集訓07應用文寫作

（建議用時:20分鐘/篇滿分：15分）

第四部分第一節應用文寫作（共20大題，每題15分;）

Passage1

（2024.廣東.模擬預測）假定你是學生會主席李華，你校將舉辦主題為，Mygrowthstory”的英語演講比賽。

請給你校外教MissEvans寫封郵件，邀請她擔任評委，

內容包括：

I.比賽信息、；2.評判內容；3.表達期待。

注意：

I.詞數80左右：

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【答案】DearMissEvans,

FmLiHua,thepresidentoftheStudents'Union.I'mwritingtoinviteyoutobeajudgefbrtheEnglish

speechcompetitiontobeheldinthelecturehallthisFridayafternoon.

Thetopicofthespeechis“Mygrowthstory”.Whenyougradetheparticipants,performance,thereare

severalfactorsyoushouldconsider:theparticipants,pronunciation,intonationandthecontentoftheirspeeches.

Besides,youareexpectedtogiveparticipantssomesuggestionsonhowtoovercometheirweaknessesintheir

speeches.

Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。學校將舉辦主題為“Mygrowthstory”的英語演講比賽，要求考生給校

外教MissEvans寫封郵件，邀請她擔任評委。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

因素：factors—*points/elements

此夕卜：besides—?furthermore

建議：suggestion—?advice

感激：appreciate—begrateful

2.句式拓展

同義句

原句：Whenyougradetheparticipants'performance,thereareseveralfactorsyoushouldconsider:the

participants'pronunciation,intonationandthecontentoftheirspeeches.

拓展句：Whilegradingtheparticipants'performance,severalfactorsshouldbeconsideredincludingthe

participants'pronunciation,intonationaidthecontentoftheirspeeches.

【點睛]【高分句型1]Besides,youarcexpectedtogiveparticipantssomesuggestionsonhowtoovercometheir

weaknessesintheirspeeches.（運用了“特殊疑問詞+todo”不定式的結構）

[高分句型2]Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldacceptmyinvitation.（運用了if引導的條件狀語從

句）

Passage2

（2024?湖南長沙.統考一模）為了豐富校園生活，你校將組織迎新年音樂會，請你寫一則通知，刊登在學

校英文網站上。內容包括：

I.當辦時間和地點；

2.活動的內容：

3.活動的意義。

注意：詞數80左右。

Notice

【答案】

Notice

Aimedatenrichingourlifeoncampusandspreadingourtraditionalculture,anewyearconcertwillbeheld

ontheschoolsportsfieldnextmonth.WewillinvitetheBeijingChineseTraditionalMusicBandtogivea

performance.Certainly,weneedourownperformers,too.Anyonewithmusicaltalentcanattend.Wearealso

puttingtogetherachoirtosingwiththeband.Thisisawonderfulchanceforyoutosingwithmusicstars,which

canmakeyourelaxedandhappy.Thosewhowanttohelpoutcandosomevoluntarywork.Volunteersofallkinds

arewelcome.Don'thesitatetojoinus.Let'sjointogethertomakethenewyearconcertthebestever.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一則關于學校即將組織迎新年音樂會的通知。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

目的是做某事：（be）aimedatdoing—>beintendedtodo

確實：certainly—?withoutdoubt

極好的:wonderful—>excellent

機會：chance—*opportunity

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Aimedatenrichingourlifeoncampusandspreadingourtraditionalculture,anewyearconcertwillbeheld

ontheschoolsportsfieldnextmonth.

拓展句：Anewyearconcertwillbeheldontheschoolsportsfieldnextnonth,whichaimstoenrichourlifeon

campusandspreadingourtraditionalculture.

