讀后續寫專題復習1讀后續寫如何讀howtoread如何寫howtowrite了解故事情節掌握故事主線構建故事情節升華故事主題5W(who/when/where/why/what)+1H(how)ChristmasDaywascoming.Iwasjustakidthen,andmybigsistertoldmetherewasnoSantaClaus.IfledtomyGrandmabecauseshewouldbestraightwithme.IknewGrandmaalwaystoldmethetruth.Grandmawashome,andItoldhereverything.Shewasreadyforme.

“NoSantaClaus!”

Sheshouted.

“Ridiculous!Don’tbelieveit.Thatrumorhasbeengoingaroundforyears,anditmakesmemad,plainmad.”“Now,putonyourcoat,andlet’sgo.”“Gowhere,Grandma?”

Iasked.

“Where”

turnedouttobeKerby’sGeneralStore,theonestoreintownthathadalittlebitofjustabouteverything.Aswewalkedthroughitsdoors,Grandmahandedmetendollars.

“Takethismoney,”

shesaid,

“andbuysomethingforsomeonewhoneedsit.I’llwaitforyouinthecar.”

ThensheturnedandwalkedoutofKerby’s.

Iwasonlyeightyearsold.I’doftengoneshoppingwithmymother,butneverhadIshoppedforanythingallbymyself.Thestoreseemedbigandcrowded,full

ofpeoplecompetingtofinishtheirChristmasshopping.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere,confused,holdingthatten-dollarbill,wonderingwhattobuyandwhotobuyitfor.IsuddenlythoughtofBobbyDecker,whowasakidwithbadbreathandmessyhair.HesatrightbehindmeinMrs.Pollock’sgrade-twoclass.BobbyDeckerdidn’thaveacoat.Iknewthatbecauseheneverwentoutforrecess(休息)

duringthewinter.Hismotheralwayswroteanote,tellingtheteacherthathehadacough,butwekidsknewthatBobbyDeckerdidn’thaveacough,andhedidn’thaveacoat.Ifingeredthetendollar

bill

withgrowingexcitement.IwouldbuyBobbyDeckeracoat!Isettledonaredone,whichlookedreallywarm,andhewouldlikethat.“IsthisaChristmaspresentforsomeone?”

theladybehindthecounteraskedkindly,asIlaidmytendollarsdown.

“Yes.”Theniceladysmiledatme,putthecoatinabagandwishedmeaMerryChristmas.注意：1．續寫詞數應為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Paragraph1:Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Paragraph2:

GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyinthebushforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopen.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howdidwewrapthecoat？Whatdidwedonext？Howdidwefeel？Wheredidwego？HowdidBobbyDeckerresponse？WhatdidIrealize？Step1:Analyzethereasonswhyyouaremarkedwithanundesirablylowgrade.本次讀后續寫的主要問題在于沒看懂或忽略了第二段首句中的重要信息，如breathlessly（氣喘吁吁地）以及bush（灌木叢），導致第二段的情節設置出現了較為嚴重的方向性的錯誤。其他問題：__________________________________________________________Step2:Accumulatethechunksorsentencesforcertainplots.其中挖空部分為通用詞塊，請重點掌握。Para1：Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper.微情節1：準備工作（包裝禮物

+告訴奶奶禮物是送給BobbyDecker）1.

Whileshewaspackingthepresent,

ItoldthestoryofBobbyDeckertoherindetailandshewashappytoknowmydecisiontohelpsuchanunluckyboy.2.

Sheeven_____________________________（仔細地附上一張圣誕節賀卡）onthebox,______________（上面寫著）

“ToBobby,(MerryChristmas!/Haveawarm

winter)FromSantaClaus"

(留下線索clue/note,為第二段埋下伏筆)微情節2：出發去送禮物3.

_____________________（所有東西都準備就緒）,Grandmasuggested,“Let’sgotoBobbyDecker’shouseandgavehimaChristmassurprise!”4.

___________________（沒有任何延誤）,wesetoutforBobby’shome

______thespecialgift.carefullyattached

aChristmascardsaying/readingHavingeverythingpreparedWithoutanydelaywith微情節3：放下禮物并快速離開

5.

