高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習生日寄思：薩達娜的異鄉情愁1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文SadhanahadbeenlivingwithMr.andMrs.Acharyaforoversixmonthsnow.Theywerearetiredcouplewhohadtakenherinasapayingguestwhileshepursuedherfirstyearofengineeringcollegeinabrandnewcity.Despitebeingawayfromherownfamilyforthefirsttimeever,theAcharyashadmadeherfeelathomewiththeirwarmthandkindness.Mr.Acharya,aretiredeconomist,hadbeenparticularlyhelpfulwithherstudies.Heoftenreviewedhernotes,offeredadviceandpatientlyexplainedcomplexconceptstoher.Hisfriendlynatureandmentoringmadeheracademicjourneysmootherandmoreenjoyable.Buttodaywasdifferent.4續寫原文Itwasherbirthdayandbeingsofarawayfromherfamilymadeherfeelverylow.ThecaretheAcharyasshoweredherwithwascomforting,butshefeltavoid(空白)onlyherbelovedfamilymemberscouldfillonherspecialday.Shesatquietlyinthelivingroom,whereMr.AcharyawasengagedinabookandMrs.Acharyawasbusyinthekitchen.“Imissmyfamilysomuchtoday,”Sadhanasaidsoftly,hervoicefilledwithsadness.Mrs.Acharyalookedupfromhercooking,hereyesfullofunderstanding.“Weknowit’stough,dear.Beingawayfromfamilyonspecialdayscanbereallyhard.”5續寫原文Sadhanamanagedasmallsmile.“I’msogratefulforyourcompany.You’vereallymademefeelathome.”Mrs.Acharyapattedherheadkindlyandservedthemdinner.Themealwasdelicious,butshejustcouldn’thelpbutfeelgloomy.Shetriedtofocusontheconversationandenjoythefood,butherthoughtskeptdriftingbacktoherfamily.Shethoughtabouthow,everyyearonherbirthday,hermothercookedherfavouritemealandherfathertookheronalovelylongdriveandtreatedhertoherfavouritemangoicecream.Afterdinner,Mrs.Acharya,withamysterioussmile,said,“Mydear,stopbeingupset.Comewithme!”6段首句Paragraph1：Filledwithcuriosity,SadhanafollowedMrs.Acharya.Paragraph2：Mr.Acharyacamein,holdingabottleoffreshlymademangojuice.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9文章講述了薩達娜來到新城市上大學，在退休的阿查里亞夫婦家借住已超半年。阿查里亞夫婦的溫暖善良讓她有了家的感覺，尤其是退休經濟學家的阿查里亞先生還常輔導她學業。然而在生日這天，盡管阿查里亞夫婦關懷備至，薩達娜仍因遠離家人而心情低落，懷念起往昔生日時父母為她做的一切。晚餐時，盡管飯菜可口，她依舊沉浸在對家人的思念中。晚飯后，阿查里亞夫人帶著神秘微笑讓她跟自己走，留下懸念，引發讀者對后續情節的好奇，不知阿查里亞夫人要做什么來驅散薩達娜的愁緒，故事圍繞著薩達娜在異鄉生日的孤獨與溫暖展開。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：Filledwithcuriosity,SadhanafollowedMrs.Acharya.滿懷著好奇，薩達娜跟在阿查里亞夫人身后。她們穿過略顯昏暗的走廊，薩達娜的心跳微微加速，不知道即將迎來什么。不一會兒，她們來到了一個房間門口，阿查里亞夫人輕輕推開房門，屋內沒有開燈，但借著微弱的月光，薩達娜隱約看到桌上好像擺放著什么東西。當阿查里亞夫人打開燈的瞬間，薩達娜驚呆了，只見桌上放著一個插著蠟燭的小蛋糕，周圍還點綴著一些彩色的氣球，墻壁上掛著一張大大的自制賀卡，上面寫著“生日快樂，薩達娜！”。看到這一幕，薩達娜的眼眶濕潤了，心中涌起一股暖流，之前因思念家人而產生的陰霾也消散了許多。11續寫思路分析Para2：Mr.Acharyacamein,holdingabottleoffreshlymademangojuice.就在這時，阿查里亞先生走了進來，手里拿著一瓶剛剛榨好的芒果汁。他笑著對薩達娜說：“孩子，我們知道你最喜歡芒果味的東西，雖然這比不上你家人給你的，但這是我們的一點心意。”薩達娜激動得說不出話來，只是一個勁兒地點頭致謝。阿查里亞先生將芒果汁放在桌上，然后和阿查里亞夫人一起走到薩達娜身邊，輕輕拍了拍她的肩膀。三個人圍坐在蛋糕前，阿查里亞夫婦為薩達娜唱起了生日歌，歌聲雖然沒有那么動聽，但卻充滿了真摯的情感。在這一刻，薩達娜感受到了一種別樣的家的溫暖，她吹滅蠟燭，默默許下心愿，希望這份珍貴的情誼能夠一直延續下去，也希望遠方的家人能夠放心，自己在這個陌生的城市里并不孤單。