【點睛】［高分句型11Thisisawonderfulchanceforyoutosingwithmusicstars,whichcanmakeyourelaxed

andhappy.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

［高分句型2］Thosewhowanttohelpoutcandosomevoluntarywork.（運用了who引導的限制性定語從句）

Passage3

（2024.福建漳州.統考二模）假定你是學校英語俱樂部負責人李華。你的英國外教Andrew詢問你在接下來

的課程中是否需要介紹一些有關英國的歷史知識。請你寫一封郵件【可復他。內容如下：

（1）你的態度：

（2）你的理由：

（3）你的建議。

注意：（I）詞數80左右；

（2）可適當添加細節，以使行文連貫。

【答案】DearAndrew,

ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhethertointroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinour

upcominglessons.However,Ibelievethatitisn'tnecessary.

Ourfocusshouldbeonimprovingstudents'Englishlanguageskills.WhilelearningaboutBritishcultureis

interesting,itmaynotbedirectlyrelevanttotheirlanguagedevelopment.Therefore,1suggestwecontinuewith

ourcurrentlessonplan.

However,if(hereisaspecificaspectofBritishhistorythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecan

certainlyincorporateitintoourlessons.Butoverall,ourprimaryobjectiveshouldbetoimprovestudents'

languageproficiency.

Bestregards.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇廿面表達是一篇應用文。要求考生給英國外教Andrew寫一封郵件，就是否需要在接下來的

課程中介紹一些有關英國的歷史知識表明態度并提出建議。

【詳解】I.詞匯積累

感謝：thank—appreciate

應該：should—>bcsupposedto

集中于：focuson—?concentrateon

建議：suggest—>advise

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhethertointroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryinour

upcominglessons.

拓展句：ThankyouforyouraskingmeaboutwhetheryoushouldintroducesomeknowledgeofBritishhistoryin

ourupcominglessons.

【點睛】［高分句型1］

However,1believethatitisn'tnecessary.（運用\that引導賓語從句）

［高分句型21

However,ifthereisaspecificaspectcfBritishhistorythatrelatestothelanguageorculture,wecancertainly

incorporateitintoourlessons.（運用了if引導的條件狀語從句和that引導的定語從句）

Passage4

（2024?江蘇南通?統考一模）假定你是李華，2024年元旦你校舉行了登高迎新年活動。請你為校英文報寫

一篇報道，內容包括：

1.活動過程；

2.活動感想。

注意：

1.寫作詞數應為80左右;

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

AclimbingeventtocelebratetheNewYear

(答案］Aclimbingevent(ocelebratetheNewYear

OnNewYear'sDay2024,ourschoolheldaclimbingeventtocelebratetheNewYear.

Atseveno'clockinthemorningonJanuary1,thestudentswhoparticipatedinthemountaineeringsetoutfor

thehighestpeakundertheleadershipoftheschoolprincipal.Theywereinhighspiritsandfullofenergy,seeming

tocomparewiththemountaintop,andthesuntocompeteagainstthesunforthesunshine.

Intheprocessofclimbing,thestudentsenjoyedthesceneryandfeltthegraceofnature!IntheNewYear,I

hopeeveryonecanclimbhighandloo<far,strugglingforourselvesandhavingthecourageioventure!Faced

withdifficulties,wecanembracethefuturepositively,withfullconfidenceandbravery!

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參與：participatedin—>takepartin

欣賞：enjoy—appreciate

優美：grace—*beautify

奮斗：stnigglingfbr—*fightingfor

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Facedwithdifficulties,wecanembracethefuturepositively,withfullconfidenceandbravery!

拓展句：Whenwearefacedwithdifficulties,wecanembracethefuturepositively,withfullconfidenceand

bravery!

【點睛】【高分句型1]Atseveno'clockinthemorningonJanuaryI,thestudentswhoparticipatedinthe

mountaineeringsetoutforthehighestpeakundertheleadershipoftheschoolprincipal.（使用/Atseveno'clock

inthemorningonJanuary1,thestudentswhoparticipatedinthemountaineeringsetoutforthehighestpeak

undertheleadershipoftheschoolprincipal.引導的定語從句）

[高分句型2]Facedwithdifficulties,wecanembracethefuturepositively,withfullconfidenceandbravery!（使

