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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TiffanyMasseyhadjustmovedtothestateofMainelastyearandlivedalone.Sheenjoyedthebeachneartheneighbourhoodandjogging(慢跑)aroundintheevenings.ItwasduringoneofthoseeveningsthatshenoticedMrsJohnson.She’dneverforgettheirfirstmeeting.MrsJohnsonhadadognamedMax.Maxalmostattackedheroneeveningifithadn’tbeenforMrsJohnson.“Stopnow,oryouwon’tgetanyfoodtonight!”sheyelledatthedogfromadistance.“I’msorry.Maxdidn’tmeanit.Hejustdoesn’tlikestrangers!You’dbetterstayawayfromhim!”MrsJohnsonapologized,walkinguptoher.“Well...”BeforeTiffanycouldsayanything,theelderlywomanandthedogwalkedaway.Dayslater,shewasjoggingalongthebeachagainwhenMaxbarked(狗叫)atherliketheirfirstmeeting.Tiffanytriedtochangeherroute(路線)toescapehim.Thishappenedeveneverytimeshewentforajoglater,andTiffanyhadhadenoughofhim!Withweeksflying,thingschangedabitastheymetmoreoften.MaxnolongerbarkedatTiffanybutfollowedherinstead,obviouslyfriendly.Gradually,TiffanygotusedtojoggingonthebeachwithMaxrunningafterher,andMrsJohnsonwatchingthemrun.AndtheybegantheirconversationandTiffanybegantoknowaboutMrsJohnson,whowasinherlateseventiesandlivedaloneaswell.Orrather,withMax,shewasnotalone.Oneday,Tiffanywentforherusualjog,butshedidn’tseeMax.Shefeltabitupsetthathewasn’tfollowingher.However,inthefollowingdays,MrsJohnsonandMaxstilldidn’tshowuponthebeach.“Wherehashegone?Didtheymovesomewhere?”Tiffanywondered.MrsJohnsonandMaxhadbecomeapartofherdailyroutine,andtheirsuddenabsenceleftheruneasy.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Withcuriosity,Tiffanydecidedtofigureoutwhathadhappened.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TiffanyofferedtotakecareofMaxuntilMrsJohnsonrecovered.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________續(xù)寫(xiě)中需要回答的問(wèn)題HowdidTiffanyfindoutwhathappenedtoMrsJohnsonandMax?

Answer:Tiffanyaskedaroundtheneighborhood,andakindneighbortoldherthatMrsJohnsonhadfallenillandwasinthehospital,andMaxwasinalocalanimalshelter.HowdidTiffanyfeelwhensheheardaboutMrsJohnson'ssituation?

Answer:Tiffany'sheartsank,andshewasfilledwithconcern.WhatdidTiffanyoffertodo?

Answer:TiffanyofferedtotakecareofMaxuntilMrsJohnsonrecovered.HowdidMrsJohnsonreacttoTiffany'soffer?

Answer:MrsJohnsonwastouchedbyTiffany'skindnessandinitiallyexpressedconcernasMaxcouldbedifficulttohandle.WhathappenedwhenMrsJohnsonrecovered?

