讀后續寫如何表達激動背默與仿寫原卷版晨讀背誦區：背誦遷移舉一反三一、晨讀素材-必背單詞1.激動類形容詞和副詞：初階excited感到激動的;exciting令人激動的高階thrilled感到激動的;thrilling令人激動的;excitedly2.激動類名詞和動詞：初階excitement激動,excite使激動高階thrill激動，興奮,exaltation得意洋洋，欣喜二、高頻語塊1.cheerup 振奮起來2.with/inexcitement 激動地3.flushwithexcitement 激動得滿臉通紅4.conceal/hideone’sexcitement難掩激動5.containone’sexcitement 抑制內心的激動6.toone’sexcitement/thrill 令某人激動的是7.ascreamofthrill/excitement 激動的尖叫聲8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement 一陣興奮9.tearsofhappinessflowingdown 流下幸福的淚水10.feelamixtureofexcitementandhappiness 感覺既興奮又開心三、佳句賞析1.His

voicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動,難以成聲。2.His

face

was

litupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動而放出光彩。3.Her

face

was

glowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發。4.Arippleofexcitement

ranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。5.Herflushedfacewasshining

withexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動而發亮。6.Myheartisinmymouth

wheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當我聽到國歌就激動不已。7.Herheartwas

flutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。8.Tearsofexcitementwelledupinhereyesassheacceptedtheflowers.當她接過獻花時，激動的淚水充滿了她的眼睛。9.Theteacher’sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefelt

asurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵溫暖著他的心,他感到一陣興奮。10.Ashiverofexcitement

passedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽到這個消息,一陣激動的戰栗傳到她的胃里。11.Hearingtheexcitingnews,shebouncedupanddownwithexcitement.一聽到這個激動人心的消息，她高興得上蹦下跳。12.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

awildexcitementtookholdofher.當主持人宣布她獲獎時,她興奮得不能自已。13.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,

hiseyestwinklingwithexcitement.

爸爸說下星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。14.Unableto

containhisjoyandexcitement,he

threwhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,dearmum.”