用了過去分詞充當時間狀語）

Passage5

（2024?江蘇連云港?統考?模）假定你是李華，外籍心理學教授MrPeleton正在做一個關于中學生學習壓

力現狀的調查，作為調查對象，請你結合自身經歷給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：

I.原因及其影響；

2.壓力緩解方式。

注意：

I.寫作詞數應為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

DearMrPeterson,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearMr.Peterson,

Itisacommonphenomenonthatmodernhighschoolstudentshavestress.Mypressuremainlycomesfrom

thepressureofstudy.Academicpressureisundoubtedlythemainsourceofhighschoolstudents'psychological

pressure.Afterenteringhighschool,thestudyburdenisincreased,whichismanifestedastheincreaseofsubjects,

andthedeepeningofcourse.Inmyopinion,studentsshouldknowthemselvescorrectlyandsetagoodposition

fbrthemselves.Studentsshouldn'texceedtheirupperlimitlevel,norgiveuponthemselves,andhavethespiritof

“persistenceisvictory,,.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。外籍心理學教授MrPeterson正在做一個關于中學生學習壓力現狀的

調查，作為調查對象，要求考生按照要求結合自身經歷給他寫一封郵件。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

在我行來：inmyopinion—*frommyperspectiveofview

無疑：undoubtedly—*withoutdoubt

進入：enter—>gointo

增加：increase-*grow

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：Inmyopinion,studentsshouldknowthemselvesconectlyandsetagoodpositionforthemselves.

拓展句：Inmyopinion,notonlyshouldstudentsknowthemselvescorrectly,butalso（heyshouldsetagood

positionforthemselves.

［點睛］［高分句型1］Itisacommonphenomenonthatmodernhighschoolstudentshavestress.（運用了that

引導的同位語從句）

【高分句型2］Afterenteringhighschool,thestudyburdenisincreased,whichismanifestedastheincreaseof

subjects,andthedeepeningofcourse.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

Passage6

（2024?廣東肇慶?統考二模）假定你是李華，你校將舉辦“國際文化FI”，請給外教Caroline寫封郵件邀請她

參加活動。內容包括?：

1.活動時間、地點；

2.活動目的及內容；

3.邀請對方參加并分享自己國家的文化特色。

注意：

I.寫作詞數應為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

DearCaroline,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearCaroline,

Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.IamwritingtoextendawarminvitationtoyoufortheInternationalCultural

Daytobeheldinourschool.

Asweallknow,ourschoolvaluesculturaldiversityandwiththisevent,wehopetopromotecross-cultural

understandingamongourstudents.Withvariousactivitiesplannedthroughtheday,theeventwilltakeplaceon

January30,hintheauditorium.Itwillfeatureaculturalexhibition,artisticperformances,andanopportunityto

saverinternationalcuisine.

Wewouldbehonoredifyoucouldattendtheeventasourdistinguishedguest.Yourinsightsandexpertise

wouldundoubtedlycontributeto(hesuccessoftheevent.

Thankyouforconsideringourinvitation.Weeagerlyawaityourfavorableresponse.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導語】本篇打面表達屬于應用文。要求考生假定是李華，你校將舉辦“國際文化U”，請給外教Caroline

寫封郵件邀請她參加活動。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

表達：extend—>convey

機會：opportunity—?chance

參加:attend—>participatein

考慮：consider—?takeintoaccount

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：Withvariousactivitiesplannedthroughtheday,theeventwilltakeplaceonJanuary30thintheaudiloriLm.

Itwillfeatureaculturalexhibition,artisticperformances,andanopportunitytosavorinternationalcuisine.

