2025屆高三上學期英語復習專項：讀后續寫跳出思維定勢續寫句型回顧：描寫情緒類1

So情緒adj.wassbthat+從句【例句】Soguiltywasmymomthat

sheloweredherheadandmurmured,“Sorry.”

練習：SosadwasTomthat

tearswelledupinhiseyes.

湯姆傷心得眼淚奪眶而出。2.

Much/Greatlytoone’s情緒n.,sbdidsth

【例句】Beingthecoachofthenewteam,IwasexcitedbecauseIknewweweregoingtowin,but

tomydisappointment

weweredefeated.

練習：Muchtothefamily’ssurprise,

Dennisstucktohispromise!

令家人驚訝的是，丹尼斯信守諾言！3.情緒adj.and情緒adj,sbdidsth

【例句】Suddenlysomethinginsidemebegansaying,“Tryit!Tryit!”

Shyandscared,Iwatchedthem,tryingnottolooktooeager.練習：Exhaustedandscared,Janelaydownnearastone,missingherfamily.

感覺疲憊和害怕，簡躺在一塊石頭旁邊，想念她的家人。4.

Sbdidsth,adj（短語）

【例句】Shestoodthereinshock,

unsureofwhattodonext.

常見的形容詞短語作狀語的詞：unsureof/about,uncertainabout,(un)awareof/that,determinedtodo,lostin,absorbedin…練習：Heranoutagain,

unawarethatIwasfollowinghim.

他又跑了出去，不知道我在跟著他。5.

情緒Adj.as主+謂,sbdidsth

【例句】Seeminglyabsent-mindedandforgetfulasshewas,sheneverfailedtodemonstratethebeautyoflifetoherchildren,andendoweduswithafun-filledchildhoodandanever-drainedpassiontoembracelife.

看似心不在焉、健忘的她，卻始終向孩子們展示生活的美好，并賦予我們充滿樂趣的童年和永不枯竭的擁抱生活的熱情。練習：WeakasJanewas,shepickedupspeedalongthestreamtofindthewayback.

雖然簡很虛弱，但她加快了沿著溪流的速度，找到了回去的路。6.

Withgrowing+情緒n,Sbdidsth

【例句】Withgrowingfear,ElliandIpackedupourcampasquicklyaspossible.隨著恐懼的增加，艾莉和我以最快的速度收拾了我們的營地。練習：Withgrowinganxiety,Ishoutedatthetopofmylungs,“Help!”

隨著焦慮的增加，我大聲喊道：“救命！

7.

Sbdidsth,with/in+抽象名詞

with+抽象名詞(care,confidence,ease,patience,pride,eagerness,interest,caution,attention,seriousness,kindness,calmness,determination,anxiety,curiosity,courage,joy,devotion,fear,sadness,satisfaction)關心、自信、輕松、耐心、驕傲、渴望、興趣、謹慎、注意、嚴肅、善良、冷靜、決心、焦慮、好奇心、勇氣、喜悅、奉獻、恐懼、悲傷、滿足

in+抽象名詞

(peace,excitement,anger,amazement,relief,confusion,excitement,admiration,puzzlement,shock,secret,anger,terror,horror)（和平、興奮、憤怒、驚奇、解脫、困惑、興奮、欽佩、困惑、震驚、秘密、憤怒、恐怖、恐怖）【例句】Myfatherdrove

insilence.我父親默默地開車。練習：Itookoutthefoldedpaper

withgreatcare,andopenedit.

我小心翼翼地拿出折疊好的紙，打開了它。8.

Sbsaid(replied/answered...)ina/an+情緒形容詞+voice,“…”

【例句】“Andwhatdoyouwant?”

thechemistaskedinanannoyedvoice.

“那你想要什么？”化學家惱怒地問道。練習：Susanapologizedtohergrandmother

inaguiltyvoice,“I’msorry.It’smyfault.”

