2025年2月26日高三下湖北武漢二月調考試卷大作文讀后續寫試題高分作文展示讀后續寫原文：Mindyhadapetdog.Shetookhimforawalkeveryday.Usuallyshetookhimtoaparknearherhouse.Theparkwasnexttoariver.Manypeopletooktheirdogsthere.Almostallthedogownerskneweachother.Theyoftenstoppedandhadatalk.ForMindy,ithadbeenahappyplaceuntilahomelessmanmovedintothepark.Heusuallysleptunderatreeneartheriver.Hewasverydirty.Hehadnoteeth,andhisclotheswereold.Heevensometimestalkedtohimself.Mindywasabitfrightened.Whenshewenttothepark,shetriedtostayclosetootherdogwalkers.Shewasunwillingtomeetthescaryman.Thenwintercameanditwascoldandwetinthepark.Thehomelessmandidn’thavewarmclothesandseemedasifhecouldn’tbeartogothroughthewinter.Overthefollowingfewdaystheweatherbecameevenworse.Itrainedalldayandallnight.Mindydidn’twanttoenterthepark.ThoughshefeltOK,shewasstillafraidofthehomelessman.Soshejusttookherdogforawalkalongthestreetsoutsidetheparkinstead.OnenightwhenMindywaswatchingtheTVnews,thewords“Homelessherosavesamanandachild!”caughtherattention.Thereportsaidthatacarhadfallenintotheriver.Thehomelessmanhadjumpedintotheriverwithouthesitationandsavedthedriverandhislittlesonwhoweretrappedinthecar.Thecardriverwasmovedtotears.Heshookthehomelessman’shandtightlyandsaidhecouldneverhavelivedwithouthisson.Hethenpromisedthathewouldgivethehomelessmanabigsumofmoneyinreturntoexpresshisthankfulness.Butthehomelessmanshookhisheadandrefused.Hesaidwithashysmilethathejustdidwhatanyoneelsewouldhavedone.Afterhearingthenews,Mindysuddenlyrealizedwhatarealherothehomelessmanwas.SoMindydecidedtodosomethingspecialaswell.Paragraph1:MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.

Paragraph2:

Unexpectedly,otherparkgoersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.

優秀續寫內容展示第一篇Paragraph1:

MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.They

subdivided

divided

somedifferentpartsofsmalltasktocarryout.Afterasplitsecondof

cleaning,thesceneseemedalittle

turned

(表意不明，可改為changed),whichmadetheirdeterminationstronger.Withoutthinkingofitschaos,theyjustbowedtopickthetrashupintoaconcentratedspace.Incompletesilence,thediscardedtrashbecame

fading

faded

away.Seeingthishugetrouble

remain

remaining

tobecopedwith,they

unwillinglytake

unwillinglytook

arestfor

any

some

time.Afterwhatseemedtobeages,their

face

faces

wentsweatyandtiredness

were

was

writtenallover

in

theircheeks.Paragraph2:

Unexpectedly,otherparkgoersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.Withno

exagger-ation

exaggeration,theircleaningspeedbecamefaster.Ultimately,theyfinishedthisvastthingwithjointefforts.Alltheeyesfixedontherefreshingscene,

freezingstood

frozen

totheground.Afterother

(parkgoersige)parkgoers’

parkgoers'

kindandselflesshelp,theyeventuallyturnedchaosintospectacularlandscape.Theythrewtheglancetoeachother,twinklingwithexcitement,couldnotutterasingle

words

word.Itwasthentheybegantounderstandthepowerof

crowd

thecrowd

andtheresponsibilitytodefendour

spared

shared

“family”.Itdawnedon

they

them

thatthebetterworld

aws

owes

tothedevotionofeveryone’skindinstinct.第二篇Paragraph1:

MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.Bythen,theynoddedtheirheadsfirmly,andthethreefriendsgotdowntocleaningthemess.Maxwasinchargeofthe

walk-ingtrials

walkingtrails,whileSamwasresponsibleforthegrassyfields,andthecornerwashandledbyAva.Under

suchaintense

suchanintense

hotsummer,beadsofsweatrandownontheircheeks.Despite

soispainstaking

howpainstaking

andchallengingthetask,thethreefriendsneverwithdrew.Andtheirbehaviordrewmoreandmoreparkgoers’

attentions

attention.Paragraph2:

Unexpectedly,otherparkgoersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.Gradually,theparkwasdottedwithnumerouspeople,

owning

owing

thesamepurposetocleanupthismess,althoughthey

di-dn't

didn't

get

acquaintant

acquainted

witheachother.Underthis

circum-mstance

circumstance,asenseofexhilarationwashedover

thisthree

thesethree

friends.Withtheteameffort,themiscellaneousgarbageleftonthegroundallfadedaway.Seeingtheparkbeingrecovered,everyonepresentwore

ear-nest

earnest

smiles,

laughters

laughter

lingeringaroundthepark.Whata

prestigious

praiseworthy

action!第三篇Paragraph1:

MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.Nosooner

hadthemheard

hadtheyheard

thissuggestionthantheir

frustration

frustrated

expressionsgavewaytodelightfulones."Yes,wecandoit!"MaxandSamexclaimed

inchorusof

inchorus.With

silent

asilent

atmosphere,everyonethoughthowtotacklethistroublewith

apraticalways

practicalways."Howaboutwe

cleaned

clean

thisparkin

adailylife

dailylife?"Samwhispered,hereyeslitup

excitement

withexcitement."It'sok"MaxandAva

responsed

responded.Fromthenon,Max,AvaandSampickedtherubbisheverymorningandtheir

behaviour

behavior

wasspottedbylocals.Somepeopleevenputit

ononline

online.Paragraph2:

