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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Maxreachedaworkplaceforhisinauguralinterview.Hehadpreviouslyresidedwithhisparents.Hewasexasperatedbyhisparents'reproachesforeveryminoractionhetookathome.Whileawaitingtheinterview,hepondered,"OnlyifIachievesuccessintoday'sinterviewwillIbidfarewelltomyparents'abodeandestablishmyselfinthesprawlingmetropolis,whichwillenablemetoevadetheconstantbarrageofmyparents'complaintsabouttrivialmatters."Hebegantoreminisceabouttheminorissueshisparentsusedtoberatehimfor—Howhismotherwouldrequesthimtomakehisbedafterheawoke.Ifheleftthebathroomdoorajar,hismotherwoulddemandthatheclosethedoorand,priortothat,ensurethatthefaucetwasproperlyturnedoff.Howhisfatherwouldinsistthatheswitchoffthefanorlightswitchbeforehedeparted.Howhismotherwouldperpetuallyblamehimfornotplacingitemsintheirdesignatedspots.Whilecontemplatingallthesematters,hequestioned,"WhyshouldIheedtheirutterances?WhyshouldIcomplywithallthesedemands?IfIsecureemployment,Ishallassuredlydepartfromtheirdomicile."Asheglancedaround,Maxobservedthatnumerouscandidateswereseatedintheoffice.Henoticedthatthelightintheofficewasstillilluminatedanditwasteno'clockinthemorning.Recallinghisfather'sadmonitions,heroseandswitchedoffthelight.Whenheespiedwaterdrippingfromthewatercoolersituatedintheoffice,heproceededtoproperlyturnoffthetap.Itwasthemomenttoascendtothesecondfloorfortheinterview,andeveryoneproceededupstairsinsequence.Onthewayupthestaircase,achairwaspositionedinthepath,andtheothercandidatescircumventedit,butMaxremovedit,placeditaside,andcontinuedontothesecondfloor.Now,asMaxwaitedoutside,heobservedthecandidatesprecedinghimenteringandexitingswiftly.Afterconversingwiththeseindividuals,hediscoveredthattheinterviewershadnotposedanyquestionstothem.
注意:(1)續寫詞數應為150個左右;
(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。ItwasMax'sturntobeinterviewed.__________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertheinterview,Maxreachedhomeandhuggedhisparents.
__________________________________________________________________________________________續寫中需要回答的問題?WhathappenedduringMax'sinterview??Answer:WhenMaxenteredtheinterviewroom,theinterviewerstoldhimthathisactionsbeforetheinterviewwereactuallypartofthetest.Theypraisedhisgoodhabitsandresponsibleattitude,andthenofferedhimthejob.?WhydidMaxhughisparentsaftertheinterview??Answer:Maxrealizedthatthehabitshisparentshadtaughthim,liketurningofflightsandfaucets,werevaluable.Hewasgratefultohisparentsforinstillingthesegoodqualitiesinhim,sohehuggedthemtoshowhisloveandgratitude.?HowdidMaxfeelduringtheinterview??Answer:Atfirst,Maxmighthavebeenabitnervousasheenteredtheinterviewroom.Butafterunderstandingthesituation,hefeltrelievedandproudofhimselfforfollowinghisparents'teachings.?WhatdidMaxlearnfromthisexperience??Answer:Maxlearnedthatthesmall,seeminglyannoyingthingshisparentstaughthimwereactuallyimportantlifeskillsandqualities.Healsolearnedtoappreciatehisparents'effortsinraisinghim.?HowdidMax'sviewofhisparentschange??Answer:Max'sviewchangedfrombeingexasperatedbyhisparents'reproachestobeinggratefulfortheirguidance.Henowunderstoodthattheirconstantreminderswereforhisowngood.?故事主旨?通過Max的面試經歷,展現父母日常教導的價值,以及孩子對父母態度從厭煩到理解、感恩的轉變,強調家庭教育對個人成長的重要性。?故事山?開端:Max去參加工作面試,他對父母因小事的責備感到厭煩,渴望通過面試離開家。?發展:在等待面試時,Max回憶父母的責備,并在辦公室里自然地做出如關燈、關水龍頭、挪開椅子等符合父母教導的行為。前面的候選人面試時面試官沒問問題就結束了。?高潮(續寫部分):Max面試時得知之前的行為是面試的一部分,他因良好習慣和態度獲得工作;面試后Max理解并感恩父母,態度發生轉變。?