PAGEPAGE1其次節(jié)提升作文檔次的技法——讓文章靚麗起來技法(一)詞匯高級，“語”眾不同在英語書面表達閱卷過程中，老師會對一些“高級”詞匯偏愛有加。但是，大多數(shù)同學(xué)可能沒有高級詞匯的意識，提到“好”，就只會想到“good”，提到“壞”，就只會想到“bad”。那么，什么樣的詞匯最能夠吸引閱卷老師的眼球？什么樣的詞匯才算是高級詞匯呢？我們可以采納以下原則：什么樣的詞匯1．獨樹一幟，晚詞優(yōu)先老師偏愛學(xué)得比較晚的單詞，新學(xué)的單詞，可以體現(xiàn)學(xué)生具備“學(xué)以致用”的意識。假如某個單詞既可以用初中的詞匯來表達，又可以用中學(xué)的詞匯來表達，那么要盡量選擇用中學(xué)的，如：eq\x(01adj.漂亮的)索然無味低分詞：beautiful吸人眼球高分詞：appealing有吸引力的；attractive吸引人的；charming迷人的；fascinating迷人的高考范文例句：①First，nothingismoreattractivethanaproperandrealisticpicture.(2015·上海，書面表達)②Inaddition，itisafabulouschoicetovisitsomefamousscenicspotssuchasMountTaiduringthevacation，inordertoenjoyappealingsceneryandmakemorefriends.(2013·山東，書面表達)eq\x(02adj.困難的)索然無味低分詞：difficult吸人眼球高分詞：challenging有挑戰(zhàn)性的高考范文例句：Inthecomingthreeyears，ourschoollifewillbechallenging.(2014·江西，書面表達)eq\x(03adj.重要的)索然無味低分詞：important吸人眼球高分詞：vital至關(guān)重要的；essential必不行少的；significant有重要意義的高考范文例句：①What’sworse，somedrivers，cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(2015·江蘇，書面表達)②Toavoidsuchconflicts，weshouldbekindtooneanother，whichisessentialtoenjoyingaharmoniouslife.(2012·江蘇，書面表達)2．短語/詞塊優(yōu)先在閱卷老師看來，活用短語能夠體現(xiàn)一個考生的語言運用實力。因此，我們可以將某些常見單詞轉(zhuǎn)化為短語/詞塊，如：eq\x(01v.參與)索然無味低分詞：join吸人眼球高分詞：takepartin；participatein高考范文例句：①Finally，weshouldtakepartinsportsandoutdooractivitiesfrequently.(2014·安徽，書面表達)②IknowthatyouwelcomestudentsfromdifferentcountriesandI’dliketotakepartinit.(2012·全國Ⅰ，書面表達)③ItreturnedtotheGamesin1932，andwomenwerefirstallowedtoparticipateinthecompetitionin1968.(2008·廣東，書面表達)eq\x(02v.運用)索然無味低分詞：use吸人眼球高分詞：makegooduseof高考范文例句：①Myexperiencetellsmethatitisnotwhatyouaregivenbuthowyoumakeuseofitthatdetermineswhoyouare.(2012·湖北，書面表達)②Lastbutnotleast，it’severyone’sresponsibilitytomakegooduseofwater，suchasrecyclingandsavingwaterinourdailylife.(2010·福建，書面表達)eq\x(03v.探望)索然無味低分詞：visit吸人眼球高分詞：payavisitto高考范文例句：Yourstudents’visitinggroupcomingfromtheUSwillpayavisittoourschoolonJune26.(2011·天津，書面表達)eq\x(04某些形容詞＝of＋同根名詞)索然無味低分詞：veryimportant重要的；verydifficult困難的；verybeautiful漂亮的；veryuseful有用的；veryhelpful有幫助的；veryharmful有害的；veryvaluable有價值的；verysignificant至關(guān)重要的；verynecessary必要的吸人眼球高分詞(對應(yīng))：ofgreatimportance；ofgreatdifficulty；ofgreatbeauty；ofgreatuse；ofgreathelp；ofgreatharm；ofgreatvalue；ofgreatsignificance；ofgreatnecessity高考范文例句：①Undoubtedly，itwillbeofgreatvaluetoeverystudentinourclass.(2015·廣東，書面表達)②Firstly，asponsorshipwillbeofgreathelp.(2013·重慶，書面表達)③Ithinkthechanceisofgreatimportanceforme.(2011·山東，書面表達)技法(二)句式豐富，彰顯實力高考時，一篇書面表達中的句子假如都采納簡潔句，確定不能得高分，精彩句式的合理運用會使文章讀起來抑揚頓挫。因此應(yīng)多運用一些高級句式和復(fù)合句，讓句子“高人一籌”，亮點紛呈，彰顯考生的寫作實力。1．精彩的復(fù)合句a．