蘇珊用愧疚的聲音向祖母道歉，“對不起。這是我的錯。9.情緒名詞1gavewayto情緒名詞2

【例句】Ehlerseventuallysucceededincoaxingtheanimaltohim.

Nervousnessandfeargavewaytojoy.埃勒斯最終成功地將這只動物哄騙到他身邊。緊張和恐懼讓位于喜悅。練習：Fearfinallygavewaytocourage

andIcontinuedtowalkdeepintheforest.

恐懼終于讓位于勇氣，我繼續在森林深處行走。10.

Asenseof+情緒n/Afeelingof+情緒n/Awaveof+情緒nflooded(over/through)/sweptoversb

【例句】Awaveof

happiness

floodedme.

一股幸福的浪潮涌上心頭。練習：Awaveofrelief

floodedthroughher.

一股如釋重負的浪潮涌上心頭。

續寫實戰OutsidetheBox跳出思維定勢

The

HarvestfestcontestwasfallingonFridayandeveryoneinschoolwastalkingaboutit.Allthestudentswouldshowupintheirself-madecostumes(裝扮)andawinnerwouldbechosenbytheprincipal.

“Do

youhaveyourcostumefortheHarvestfestcontest?"Aliceasked."I'mgoingasachocolatebar.MymomandIhavebeenworkingonitallweek.”

“Yeah,

Ihaveacostume,”saidJordanEastman,poppingupthetwofrontwheelsofhiswheelchairashewaitedforhisdadtopickhimup.“Butit'sboring.”

“Why?

Whatisit?”Aliceasked.

“MaxMag

thesuperhero,butDanny,TomandIzzyareallgoingasMaxMagtoo.”Jordanshookhishead.“That'stoomanytostandachanceatwinningthecontest.”Hewavedtohisdad,whohadjustpulledupinfrontoftheschool.

Jordan

rolledhiswheelchairtowardhisdad,andAlicewalkedwithhimtotheminivan(小貨車).

“Maybe

youshouldgoassomethingelse.”

“The

contestisFridaynight.”Jordansighed.“It'stoolatetochangecostumes.”

“Jordan,

youhavetothinkoutsidethebox.Lookaroundyourhouseandseewhatyouhave.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems."Shetookasipofherdrink,andtoldJordanthatherchocolate-barcostumewasmadefromoldfabrichermomhadlyingaroundandrecycledplastics.

On

hiswayhome,Jordanwasquiet.HekeptthinkingaboutAlice'swords:Thinkoutsidethebox.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.Whenhegothome,hefoundhismumhandlingwithsomewoodenpieces.Shewasputtinganewdesktogether.Ontopofthedeskwasthehugeemptycardboardboxthepieceshadcomein.MomsmiledatJordan,pointingatthedesk,“Whatdoyouthink?”Para1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,"It'sperfect…withmywheelchair.”Para2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn'twaittoshowhiscostume.第一：初步分析，在文中圈出關鍵詞，找出五要素：

When---when

JordanwaspreparingfortheHarvestfestcontestWhere---intheschool,athomeWho-----主要人物:Jordan;次要人物:Alice;Mom;Dad;principal;Danny,TomandlzzyWhat---JordanwasthinkingabouthiscostumehardWhy---Hewantedtowinthecontest第二：文本分析，在文中劃出關鍵句，找出文章主題：本文的主題語境是人與自我.材料中揭示主題的關鍵句是Thinkoutsidethebox.There'shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.可以引申到

第三：概括文章大意，找出文章伏筆和鋪墊文章大意：記敘文。文章講述的是主人公Jordan準備參加學校周五舉辦的豐收節裝扮比賽，他很想贏得比賽，同時也很喜歡超級英雄這個人物，但是他現在的裝扮太普通了，完全不可能勝出，這時，Alice講述自己的巧克力塊裝扮的材料來源，鼓勵他要積極跳出思維定勢，發掘日常用品的潛藏功能，及時更改裝扮。苦苦思索的Jordan回到家，發現媽媽剛剛拼裝好新桌子，上面是包裝桌子配件的碩大的空紙箱空紙箱是否會給他靈感，讓他產生讓人驚喜的創意制作呢?他最后是否會贏得比賽呢?文章的鋪墊和伏筆：情節構思：Para1:Jordan'seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,"It'sperfect…withmywheelchair.”1.Jordantoldhisideatomum

2.Hefinishedthenewdesignwithhismum’shelp

3.Jordan’sfeelingPara2:SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn'twaittoshowhiscostume.1.

