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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。“Preparetocomeabout!”Seanturnedtolookathisfather,whowasstandingconfidentlyatthehelm(船舵)ofhisnewlyboughtsailboat.“Whichwayareweturning?”Hesawhisfatherfrown(皺眉).“Thatmeansweareturningintothewind.”hisfathersaid,pointingtotherightsideoftheboat,hisfrowndeepening.Seanhateditwhenhefelthedisappointedhisfather.Seanhadmixedfeelingsaboutsailingwithhisfather.Helikedspendingtimewithhisfather,butwhentheyweretogether,Seanwasremindedofhowdifferenttheywere.Hisfatherwasconfidentandoutgoing.Seanwasshyandhadfewfriends.Sighing,Seanlookedupatthesky.Justanhourago,ithadbeensunny.Butnowtheskywasgray,cloudsweregathering,andthewindbegantoblowangrily.Heputonhislifejacketandwasonceagainremindedhowdifferenthewasfromhisfatherwhoneverworealifejacket.“Hey,Sean,canyoutakethehelmforaminute?”hisfatherasked.“Uh,yeah,sure,”Seanreplied.Seanheldthehelmtightly.Suddenly,thewindshifteddirection,catchingSeanoffguard.Theboatheeled(傾斜)sosharplyonitssidethatitfeltlikeitmightoverturn.Wherewashisfather?Theboatbegantoheelevenmore.“Dad!”hecalled,butthewindswallowedhisvoice.Hedidn’tseehimanywhere.“Dad!”heshoutedcrazily,buttherewasnosignofhisfather.Seanlookedoutatthehugewavescrashingagainsttheboat.Thenhesawit—justaflashofsomethinginthewater.Itwashisdad!Hemustbehurt,Seanthought,orhe’dbeabletoswimovertotheboat.Seanhadtothinkfast.Howcouldhegethisdadbackintotheboat?Thenhehadanidea.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Hereachedundertheseatfortheropeheknewhisdadkeptthere.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Yousavedmylife,son,”hisdadsaid.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sean航海救援續寫續寫要點第一段:著重描寫Sean救父親的具體過程。他拿到繩子后,要詳細描述他如何克服內心恐懼,在搖晃的船上艱難地將繩子一端系在船上固定處,接著精準地把另一端拋向父親。描述父親在水中努力抓取繩子的艱難,以及Sean看到父親抓到繩子時的激動心情,然后拼盡全力拉繩子,過程中可能會遇到風浪干擾,增加困難程度。第二段:聚焦父子間的情感交流。父親獲救后,對Sean表達真誠的贊美和感激,肯定他的勇敢與智慧。Sean此時回想起之前和父親相處的種種,感慨自己在關鍵時刻的成長。父親可以進一步分享自己以前航海遇到危險時的類似經歷,讓Sean明白成長往往在困境中發生,最后兩人一起總結這次經歷對彼此的意義,以及對父子關系的深遠影響。情感線起初,Sean在父親意外落水后,內心充滿恐懼與無助,害怕失去父親。但在救援過程中,他的恐懼逐漸轉化為堅定的決心,一心只想救父親。父親獲救后,Sean先是松了一口氣,緊接著因父親的夸贊而感到自豪,之前覺得自己與父親不同、常讓父親失望的自卑情緒也隨之消散。父親則從最初對Sean能力的懷疑,轉變為滿滿的驕傲與欣慰,父子間的情感在這場危機中得到前所未有的升華。故事線Sean迅速在船中找到繩子,在風雨中艱難地將繩子一端牢牢系在船的桅桿上。他奮力將繩子另一端拋向水中的父親,大聲呼喊父親抓住繩子。父親在波濤洶涌的水中奮力游動,艱難地抓住繩子,Sean開始全力拉繩子,過程中船身搖晃,多次差點被風浪打斷。父親終于被拉回船上,Sean和父親都疲憊不堪,但Sean心中滿是喜悅。父親對Sean的勇敢和果斷進行夸贊,講述自己過去航海遇險的經歷,鼓勵Sean。Sean和父親一起回顧這次冒險,兩人關系更加親密,帶著新的感悟準備返航。主旨升華句Inthefaceofdanger,thebondbetweenfatherandsonwasforgedstronger,showingthatloveandcouragecanovercomeanystorm.(在危險面前,父子之間的紐帶變得更加牢固,表明愛與勇氣能戰勝任何風暴。)ThisterrifyingexperiencetaughtSeanthathisinnerstrengthwasfargreaterthanhethought,andthathisfather'slovewasalwaysthere,eveninthemostchallengingtimes.(這次可怕的經歷讓Sean明白,他內心的力量遠比自己想象的強大,而且父親的愛一直都在,即使在最艱難的時刻。)Theirsharedstruggleatseanotonlysavedalifebutalsotransformedtheirrelationship,provingthatadversitycanbeapowerfulcatalystforgrowthandconnection.