增加亮點的定語從句①Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooks.Iamoftenconfusedtochoosefromthem.→Forexample，therearehugeamountsofreferencebooksfromwhichIamoftenconfusedtochoose.②Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChina.Ithasahistoryofmorethan1,500years.→Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChina，whichhasahistoryofmorethan1,500years.b．吸引眼球的狀語從句①SinceyouhavelongbeeninterestedinChineseculture(緣由狀語從句)，IthinkBeijingLanguageandCultureUniversityisanidealplaceforyou.②Ifyou’reinterestedintheChinesefolkart(條件狀語從句)，pleasee-mailme.③Wecansetoutearlysothatwewillhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks(目的狀語從句)．c．提升檔次的名詞性從句①Itisworthmentioningthatourvolleyballteamwonthechampionshiptwiceinthenationalmiddleschoolvolleyballmatch(主語從句)．②Ihopethesesuggestionswouldbehelpfultoyou(賓語從句)．③That’swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice(表語從句)．2．亮眼的倒裝句SodiligentareyouthatI’mmorethandelightedtoteachyou.3．新奇的強調(diào)句和省略句①Itisthespiritthatthestoryconveysthatreallymatters.②Asscheduled，anartexhibitionwillbeheldnextSundayinthelocalmuseum.4．傳神的被動結(jié)構(gòu)Yourtimelyhelpwillbeverymuchappreciatedbyme.5．言簡意賅的非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)Togetadmitted，Ihavemadegoodpreparations，tryingtoknowasmuchasIcouldaboutmycity.6．委婉的虛擬語氣Withoutyourkindnessandgenerosity，IwouldnothaveenjoyedmyselfsomuchwhenvisitingEngland.技法(三)連貫連接，奇妙過渡連接(過渡)性詞語的運用是語言連貫性得以實現(xiàn)的最常用手段。在句與句之間，段與段之間恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\用一些承上啟下的連接(過渡)性詞語是特別必要的。過渡詞語就像紐帶一樣把文章緊密地連接起來，更像潤滑劑，使文章連接流暢。1．表示起始關(guān)系的過渡性詞語aboveall，firstofall，tobeginwith，accordingto，asyouknow/asisknown，asisshown...，whenitcomesto等。①Firstofall，Ithinkitimportanttomakemorefriendsabroad.2．表示時間依次的過渡性詞語first(ly)，second(ly)，third(ly)，then，later，intheend，finally，atlast，afterthat，afterwards，sincethen，meanwhile等。①Secondly，weshouldgetupearlytomemorizeidiomsandusefulexpressions.②Meanwhile，weallenjoyedthebeautyofnature.Ihadabadcoldlastweek.First，Ihadarunningnose，butIdidnottakeitseriously.ThenIbegantocough.③Afterthat，Ihadafeverandfeltweak.Finally，Iwassenttohospitalandhadtolieinbedforthreedays.3．表示并列關(guān)系的過渡性詞語and，or，also，aswellas，neither...nor...，notonly...butalso...，either...or...，not...but...等。①Workhard，andyouwillbeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.②Swimmingnotonlybenefitsourhealth，butalsohelpsushaveastrongwill.4．表示轉(zhuǎn)折/對比關(guān)系的過渡性詞語but，yet，however，while，otherwise，onthecontrary等。①However，notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.②Onthecontrary，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime，butalsodogreath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