Jordan’sactionandfeeling

2.theaudience’sreaction

3.Jordan’svictoryandhisfeeling下水文文章邏輯：八步曲

句型多樣：無靈主語，動詞鏈，倒裝，時間狀語，固定句型，固定短語，出彩的形容詞副詞

Jordan’seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”

Hearingwhathesaid,momaskedwithapuzzledlook,“Whatdoyoumean?”Jordanexplainedthewholethingtomom.Mom

clappedherhandsinexcitement

andreplied,“Let’sdoitnow!”Theycutaholeonthetopofthebox,fixeditonthewheelchairanddecorateditwiththeMaxMagcostume.（動作描寫）Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,they

weretooexhaustedtomoveaninch.ThewheelchairnowlookedlikeamovingMaxMagcar.

AglimmerofhopesparklinginJordan’seyes,he

couldn’thelpimaginingstandingonthestage（情緒描寫）.

SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.

Students

tookturnsto

showtheirself-madecostumes.TherewereseveralMaxMags,andinfrontofJordanwasAlice’schocolatebar（伏筆照應）.SoonitwastimeforJordantostandonthestage.WithhisoutstandingMaxMagcar,

everyone’seyeswerefixedonhim.Excitement

gavewayto

anxietyasJordansensedthecompletesilence.Suddenly,

thunderousapplauseburstoutfromtheaudience.Jordanwasnodoubtthewinner!Thoughhewassittingintheboxnow,hereallythoughtoutsidethebox!（主題呼應）研究范文1

Jordan’seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”

Seeing

thepuzzledlook

onhismum’sface（神態描寫）,Jordanquicklytoldherthedesignofhisnewcostume—MaxMagonhiscar.Shesmiledand

gavehimathumbsup.“Notimetowait!Let’s

getstarted!”

exclaimed

hisdadwhojustwentin.Fortwonights,theycut,pasted,foldedandunfoldedthebox;theydrewonitandcoloredittomakeitlooklikearealcar;andtheygluedtheoldMaxMagcostumeontoit.（動作描寫）Whenthenewcostumewasfinallyready,Jordan

tried

it

on

severaltimesandcontinuedto

makenecessarychanges

untilsatisfied.

SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.

Whenhewheeledhimselfintotheparty,heimmediately

spotted

thethreeMaxMags.Whentheysawhim,theycouldn’tbelieveit.“MaxMagandhiscar?That’s

awesome!”Danny’seyes

litup.“Thewheelsofyourchairarejustperfect!”saidTom.“Youevenhavetheheadlights!It’ssocool.”Izzy

pointedto

thefront.Jordan

beamed.“Thanks!”Whenitwastimetoannouncethewinner,Jordan

heldhisbreath.“Thewinnerofthisyear’sHarvestfestcostumecontestisJordanEastman!”,theprincipal

criedindelight.（伏筆照應）Everyoneclapped.“See?Youjustneededtobecreative!”Aliceyelled.“Youmeanthinkoutsidethebox!”（主題呼應）Jordanpattedtheflaming-red(火紅的)car

attachedto

hischair,withaniconic(偶像的,標志性的)MaxMagsmile.

