1、2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十四）【專項突破】短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Passage 1Xie Lei told me that she feels much more at home in England now, and th

2、at had seemed very strange ago now appears quite normal. “Ive just got one more thing achieve. I have been very occupied to work that I havent had time for social activities. I think its important to have a balance in study and a social life, so Im going to join in a few clubs. Hopeful Ill make some

3、 new friends.”We will follow Xie Leis progresses in later editions of this newspaper but for now, we wish Xie Lei all the best in his new enterprise. She deserves to succeed.Passage 2Good relationships between teachers or students are important to teaching and learning Only with good relationships c

4、an student and teachers cooperate well. Good relationships depended on both sides. On the one hand, students should respect teachers and our hard work. They should polite Co teachers and ready to following their advice. On an other hand, teachers should be kindly, friendly and patient to students. T

5、hey must be responsible on their teaching and help students. If both sides treat10 each other in a friendly way, teaching and learning in class will be highly efficient.Passage 3The news which the English Entrance Examination will be reformed has caused a big “earthquake” in our country. Many people

6、, included students, are for it. But there are also some people are against it. Then, is it better to do so or not? Personally, I think the reform has between advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it can reduce students learn burden and enable English to return back to its true function. On

7、 the other hand, it will cause students to spend less time on studying English and to attached less importance to English. If so, students will not have a good knowledge of English. Whats more, if students dont have so a good ability, they will not be able to broaden our horizon and meet the future

8、challenges.Passage 4Recently, smog weather has became more and more serious in parts of China. People forced to wear masks to avoid breathe poisonous air. To settle this problem, the series of measures should be taken. First, we should enact(頒布) more strict law on environmental protection to regulat

9、e the industrial punish those factories what ignore the protection. Second, we should develop environmentally-friendly products to improve air quality. Besides, people should build up protection awareness to form a habit by using green products or saving energy. In my opinion, if we all act together

10、, their environment will become more better.Passage 5One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at the railway stationIt was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats Gathering at the entrance of the station,

11、 we told to collect as many English words and sentences as possible hereCurious and excited, we walked around the station and looked everywhere, search for any information in EnglishWhenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new worldWi

12、th the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with easeNow, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I goPassage 6Generally speaking, Im a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at home, I can be awar

13、e of the dos and donts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others. I think it is determination what is of great importance if you w

14、ant to improve your self-control.In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also youd better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.Passage 7This afternoon 1 went to see my gr

15、andfather by a busIt was very crowded and I had to standBesides me，there was a woman hold a little boy in her armsIn front of her, a young man occupies two seats，pretending to be sleepingI heard the little boy curious asking his mother, “Whats wrong with the uncle?” I had thought if perhaps the woma

16、n would blame the manBeyond her expectations，the woman answered with a smile，“Be quietThis uncle must very tired because of hard work”The young man must have heard the wordHis face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓（十四）答案Passage 1Xie Lei told me that she feels much m

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