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Filledwithcuriosity,SadhanafollowedMrs.Acharya.Herheartwaspoundingwithanticipationastheymadetheirwaythroughthedimlylitcorridor.Witheachstep,thesenseofmysterygrewstronger.Soon,theyarrivedatthedoorofaroom.Mrs.Acharyapusheditopengently.Theroomwasinitiallyshroudedindarkness,butbythefaintmoonlightseepingthroughthewindow,Sadhanacouldvaguelymakeoutsomethingonthetable.AsMrs.Acharyaflickedonthelight,Sadhanawastakenaback.There,onthetable,satasmallcakewithlitcandles,surroundedbycolorfulballoons.Onthewallhungalargehandmadegreetingcardthatread"HappyBirthday,Sadhana!"TearswelledupinSadhana'seyes,andawarmcurrentsurgedthroughherheart,dissipatingmuchofthegloomthathadlingeredduetoherlongingforherfamily.14范文呈現Justthen,Mr.Acharyacamein,holdingabottleoffreshlymademangojuice.HesmiledatSadhanaandsaid,"Mydear,weknowyoulovemango-flavoredthingsthemost.Althoughitcan'tcomparetowhatyourfamilywouldgiveyou,it'sourlittletokenoflove."Sadhanawassooverwhelmedthatshecouldbarelyutterawordandjustnoddedgratefully.Mr.AcharyaplacedthemangojuiceonthetableandthenwalkedovertoSadhanawithMrs.Acharya,pattinghergentlyontheshoulder.Thethreeofthemgatheredaroundthecake,andtheAcharyasbegantosingthebirthdaysong.Theirvoices,thoughnotparticularlymelodious,werefilledwithsincereaffection.Atthatmoment,Sadhanafeltauniquekindofwarmthofhome.Sheblewoutthecandlesandsilentlymadeawish,hopingthatthispreciousfriendshipwouldendureandthatherfamilyfarawaywouldknowthatshewasnotaloneinthisstrangecity.15升級版范文呈現Filledwithburningcuriosity,SadhanatrailedbehindMrs.Acharya,herheartthumpingwildlyinherchest.Astheytraversedthesomewhatgloomycorridor,theairseemedthickwithanticipation.Itwasnotlongbeforetheyreachedthethresholdofaroom.Mrs.Acharya,withagentlepush,swungthedooropen.There,inthecenteroftheroom,bathedinthesoftglowofthemoonlightfilteringthroughthewindow,wasasightthatmadeSadhana'sbreathhitch.Onthetable,adaintycakeadornedwithflickeringcandlessat,encircledbyakaleidoscopeofcolorfulballoons.Andbehold,onthewallhungameticulouslycraftedgreetingcardthatproclaimed"HappyBirthday,Sadhana!"Tears,likeglisteningpearls,welledupinhereyes,herheartswellingwithawarmththatbegantochaseawaytheshadowsofhomesickness.16升級版范文呈現HardlyhadsherecoveredfromthesurprisewheninwalkedMr.Acharya,clutchingabottleoffreshlysqueezedmangojuice."Mydear,"hebeamed,"itisourearnestwishthatthismeagerofferingmightbringyouamodicumofjoy,forwearewellawareofyourfondnessforallthingsmango."Overwhelmedbytheirkindness,Sadhanacouldscarcelyfindhervoice,onlymanagingaseriesofgratefulnods.Mr.Acharya,withatendergesture,placedthejuiceonthetableandjoinedMrs.AcharyabySadhana'sside,bestowingareassuringpatonhershoulder.There,beneaththewarm,goldenlig