1、2019 中考英語高分作文秘訣書面表達訓練學習目標1 .了解寫作日勺篇章技巧，使文章具有整體性。2 .掌握常用日勺連接詞或句型，令作文更有靈氣3 .通過學和練提高寫作日勺技巧和自信。記敘文日勺寫作要素：5W 1HWhen Where Who What開門見山，交待事情日勺How Why 說明事情日勺經過，描述原因What總結議論文和說明文要素: 2W 1HWhat-提出觀點Why-論述觀點How如何做What一總結全文Revision記敘文日勺寫作要素:（文章日勺中心句）（正面和反面或多方面）（圍繞觀點，說明要求）（觀點首尾呼應）5W 1H議論文和說明文要素: 2W 1H應用文寫作要素: 基于

2、 5W 1H根據具體要求來確定中考作文高分秘訣1. 謀篇布局寫好篇章結構2. 運用連接詞賦予語言靈氣范文 1：在日常生活中你主動幫助你日勺父母做家務活嗎？請你根據提示用英語寫一篇80字左右日勺短文，描述你平時所做家務以及你對家務日勺看法。提示： 1.扔垃圾2. 掃地 3. 幫助媽媽做飯4.洗衣服5. 為花澆水6. 飯后洗碗要求：語句通暢，語法正確。不得逐句翻譯。謀篇布局寫好篇章結構滿分作文（ 10 分）As we all know, it imsportant to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help th

3、em do housework. I throw the rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch . After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like t

4、hem very much and take good care of them. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be. （即總括又闡明看法） 謀篇布局寫好篇章結構Middle 正文Ending結尾concluding sentence 結論句-對全文日勺總結和概括。supporting sentences 支持句用例子、實事或數據圍繞主題開展敘述、討論topic sentence 主題句-說出文中日勺要點、核心問題Beginning開頭Good beginning is half done.1.

5、 仔細審題，提煉和歸納主題句2. 開頭萬能句型：1) plays an important part in the.2) As we all know, . becomes more and more3) As everybody knows, .is one of the most.in t think so.4) Many people say thatBut I don5) I will never forget the Make a topic sentence.As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health.1. 、 Smoking

6、As we all know, smoking is a bad habit.Many students say smoking is fun, but I don think so.Make a topic sentence.Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I don think so.I will never forget the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival plays an important part in our lif

7、e.2. The Spring Festival Make a topic sentence.As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.Many people say it s difficult to learn English.But I don t think so.3. Learning EnglishMake a topic sentence.4. To be a volunteer for the 26th Universiade5. A School TripAs we all know, t

8、he 26th Universiade is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it.A volunteer plays an important part in the 26th Universiade.I will never forget the school trip last week.1 .與開頭呼應，再次重申自己日勺觀點，注意避免重復句式。2 .結尾經典詞組、句型：At last/ Finally . 最后In a word, .總而言之In short, .簡言之We hope that我們希望Let ' s try o

9、ur best to .I believe if we can., . will be .What a .! / How.!結尾畫龍點睛，首尾呼應Make a concluding sentenceKeeping healthyHelping othersLet ' s try our best to keep healthy.In short, it ' s important to have good habits and keep healthy.I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and mor

10、e beautiful.Make a concluding sentenceBeijingTo be a green consumerLet ' s try our best to be a green consumer.In one word, it ' s necessary for us to protect the environment.How beautiful Beijing is!Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?范文2：天津市書面表達考題日前，由教育部，國家體育總局，共青團中央聯合舉辦“全國億萬少年陽光體育運

11、動”啟動儀式,其影響巨大，意義深遠.你在本校參加了此項活動，請根據表格中所給信息寫一篇英語短文.內容感想1.學校師生收看1.鍛煉有利了啟動儀式；于強健身體；2.運動使大2.開展了 一個小腦休息，學習 時日勺集體體育活效率更高.動，如；跑步，做操，3.每天鍛煉打籃球等，小時，幸未生活一輩子.注意：詞數80100個左右.2 .短文日勺開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數.3 .短文須包括所有內容要點，但不要逐句翻譯，可適當加入細節，可適度發揮，使短文通順，連貫.4 .文中不得使用真實姓名，校名.參考詞匯：the launching ceremony 啟動儀式build up one ' s bod

12、y strength 強身健體More effective 效果更好“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine" launched on April 29, 2007.The teachersand students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony . After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour

13、. Some took part in running, some played basketball and football, and some did exercises. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. We really had a good time.學生滿分范文優秀范文講評該文結本嚴謹，思維清晰。在內容及感想間使用了不同日勺時態：一般 過去時及一般現在時。發揮適度，長句短句交叉使用，句式賦于變化，用詞得體，有很強日勺可讀性，做到了 naturally and clearly.正文：語言簡潔，

14、層次分明長句短句交叉使用最好。基礎一般日勺同學要盡量使用簡單句，文章算不上完美，但很實用。把握要點，層次清晰。注意句子與句子、段與段之間過渡自然，行文連貫，注意適當使用連詞，例如： and ,so ,or, but, become 等等。正文：巧用連接詞，賦予語言靈氣按事情發展日勺先后或時間順序1) ) Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly2) first, then/next, after that/ next, finally3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same ti

15、me, not.until, before, after, when , while, during表示并列not only. but also, both. and, either .or,neithernor , on (the) one hand on the other hand表示舉例或補充1 ) for example2 ) besides / what s more/ what s worse表示轉折however, but ， although, instead of表示原因thanks to, because of， because表示結果as result (of) , s

16、o ， so.that, such.that,表目日勺 in order to, so that表比較 the same as, than, of allWhich sentence is better?I played football on the playground.I fell down and hurt my legs.2. When I was playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. 正文：巧用連接詞，賦予語言靈氣( good)(better)句式富于變化We are good frien

17、ds. We should helpeach other.2.We are good friends and we should help each other.3. As we are good friends , we should help each other.I was deeply moved and I couldnw ordt .sa(gyoaod )5 I wasmoved say a word. (better)( best)( good)(better)tooto寫作訓練生活中充滿了愛，有父母日勺愛，有兄弟姐妹日勺愛，有朋友日勺愛，有老師日勺愛 請以“Love”為話題，簡

18、要描述一件發生在你身邊日勺事。要求： 1、語言規范，書寫工整。2、 80 個詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）3、文中不要出現真實日勺人名，校名和地名Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth totheoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you l

19、ove. Love also means understanding. One day, I played football with my classmates on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said,“ We are good friends, we shouldhelp each other. ” I

20、was deeply moved. I couldn ntksatyo amwy ocrlads. sTmhates. I will do mybest to give my love to others. 包裝法：加入正文主題過渡句， 添加連接詞，讓文章生動起來 范文There is a lot of love around us. One day, when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took m

21、e to the hospital at once.During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said,“ As we are good frienwe should help each other. ” I was too moved to say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others. 中考英語書面表達背誦范文一、 Great changes in my hometownMore tha

22、n twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small , old and poor town. Most of peoplewere farmers. There were few factories. The people didn t have enough food to eat and wore oldclothes. They had a hard life .Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years . The people have found a lot of wa

23、ys of making money . Now there are many tall buildings . They are very beautiful . Roads are wide and clean . People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work . Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People s living conditions have improved a lot . Thanks to thegovernment s

24、efforts . my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful 中考英語書面表達背誦范文How I improved my EnglishWhen I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English

25、teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.中考英語書面表達背誦范文Make our world more beautiful !Protecti ng the environment is becoming more and more important to humans . It s our duty totake care of the nature around u