結局:Max和父母關系更加融洽,他意識到家庭教育的重要性。?故事發展線索?Max對父母不滿去面試→在面試場所回憶父母責備并做出相關行為→前面候選人面試奇怪→Max面試→Max理解父母并感恩。?情感線索?厭煩父母(對父母責備感到惱怒)→期待改變(希望通過面試離開家)→疑惑(對前面候選人面試情況不解)→驚喜(因良好行為獲得工作)→感恩(理解父母教導的意義)。?續寫布局與框架?第一段:詳細描述Max面試的過程,包括面試官的反應、對Max之前行為的評價以及最終的面試結果,突出Max的驚訝與喜悅。?第二段:著重刻畫Max回家后的場景,描述他與父母擁抱時的心情,通過內心獨白或與父母的簡短對話,展現他對父母態度的巨大轉變以及對家庭教育的深刻理解。?續寫注意事項?承接原文:緊密圍繞Max面試前的經歷和心理活動,延續他的行為習慣和情感變化。例如,在描述面試場景時,提及他之前關燈、關水龍頭等行為對面試官的影響。?整體設計:確保兩段續寫內容連貫,從面試成功自然過渡到回家感恩父母,使故事完整且邏輯清晰。?巧妙設計:通過面試官的話語揭示面試的特殊形式,巧妙呼應Max之前的行為,突出家庭教育對他成功的作用。?高分語句?呼應原文:Justashisfatherhadalwaysinsistedonturningoffthelights,Max'sthissimpleyethabitualactionintheofficehadcaughttheattentionoftheinterviewers.(呼應原文中父親對Max關燈的教導)?高級句型:ItwasnotuntilMaxheardthewordsfromtheinterviewersthathetrulyrealizedhowmuchhisparents'teachingshadinfluencedhim.(使用強調句,增強表達效果,突出Max的感悟)?主題表達&意義延伸?直接引語點明主旨:"Yourparentshavetaughtyouwell.Thesesmallhabitsarethekeystoyourfuturesuccess,"saidtheinterviewer.Maxthenunderstoodthesignificanceofhisparents'nagging.?促成轉變,引發感悟:TheinterviewexperiencecompletelychangedMax'sattitudetowardshisparents.Henowsawtheirconstantremindersaspreciousgiftsthathadshapedhimintoaresponsibleperson.?借象征物點明主旨:ThechairthatMaxmovedasideduringtheinterviewsymbolizedtheobstaclesinlife.Hisparents'teachingswerelikehisguidinglight,helpinghimovercometheseobstacles.?學生寫作示范?學生示范一?ItwasMax'sturntobeinterviewed.Asheenteredtheroom,theinterviewerssmiledathim."We'vebeenobservingyousinceyouarrived,"oneofthemsaid."Youractions,liketurningoffthelightandthefaucet,andmovingthechair,showyourgoodqualities.Wedon'tneedtoaskyouanyquestions.You'vepassedtheinterviewbecauseofyourdailyhabits."Maxwasstunnedatfirst,andthenabigsmilespreadacrosshisface.Hecouldn'tbelievehisears.?Aftertheinterview,Maxreachedhomeandhuggedhisparents."Igotthejob,andit'sallbecauseofyou,"hesaidwithtearsinhiseyes."Iusedtobeannoyedbyyourreminders,buttodayIrealizedtheyaresoimportant.Youtaughtmetherightwaytolive,andthat'swhyIsucceeded.Thankyousomuch."Hisparentsweresurprisedbutextremelyhappy.Fromthatdayon,Maxnevercomplainedabouthisparents'teachingsagain.?學生示范二?ItwasMax'sturntobeinterviewed.Whenhewalkedin,theinterviewersimmediatelysaid,"We'vebeenwatchingyou.Yoursmallactsofkindnessandresponsibilityareexactlywhatwearelookingforinanemployee.You'vepassedthetestwithoutusaskingasinglequestion."Maxwasoverjoyed.Herealizedthatthosethingshisparentsalwaystoldhimtodowereactuallyhelpinghim.?Aftertheinterview,Maxreachedhomeandhuggedhisparentstightly."Iwaswrong,"hesaid."Ithoughtyouwerejustnagging,butyourteachingsgotmethejob.I'msogratefulforeverythingyou'vedoneforme.Iwon'tbeimpatientwithyourwordsanymore."Hisparentsweretouched.Maxfinallyunderstoodthevalueoftheirguidance.參考答案第一段:ItwasMax'sturntobeinterviewed.Heenteredtheroomwithamixofnervousnessandexcitement.Tohissurprise,theinterviewersdidn'taskhimanyquestionsabouthisqualificationsorexperience.Instead,theysimplysaid,"Max,thankyouforcoming.Wehaveobservedyouthroughouttheday,andyouractionshavespokenlouderthananywordscould.Youturnedoffthelight,closedthetap,andmovedthechair.Thesesmallgesturesshowagreatsenseofresponsibilityandrespectforothers.Webelieveyouwillbeavaluableadditiontoourteam.Congratulations,you'vegotthejob!"Maxwastakenabackforamoment,butthenawidesmilespreadacrosshisface."Thankyousomuch,"hereplied,feelingawaveofreliefandpridewashoverhim."Ireallyappreciatethisopportunity,andIpromiseIwilldomybest."第二段:Aftertheint
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