拓展句：Withvariousactivitiesplannedthroughtheday,theeventwilltakeplaceonJanuary30thinthe

auditorium,whichwillfeatureaculturalexhibition,artisticperformances,andanopportunitytosavor

inteniationalcuisine.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Withvariousactivitiesplannedthroughtheday,theeventwilltakeplaceonJanuaiy30thin

theauditorium.（運用了with的復合結構）

[高分句型2]Wcwouldbehonoredifyoucouldattendtheeventasourdistinguishedguest.（運用了if引導條件

狀語從句）

Passage7

（2024?湖南水州?統考.模）假如你是校英義報編輯李華，你報將在學校舉行以“我最感激的人''為主題的征

文活動。請用英語為本活動寫一份征稿啟事，內容如下：

1.活動目的：

2.稿件要求；

3.截稿日期及投稿方式。

注意：

I.詞數80左右：2.可以適當增加細行,以使行文連貫。

ConiribulionsWanted

【答案】

ContributionsWanted

Inabidtoencourageeveryonetoexpressgratitudetothepeoplewhohavemadeadifferenceinourlives,

ourschoolwilllaunchanEnglishwritingactivitythemed“ThepersonIappreciatemosf'nextmonth.

Wewelcomesubmissionsfromallstudents.Thecompositionsshocldbetothepoint,andhighlightthe

shiningmomentsthatimpressyoumost.Youcanwriteintheformofstories,essaysorpoems,butremember,all

theworksarerequiredtobenolessthan300words,andoriginalityisamust.Anyoneinterestedshouldsubmit

yourworktoschoolnewspaper@163.combyJanuary31st.Don'tmissthedeadline.Wecanhardlywaittoadmire

yourmasterpieces!

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假如作者是校英文報編輯李華，你報將在學校舉行以“我最感激的人”

為主題的征文活動。請用英語為本活動寫一份征稿啟事。

【詳解1.詞匯積累

鼓勵：encourage—>niotivate

表達：express—>convcy

要求：require—*request

幾乎不：hardly—>scarcely

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Anyoneinterestedshouldsubmityourworktoschoolnewspaper（a）163.combyJanuary31st.

拓展句：Anyonewhoisinterestedinitshouldsubmityourworktoschoolncwspaper@163.combyJanuary31st..

【點睛】【高分句型1]Inabidtoencourageeveryonetoexpressgratitudetothepeoplewhohavemadea

differenceinourlives,ourschoolwilllaunchanEnglishwritingactivitythemed“ThepersonIappreciatemost”

nextmonth.（運用了who引導的定語從句）

（高分句型2】Thecompositionsshouldbeto（hepoint,andhighlighttheshiningmomentsthatimpressyoumost.

（運用了that引導的定語從句）

Passage8

（2024.廣東.華南師大附中校考模擬預測）你校正舉行以“創新改變未來”為主題的活動周，請你向學校英文

報投稿，用英語講述創新的重要性。內容包括：

1.創新的重要性：

2.如何培養創新思維。

注意：I.寫作詞應為80詞左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫：

3.請在答題卡的相應位置作答。

TheImportanceofInnovation

【答案】Innovationhasbecomeabuzzwordinrecentyears,asitplaysacrucialroleindrivingprogressand

successacrossvariousfields.

Forhighschoolstudents,fosteringinnovativethinkingcanopendoorstonumerousopportunitiesforour

future.Firstofall,it'simportanttostaycuriousbyaskingquestionsandseekinganswersbeyondtraditional

boundaries.Additionally,variousformsofart,suchasmusic,painting,writing,ordramacanprovideplatfonnsto

showcaseourcreativityandreceivepositivefeedback.

Inconclusion,innovationisacriticalskillfbrustopossessintoday,sfast-pacedandever-changingworld.

【導語】小篇書面表達屬于應用義，你校正舉行以“創新改變未來''為主題的活動周，請你向學校英義報投

稿，用英語講述創新的重耍性。內容包括：1.創新的重要性；2.如何培養創新思維。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

在...中起作用：playarolein—>playapartin

各種各樣的：various—>avarietyof

用要的：important—>significant

另外：additionally—>bcsidcs

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Firstofall,it'simportanttostaycuriousbyaskingquestionsandseekinganswersbeyondtraditional

boundaries.

