?第33講新聞報(bào)道（講義）【復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)】精選寫作話題，緊扣核心目標(biāo)。提升語言質(zhì)量。強(qiáng)化高效訓(xùn)練。 【考情分析】近年高考真題應(yīng)用文寫作考點(diǎn)細(xì)目表年份卷別體裁主題詞數(shù)2023新高考I卷建議信給外教寫信提出分組意見80詞左右2022新高考I卷邀請(qǐng)郵件邀請(qǐng)外教做一次訪談80詞左右2021新高考I卷投稿短文慶祝校報(bào)創(chuàng)刊十周年80詞左右2020新高考I卷活動(dòng)報(bào)道學(xué)校五公里越野賽跑80詞左右【網(wǎng)絡(luò)構(gòu)建】報(bào)道概述+寫作步驟命題規(guī)律：新聞報(bào)道或活動(dòng)報(bào)道，就是對(duì)近來發(fā)生的事件的如實(shí)介紹。報(bào)道的特點(diǎn)就是用事實(shí)來說話。考查形式：新聞報(bào)道或活動(dòng)報(bào)道，時(shí)態(tài)常以過去式為主。寫作步驟:報(bào)道寫作精華高分策略之詞匯：一單詞新聞標(biāo)題headline旨在aimat一次性的disposable保護(hù)protection組織organize發(fā)動(dòng)launch抵制resist共同的joint促進(jìn)promote背景background偶然地occasionally同時(shí)meanwhile二短語目標(biāo)是……withtheaim/intention/purposeof. 打算……，意圖是beaimed/intendedtodo. 被邀請(qǐng)去……beinvitedto. 被要求做……berequiredtodo. 將被舉行willbeheld/betobeheld 由……組織beorganizedby.被期待做某事；有望做某事beexpectedtodo.． 采取措施takemeasures/steps/action按照accordingto吸引某人的注意力drawone’sattention對(duì)......評(píng)價(jià)很高speakhighlyof高分策略之句式：一高分開頭：Nowadays,withtheimprovementoflivingstandards,moreandmorepeopleareabletotaketripsduringtheholidays.現(xiàn)如今，隨著生活水平的提高，越來越多的人能夠在假期里去旅行。Inordertohelpteenagerslearnmoreandappreciatepoetry，apoetrycontestwasheldinthehallofourschoollastSunday.為了幫助青少年更多地學(xué)習(xí)和欣賞詩歌，上周日在我們學(xué)校的大廳舉行了一場(chǎng)詩歌比賽。Aimingtoenrich/encourage/enhance...,ourschoolheld/organizedarunningraceontheschoolplaygroundfrom9amto12amonOctober3.旨在豐富/鼓勵(lì)/提高……10月23日上午9點(diǎn)到12點(diǎn)，我們學(xué)校在學(xué)校操場(chǎng)上舉行/組織了一場(chǎng)跑步比賽。Ourschoolwitnesseda“CampusLaborWeek”activityfromMay18thto22th.5月18日至22日，我們學(xué)校舉辦了“校園勞動(dòng)周”活動(dòng)。Aimedatenhancingstudents’physicalquality,thisactivitywaswellreceivedinthewholeschool.為了提高學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)，這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)受到了全學(xué)校的歡迎。ThestudentunionheldagraduationpartyforthemintheschoolhallonFridayevening,thepurposeofwhichwastoleavetheexchangestudentsadeepimpressiononthevividschoollifeinourcampus.周五晚上，學(xué)生會(huì)在學(xué)校禮堂為他們舉辦了一場(chǎng)畢業(yè)派對(duì)，目的是讓交換生對(duì)我們校園生動(dòng)的學(xué)校生活留下深刻的印象。Theresearcherscometoaconclusionfromthesurveythat...專家從調(diào)查中得出結(jié)論說......。Inordertocelebrate...,theyheldaparty.為了慶祝......，他們舉行了聚會(huì)。二高分中間段：Itcanbeseenthatthestudentsinourschoolarecooperativeandfulloflove,solet’scarryforwardthegoodmerits!可以看出我們學(xué)校的同學(xué)善于合作，充滿愛心，因此讓我們把這種美德發(fā)揚(yáng)下去！Asscheduled,theactivitystartedat8amonSaturdaymorninganditlastedforthreehours.該活動(dòng)如期于周六上午8點(diǎn)開始，并持續(xù)了3個(gè)小時(shí)。Thehighlightmomentof...cameupwhenwe...最精彩的時(shí)刻…當(dāng)我們。Sopopularwastheactivitywiththestudentsandteachersthatitattractedhundredsofthem.這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)在學(xué)生和教師中非常受歡迎，因此吸引了數(shù)百人。Allthestudentsaswellasourteachersparticipatedinit.Asscheduled,weassembledoutsidetheschoolgateat8:00a.m.andheadedforthedestinationinhighspirits.所有的學(xué)生和我們的老師都參與了進(jìn)來。按照計(jì)劃，我們于上午8點(diǎn)在學(xué)校大門外集合，興高采烈地前往目的地。Tiredaswewere，wefounditinterestingtoparticipatein...雖然我們很累，但我們發(fā)現(xiàn)參與其中很有趣。OnlythroughthisexperiencedidIrealizethat...只有通過這次經(jīng)歷，我才意識(shí)到這一點(diǎn)。Notonlydoestheactivitybroadenourhorizonbutitalsoinspiresusto...這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)不僅拓寬了我們的視野，而且還激勵(lì)著我們。Wehadabetterunderstandingof...throughtheactivity.我們對(duì)……有了更好的理解。通過這次活動(dòng)。Itwasnotuntilhalfpastsixintheeveningthattheactivitycametoanend.直到晚上六點(diǎn)半，這個(gè)活動(dòng)才結(jié)束。三高分結(jié)尾段：Itisthisactivitythatfurtherraisesourawarenessof/enrichesourknowledgeabout...正是這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)進(jìn)一步提高了我們的意識(shí)/豐富了我們的知識(shí)。Undoubtedly,thisactivityisofgreatimportance，whichprovidesuswithanopportunityto/turnsouttobeahugesuccess.毫無疑問，這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)是非常重要的，它為我們提供了一個(gè)取得巨大成功的機(jī)會(huì)。Theactivitywashighlyspokenofbecausenotonlydiditenrichourschoollifebutalsoitimprovedourinterest.