1、Unit 6An old man tried to move the mountains. 單元寫作專題單元寫作專題Section B (3a3b) 本單元以童話故事、神話故事或民間故事為話題，常見的命題形式 有：根據(jù)所給提示描述一個(gè)故事，告訴別人你最喜歡的故事等。 常用句型： In my Chinese class today, we read a famous story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Once upon a time, there was a very old man. They were so high and big that it

2、 took a long time to walk to the other side. This story reminds us that you can never know whats possible unless you try to make it happen. There are many sides to a story and many ways to understand it. The clever Monkey King keeps fighting to help the weak and never gives up. The story is about an

3、 emperor who loved clothes. 經(jīng)典范文展示 你準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校“英語角”開展的“用英語講故事”活動，你選取了 “曹沖稱象”這個(gè)大家熟悉的故事。請你根據(jù)右邊圖片內(nèi)容，用英語 寫一篇80 詞以上的小短文。 注意：標(biāo)題、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighed Cao Cao was very glad to have received an elephant as a present.He wanted to know how heavy the elephant was, but there was no

4、 scale(秤)big enough to weigh such a huge creature. _ _ “Add up all the numbers and we will know the weight of the elephant，”Cao Chong said to his father with kind of pride. 【佳作賞析】 How Cao Chong Had the Elephant Weighed Cao Cao was very glad to have received an elephant as a present.He wanted to know

5、 how heavy the elephant was, but there was no scale (秤)big enough to weigh such a huge creature. One day Cao Chong told his father he could weigh the elephant if he had a big boat and a lot of heavy stones. Cao Cao was very surprised, but still he ordered his men to get everything ready. When the el

6、ephant was led onto the boat, the water came up.Then Cao Chong asked a man to mark a line along the water surface on the boat. After that, they drove the elephant onto the bank and put the heavy stones into the boat until the water came up to the same line. “Add up all the numbers and we will know t

7、he weight of the elephant，” Cao Chong said to his father with kind of pride. 【名師點(diǎn)評】因故事的開頭已經(jīng)給出，故寫作時(shí)只要寫出故事的主要情節(jié) 即可。文章另起一段，首先用含if 引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句的復(fù)合句陳述了曹沖 告訴父親如何稱大象的想法。用but 連接的并列句表達(dá)了曹操在聽了曹沖 稱大象的方法后的反應(yīng)驚訝， 但還是按兒子說的準(zhǔn)備了。其中order sb.to do sth.，getready 的用法地道而精準(zhǔn)。用含when 引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句的 復(fù)合句陳述接下來發(fā)生的事大象被牽到船上， 水漫上來了。其中被動語 態(tài)w

8、as led 用法正確而地道。用then 引出接下來發(fā)生的事曹沖叫人沿水 面在船身上畫一條線作為標(biāo)記。用after that 引出故事的高潮把大象牽 到河岸上，并把石頭放入船里直至水漫到那畫線處。其中， driveonto, putinto，until等的運(yùn)用非常精準(zhǔn)。至此完成本文該寫的部分。但與文章所 給的結(jié)尾銜接得不是很好。 熱點(diǎn)作文練習(xí) 根據(jù)下面提供的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇童話故事。 1很久以前，有一個(gè)漂亮的女孩，叫白雪公主。在她很小的時(shí)候 媽媽就去世了。 2她的繼母要獵人把白雪公主殺了。 3獵人可憐公主，讓她離開了。 4白雪公主在森林里遇到了小矮人，小矮人們決定保護(hù)她。 5她的繼母裝扮成老

9、農(nóng)婦，用有毒的蘋果毒死了白雪公主。 6小矮人們發(fā)現(xiàn)白雪公主的尸體后，把她裝進(jìn)一口玻璃棺材里。 7最終，一個(gè)王子救了公主并娶了她。 Long long ago, there lived a beautiful girl named Snow White. When the girl was very young, her mother died. Her stepmother ordered a hunter to kill her. The hunter felt pity for the girl and he let the girl leave. Then Snow White met the seven dwarfs in the forest and they decided to protect her. Her stepmother disguised herself as an old farm woman and killed Snow White with a poisonous