拓展句：Hirstofall,itsimportantthatweshouldstaycuriousbyaskingquestionsandseekinganswersbeyond

traditionalboundaries.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Innovationhasbecomeabuzzwordinrecentyears,asitplaysacrucialroleindrivng

progressandsuccessacrossvariousfields.（運用了as引導的原因狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Forhighschoolstudents,fosteringinnovativethinkingcanopendoorstonumerousopportunities

forourfuture.（運用了動名詞短語fosteringinnovativethinking作主語）

Passage9

（2024?廣東?校聯考一模）假定你是李華。請給你的外國朋友Ryan寫一封信，分享你最近的一次家務勞動

經歷。內容包括：

I.勞動過程：

2.勞動感受。

注意:

1.寫作詞數應為80左右；

2.請按如F格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

DearRyan.

Ihopetohearfromyousoon.Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】

DearRyan,

IamwritingtosharewithyouarecentexperienceIhadwithhousework.

Onemorning,Iwokeuptotherealizationthatmyroomwasinacompletemess.Determinedto(idyup,I

immediatelysprangintoaction.Ibeganbythrowingawaygarbageandunnecessaryitems,andthenproceededto

neatlyanangethehooksthatwerescatteredacrossmysofa,floor,anddeskbackontothebookshelf.Itwasquitea

laboriousprocess,buttheendresultwastrulysatisfying.Notonlydidmyroomlooksparklingclean,butIalso

feltasenseofaccomplishmentandprideinmyhardwork.

Iliopetohearfromyousoon.Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。題目要求學生給外國朋友Ryan寫一封信，分享最近的一次家務勞動

經歷，需敘述勞動的過程，描述勞動的感受。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

清理：tidyup—*clcarup,cleanup

迅速采取行動：springintoaction—*jumpintoaction,swingintoaction

辛苦的：laborious—>hard,arduous

令人滿意的：satisfying—>satisfactory,fulfilling

成就：accomplishment—*achievement,attainment

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Itwasquitealaboriousprocess,buttheendresultwastrulysatisfying.

拓展句：Eventhoughitwasquitealaboriousprocess,theendresultwastrulysatisfying.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Onemorning,Iwokeup（otherealizationthatmyroomwasinacompletemess.（運用了

that引導同位語從句）

[高分句型2]Ibeganbythrowingawaygarbageandunnecessaryitems,andthenproceededtoneatlyarrangeihe

booksthatwerescatteredacrossniysofa,floor,anddeskbackontothebookshelf.（運用Tthat引導限制性定語

從句）

Passage10

（2024?浙江杭州?學軍中學校考模擬預測）假定你是李華，你正在做一個問卷調查，以了解中英高中生在

未來大學專業選擇上的差異。請你用英文給英國好友Jim寫封郵件，內容包括：

1.問卷內容；

2.請求答卷并轉發。

注意：

I.寫作詞數應為80左右；

2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【答案】

DearJim,

I'mcurrentlyresearchingthedifferencesinuniversitymajorpreferencesbetweenBritishandChinese

students.Couldyoupleasetakeamoment（ofilloutmyquestionnaire?

WiththeaimtoidentifythemostpopularmajorsbothinChinaandtheUK,explorethedecision-making

factorsandguidancesourcesforstudents,thequestionnaireincludesthefollowingthreequestions—Whatare

yourtopthreefavoritemajors?Fromwhichaspectofthem句orwouldyouconsider?Whowouldyouturnto

whenchoosingamajor?

It'dbehighlyappreciatedifyoucouldforwardthesurveytoyourfriendsandfellowstudents.Thankyoufor

consideringmyrequestandattachedisthequestionnaire.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假定你是李華，你正在做一個問卷調查，以了解中英高中生在未來大

學專業選擇上的差異。請你用英文給英國好友Jim寫封郵件。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

抽時間：lakeamomentto—>sparcsometimeto

目的:aim—>goal

因素：factor—?element

請求：request—*dcmand

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Fromwhichaspectofthemajorwouldyouconsider?