不能抑制住他的高興和激動，他一下子撲到我的懷里，喃喃道：媽媽，辛苦了。15.Sighingwithrelief,thetwinshuggedeachotherandshedtearsofexcitementandjoy.這對雙胞胎松了一口氣，互相擁抱，留下來激動和高興的眼淚。測試反饋區：分級測試步步為贏一、晚練-高頻語塊漢譯英1.振奮起來2.激動地3.激動得滿臉通紅4.難掩激動5.抑制內心的激動6.令某人激動的是7.激動的尖叫聲8.一陣興奮9.流下幸福的淚水10.感覺既興奮又開心二、晚練-佳句賞析漢譯英1.他情緒激動,難以成聲。(choke)2.他的臉由于激動而放出光彩。(light)3.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。(ripple)4.她紅紅的臉因激動而發亮。(shine)5.每當我聽到國歌就激動不已。(heart)6.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。(flutter)7.老師的鼓勵溫暖著他的心,他感到一陣興奮。(surge)8.當主持人宣布她獲獎時,她興奮得不能自已。(hold)9.這對雙胞胎松了一口氣，互相擁抱，留下來激動和高興的眼淚。(shed)10.爸爸說下星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。(twinkle)仿寫實戰區：模仿借鑒學以致用一、讀后續寫情景運用—單句閱讀所給首句，在了解首句所設定的情境后，用一句話進行與感動之情相關的主題續寫。1.Onthejourneytothelake,Mom.2.Mominsistedthatwegocampinginthenextvillage,hereyes.3.Whenwearrivedatthecampingplace,Momcouldn’twaittostormoutandurgedustoputupthetent.4.Then,Momwalkedtowardsthelake,andthencame.5.Enjoyingthebeautifulview,Momcouldhardly.6.Certainly,asitwasthefirsttimethatwehadhelpedfathercookfoodoutdoors,mybrotherandIalso.7.Breathingthefreshairandsmellingthedeliciousfood,wejumpedupanddown.二、讀后續寫情景運用—段落請運用以上必備單詞或高頻語塊，把下面的語篇補充完整。Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1(媽媽激動不已).Everytimewegottoanewplace，Momcouldhardly2(抑制興奮),andwould3(振奮起來)likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround4(興奮地).Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5(激動得尖叫起來),Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6(眼里閃著激動的光芒)，wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.四、情感表達語篇運用1.（24-25高三上·廣東廣州·開學考試）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。HoldingMom’sHandTechnicallyspeaking,myMomisold—sheisinher70snow.Sheonceusedtobeawomanfulloflifeandlaughter.AllofthatchangedaftermyDadpassedawayabouttenyearsago.Althoughtheywerenotwhatyouwouldcalla“loveydovey”couple,Momdidtakehissuddendeathquitebadly.Tomakemattersworse,mybrotherdecidedtorelocatetoanothercity,whileMomdecidedtostaybehindwithhersister.WhenevermyMomcomesovertostaywithmeforsometime(Ilivewithmyhusbandandhisparents),shealwaysdemandsconstantattentionfromme.Shegenerallygetsnostalgic(懷舊的)ofthegoodoldtimesweusedtospendtogetherdiscussingpets,books,cooking,orlifeingeneral.Sometimesitturnedintoacomplainingsession—“Youneversparetimeformeanymore”or“Ihavebecomeuselesstoeveryone”.Ialwaysusedtoretort(反駁)with“Oh,Mom,pleasedon’tstartalloveragain”orsometimesrudelyremark,“Howcanyouexpectmetodothethingsweusedtodotogetheryearsago?Thereisnotimeforsuchthingsanymore!”Momwouldbecomesilent,probablybecauseshehadresignedherselftothewaythingsarenow.IcouldsenseIhadhurtherbuttherewaslittleIcoulddo,orsoIthoughtatthetime.Thenitstruckme—Ialwaystrytobenicetopeopleatwork.Idorandomactsofkindnessforstrangers.Isometimessurpriseanoldfriendwithaphonecall.ButwhathaveIdoneformyMom?WhyisitthatIamsoreluctanttoholdherhandsinfrontofothers?IsitbecauseIamembarrassedtobelabeledas“mama’sgirl”atmyage?Well,Iamnolongeryoungmyself.IsitbecauseIhavetakenmyMomforgrantedbecauseherdaysaredone?Todaywasyetanotherchaoticday.Iwasoccupiedindealingwithmyownthings,gettingreadyforwork,leavingmyMomtohaveherbreakfastallaloneatthetable.Ihadsomanythingsonmymind—thedeadlineatwork,anappointmentwithmydentist,whattocookfordinner...注意：(1)續寫詞數應為150個左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Momstaredatmesilently,withawronged(委屈的)look._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Then,allofsudden,Istoppedmyself._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.（23-24·河北石家莊·二模）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。WhenIenteredmyfirstrodeo(牛仔競技比賽),Iwas12yearsold.Itwasmorelikeaplaydaythanarodeo,buttoa12-year-oldgirllikeme,IfeltlikeIwasattheNationalFinalsRodeo!Astobarrelracing(繞桶賽),Ididn’tknowmuchaboutit,onlywhatmydadhadtoldme.ButIhadbeendeterminedtoentertheplayandwintheplayeversinceIwastoldthatmynotsomucholdercompetitivecousinCourtneywouldbethere.ThiswasmynighttofinallyshowherthatIcouldrideahorsejustasgoodorbetter,anddoanythingelseshecoulddo.Shewasinforasurprise!Courtneyalwaysthoughtshewasbetterthanme.Shealwayssaidherhorsewasbetterthanmine,too.CourtneyhadaPalominohorsenamedBuck.Hewasfast,andbeautiful.MyhorsewasabigAppaloosanamedZipper.Hewasn’tbeautifulorflashylikeBuckbuthewaskindandwillingtopleasetheskinnylittlegirlthatfedhimsugarseverydayafteradayofriding.ThatwasthereasonIknewwecouldbeatCourtney,becausewehadsomethingshedidn’t—apartnership,onewebothrespected.CourtneyandIwereinthe12-14agegroup.AsIwatchedthemeninthearena(競技場)setthethreebarrelsupintheirplaces,Ifeltnervousandalittlescaredforthefirsttimethatnight.ThoughIhadpreviouslypracticedalotwithZipper,andZipperracedfastandmadeturnsstably,IstillgotupsetwhenthinkingaboutracingagainstCourtney!Iclosedmyeyes,takingadeepbreath.Suddenly,Ifeltawarmfamiliarhandonmyshoulder.ItwasDad.Hesmiledatme,saying,“Areyouscaredornervous?Orboth?”“Both,butI’mmorescaredthatI’mgoingtomessup,”Ireplied,truthfully.注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；2.請按如下格式作答?！癥ouwon’t.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,”Dadsaid._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.（24-25·江蘇射陽·8月月考）閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Inmychildhood,undertheinfluenceofmyelderbrotherandmypeersintheneighborhood,Itriedanumberofoutdooractivities.Ofcourse,Iwasnotsotakenbyallofthem.whetherIwasdoingthemforthefirsttimeorcontinuously.However,fatehaditsownplansinstore.Youneverknowwhenanoutdooractivitywillchangemylife.Thenameofthisactivityis“fishing”.Abouttenyearsago,Ididn’treallyliketheideaofsittingonthebankofalakeorriver,spendinglonghoursunderthesun’sultravioletrays,whichcancausesunburnsandskindamage,andanxiouslyanticipatingsomefishtobekindtotakemybait(誘餌).Infact,Iusedtothinkofthisoutdooractivityassomekindof“hide-and-seek-game”thatispopularwithmostyoungkids,exceptthatitwasmuchharderbecauseIcouldseemy“prey(獵物)”onlyaftercatchingit.However,allthatchangedwhenIpaidavisittomyauntinthecountrysideduringasummerholiday.Iwasfinallyconvincedbyoneofmycousinstoaccompanyhimtoanearbylakeinordertodosomefishingpracticewithhim.Infact,heevenassuredmethatfishwouldeatmybaits.SoIagreedandwenttothelakeexpectingtocatchsomefish.Beforethrowingmyfishinglineintothewater,mycousindidsometricksattaching