這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)被高度評(píng)價(jià)，因?yàn)樗粌H豐富了我們的學(xué)校生活，而且提高了我們的興趣。Theactivityprovidedaplatformforusto...,fromwhichwebenefitedalot.該活動(dòng)為我們提供了一個(gè)平臺(tái)……我們從中獲益很多。Furtherdetailswillbereportedwhenitbecomesavailable.進(jìn)一步的細(xì)節(jié)將在它可用時(shí)報(bào)告。WhatimpressedusmostwasLiHua’sdeed,who...最讓我們印象深刻的是李華的行為，他...Theactivitywasindeedextremelysuccessful,andthestudentsinvolvedrealizedthatevensmallactscouldmakeadifferencetotheearth.這個(gè)活動(dòng)確實(shí)非常成功，參與的學(xué)生意識(shí)到，即使是小的行為也能對(duì)地球產(chǎn)生影響。8.ThecompetitionofferedawonderfulopportunityforustohaveabetterunderstandingofEnglishclassics,evokingourloveforEnglishculture.這次比賽為我們提供了一個(gè)絕佳的機(jī)會(huì)，讓我們更好地理解英國經(jīng)典，喚起了我們對(duì)英國文化的熱愛。【高分模板1】Inorderto_____________________(活動(dòng)目的),_____________________(活動(dòng)名稱)hasbeenlaunched______________________(地點(diǎn))。At8:00o’clock,wegatheredat___________________(地點(diǎn))andsetoutfor______________________(目的地).Allthewaywe_____________________(所作事情)，enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.What’smore,___________________(具體事項(xiàng)或印象或感受).Notonlydiditgetus______________________(好處一)andgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,butalso______________________(好處二).Whatawonderfultimewehad!Ihope_____________________(期待下次)。（2023年江蘇南通模擬試題）假如你是李華，上周五你校舉辦了一次遠(yuǎn)足研學(xué)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)給你校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)目的；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.活動(dòng)反響。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。AnEducationalOuting________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AnEducationalOutingLastweek,ourschoolorganizedaneducationaloutingwiththepurposeofbroadeningstudents’perspectives,cultivatingtheirabilitiesandincreasingtheirculturalliteracy.Duringtheactivity,wehikedthroughcountryside,visitedsomevillages,andadmiredthebreathtakingscenery.Wealsoparticipatedinoutdoorgamesandteam-buildingactivities,whichhelpeduslearntoworktogetherandimproveourcommunicationskills.Overall,theoutingwasavaluableexperience,wherewegainedabetterunderstandingoftheworldaroundus.What’smore,wewereabletodevelopasenseofresponsibilitytowardstheenvironment.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的報(bào)道。要求考生為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，報(bào)道學(xué)校上周五舉辦的遠(yuǎn)足研學(xué)活動(dòng)。【詳解】1.詞匯積累目的：purpose→aim令人驚嘆的：breathtaking→marvelous/magnificent提高：improve→enhance此外：what’smore→inaddition2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedaneducationaloutingwiththepurposeofbroadeningstudents’perspectives,cultivatingtheirabilitiesandincreasingtheirculturalliteracy.拓展句：Lastweek,ourschoolorganizedaneducationaloutingwhichisaimedatbroadeningstudents’perspectives,cultivatingtheirabilitiesandincreasingtheirculturalliteracy.【高分句型1】Wealsoparticipatedinoutdoorgamesandteam-buildingactivities,whichhelpeduslearntoworktogetherandimproveourcommunicationskills.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Overall,theoutingwasavaluableexperience,wherewegainedabetterunderstandingoftheworldaroundus.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）（2023年浙江卷1月）上周末你參加了校學(xué)生會(huì)組織的“認(rèn)識(shí)我們身邊的植物”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)為校英文報(bào)寫篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)的過程；2.收獲與感想。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina“GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs”activityorganisedbyourStudents’Union.

Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristicsandusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesofdifferentplants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterforanimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationfortherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthebalanceofou