1、 書面表達寫作書面表達寫作技巧技巧課標（八級）對課標（八級）對“寫寫”的描述的描述 能根據所讀文章進行轉述或寫摘要； 能根據用文字及圖表提供的信息寫短文或報告； 能寫出語意連貫且結構完整的短文，敘述事情或表達觀點和態度； 能在寫作中做到文體規范、語句通順。高考高考 “ “寫寫” ” 的考點的考點考生應能： 根據不同文體，使用恰當的語言形式完成書面交際任務； 運用恰當的句式、詞匯和語法敘述、描述、表達觀點和態度； 做到文章扣題、內容充實、結構完整、邏輯性強、語意連貫。第五檔（21分25分）完全完全完成了試題規定的任務。覆蓋了所有所有內容要點；應用了較多較多的語法結構和詞匯 語法或用詞方面有個別錯

2、誤，但為盡可能表達豐富的內容所致；體現體現了較強的語了較強的語言運用能力言運用能力；有效地有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，所寫內容連貫、結構緊湊 完全完全達到 了預期的 寫作目的第四檔（16分20分）完成了試題規定的任務雖漏掉一兩個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容 運用的語法和詞匯能滿滿足足任務要求 語法結構或詞匯方面應用基本準確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞匯所致 使用了簡單簡單的的語句間連接成分，使全文結構緊湊 達到了預期的寫作目的高考書面表達評分標準高考書面表達評分標準1 準確審題： 任務、人稱、時態寫前情景作文： 國際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國學生參加的“和平、友誼”夏令營活動，要

3、求報名者提交英文個人簡介。假設你是王姍，請根據下列信息寫一篇個人簡介。注意：1、詞數不少于60。 2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。 Hi everyone, my name is Wang Shan. Im a 16- year old girl and now Im studying in Beijing Sunshine Middle School. Im a girl with lots of hobbies. I enjoy listening to music after class. And I like taking photos, as I love the be

4、auty of the nature. As for my personalities, I think Im quite out-going and Im always willing to help others when they have some problems. Im good at communicating with others. Im also a peace lover because I think wars just bring sufferings and sadness to people. Entering this summer camp, I want t

5、o make friends with you and learn about foreign cultures. I hope we could become good friends and have a good time . 任務1 準確審題： 任務、人稱、時態 構思： 整理內容要點，寫作時做到心中有數，思路清楚，內容充實而又有重點。情景作文： 國際文化交流中心將組織一次由各國學生參加的“和平、友誼”夏令營活動，要求報名者提交英文個人簡介。假設你是王姍，請根據下列信息寫一篇個人簡介。注意：1、詞數不少于60。 2、可根據內容要點適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。 (請將情景作文寫在答題卡請將

6、情景作文寫在答題卡II指定區域內指定區域內)內容要點： 1個人基本信息 王珊、女、16歲、北京陽光中學 2愛好、性格、態度 愛好音樂、攝影； 善于與人交流，樂于助人； 熱愛自然，熱愛和平 3參加夏令營的目的 結交朋友，了解外國文化Im Wangshan. Im a girl. Im at age of 16. Im in Yangguang Middle School. Im very glad to attend the Summer Camp. I like music and natural. Im good at talking with other people. During th

7、e Camp, I want to make a lot of friends, and I want to learn more about other countrys culture. So I really want to take part in the camp.寫作技巧寫作技巧一、詞匯的多樣性應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯；有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，所寫內容連貫、結構緊湊challengedshoutedinterruptedwhisperedrepliedaskedsaidvastmassivegreatlargeenormousbig（由于） his help, I fini

8、shed the task at last.因為Because of/For/WithThanks toOwing toAs a result of*結合自身情況，學會用不同的從句和短語表達同樣的語義我會盡我所能幫助他I will try my best to help him.I will do everything I can to help him.I will do whatever I can to help him.I will do all that I can to help him.二、句子連接技巧應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯；有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，所寫內容連貫、結構緊

9、湊 從句從句 非謂語動詞非謂語動詞 主主+ +謂（主句）謂（主句） 介詞介詞 名詞名詞 形容詞形容詞 The house has been turned into apartments.I was born in the house.You will have a room in my house. The room is very comfortable. In this room, you will find many things which are quite necessary for daily life.從句連接You will have a comfortable room i