______________（一到那兒）,GrandmaandIgotoffthecarquietlyandplacedthepresentgentlyinfrontofthedoor.Then,Iranghisdoorbellandthenwe___________________（沖到）thecarandhid(躲藏)

ourselvesbehindthebush.6.

Awhilelater,wearrivedwhereBobbylived.

Itookadeepbreath,dashedforhisfrontdoor,threwthepresentdownonhisstep,

_______________________（用力敲門）

andflewbacktothesafetyofthebushesandGrandma.Para2：GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyinthebushforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopen.Uponarrivaldashed/rushed

towardspoundedhisdoor微情節4：觀察Bobby收到禮物時的情緒和動作描寫

7.

Immediately,__________________________（BobbyDecker出來了）或者AtthegatestoodBobbyDecker.8.

Ashenoticed/spottedthebeautifulboxontheground,hewassurprisedatfirst.Butsoonhe

__________________________（高興地尖叫起來）:“Mom,SantaClaussent/deliveredmeagift!”

9.

Seeingnothingbutthegiftbox,Debbywascurious(好奇的)

andpickedupthecard.“It’sagiftfromSantaClaus!”Bobbyshoutedexcitedlywithhandswavingintheair.Gratefulanddelighted,Bobby

__________________________（打開禮物盒）andtriedonthewarmcoat,yelling(大叫),“It’sthefirstcoatinmylife!Thankyou,SantaClaus.”outwentBobbyDecker.screamedwithjoyBobbyunfolded/unwrapped/opened

thegiftbox/package微情節5：我和奶奶的情緒和動作描寫10.

__________________________（一股暖流流淌在我心房）

whenIsawhimwearthebrightredcoat.11.

Seeingthis,GrandmaandI__________________________（滿意地笑了）.微情節6：感悟主題12.

Onthewaybackhome,Grandmasaidwithasmile,“Now,yousee___________________________（圣誕老人的真諦）”

Ofcourse,Grandmawasright.SantaClausdoesexist(存在)anditcanbeanyonetryingtocomfortandwarmothers

withakindandwarmheart.13.

Itsuddenlydawnedonme

that或者NotuntilthemomentdidIcometorealizethat

____________________________________（哪里有愛，哪里就有圣誕老人）.Awarmcurrentfloodedinmyheartsmiledwithsatisfactiontheessence/truemeaningofSantaClaus或者whatSantaClausisallabout.

wherethereislove,thereisSantaClaus.?Itismoreblessedtogivethantoreceive.給予比接受更有福。Togiveistoreceive.給予即是收獲。Ifyoulightalampforsomebody,itwillalsobrightenyourpath.?為別人點一盞燈，照亮別人，也照亮了自己。Wemakealivingbywhatweget,butwemakealifebywhatwegive.?我們靠所得來謀生，但靠給予來創造生活?Givingsomeonearoseleavesalingeringfragranceinyourhand.贈人玫瑰手留余香。關于給予的英語諺語

Para1：Thatevening,GrandmahelpedmewrapthecoatinChristmaspaper.Whileshewaspackingthepresent,

ItoldthestoryofBobbyDeckertoherandshewashappytoknowmydecisiontohelpsuchanunluckyboy.Sheevencarefullyattached

aChristmascardonthebox,saying“ToBobby,MerryChristmas!FromSantaClaus"Havingallstuffprepared,Grandmasuggested,“Let’sgotoBobbyDecker’shouseandgavehimaChristmassurprise!”Withoutanydelay,wesetoutforBobby’shome

withthespecialgift.Uponarrival,GrandmaandIgotoffthecarquietlyandplacedthepresentgentlyinfrontofthedoor.Then,Iranghisdoorbellandthenwedashedtowardsthecarandhidourselvesbehindthebush.OnepossibleversionPara2:GrandmaandIwaitedbreathlesslyinthebushforBobbyDecker’sfrontdoortoopen.Immediately,outwent