SectionⅣ寫作指導寫一篇健康報告書寫作儲備閱讀教材P42健康報告，提煉健康報告的寫作特點。Ⅰ.黃金寫作模板Ⅱ.寫作語言特色運用恰當的描繪性語言，精確地表達出自己或他人在過去及現在的健康狀況。Ⅲ.寫作常用詞匯1．slimadj.苗條的；單薄的2．weightn．體重3．dietn．飲食4．challengev．挑戰5．refreshedadj.復原精神的6．energeticadj.充溢活力的7．worryabout擔憂8．keepfit保持健康9．catchacoldnowandthen時常感冒Ⅳ.寫作常用句型1．Iaddhealthyfoodtomymeals.我把健康食品加到我的飲食中。2．ImadealistofthethingsIlikedaboutmyself.我對自己喜愛的東西列了一個清單。3．Bybeingpositiveaboutmyselfandmybody,Ibecamebothhappierandhealthier.對自己和自己的身體有了主動確定的看法后，我變得更華蜜，更健康了。4．Ireadanarticlethatsaidperformingtaichiwouldmakeadifference.我讀過一篇文章，上面寫道打太極拳會有作用。5．Imakeitaruletogetupearly.早起成了我的一項有規律的活動。6．Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday.通過每天熬煉，我的身體正在漸漸強壯起來。典例剖析請依據上面關于健康報告書的框架結構，寫一篇短文。過去①幼年時期，身體虛弱；常常感冒②不能夠正常上學轉折點讀到一篇關于早晨慢跑的文章現在①養成早起和慢跑的習慣②感到精神煥發，精力充足③身體逐步復原；日常生活從中受益留意：詞數80左右。審題謀篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的起先，勝利的一半體裁健康報告書人稱第一人稱時態一般過去時和一般現在時框架第一段：描述過去狀況其次段：現在狀況第三段：總結Ⅱ.定要點、關鍵詞及動詞時態→打造一篇要點全面、用詞精確得體、時態多樣的極優作文要點一：幼年時期，我身體虛弱。(weak)WhenIwasalittlechild,Iwasweak.要點二：我常常感冒。(catchacold)Icaughtacoldnowandthen.要點三：正常上學很困難。(動名詞短語作主語；difficult)Goingtoschoolregularlywasdifficult.要點四：我讀到一篇文章。(article)Ireadanarticle.要點五：這篇文章上說早晨慢跑有效果。(jog；makeadifference)Thearticlesaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.要點六：我起得很早；慢跑半個小時。(getup)Igetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.要點七：我感到精神煥發，精力充足。(refresh；energetic)Ifeelrefreshedandenergetic.要點八：通過每天熬煉，我的身體正在逐步復原。(buildup；workout)Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday.要點九：它對我的日常生活有極大的好處。(benefit)Itbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.Ⅲ.詞匯、句式升級→創建極優作文的倩詞靚句升級句式一：用so...that連接要點一和要點二WhenIwasalittlechild,IwassoweakthatIcaughtacoldnowandthen.升級句式二：用定語從句連接要點四和要點五Ireadanarticle,whichsaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.升級句式三：用makeitaruleto改寫要點六Imakeitaruletogetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.升級句式四：用定語從句連接要點八和要點九Mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday,whichbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.Ⅳ.組建極優作文→水到渠成的成就感：動力的源泉參考范文：WhenIwasalittlechild,IwassoweakthatIcaughtacoldnowandthen.Asaresult,goingtoschoolregularlywasabigchallengetome.ThenIreadanarticle,whichsaidjogginginthemorningwouldmakearealdifference.SoIfollowtheadviceandputitintopracticeeveryday.Now,Imakeitaruletogetupearlyandjogforabouthalfanhour.Afterthat,Ifeelrefreshedandenergetic.Atpresent,mybodyisbuildingupbyworkingouteveryday,whichbenefitsmydailylifegreatly.J即學即練你校英語報健康欄目在征文，請你寫一篇稿件參賽。內容如下：1．你過去的身體狀況；2．變更歷程；3．現狀。留意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2．可以適當增加細微環節，以使行文連貫。參考范文：Iamahighschoolstudent.InthepastIalwaysfeltworriedaboutmyhealth，becauseIwasoverweight.Ifeltsleepyoftenandfelttired.Ididn'twanttodoanysports.Later，Idecidedtochangethissituation.First,Ichangedmydiet，stoppingeatingjunkfood.Instead，Iatemorefruitandvegetables.Besides，Ibegantotakemoreexercise