schoolactivities.DebateCompetitionShouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?BrainstormWhatactivitiesdoyoudoafterschool?dosomehomeworkreadbooks

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陳述觀點Let’shaveyouropinion.A方——Parents

Childrenshouldtakeafter-schoolclasses.Idon’tthinkchildrenshouldtakeafter-schoolclasses.Because…Idisagree.…Idon’tthinkso.It’souropinion.B方——Children

二、Discusstheother’sstatementsinyourgroup，andgiveyourreasonwithagreementtodisagreement.

討論對方觀點，并說明贊同或反對的理由

Ithinkchildrenshouldtakeafter-schoolclasses.Because…It'sgoodforchildrentostartlearningfromayoungage.After-schoolclassescanhelpkidsgetintoagooduniversity.Parentswanttheirchildrentobesuccessfulpersons.Practicesportssothattheycancompeteandwin.Theseactivitiesareimportantforchildren'sfuture.

Someclasseshelpchildrentolearnimportantskillnottaughtatschool.Suchaspianolessons.Inaword(總之)/Inmyopinion/Inmymind…A方----Parents

B方——Children

Idon’tthink…Idisagree./Idon’tthinkso.Whydon’ttheyjustlettheirkidsbekids.

After-schoolclassestakeawaythechildren’sfreetime.

Theseclassescausealotofstressforchildren.

Theseclassestakeawaythechildren’schildhood.

Children’shealthandhappinessaremoreimportant.

Peopleshouldn’tpushtheirkidssohard.

However/Inmymind/Inmyopinion,…Allright,butdon’tyouthink…?Ithinkchildrenshouldtakeafter-schoolclasses.Idisagree.

Peopleshouldn’tpushtheirkidssohard.Idon’tthinkso.It'sgoodforchildrentostartlearningfromayoungage.Inmyopinion,

Theseclassescausealotofstressforchildren.某雜志就“Shouldchildrentakeafter-schoolclasses?”對幾位家長進行了采訪，他們都同意孩子上，你對此持什么態度呢？假如你是Peter，請你向該雜志寫一封信表達你的觀點。

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時態：一般現在時

人稱：第一人稱和第三人稱2.Examplesforexpressingopinions1.Idon’treallyagreewith…because…2.Althoughsomeparentsarerightabout…,butIthinkchildrenshould…3.Inmyopinion,itisimportantforchildren/parentsto…4.Ibelieveitisbetterifchildren/parents…so

that…5.Perhapschildren/parentsshould/could…3.Somelinkingwords

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因果：because,so,…

總結：inaword（總之）,allinall,inshort…舉例：forexample，suchas,andsoon,…

遞進：notonly…but(also)…,inaddition(除此之外),what’smore,…

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Allinall,tobeasuccessfulperson,Ibelieve

howtolearnandhowtobeahappylearneraremoreimportantthantakingafter-schoolclasses..Showagreeordisagree.Thenshowyouropinion.Idon’tthinkchildrenshouldtakeafter-schoolclasses.Because…做出結論MindMap溫馨提示：注意要求，規范寫作Correctgrammar(語法),spellings(拼寫)andpunctuation(標點符號)Neatwriting(整潔的書寫)-版權所有-自評（checkbyyourself）Readyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要點齊了嗎？2.句子結構對了嗎？3.句子連貫嗎？4.單詞都寫對了嗎？5.有沒錯誤的語法？6.書寫整潔嗎？大聲朗讀文章并自查是否符合以下要求。寫作后：反復檢查，追求完美批改符號：刪除插入Lookthebookread替代-版權所有-

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DearSirorMadam,

Idon'treallyagreewithwhatparentsaresayingaboutafter-schoolclassesbecause

alltheseactivitiescancausealotofstressforchildren.It’snotgoodforachild’sdevelopment.

Althoughsomeparentsarerightabouttheimportanceoflearningfromayoungage,Ithinkchildrenshouldjustbekidsandhaveahappychildhood.

Inmyopinion,itisimportantforparentsnottopushtheirchildrentoohard.Ibelieveitisbetterif