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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Formostpeople,adoptingapetisoneofthebestdecisionsthattheycanevermakeintheirlives.Inadditiontogivingananimalapermanent(永久的)homeandalovingfamily,theownerwillfindthepanyofapetbringsmorehappinessthanexpected.ForsomeonelikeMariaLuizaValcazara,havingapetwasverysuitable.ShewasallaloneaftermovingtoanewapartmentinBrazil,andhersolitary(獨居的)lifemadeherfeellonely.SowhenshefoundacuteblackpuppynamedChips,sheknewshehadtotakehimhome.MariathoughtthatChipswouldbeabletofilltheemptinessthatshehadbeenexperiencingfromlivingallalone.Mariawasright.Onceshetookthepuppyhome,theyimmediatelybonded.However,asMariahadtoworkduringtheday,shewasworriedaboutleavingChipshomealoneinherapartment.Shewasalsoworriedthathiscryingwouldupsetherneighbors.Onenight,whenshereturnedhome,sheconsideredherfearswereconfirmed.There,outsideherdoor,wasapackagewithafoldednoteattachedtoit.Marinknewthatshewasintrouble.Shehopedthatshewouldnotbeevicted(驅逐)fromhernewapartmentbecauseofChips.ShelovedChipssomuch,andshewasafraidthatshemighthavetogetridofhimbecausehemadetoomuchnoisewhenevershewasaway.Mariawasscaredandwonderedwhocouldhaveleftitatthedoorbecauseshehadlittlecontactwiththepeopleinthebuilding.However,whenshenoticedthenamesonthefoldednote,shefoundthatitwasn'taddressedtoherbuttoherdog,Chips,andthatitwas“written”byanotherdognamedCorote.Mariaopenedthepackagefirstandfoundafewtoysforpets.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Curious,Mariaopenedthenoteandstartedreadingit.WithChipsfollowingher,Mariaknockedatherneighbor'sdoor.一、文本主旨?本文圍繞人與寵物、寵物與寵物之間的情感展開。獨居的瑪麗亞收養小狗奇普后,擔心它獨自在家時的叫聲會打擾鄰居,卻意外收到鄰居家小狗送來的玩具和暖心紙條,展現鄰里間跨越物種的理解與關愛,傳遞出溫暖、友善的正能量。?二、詞匯積累?情感表達:lonely(孤獨的)、scared(害怕的)、worried(擔憂的)、smiled(微笑)、laughed(大笑)?動作描述:adopting(收養)、bonded(建立親密關系)、returnedhome(回家)、knockedat(敲門)?三、續寫分析?銜接句:以“Curious,Mariaopenedthenoteandstartedreadingit.”開啟第一段,自然承接上文包裹和紙條的情節;“WithChipsfollowingher,Mariaknockedatherneighbor'sdoor.”作為第二段開頭,順利推動故事從讀紙條向與鄰居互動發展。?情節合理性:第一段中鄰居家小狗送玩具安慰奇普的紙條內容,符合寵物能感知同類情緒的設定;第二段瑪麗亞上門道歉,鄰居的回應體現鄰里間的友好,情節發展合情合理。?情感鋪墊:前文瑪麗亞的孤獨和對奇普叫聲的擔憂,為后文收到暖心紙條和鄰居友好回應帶來的感動做足鋪墊。?四、情感走向?故事開篇彌漫著孤獨和擔憂的氛圍,隨著紙條和玩具的出現,氛圍逐漸轉向溫暖,到與鄰居見面交流,傳遞出人與人、寵物與寵物之間友好、和諧相處的溫馨情感。?五、主題深化?通過講述寵物之間的關懷以及鄰居的理解包容,不僅展現寵物給人們帶來陪伴,更突出鄰里間友善互動構建的美好社區生活,深化了愛與理解的主題。?六、下水文?下水文一?Curious,Mariaopenedthenoteandstartedreadingit.“DearChips,everytimeIhearyoursadcries,myheartaches.Iknowhowitfeelstobeleftalone.Thesetoysaremywayofsayingyou’renotalone.Let’sbefriends!”Maria’seyeswelledupwithtearsofrelief.Thenotedispelledallherworries.?WithChipsfollowingher,Mariaknockedatherneighbor'sdoor.Amiddleagedwomanopenedthedoorwithabigsmile.“IsawyouwerenewhereandthoughtCorotecouldhelpChipsfeellesslonely,”sheexplained.Mariathankedherprofusely.Fromthatdayon,thetwowomenbecamegoodfriends,andChipsandCoroteplayedtogethereveryday,turningtheapartmentbuildingintoahomefulloflove.?下水文二?Curious,Mariaopenedthenoteandstartedreadingit.“Hey,Chips!Iliverightnextdoor.Yourbarkssoundsolonely.I’msendingyousomeofmyfavoritetoys.Maybetheycankeepyoupany!”Mariacouldn’thelpbutchuckleattheadorablemessage.Itwassuchapleasantsurprise.?WithChipsfollowingher,Mariaknockedatherneighbor'sdoor.AyoungmangreetedherwithCorotebyhisside.“SorryifChipshasbeenabother,”Mariasaid.“Notatall!”themanreplied.“Corotewasexcitedtomakeanewfriend.”Afterthat,Mariaandherneighboroftenwentforwalkstogetherwiththeirdogs,buildingastrongbondthatmadethenewapartmentfeellikeatruemunity.?下水文三Curious,Mariaopenedthenoteandstartedreadingit.“DearChips,I’mCorotefromnextdoor.Ihearyoucryingwhenyourhumanisaway.Itmustbelonely.Isentyouthesetoystokeepyoupany.Maybeonedaywecanplaytogether!”Maria’sinitialfearmeltedaway,replacedbyasenseofreliefandwarmth.Thethoughtthataneighbor’spethadreachedouttoChipswasincrediblyheartwarming.?WithChipsfollowingher,Mariaknockedatherneighbor'sdoor.Akindfacedelderlywomanopenedit.MariaapologizedprofuselyforChips’possibledisturbance.Thewomansmiledwarmlyandsaid,“Corotehasbeeneagertomakefriends.Inoticedyouwerenewhereandthoughtthiscouldbrightenbothyourdays.”Fromthenon,Mariaandherneighborformedaclosebond.Theirpetsplayedtogetherdaily,andMaria’soncelonelylifewasfilledwithjoy.參考答案Curious,Mariaopenedthenoteandstartedreadingit.Thenote,writtenbyherneighboringdogowner,Angela,saidshehadnoticedChipscryingalotwhenMariawasaway.Angela,inCorote'svoice,suggestedtheyplaytogetherwhenMariawasnothome.Thisway,Chipswouldn'tfeellonely.Mariawasdeeplymovedandfeltrelievedafterreadingthenote.Insteadofexpressingdiscontent,herkindneighborwasreallyunderstandingandtriedtooffersupport.MariafeltsheneededtomeetAngelaandherdog.WithChipsfollowingher,Mariaknockedatherneighbor'sdoor.ThedooropenedandMariasawawoman,whomustbeAngela,smilingather.Corote,Angela'sdog,followedherandstaredatChipshappily.Thetwodogsimmediatelyhititoff.Apleasantatmospherewascreated

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