高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習作弊背后：學業壓力下的沖動與教訓1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文ACheatingIncidentRajlookedintotheteacher’sstonyfaceassheraisedaneyebrow.Withhisforeheadbathedinsweat,heattemptedtohidethebookbeneathhisdesk,butinvain.Thewatchfulteacherhadalreadycaughtsightofhisbehavior.Sheswiftlysnatchedthebookawayandorderedhimtostandtillthetimewasup,aperiodthatseemedtostretchendlessly.ToRaj’sregretanddisappointment,hehadforgottentostudyfortheimportantquiz.ItwasCAI,thecrucialstageofhisacademicyear,andRajwashavinghisSciencepaper.Heclosedhiseyesashetriedtorecall.Then,itdawnedonhim.Aweekearlier,hisScienceteacherhadclearlyinformedtheclass,“Nextweek,we’llbehavingaquizfocusingonInteractionsandMatter.Makesureyoustudythesetopicsthoroughly.”Rajblamedhimselfforlettingsuchvitalinformationsliphismindamongthechaosofdailyschoollife.4續寫原文Withtheclockticking,hewasbrieflyglancingthroughthepagesofhistextbook,desperatelytryingtoabsorbanylast-minuteknowledgebeforethequizbegan.However,justashewasdoingso,theteacherseverelyinstructedeveryonetopackawayeverythingexcepttheirpencilcases.Rajletoutalowsigh,despairsettlingheavilyinhischest.Astheteacherhandedoutthepapers,hefeltnervousandhishandsgrewicyandslickwithsweat,showinghisanxiety.Dropsofsweatstoodoutonhisforeheadashetriedtofocus.Thoughtsofbeingafailureranthroughhismind.Hemovedhisbodyfromsidetosideinhisseatashethoughtofthenoteshehadsecretlyhiddeninhispencilcase.Finally,theteacherannounced,“Class,thetimeis10:00a.m.Wewillstopat11:00a.m.sharp.Youmaybegin,now.”Thenoiseofflurryingpaperswasheardasstudentsattentivelyturnedtothefirstpage.Rajrapidlyfilledoutthemultiple-choicesectionwithoutmuchconsideration,hisheartpoundingfasterwitheachtickoftheclock.5段首句Paragraph1:Whenhecametotheopen-endedquestions,hesigheddesperatelyfromthebottomofhisheart.Paragraph2:NataliesaidTobin’sunexpectedbirthwasalljustpartofherjob.6Part2題目分析7續寫原文分析8拉杰在參加重要的學年階段性考試（CAI）的科學科目測驗時，因忘記復習，考試前還在臨時抱佛腳。老師要求大家收拾好書本等物品后，拉杰滿心絕望。考試開始，他緊張得手冰涼出汗，額頭也布滿汗珠，腦海中不斷閃過自己會失敗的念頭，還想著藏在鉛筆盒里的小抄。他快速做完了選擇題，然而當做到簡答題時，麻煩來了。他看著題目，毫無頭緒，內心無比絕望，因為之前的疏忽，此刻的他根本答不上來。他知道一旦作弊被抓，后果不堪設想，但看著時間一分一秒過去，又實在不甘心交白卷。最終，他還是沒能抵擋住誘惑，偷偷拿出了小抄。可他的小動作沒能逃過老師的眼睛，老師迅速發現了他的作弊行為，當場沒收了他的書，并讓他站著直到考試結束，那一個小時對他來說無比漫長。考試結束后，老師將他帶到了校長辦公室。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點9續寫思路分析Paragraph1:Whenhecametotheopen-endedquestions,hesigheddesperatelyfromthebottomofhisheart.當他做到簡答題時，他從心底里絕望地嘆了口氣。看著試卷上那一道道陌生又復雜的題目，他的大腦一片空白，仿佛所有的知識都在這一刻離他而去。他的手緊緊地握著筆，指關節因為用力而泛白，額頭上的汗珠不停地滾落，滴在試卷上，暈開了一片水漬。他偷偷地環顧四周，同學們都在奮筆疾書，專注地答題，沒有人注意到他的窘迫。他的心跳越來越快，仿佛要跳出嗓子眼。