10、n my house, where all the necessary things for daily life are provided.You will have a comfortable room in my house, where you can find all the necessary things for daily life.Yesterday I bought a pen which is red. He met a man who is his father.Use clauses when necessary.The cat crept slowly throug

11、h the grass.The cat was watching the mouse the whole time.The gold was hidden under the ground.It was safe for many years.非謂語連接非謂語連接Watching the mouse the whole time, the cat crept slowly through the grass. Hidden under the ground the gold was safe for many years.Not raining for a long time, the lan

12、d was very dry. (邏輯）邏輯）After finished the lecture, we held a discussion. (謂語、非謂語混淆）謂語、非謂語混淆）Warning: Use ing, -ed correctly.Sending the leaflets, we stood at the gate of the community.(主次顛倒）主次顛倒）The fire is burning, so I feel warm.I lost my bike, so I had to walk home.With the fire burning, I feel w

13、arm.With my bike lost, I had to walk home.介詞短語連接介詞短語連接Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room is waiting for you. Inside, there is a separate bathroom and all necessary furniture.Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room with a separate bathroom and all necessary furniture is waiting for you. 1個人基本信

14、息 王珊、女、16歲、北京陽光中學 Im Wangshan. Im a girl. Im at age of 16. Im in Yangguang Middle School.Im Wang Shan, a 16-year-old girl student from Yang Guang middle school. 三、行文邏輯應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯；有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，所寫內容連貫、結構緊湊時間，空間的順序Firstlast, after that, then, from, later, ago2. 連接詞but, however, neverthelessand, als

15、o, in addition, moreoverso, therefore, thus, consequently1. It is not easy to pronounce like a native speaker if learning begins in adulthood.However, . Consequently, . most adult learners have a foreign accent when speaking the language. it is certainly possible for young children to reach this sta

16、ndard.ba2. People do not usually find it easy to learn to write in a foreign language.In contrast, . Nevertheless, . they can normally learn to write well if enough time and effort are given. writing in their first language may present them with no problems at all.ba四、文章的加工I followed your advice. I

17、went to the supermarket. There I found four chairs. They were in good shape. They were reasonably priced.Can you make it better?I followed your advice and went to the supermarket. There I found four reasonably-priced chairs in good shape.I followed your advice and went to the supermarket, where I fo

18、und four reasonably-priced chairs which were in good shape.Following your advice, I went to the supermarket where I found four reasonably priced chairs in good shape.well-connected好的連接My writings include a novel, which was published and which is about a mystery, and a number of poems that were left

19、in the desk that belongs to my brother Tom and that have not been published.Can you make it better?My writings include a published mystery novel and a number of unpublished poems that were left in my brother Toms desk.clear& economical簡潔，清楚I walked through the city for days, but I couldnt find a

20、ny place to rent, and then I found this apartment, and it is large, so I feel comfortable.Can you make it better?After walking through the city unsuccessfully for days, I rented this large and comfortable apartment.tight I walked through the city for days, but I couldnt find any place to rent. Final

21、ly, I found this large and comfortable apartment.緊湊A good paragraph should be: economical:cleartight: graceful:Use fewest words to say the most;Dont use masses of “ands”, “buts”, “ors”, etc. Be pleasant to read. well-connectedIm Wangshan. Im a girl. Im at age of 16. Im in Yangguang Middle School. Im

22、 very glad to attend the Summer Camp. I like music and natural. Im good at talking with other people. During the Camp, I want to make a lot of friends, and I want to learn more about other countrys culture. So I really want to take part in the camp. Im Wang Shan, a 16-year-old girl student from Beij

23、ing Sunshine Middle School. I have a great variety of interests, ranging from sports to music and photography, among which you can certainly find something in common. My friends say Im easy-going and warm-hearted-always ready to help whoever is in trouble. Whats more, Im strongly for the spirit of this summer camp-Peace, Friendship and Nature. With the hopes of making more friends and learning about different cultures, I decided to join you the moment I saw the ad in the newspaper. Im sure I will