拓展句：Ifyouhavetochooseamajor,youwouldconsiderwhichaspectofthemajor.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Whowouldyouturntowhenchoosingamajor?（運用了狀語從句的省略）

[高分句型2]It,dbehighlyappreciatedifyoucouldforwardthesurveytoyourfriendsandfellowstudents.（運用

了if引導條件狀語從句）

Passage11

（2024.河北?校聯考模擬預測）假定你是學生會主席李華，學生會將要舉辦以“我愛我的祖國”為主題的英語

演講比賽。請你代表學生會，寫一則英文書面通知。內容包括：

⑴時間和地點；

（2）內容和形式。

注意：

⑴詞數80左右：

⑵可適當補充細節，以使行文流暢。

Notice

TheStudentUnion

March5th

【答案】

Notice

TheStudentUnionisdelightedtoannouncetheupcomingEnglishspeechcontestthemed“ILoveMyCountry”.

Thiscompetitionaimstoenhanceournationalprideandfosteradeeperappreciationforourmotherland.

TheeventwilltakeplaceonMarch8that(heschoolhall.ParticipantsareinvitedtodeliveraspeechinEnglish

onatopicrelatedtotheirunderstandingandloveofChina.Speechesshoukibeoriginalandcoherent,expressing

personalexperiencesandperspectives.

Entriesarcopentoallstudents.Pleasesubmityourname,grade,andabriefoutlineofyourspeechtotheStudent

UnionofficebeforeFebruary28(h.Thejudgeswillevaluatethespeechesbasedoncontent,delivery,and

creativity.

Wcencourageallstudentstoparticipateandshareyouruniquestoriesofhowyoucherishandarcinspiredbyour

greatnation.Let'scometogetherandcelebrateourlovefbrChinainthisexcitingcompetition!

TheStudentUnion

March5lh

【導語】本篇是應用文寫作。你校學生會將要舉辦以“我愛我的祖國”為主題的英語演講比賽，要求考生寫

一則英文書面通知。

【詳解】1.詞匯激活

高興的：delighted—?pleased

提高：enhance—*improve

活動：event—>activity

鼓勵：encourage—*inspire

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：TheStudentUnionisdelightedtoannouncetheupcomingEnglishspeechcontestthemed"ILoveMy

Country'*.

拓展句：TheStudentUnionisdelightedtoannouncetheupcomingEnglishspeechcontest,whosethemeis”I

LoveMyCountry''.

【點睛】［高分句型1JThiscompetitionaimstoenhanceournationalprideandfbstcradeeperappreciationforour

motherland.（不定式作賓語）

［高分句型2］Weencourageallstudentstoparticipateandshareyouruniquestoriesofhowyoucherishandare

inspiredbyourgreatnation.（how引導的賓語從句）

Passage12

（2024?湖南株洲?統考一模）學校英文報正在組織同學們分享自己高中階段的學習方法，請你以此為主題

寫一篇短義投稿。

內容包括：

I.簡要描述；

2.主要收獲。

注意：

I.寫作詞數應為80左右；

2.請在答題卡的相應位置作答。

【答案】

Goodstudymethodsareofvitalimportancetoushighschoolstudents.

Duringmyhighschoollife,Ihavelearnedmanybeneficialstudymethods,themostusefulofwhichIthnk

isthinkingwhilelearning.IthinkaboutwhatIwillexploreinclasswhenpreviewinglessonsbeforeclass,Ithink

abouthowtobroadenmyknowledgeandsharpenmyskillswhenlisteningtoteachersinclassandIthinkabout

howtoutilizewhatIhavelearnedflexiblywhengoingoverlessonsafterclass.

Asasayinggoes,studywithoutthinkingleads（oconfusion;thinkingwithoutstudyendsinpuzzlement.

Throughthismethod,notonlydoIconsolidatetheknowledgeI'veacquiredandimprovemygrades,butalsoI

graduallybuildupmyconfidence,whichIsupposewillhaveaneverlastingpositiveinlluenceonmylife.

【導語】本篇書血表達屬丁?應用文。學校英文報正在組織同學們分享自己高中階段的學習方法，要求考生

以此為主題寫一篇短文投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

加強：consolidate—?strengthen

方法：method—>approach

有益的:useful—>helpfiil

影響：influence—>effect

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：Duringmyhighschoollife,Ihavelearnedmanybeneficialstudymethods,themostusefulofwhichIthink

isthinkingwhilelearning.