他又一次想起了藏在鉛筆盒里的小抄，心中的掙扎愈發激烈。一方面，他知道作弊是不道德的行為，一旦被發現，后果將不堪設想；另一方面，他又害怕考出一個糟糕的成績，讓父母和老師失望。在時間的催促下，他的理智漸漸被恐懼和焦慮吞噬。終于，他咬了咬牙，顫抖著把手伸向了鉛筆盒。他小心翼翼地拿出小抄，眼睛緊張地盯著老師，生怕被發現。就在他準備抄答案的時候，老師突然抬起頭，目光直直地看向了他。他的手僵在了半空中，臉色瞬間變得煞白，心中充滿了懊悔和恐懼。10續寫思路分析Paragraph2:Oncethetimewasup,theteachertookhimtotheheadmaster’soffice.考試一結束，老師就帶著拉杰來到了校長辦公室。拉杰低著頭，腳步沉重地跟在老師身后，每走一步都像是在拖著千斤重的石頭。他不敢看老師的眼睛，更不敢想象接下來會發生什么。進入校長辦公室后，校長一臉嚴肅地坐在辦公桌前，看著拉杰。老師向校長詳細地講述了拉杰作弊的經過，校長的臉色越來越陰沉。拉杰站在那里，低著頭，雙手緊緊地握在一起，手心全是汗水。校長嚴厲地批評了他，告訴他作弊不僅違反了學校的紀律，更是對自己的不負責，是一種欺騙行為。拉杰聽著校長的話，心中充滿了愧疚和悔恨。他意識到自己的錯誤是多么嚴重，不僅傷害了自己的學業，也辜負了老師和父母的信任。他抬起頭，眼中含著淚水，向校長和老師誠懇地道歉，表示自己以后再也不會犯這樣的錯誤了。校長看著拉杰真誠的樣子，語氣稍微緩和了一些，告訴他要為自己的行為負責，并會給予相應的處罰。拉杰接受了處罰，他暗暗發誓，以后一定要認真學習，用自己的努力去取得好成績。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現Whenhecametotheopen-endedquestions,hesigheddesperatelyfromthebottomofhisheart.Lookingattheunfamiliarandcomplexquestionsonthepaper,hismindwentblankasifalltheknowledgehadlefthimatthatmoment.Hishandtightlygraspedthepen,hisknucklesturningwhiteduetotheforce.Beadsofsweatkeptrollingdownhisforeheadanddroppedontothepaper,creatingawaterstain.Hesecretlylookedaround.Theclassmateswereallwritingbusily,focusingonansweringthequestions,andnoonenoticedhisembarrassment.Hisheartwasbeatingfasterandfaster,asifitwasabouttojumpoutofhisthroat.Hethoughtofthecheatnoteshiddeninhispencilcaseagain,andthestruggleinhisheartbecamemoreintense.Ontheonehand,heknewthatcheatingwasimmoralandtheconsequenceswouldbedisastrousifhewascaught.Ontheotherhand,hewasafraidofgettingabadgradeanddisappointinghisparentsandteachers.Underthepressureoftime,hisrationalitywasgraduallyconsumedbyfearandanxiety.Finally,hegrittedhisteethandreachedforthepencilcasewithatremblinghand.Hetookoutthecheatnotescarefully,hiseyesnervouslyfixedontheteacher,fearingtobediscovered.Justashewasabouttocopytheanswers,theteachersuddenlylookedupandstaredstraightathim.Hishandfrozeinmid-air,hisfaceturningdeathlypale,filledwithregretandfear.13范文呈現Oncethetimewasup,theteachertookhimtotheheadmaster'soffice.Rajloweredhisheadandfollowedtheteacherwithheavysteps,eachstepfeelinglikedraggingathousand-jinstone.Hedarednotlookintotheteacher'seyes,norcouldheimaginewhatwouldhappennext.Afterenteringtheheadmaster'soffice,theheadmastersatatthedeskwithaseriouslookonhisface,lookingatRaj.TheteachertoldtheheadmasterindetailaboutRaj'scheatingincident,andtheheadmaster'sfacebecamemoreandmoregloomy.Rajstoodthere,withhisheaddown,hishandstightlyclaspedtogether,hispalmsfullofsweat.Theheadmasterseverelycriticizedhim,tellinghimthatcheatingnotonlyviolatedtheschool'sdisciplinebutalsowasirresponsibletohimselfandakindofdeception