201004論文翻譯個人常見錯誤總結分析:太中文化原文示例:Aimingattheproblemthatthewirelesssensornetwork(WSN)nodeiswithlimitedenergyandcomputingcapabilities修改后:Aimingattheproblemthattheenergyandcomputingcapabilitiesofthewirelesssensornetwork(WSN)nodeislimited分析:狀語?使用方式錯誤。分詞做狀語原文示例:ARealtimesuccess-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A)schemeisproposedwithnewpoliciesareaddedintotraditionauctionscheme.修改后:ARealtimesuccess-Non-free-auction(RTS-NF-A)schemeisproposedwithnewpoliciesbeingaddedintotraditionauctionscheme.分析:詞性混淆。句式錯誤。And連接兩個句子，只省略主語不能省略謂語。原文示例:theproposedschemeisin-timeupdating,flexibility,and?highconsultationrateofsuccess修改后:theproposedschemeisin-timeupdating,flexibleandhashighconsultationrateofsuccess分析:狀語從句的使用，句式不熟悉。原文示例:WSNisaselforganizingwirelessnetworkcomposedofasetofrandomgeographicallydistributedsensor修改后:WSNisaselforganizingwirelessnetworkwhichiscomposedofasetofrandomgeographicallydistributedsensor分析:1，詞性不對；2，句子結構混亂，不知所云。原文示例:Taskallocationisabroadareaofhigh-performancecomputingresearchproblems修改后:Taskallocationisanissuewhichisstudiedinhigh-performancecomputingbroadly.分析:句首大寫。名詞所有格。原文示例:thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeapplieddirectlyaswirelesssensornetworknodecapacityandcapabilityislimited.修改后:Thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmscannotbeapplieddirectlyaswirelesssensornetworknode’scapacityandcapabilityislimited.分析:冠詞用法粗心。句子不完整，缺少謂語。原文示例:WSNcanbeseenasaMASifasensorisregardasaagent.However,wirelesssensornetworkswithhighdynamics修改后:WSNcanbeseenasaMASifasensorisregardasanagent.However,wirelesssensornetworkshavehighdynamics分析:近義詞的區分。原文示例:WSNissimilarwithMASdueto??thatSensorscanhandleproblemindepentelyandWSNisadistributedsystemwithaself-organizingfeature修改后:WSNissimilarwithMASbecauseSensorscanhandleproblemindepentelyandWSNisadistributedsystemwithaself-organizingfeature.分析:連詞的恰當使用。助動詞的使用，句子結構混亂。原文示例:AndtheintroductionofauctiontotheWSNisnotaverygoodtakingintoaccountthedynamicsofthenetworkenviromentanditsresourcesconstrained(restricted?)feature.修改后:InadditiontheintroductionofauctiontotheWSNdoesnottakeintoaccountthedynamicsofthenetworkenvironmentanditslimitedresources.分析:被動語態；主謂一致；介詞使用原文示例:Thestudyisbuildonclustering-basedWSNframework.Asensorwantfind修改后:Thestudyisbuiltonclustering-basedWSNframework.Asensorwantstofind分析:動詞選擇；從句用法（要有動詞）；主謂一致原文示例:Thesensorbroadcastthetaskallocationinformationtosensorswhichinthesamecluster,thenchoosethemostsuitableonebyaautomaticnegotiation.修改后:Thesensorsendsthetaskallocationinformationtosensorswhichareinthesamecluster,thenchoosesthemostsuitableonebyaautomaticnegotiation.分析:詞性混淆；被動用法原文示例:Thewholeprocessofannounce,negotiate,andsettleonisaccomplishbyourimpovedauctionscheme修改后:Thewholeprocessofannouncement,negotiatiation,andsettlementisaccomplishedbyourimprovedauctionscheme分析:并列句，缺少連詞。原文示例:istoolow,itstotalutilityis修改后:istoolow,anditstotalutilityis分析:分詞做狀語；句子太長時的句式變通；從句中主謂一致原文示例:Thesensorwilllaunchanauctiontofindasuccessorwhenit??cannotcontinuetocarryoutitsfunctionsforsomereason(toleaveortomeettheenergyfloorthreshold).ItwillsentNoticetosensorsthatinthesamecluster.修改后:Thesensor,notcontinuingtocarryoutitsfunctionsforsomereason(toleaveortomeettheenergyfloorthreshold),willlaunchanauctiontofindasuccessor.ItwillsendNoticetosensorsthatareinthesamecluster. 分析:分詞狀語從句原文示例:WiththeDL(150s)remainsunchanged,修改后:WiththeDL(150s)remainingunchanged分析:oneof到底要不要定冠詞？上個批注里把a改為了the原文示例:AuctionisoneofthetypicalmethodsfortaskallocationinMAS修改后:AuctionisoneoftypicalmethodsfortaskallocationinMAS分析:對于縮寫名詞第一次出現全稱后以后都用縮寫原文示例:修改后:分析:詞性混淆原文示例:withnewpoliciesbeingaddedintotraditiontraditionalauctionschemetraditional修改后:分析:定語倒置混亂原文示例:Thetraditionalfieldofdistributedalgorithmsdisalgoftrafiecannotbeapplieddirectlydisalgoftrafie修改后:distributedalgorithmsoftraditionalfield分析:句式調整原文示例:wirelesssensornetworkshave(has?)WSNhasthefeaturesofhighdynamics,l