范文2Jordan’seyesfellontheboxandhesmiled,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”RealizingMomwasconfused,hequicklyadded,“That’sacooldesk,Mum.ButcanIhavethebigboxfortheHarvestfestcontest?”Hethenexplainedexcitedlyhowtoturnitintoamobilerefrigerator.“Brilliant!Youwilldefinitelybethesuperherooftheparty,servingpeopletheirfavouritedrinks,”Mumexclaimedwithabroadsmile.Inthefollowingdays,hispriorityafterschoolwasdesigningandmakingthenewcostume,fixingittohiswheelchairandexquisitelymakingadoor.Finally,heevenpreparedsomesoftdrinkstosurprisehisfriends.(92w)

SoonitwasFridaynight,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostumetohisfriends.Whenhewheeledhimselfinasamobilerefrigerator,heheardadmiringexclamations,guessingaboutwhoitwouldbe.Jordanfeltanincreasingsenseofprideandsatisfaction.Whenhespottedachocolatebar,hequicklymovedtowardsit,stoppedjustseveralinchesinfrontandquicklyopenedthedoor.“Jordan,it’syou!”Alicecriedout.Jordanpassedherherfavouritedrink.“Thankyou,Alice.That’sanideaoutsidethebox.”Thatnight,althoughhedidn’twinthebestcostumeawardfromtheprincipal,JordanfeltliketherealMaxMag:hisbodyandsoulwerenolongerconfinedtothewheelchair.Andhecametorealize:thereishiddenpotentialineverydayitems,andsoitiswitheveryindividual.(120w)

范文3

Jordan’seyessparkledastheyfellonthebox,“It’sperfect…withmywheelchair.”Awaveofinspirationoverwhelmedhimasherolledovertothebox,eagertocreatesomethinguniquethatwouldfithiswheelchair,makingitstandoutfromtheotherMaxMagcostumes.Afterdiscussingtheoptionswithhismom,theyfinallysettledontransformingthecardboardboxandhiswheelchairintoaspectaculartimemachine,withJordanplayingtheroleofancourageoustimetraveler.Thefollowingdayswitnessedthemabsorbedincutting,painting,andassemblingthecardboardwithducttapeandziptiestoformthetimemachine’scontrolpanelandexterior.Togiveitanenchantingglow,theyattachedLEDlightstothemachine.Wheneverythingwasset,Jordangrinned,hiseyescrinklingwithfulfillmentandexpectation.

Soon,Fridaynightarrived,andJordancouldn’twaittoshowhiscostume.Asheenteredtheschoolinhisextraordinarytimemachine,hisclassmatesweredeeplystruckbythecreativityandmeticulousattentiontodetailinhiscostume.Surroundedbycheersandapplauseofhisclassmates,JordannavigatedhimselfontothestageastheLEDlightssparkled,capturingeveryattentioninthestadium.TheotherMaxMagsuperheroespaledincomparisonasJordansharedhisimaginarytime-travelingadventures.Hearingthis,theprincipalandthejudgescouldn’thelpbutapplaudhisinnovation,securinghimthefirstprize.Atthatmoment,JordanrealizedthatAlice’swordshadnotonlyinspiredhimtocreatearemarkablecostumebutalsoremindedhimofthetremendouspotentialwithinhimandthepowerofthinkingoutsidethebox.

精彩片段學習積累1.Murmuringtohimself,herolledovertothebox,

grabbed

itandasked

eagerly,“Mum,canIhavethisemptybox?”///

Hisfacelitupasafantasticideaflashedthroughhismind----hecouldcreatesomething

unique

thatwouldfithiswheelchair,makingit

standout

fromtheotherMaxMagcostumes.2.LearningaboutJordan’sstrugglewiththecostume,mum

delightedlyofferedahand.After

considerable

discussion,theyfinally

settledontransforming

theboxandthewheelchair

into

atimemachineMaxMag

travelledin.Thefollowinghours

witnessed

them

occupyingthemselvesin

cutting,paintingand

assembling

thecardboardwithtapeandstrings.Theyeven

attached

LEDlights

to

it.3.Excited,heaskedhismumifhecouldusetheboxforhiscostume.After

brainstorming

ideas,theydecidedtotransformtheboxintoaracecar,withJordan’swheelchair

servingas

thebase.Theypaintedtheboxbrightred,putstickersofMaxMagonitandaddedtwoflyingwingscutoutofthecardboard.4.Jordan

wasthrilledat

hiscreation,

convinced

thatnooneelsewouldhaveacostumelikehis.

