopefully,yourkindhelpwouldbeofferedtome.Thanksforyourconsideration(kindness).Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.［常見(jiàn)困難句型拓展］1.Ihavetrouble/difficultyindoingsth.,whichhasannoyed/bothered/upsetmeforquitealongtime.2.Ifinditextremelychallengingformetodosth.3.Whattroublesmemostisthat……4.Ihavenoideaofhowtodo……5.Ihavesomedifficultywithsth.II.寫(xiě)前（Pre-writing）套用詞組：做某事有麻煩__________________2.給某人幫助______________________havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.dosb.afavor/givesb.ahand3.尋求幫助______________________4.遇到一些問(wèn)題______________________askforhelp/seekforhelpencountersomeproblems5.面臨困難______________________6.忙于做某事________________________befacedwithdifficultiesbebusydoingsth./beengagedindoingsth.7.渴望做某事_____________________8.集中精力________________________beanxioustodosth./longtodosth.concentrateon/focuson套用句式：我寫(xiě)信想請(qǐng)您幫我一個(gè)忙。Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.Iamwritingtoaskyoutolend/givemeahand.我遇到三個(gè)困擾我的問(wèn)題。首先，……其次，……最困擾我的是……Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore,…Whattroublesmemostis…因此，我將感激不盡，如果你能提供些怎樣克服以上問(wèn)題的建議。Therefore,Iwillbemuchobligedifyoucanoffermesomeadviceonhowtoovercometheproblemsabove.詞組:參加演講比賽______________________2.修改______________________attendaspeechcontestdosomecorrections抽出時(shí)間做某事_____________________4.審核稿件_____________________sparetimetodosth.gothroughthedraft句式：語(yǔ)言無(wú)法表達(dá)我對(duì)你的思念。Wordsfailtoconveymymissingforyou.Nowordsarestrongenoughtoconveymymissingforyou.Beyonddescriptiongoesmymissingforyou.仿寫(xiě)：語(yǔ)言無(wú)法表達(dá)我的焦慮/高興。Wordsfailtoconveymyanxiety/delight.2.自你回國(guó)已經(jīng)一個(gè)月了。Wordsfailtoconveymyanxiety/delight.仿寫(xiě)：自你在這兒讀書(shū)已有三個(gè)月了。Itisthreemonthssinceyoustudiedhere.下周我將參加學(xué)校組織的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。NextweekIwillattendanEnglishspeechcontestorganizedbymyschool.仿寫(xiě)：上個(gè)星期，我參加了在學(xué)校舉行的籃球比賽。LastweekItookpartinabasketballgameheldintheschool.III.寫(xiě)中（While-writing）謀篇布局：三段式說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的－－尋求幫助。詳細(xì)地說(shuō)明自己的困難。表示感謝并期盼回復(fù)。寫(xiě)作模板:DearXX,IamLiHua,aSenior3studentstudyinginYunnanProvince.WordsfailtoconveymyworryingfeelingwhenIhavetroublein求助的事項(xiàng)方面.Bathedinananxiousatmosphere,I’mwritingthislettertoaskyoutodomeafavor.Iamfacedwiththreeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Tobeginwith,…What’smore,…Whattroublesmemostis…Therefore,Iwillbemuchobligedifyoucanhelpme.Hopefully,yourkindandtimelyhelpwillbeofferedtome.Iamprayingforyourpromptreplywithfullappreciation.Yourstruly,LiHua成篇：DearDaniel,（語(yǔ)言無(wú)法表達(dá)我對(duì)你的思念。(自你回國(guó)已經(jīng)一個(gè)月了)afterteachingusspokenEnglishforayear.(我寫(xiě)信是想請(qǐng)你幫個(gè)忙)。（下周我將參加學(xué)校組織的英語(yǔ)演講比賽）。ＩhavecompletedmyspeechdraftbutFacedwiththeaboveproblems,I’meagerthatyourkindandtimelyhelpwillbeofferedtome.Iamprayingforyourpromptreplywithfullappreciation.Yourstruly,LiHuaIII寫(xiě)后(post-writing)請(qǐng)檢查你單詞拼寫(xiě)、語(yǔ)法、上下文銜接、對(duì)某些句子進(jìn)行潤(rùn)色和升華后，譽(yù)寫(xiě)在下面。DearMr.Daniel,Howtimeflies!It’sbeenamonthsinceyouwent