Unexpectedly,otherparkgoersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.What

starteda

startedasa

movementtocleantheplayground

andnow

now

blossomedintoatendencytoprotect

environment

theenvironment.Withtime

approaching

passing,moreandmorestudents,workers,teachersand

soan.ou

soon

joinedthisCleanupSquad.Insteadofjustcleaningtheplayground,theyturnedthe

abject

object

toallaroundthecity.Althoughit

mayseemed

mayseem

abitcrazyandimpossible,theresultwasunexpectedlygreat.Ontheotherday,thethreefriendswentintotheparkagain.Insteadof

rubbishwere

rubbishbeing

everywhere,theyfoundtheplaygroundwasneat.Andnow,theycouldenjoyleisuretimeasusual!第四篇Paragraph1:

MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.Sam

cutinherwords

cutin

"That'sagoodidea!let'sdoitrightnow!"AndthenMaxadded"Weneedsometools,andI'lltakesome

sweeps

sweeps改為sweeps改成

sweepingtools

here."Thethreekidsassignedtheplanquickly,andthenputthemselvesintothis"career".Theygatheredatthepark'sgatewithtools;theirfaces

poppedbeet-red

turnedbeet-red

because

excitement

ofexcitement.Exchangingknowingeyes,they

rush-ed

rushed

intothemess.Timeflewaway,dropsofbrimming

sweats

sweat

fallingdowntheirfaces,andthepark-goersbecamemoreandmore.Someofthemstood,staringat

threekids

thethreekids.Paragraph2:

Unexpectedly,otherparkgoersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.Thatmadethemmuchmoreexcitedandconfident—theycould

finished

finish

thisbig

career

task.Sweeping,picking,andwashing.Thechaoticmessofdiscardedtrashbecamethebelovedplayground.All

long,hard

longhard

timesofworkandcommitmentfinallyborefruits.Samwas

tootiredthat

sotiredthat

helayontheground.AvaandMaxcheeredfortheirvictory.Atthatmoment,oneoftheparkgoerspraisedthemfortheir

behaviours

behaviors,andpromisedthathewouldneverdiscardtrash.Andthisextraordinaryexperiencewouldstaywiththemforever:theydeeplyunderstoodthat"Atinyactioncouldmakeabig

different

difference第五篇Paragraph1:

MaxandSamexchangedanexcitedglance.Theynoddedtheirheadsandworeasmileontheirfaces.Maxsaidinpassion,"Even

through

though

wehavejustthree

persons

people,Isincerely

convince

believe

thatthereisawill,thereisaway!"WhenMaxfinished,thethreekidsstartedtopickupthemultiplegarbagewithhappinessanddetermination.Withtheeffortstheyputin,theygatheredalotofrubbish,likecandywrappers,metalbarsandplasticbottles.Samsaidinagentletone,"Thereare

multiplediscardedtrash

multiplepiecesofdiscardedtrash,howtired

I'm

Iam!"MaxandAvagaveashiningsmiletoSamandputtheirhands

and

on

Sam'sshoulders."Wecanmakeit!"Theysaidinpassion,whichattractedsomeparkgoers’attention.Paragraph2:

Unexpectedly,otherparkgoersjoinedinastheydidthecleanup.Theypickedupsomegarbageandgaveittothethreestudents.WhatamazedMax,AvaandSamwasthatsomeparkgoersgave

their

them

a

favour

hand.ThenMaxsaidinagreement,"Thankyouforyourkindness,theenvironmentwillbebetterwithyourhelp!"Max'swordswerelikeabreeze,blowing

parkgoers’embrassment

parkgoers'embarrassment

andchangingtheirmindsets.Theparkgoerswouldn'tdiscardthetrashandwould

determine

bedetermined

toprotectthepark’sremarkablebeauty.Withthehelpofparkgoers,Max,AvaandSamquicklysucceededinpickingalloftherubbish.Avasaidwithasmile,"Everythingischangingforthebetter,wecanplayfootballwitha

clear

clean

environment!"Then,thethreekidsplayed

thefootball

football

withenthusiasmand

cherish

cherished

memories.分析總結第一篇續寫情節第一段：Max和Sam興奮對視后，分工清理公園垃圾。盡管現場混亂，他們仍堅持將垃圾集中，過程中十分疲憊但未休息。第二段：其他公園游客加入清理，速度加快，眾人合力完成清理，將混亂公園變為美景。主角們意識到集體力量及保護環境責任。人物Max和Sam：積極主動，有決心，面對困難堅持清理垃圾。其他游客：從旁觀者變為熱心參與者。語言有較多語言錯誤，如用詞不準確（“subdivided”）、拼寫錯誤（“exagger-ation”）、語法錯誤（“becamefadingaway”“unwillinglytake”等），影響表達流暢性。評價優點：情節圍繞公園清理有序展開，能體現團結及環保主題。缺點：語言問題嚴重，情節較為常規，缺乏獨特性，描寫不夠生動。第二篇續寫情節第一段：Max、Sam和Ava分工明確，在炎熱夏日清理公園，雖艱難但未退縮，吸引了其他游客注意。第二段：眾多游客加入清理，大家齊心協力讓公園恢復整潔，眾人露出笑容，認為這是值得稱贊的行動。人物Max、Sam和Ava：有責任感，不畏艱難，堅持完成清理任務。其他游客：受主角們影響，積極參與到清理工作中。語言存在語言錯誤，如固定搭配不當（“suchaintense”）、用詞錯誤（“owningthesamepurpose”“acquaintant”）