5.Everythingaccomplished,Jordan

appreciated

hisnewcostume

withsatisfaction,

hiseyesglitteringwithexpectation.Ashe

seatedhimself

inhisnewcostume,he

couldn’thelpbut

feelasenseofprideandexcitement.6.Asherolledintotheschoolgym,Jordan

wasgreetedwithgaspsofadmirationfromeveryone.EventheotherMaxMags

wereimpressedby

hiscreativityanduniquecostume.

7

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,

finallycamehisturn.

ItcameasnosurprisethatJordan’sracecar

becameahit

andhewaschosenasthewinner.

8.Alicedashedtowardhim,yelling,“Congratulations!Yousee?Youthinkoutsidetheboxnow!”Jordan

noddedinagreement

andgrinned.

///

EveryonecheeredasJordanrolleduptoreceivehisprize,whofeltproudofhimselfforthinkingoutsidetheboxandcreatingsomethingamazingfromeverydaymaterials.

9.Whenhewonthebestcostumeawardfromtheprincipal,

JordanfeltliketherealMaxMag:hisbodyandsoul

were

nolonger

confined(限制,受困于)

to

thewheelchair.Yes,thereishiddenpotentialineverydayitems,and

soitiswith

everyindividual.

作業：續寫語法填空

ThinkOutsidetheBoxTheHarvestfestcontestwasfalling

onFridayandeveryoneinschool

wastalking

aboutit.Allthestudentswould

showup

intheir

self-madecostumes(裝扮)

andawinnerwouldbe_____1_____(choose)bythe

principal.“DoyouhaveyourcostumefortheHarvestfestcontest?”

Aliceasked.“I’mgoing__2__achocolatebar.MymomandI

havebeenworking

onitallweek.”“Yeah,Ihaveacostume,”

saidJordanEastman,

poppingup

thetwofrontwheelsofhiswheelchair

as

hewaited___3__hisdadto

pickhimup.“Butit’s

boring.”“Why?Whatisit?"Aliceasked.“MaxMag

thesuperhero,butDanny,TomandIzzy

areallgoingas

MaxMagtoo.”Jordan____4____(shake)hishead.“That’stoomanytostandachanceatwinningthecontest.”He

wavedto

hisdadwhohadjust

pulledup

infrontoftheschool.Jordan

rolled

hiswheelchair

toward

hisdad,andAlice

walkedwith

himtotheminivan(小貨車).“Maybeyoushouldgoas

somethingelse.”“ThecontestisFridaynight.”Jordan

sighed,“It’s____5___late

to

changecostumes.”"Jordan,youhaveto

thinkoutsidethebox.

Lookaround

yourhouse

andsee

whatyouhave.There's

hiddenpotential

ineverydayitems.”She

tookasip

ofherdrink,andtoldJordanthatherchocolate-barcostume

wasmadefrom

oldfabrichermomhadlyingaroundand

recycledplastics.Onhiswayhome,Jordanwasquiet.He

keptthinkingabout

Alice’s

words:

Thinkoutsidethebox.

There’shiddenpotentialineverydayitems.Whenhe

gothome,he

found

hismum_____6____(handle)

with

some

woodenpieces.Shewasputtinganewdesktogether.

Ontopofthedeskwas

thehugeempty

cardboardbox

thepieceshadcomein.Mom

smiledat

Jordan,_____7____(point)

at

thedesk,“Whatdoyouthink?”Jordan'seyes

fell

ontheboxandhesmiled.“It'sperfect...withmywheelchair."______8____(realize)Momwas_____9____(