(他們在海上共同的掙扎不僅挽救了一條生命,還改變了他們的關系,證明了逆境可以成為成長和情感連接的強大催化劑。)Throughthislife-threateningsituation,Seanlearnedthatdifferencesbetweenhimandhisfatherpaledincomparisontotheloveandmutualsupportthatboundthemtogether.(通過這次危及生命的情況,Sean了解到他和父親之間的差異,與將他們緊密相連的愛和相互支持相比,顯得微不足道。)Thejourneyhomefromthestorm-riddenseawasnotjustaphysicalreturnbutaspiritualone,withanew-foundunderstandingandclosenessbetweenfatherandson.(從暴風雨肆虐的大海返航的旅程,不僅僅是一次身體上的回歸,更是一次精神上的回歸,父子之間有了全新的理解和親密感。)寫作示范一Hereachedundertheseatfortheropeheknewhisdadkeptthere.Withhandstrembling,Seantriedhisbesttokeephisbalanceontheviolentlyrockingboat.Hetiedoneendoftheropefirmlyaroundthemast,hisfingersfumblingduetonervousness.Then,hetookadeepbreathandthrewtheotherendtowardshisfather,shouting,"Dad,catchit!"Hisfather,lookingexhausted,swamwithallhismighttowardstherope.Thewaveskeptpushinghimback,buthedidn'tgiveup.Sean'sheartwasinhismouthashewatched.Finally,hisfathergrabbedtherope.Seanpulledwithallhisstrength,hismusclesaching.Eachtugwasabattleagainstthepowerfulsea."Yousavedmylife,son,"hisdadsaid.Hisvoicewasweakbutfilledwithpride.Seanhelpedhisfatherclimbbackintotheboat."Iwassoscared,butIknewIhadtosaveyou,"Seanadmitted,hiseyesstillwidewiththememoryofthedanger.HisfatherputahandonSean'sshoulder."Youwereincrediblybrave.Iwaswrongtothinkyouweredifferent.You'rejustascapableasIam,ifnotmoreso."Seansmiled,asenseofprideswellinginhischest.Theytalkedabouthowtheyhadovercometheoddstogether,andSeanrealizedthattheirdifferencesdidn'tmatter.Whattrulycountedwastheirloveandthewaytheycouldrelyoneachotherintimesofneed.Astheysailedbackhome,thesunpeekedthroughtheclouds,symbolizingtheirnew-foundconnection.寫作示范二Hereachedundertheseatfortheropeheknewhisdadkeptthere.Sean'smindwasracing,butheforcedhimselftofocus.Thewindhowled,andtherainlashedathisfaceashesecuredtheropetotheboat.Heaimedcarefullyandthrewtherope,hiseyesfixedonhisfatherinthewater."Comeon,Dad!"heyelled.Hisfather,strugglingagainstthewaves,finallycaughttherope.Seanstartedpulling,hisarmsburningwitheffort.Theboatpitchedandrolled,makingitevenharder,butherefusedtostop.Hecouldseehisfathergettingcloser,andhopefilledhisheart."Yousavedmylife,son,"hisdadsaid.Therewasanewrespectinhisvoice.Seanhelpedhisfathersitdown."Iwassoworriedaboutyou,"Seansaid,hisvoicecracking.Hisfatherlookedathimandsaid,"I'vealwaysknownyouwerespecial,buttodayyoushowedmejusthowmuch.Ishouldhavehadmorefaithinyou."Theysharedstoriesofpastadventuresandnear-misses.Seanlearnedthathisfatherhadfacedsimilarfearswhenhewasyoung.Thisexperiencehadnotonlysavedhisfatherbutalsobroughtthemcloser.Astheymadetheirwayback,Seanfeltanewsenseofconfidenceandadeeperconnectionwithhisfather.Thesea,whichhadseemedsoterrifying,nowheldadifferentkindofbeauty,areminderoftheirstrengthandlove.參考范文Hereachedundertheseatfortheropeheknewhisdadkeptthere.Sean’sheartracedashequicklytiedoneendoftheropetotheboatandthrewtheotherendtowardshisfather,whowasstrugglingtokeephisheadabovethewater.“Grab

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