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Sarah,ahighschoolstudent,wasalwayseagertoparticipateineveryactivityhappeninginschoollife,andsheoftenpersuadedherbestfriend,Anthony,tojoinher.Oneday,SarahsawaposterannouncingtheannualGreatBake-offChallenge.Excitedly,sheexplainedtoAnthonyhowthewinnerwouldbegrantedabakingmasterclasswiththewell-knownbaker,ChefBella.BothSarahandAnthonylovedbakingandidolized(崇拜)chefBella,whosecookingshowwaspopularacrossthecountry.However,theyrealizedthecompetitionwouldbetoughastheirschoolhaditsshareoftalentedbakers.Despitethis,Sarahsuggestedthattheycombinetheirstrengthstoparticipateasateam.Anthonyagreed,andtheystartedthejourneytowintheGreatBake-offChallenge.SarahandAnthonystartedbyshortlistingtheirstrengths:Sarahwasskilledatconstructinganddecoratingcakes,whileAnthonywasgoodatdevelopingdeliciousflavors.Theyspentweekends
brainstorming,testing,andperfectingtheirbakingrecipes,transformingSarah'sfamilykitchenintotheirveryownbake-offbattleground.Asthedateofthecompetitiongotcloser,theygrewmoreanxious.Theyevenhadafewargumentsaboutthecake'sdesignortheflavorcombination,buttheyquicklyresolvedtheirdisagreementsandcontinuedtoworktogetherasateam.ThedayoftheGreatBake-offChallengefinallyarrived.SarahandAnthonywalkedintotheschoolhall,theirheartspoundingwithamixofanticipationandfear.Thesetuphadmultipleworkstations,eachequippedwithanoven,amixer,andbasicbakingtools.Theparticipantsweregiventhreehourstocompletetheircakes,afterwhichthejudgeswouldevaluateeachcreationbasedontasteandoriginality.Thecountdownbegan,andthecouplesprungintoaction.Anthonyworkedonthecomplexflavorcombinations,whileSarahstartedbuildingthecake'simpressivestructure.Duringtheintensity,theycouldn'thelpbutstealaglanceattheothercompetitors,admiringtheiropponents’skillsandcreativity.However,theyremainedfocusedontheircreation,supportingandencouragingeachotherthroughouttheprocess.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意高中生Sarah熱衷于參加學校活動,她拉著好友Anthony一起參加學校一年一度的烘焙大賽。獲勝者能得到知名烘焙師ChefBella的大師課。他們知道競爭激烈,但決定發揮各自優勢組隊參賽。賽前他們利用周末研究食譜,雖有爭論但都能迅速化解。比賽當日,現場有多個配備齊全的工作站,參賽者需在三小時內完成蛋糕,由評委根據味道和創意評判。比賽中,他們分工協作,在專注自己作品的同時也關注對手。五要素分析人物:Sarah、Anthony及其他參賽選手、評委。時間:從看到烘焙大賽海報開始,到比賽當天。地點:學校,包括Sarah家廚房(準備階段)和學校禮堂(比賽現場)。起因:對烘焙的熱愛以及渴望贏得與知名烘焙師學習的機會。經過:組隊、準備、參賽過程中的協作與小插曲。結果:完成作品,等待評委評判。幾處伏筆及續寫中的回應伏筆:比賽競爭激烈。回應:他們在比賽中看到對手的實力,更專注于自己作品,通過努力使作品有競爭力。伏筆:評委將根據味道和創意評判。回應:文中描述他們在味道和創意上精心準備,等待評委評判結果。續寫要點第一段情感線:緊張又期待,完成作品后的如釋重負和對結果的忐忑。故事線:詳細描述完成的蛋糕外觀,展現他們對作品的滿意,同時提及其他參賽者作品的優秀,增加緊張感。第二段情感線:極度緊張,對評委評價的關注與擔憂。故事線:描述評委品嘗和評價的過程,著重于他們的表情和動作,突出Sarah和Anthony的緊張心情。主旨升華句Teamworkinacompetitioncanturnashareddreamintoatangibleachievement.Intheheatofacontest,friendshipandcollaborationarethesecretingredientstosuccess.Thejourneyofabakingchallengeisnotjustaboutwinning,butalsoaboutthebondforgedthroughteamwork.Whenpassionmeetsteamworkinacompetition,theresultisnotonlyacreationbutalsoastoryoffriendship.Abakingcompetitionrevealsthatwithcombinedefforts,friendscancreatesomethingbeautifulandachievetheirdreams.寫作示范第一篇Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theircakestoodoutwithitsuniquecharm.ThesmoothfrostinganddelicatedecorationswereatestamenttoSarah'sskill.Anthony'sflavorsseemedtowaftthroughtheair,invitingeveryonetotakeabite.Theylookedaroundandsawotheramazingcakes,buttheyfeltproudofwhattheyhadachieved.
Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments.SarahandAnthony'seyeswerefixedonthem.Everybitethejudgestook,everynodorwhisperamongthemmadetheirheartsrace.Theysawthejudgeswritedownnotes,andtheyprayedthattheirhardworkwouldshinethroughandearnthemthetopprize.第二篇Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theircakewasamasterpiece.Thetierswereperfectlyaligned,andthecolorsblendedharmoniously.Itwasavisualdelightthatdrewmanyeyes.Astheyaddedthefinaltouches,theywerefilledwithasenseofaccomplishmentdespitethenervousness.
Thejudgesbegantheirroundoftastingandassessments.SarahsqueezedAnthony'shandtightly.Thejudgessampledeachcakemethodically.WhentheyreachedSarahandAnthony'screation,theduowatchedintently.Thejudges'expressionswereinscrutableastheytasted,leavingSarahandAnthonyontenterhooks,waitingfortheverdict.范文:Threehoursunconsciouslypassedandthedeadlinewasup.Theytookastep
backandstartedadmiringtheir
accomplishment.It'sanextraordinaryfive-layercakewithanincrediblemixofflavorsandimpressivedecorations,
displayingtheirbeautifuljourney
togetherasfriends.Drawinginspirationfromtheiridol,ChefBella,theysoughttocreatenotjustacake,butagreatworkofart.Withdustedfaces
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