拓展句：Duringmyhighschoollife,whatIthinkthemostbeneficialstudymethodsisthinkingwhilelearning.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Duringmyhighschoollife,Ihavelearnedmanybeneficialstudymethods,themostuseful

ofwhichIthinkisthinkingwhilelearning.（運用了介詞+關系代詞結構引導非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Throughthismethod,notonlydoIconsolidatetheknowledgeFvcacquiredandimprovemygrades,

butalsoIgraduallybuildupmyconficcnce,whichIsupposewillhaveaneverlastingpositiveinfluenceonmy

life.（運用了倒裝句）

Passage13

（2024.江蘇南京?統考一模）假定你是李華，上周參加了全市中學生英語口語大賽。請你寫一封郵件給美

國筆友Peter,與他分享參賽心得，自容包括：

1.參賽過程：

2.參賽收獲。

注意:

1.寫作詞數應為80個左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

DearPeter,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearPeter,

How'severythinggoing?I'mwritingtosharemyexperienceinthehighschoolEnglishspeechcontestofthe

citylastweek.

Withweeksofpracticebeforehand,Iwalkedtothestageconfidentlyandhopefully.Fearseizedmeforsome

secondsbeforeIrecoveredmyselfanddeliveredmyspeechfluently.Allmyeffortsfinallypaidoffwhenthere

camethunderousapplause—Iwon（hefirstprize.

Thoughchallenging,thecontestturnedoutrewarding.Asthesayinggoes,youreapwhatyousow.

Bestwishes!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達是一篇應用文。要求考生寫一封郵件給美國筆反Peter,與他分享參賽心得。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

競賽：contest—>compctition

恢復：recover—?restore

最終：finally—?eventually

值得的：rewarding—>worthwhile

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：I'mwritingtosharemyexperienceinthehighschoolEnglishspeechcontestofthecitylastweek.

拓展句：I'mwritingtosharemyexperienceinthehighschoolEnglishspeechcontestofthecity,whichwasheld

successfullylastweek.

【點睛】[高分句型l]FearseizedmeforsomesecondsbeforeIrecoveredmyselfanddeliveredmyspeech

fluently.（運用了before引導時間狀語從句）

［高分句型21Asthesayinggoes,youreapwhatyousow.（運用了what引導賓語從句）

Passage14

（2024.浙江嘉興?海宇市高級中學校考模擬預測）假定你是李華，就讀于某國際學校，上周你參加了學校

舉辦的非物質文化遺產知識競賽并獲得了一等獎。請你寫一篇競賽心得發表在學校的公眾號上。內容包括:

I.參賽經歷：

2.獲獎感悟。

注意：

I.寫作詞數應為80左右：

2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。

MyExperienceintheIntangibleCulturalHeritageKnowledgeCompetition

【答案】MyExperienceintheIntangibleCulturalHeritageKnowledgeCompetition

Lastweek,ourschoolheldtheIntangibleCulturalHeritageKnowledgeCompetitionintheschoolauditoriam.

BecauseIwasinterestedinculturalheritageknowledge,Iparticipatedinit.Tomakefullpreparations,Iread

manybooksonculturalheritageknowledgeandsearchedonlineforrelevantinformation.ThoughIwasvery

nervousatfirst,Ifinallywonthefirstplace.

Ingeneral,thesuccessfuleventwasquitepopularwiththeteachersandstudents.Ididfeelthecharmof:he

intangibleculturalheritageofChina,whichstrengthenedmyculturalconfidence.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生就自己“上周參加了學校舉辦的非物質文化遺產知識競賽并

獲得了一等獎“一事，寫一篇競賽心得發表在學校的公眾號上。內容包括：1.參賽經歷：2.獲獎感悟。

【詳解】I.詞匯積累

2首辦、組織：hold—>conduct

比賽：competition—>contest

對...感興趣：beinterestedin—>havcaninterestin

參力II：participatein—+takepartin

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：Tomakefullpreparations,ireadmanyb