Answer:WhenMrsJohnsonrecoveredandcamehome,shewasgreetedbyahappyMaxandawarm-heartedTiffany,andtheirfriendshiphaddeepened.故事主旨Thestoryshowsthatevenstartingfromaninauspiciousbeginning,relationshipscangrowanddevelopintostrongbonds.Itemphasizesthepowerofkindnessandtheimportanceoflookingoutforoneanotherinacommunity.故事山Beginning:TiffanymovestoMaine,meetsMrsJohnsonandherdogMax.MaxinitiallyscaresTiffany.RisingAction:Overtime,Maxbecomesfriendly,andTiffanyandMrsJohnsonstarttalkingandbecomingpartofeachother'sroutines.Climax:MrsJohnsonandMaxsuddenlydisappear,andTiffanydecidestofindoutwhathappened.FallingAction:TiffanydiscoversMrsJohnsonisinthehospitalandofferstotakecareofMax.Ending:MrsJohnsonrecovers,andtheirfriendshipisstrengthened.故事發(fā)展線索Tiffany'sinitialfearofMaxduetohisaggressivebehaviorturnsintoafriendlyrelationshipastheymeetmoreoften.TheirdailyjoggingroutineisdisruptedwhenMrsJohnsonandMaxdisappear.Tiffany'ssearchleadshertothetruth,andheroffertotakecareofMaxfurtherdeepenstheirconnection.情感線索TiffanystartswithfearandannoyancetowardsMaxandMrsJohnson.Astimepasses,thisturnsintofamiliarityandfriendship.Whentheydisappear,shefeelsconcernandcuriosity.HeroffertotakecareofMaxshowsherkindnessandgrowingattachment,andthefinalreunionstrengthenstheirbond.續(xù)寫(xiě)布局與框架ThefirstparagraphfocusesonTiffany'seffortstofindoutwhathappenedtoMrsJohnsonandMaxandhervisittothehospital.ThesecondparagraphdetailsTiffany'soffertotakecareofMax,heractionsduringthattime,andthehappyreunionwhenMrsJohnsonrecovers.續(xù)寫(xiě)注意事項(xiàng)承接原文:Keepthecharacters'personalitiesconsistent.MrsJohnson'sinitialprotectivenessofMaxandTiffany'sgradualacceptanceshouldbemaintained.整體設(shè)計(jì):Ensureasmoothtransitionfromthemysteryoftheirdisappearancetothediscoveryandthesubsequentevents.Theelementsofkindnessandgrowingfriendshipshouldbeclearlydeveloped.巧妙設(shè)計(jì):UsedetailslikeTiffany'semotionalreactionsandMrsJohnson'sresponsestoshowthedeepeningrelationship.高分語(yǔ)句呼應(yīng)原文:“Tiffany'sheartsank.Sheimmediatelymadeherwaytothehospital.”ThisechoesTiffany'sconcern,similartoheruneasinesswhentheyfirstdisappeared.高級(jí)句型:“MrsJohnsonwastouchedbyTiffany'skindness.”(usingthepassivevoicetoshowtheimpactofTiffany'saction)主題表達(dá)&意義延伸直接引語(yǔ)點(diǎn)明主旨:“Theirfriendship,whichhadstartedwithabitoffear,hadgrownintoadeepandpreciousbond.”Thisdirectlystatesthedevelopmentoftheirrelationship.促成轉(zhuǎn)變,引發(fā)感悟:Tiffany'sinitialfearandhersubsequentkindnesscanmakereadersthinkabouthowfirstimpressionscanbeovercomeandthevalueofreachingouttoothers.借象征物點(diǎn)明主旨:MaxcanbeseenasasymboloftheconnectionbetweenTiffanyandMrsJohnson.Hisinitialaggressionandlaterfriendlinessmirrorthedevelopmentoftheirrelationship.學(xué)生寫(xiě)作示范Withcuriosity,Tiffanydecidedtofigureoutwhathadhappened.Sheknockedonseveraldoorsintheneighborhood,askingifanyoneknewaboutMrsJohnsonandMax.Atlast,anoldmantoldherthatMrsJohnsonhadhadabadfallandwasinthelocalhospital.Withouthesitation,Tiffanyrushedtothehospital.WhenshesawMrsJohnsonintheward,lookingpale,shefeltapangofsadness.“I'msosorrytohearaboutthis.Iwasreallyworriedaboutyou,”Tiffanysaidsoftly.MrsJohnsonmanagedaweaksmileandthankedherforcoming.

TiffanyofferedtotakecareofMaxuntilMrsJohnsonrecovered.MrsJohnson'seyesfilledwithtearsofgratitude.“You'resokind,Tiffany.Idon'tknowhowtothankyouenough.”Tiffanyassuredherthatitwasnotrouble.Shewenttotheanimalshelter,pickedupMax,andbroughthimhome.Everyday,shefedMax,playedwithhim,andtookhimforlongwalks.ShealsovisitedMrsJohnsonregularly,bringingherflowersandsharingstoriesaboutMax.WhenMrsJohnsonwasfinallydischargedfromthehospital,shefoundherhomecleanandMaxlookinghealthyandhappy.Theirfriendshiphadgrownstrongerthroughthisexperience,andTiffanyknewthatshehadmadeatruefriendforlife.【答案】參考范文:Withcuriosity,Tiffanydecidedtofigureoutwhathadhappened.Thenextday,shewenttoknockMrsJohnson’sdoor,however,receivingnoresponse.Feelingmoreconcerned,shethenaskedaroundtheneighborhood.AneighbourmentionedthatMrsJohnsonsufferedaheartattackseveraldaysagoandhadbeenbroughttohosp

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