.Rajlistenedtotheheadmaster'swords,filledwithguiltandremorse.Herealizedhowserioushismistakewas,notonlyhurtinghisownstudiesbutalsobetrayingthetrustofhisteachersandparents.Helookedup,withtearsinhiseyes,andsincerelyapologizedtotheheadmasterandtheteacher,sayingthathewouldnevermakesuchamistakeagain.TheheadmasterlookedatRaj'ssincereappearanceandhistonesoftenedabit.HetoldRajthathehadtoberesponsibleforhisactionsandwouldbegivencorrespondingpunishment.Rajacceptedthepunishmentandsecretlyvowedthathewouldstudyhardandachievegoodgradesthroughhisowneffortsinthefuture.14升級版范文呈現Whenhecametotheopen-endedquestions,adesperatesighescapedfromtheverydepthsofhisheart.Gazingattheunfamiliarandintricatequestionsonthetestpaper,hismindwentcompletelyblank,asifalltheknowledgehehadeverlearnedhadsuddenlyevaporatedintothinair.Hishandclutchedthepensotightlythathisknucklesturnedaswhiteassnow.Beadsofsweattrickleddownhisforeheadincessantly,splashingontothepaperandcreatingsmall,spreadingwaterstains.Stealthily,hestoleglancesaroundtheroom.Hisclassmateswereallengrossedinwriting,theirheadsbowedovertheirpapers,completelyabsorbedinansweringthequestions,oblivioustohisdistress.Hisheartpoundedwildly,asifitwereabouttoburstthroughhischest.Onceagain,histhoughtsdriftedtothecheatnotesconcealedinhispencilcase,andtheinternalstrugglewithinhimintensified.Ononehand,hewasacutelyawarethatcheatingwasunethicalandthattheconsequencesofbeingcaughtwouldbedire.Ontheotherhand,thefearofobtainingapoorgradeanddisappointinghisparentsandteachersgnawedathimrelentlessly.Astimetickedaway,hisrationalitygraduallysuccumbedtotheoverwhelmingtideoffearandanxiety.Eventually,heclenchedhisteethandreachedforthepencilcasewithatremblinghand.Heextractedthecheatnoteswithutmostcaution,hiseyesfixednervouslyontheteacher,terrifiedofbeingdetected.Justashewasonthevergeofcopyingtheanswers,theteacherabruptlyliftedherheadandstareddirectlyathim.Hishandfrozeinmid-air,hisfacedrainedofallcolor,andhisheartfilledwithaprofoundsenseofregretandterror.15升級版范文呈現Oncethetimewasup,theteacherledhimtotheheadmaster'soffice.Rajhunghisheadlowandtrudgedalongbehindtheteacher,eachstepfeelingasifheweredraggingamassiveboulder.Hedarednotmeettheteacher'sgaze,norcouldhebringhimselftocontemplatewhatlayahead.Uponenteringtheheadmaster'soffice,theheadmastersatbehindthedesk,hisexpressionsternashefixedhiseyesonRaj.TheteacherrecountedindetailtheeventsofRaj'scheatingincident,andwitheachpassingword,theheadmaster'sfacegrewdarkerandmoremenacing.Rajstoodthere,hisheadbowedinshame,hishandsclaspedtightlytogether,hispalmssoakedwithsweat.Theheadmasterlaunchedintoascat