Period8Writing—AnOpinionEssayUnit11CONFLICTANDCOMPROMISE細讀文本寫作指導寫作實踐達標檢測細讀文本Readthepassagecarefullyandchoosethebestanswer.1.WhichisNOTmentionedinthepassageasunhealthyproduct?A.Fastfood. B.Tobacco.C.Alcohol. D.Computergame.√Activity1

Readforsomedetails.2.Accordingtothesecondparagraph，whichisthesecondfactorthatcausesdeath?A.Obesity.B.Smoking.C.Drinkingalcohol.D.Unhealthyproduct.√3.Howisthepassagemainlydeveloped?A.Bylistingexamples.B.Bymakingcomparison.C.Byinferring.D.Byanalyzingcausesandeffects.√4.WhichopinionmighttheauthorNOTagreewith?A.Thegovernmentshouldtakestrictermeasurestobanadvertisements

forunhealthyproducts.B.Themoneymadefromunhealthyproductsshouldbeusedforcharity

work.C.BanningTVadvertisementsofunhealthyproductsisbeneficialtoboth

individualsandanation.D.Advertisementsforunhealthyproductsandactivitieshaveareallybad

influenceonchildren.√1.Completethestructureofthetextbyputtingthedifferentpartsinthecorrectorder.Activity2

Readforthestructures.dabc2.AccordingtotheopinionessayonP40，wecanlearnwhenwewriteanopinionessay，wecanusethefollowingoutline.(寫作模板)Recently，wehavehadadiscussionabout...Therearetwooppositeopinionsaboutit.Thosewhofavortheideathink/Somestudentsholdtheirviewforthereasonthat

(理由一).Whatismore，

(理由二).Moreover，_________(理由三).Ontheotherhand，themajorityofthepeoplebelievethat/Thosewhoareagainsttheideathink/Othersprefer...Firstly，

(理由一).Secondly/Besides，_________(理由二).Thirdly/Finally，

(理由三).Personally/Frommypointofview/Ithink

(我的觀點).Thereasonisasfollows.

ReadthepassageonP40carefullyagainandfindoutthepersuasivesentences.答案

1.Undoubtedly，unhealthyproductsharmourhealth.2.ItisclearlydesirabletolimitTVadvertisementsforfastfood.3.However，surelythisisafalseargument.4.Furthermore，itisnotrighttomakemoneyfromactivitieswhichharmhumanhealth.5.Toconclude，lawstobanTVadvertisementsofunhealthyproductsarebeneficialtosociety.Activity3

Readforsomegoodsentences.返回寫作指導本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇正反觀點對比類議論文。議論文是對某個問題或某件事進行分析、評論，表明自己的觀點和看法的一種文體。論點、論據和論證是議論文的三要素，論點是作者對所論問題所持的見解和主張；論據是用來證明論點的事實和道理的根據；論證就是用論據來證明論點的方法和過程。一般來說，議論文每段應有主題句(topicsentence)來確定論點。文章結尾往往會提出自己的看法、意見或建議，表示對某一現象或論點的贊成或反對。此類議論文常用以下形式安排文章：[注意事項]1.論點要鮮明；論據要充分；論據過程要條理清晰。2.文章安排邏輯性要強，推理要嚴密。3.主要使用現在時態。4.結合題目要求闡述相關的觀點，切忌隨意發揮。[常用表達]1.引出討論話題(1)Recentlywehavehadaheateddiscussionon...最近我們就……進行了激烈的討論。(2)Accordingtoarecentsurvey...依照最近的一項調查……(3)Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.在這個問題上有意見分歧。2.陳述正/反方觀點及論據(理由)(1)Somestudentsarefortheidea，whileothersthinkotherwise.一些學生贊成這個想法，而另一些學生則不這么認為。(2)However，therearealargenumberofpeoplewhoholdadifferentviewconcerningthiscase.然而，有很多人對這個事情持不同的看法。(3)Ithasmoredisadvantagesthanadvantages.它的弊大于利。(4)Someholdtheviewthat...，whileothersthinkthat...有些人認為……，然而另一些人認為……。3.歸納總結或發表自己的觀點(1)Therefore，wecandrawtheconclusionthat...因此，我們可以得出……的結論。(2)Iholdthebeliefthat...我相信……(3)Takingeverythingintoconsideration，weshouldmakegooduseofthepreciousresources.考慮到一切，我們應該好好利用寶貴的資源。(4)AsfarasIamconcerned...就我而言……4.承接詞匯與句式(1)表示并列：what’smore，inaddition，aswell，besides，furthermore，moreover，what’sworse(2)表示因果：therefore，forthisreason，thus，consequently(3)表示轉折：but，however，onthecontrary，instead(4)表示時間順序：later，afterwards，fromthenon，eventually，inthemeantime，then，atthesametime，afterawhile，atpresent，afterthat，finally(5)表示列舉：first，tobeginwith，secondly，firstofall，then，next，finally(6)舉例說明：suchas，forexample，forinstance，take...forexample(7)表示讓步：nevertheless，still(8)表示對比：onthecontrary，incontrast(9)陳述事實：infact，actually，asamatteroffact，totellyouthetruth(10)表示總結：inaword，inshort，tosumup，inconclusion，onthewhole，toconclude，inbrief，insummary，ingeneral，allinall(11)表示意義重復：that’stosay，inotherwords，toputitinanotherway，toputitdifferently，similarly(12)表示強調：aboveall，moreimportantly，indeed，withoutanydoubt返回寫作實踐當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Filmorbook，whichdoyouprefer？”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文。1.看電影：省時、有趣、易懂；2.讀原著：細節更多、語言優美；3.我的看法及理由。參考詞匯：原著originalwork/bookintheoriginal第一步審題謀篇[審題]寫作要求是寫一篇對比正反觀點的議論文，對比選擇看電影和選擇讀原著的不同觀點。寫作時應注意下面幾點：1.確定文體：這是一篇對比正反觀點的議論文。寫作時注意對比正反觀點的議論文的寫作特點。2.主體時態：文章應以一般現在時為主。3.主體人稱：應該以第一和第三人稱為主。[謀篇]本文是一篇正反觀點對比類議論文。內容可分為三段，

時態采用一般現在時。論點要鮮明，論據要有說服力。第一段(引言段)：簡潔明了地提出問題或現象；第二段(主體段)：分別提出并論證正反兩方觀點與論據；第三段(結尾段)：用一兩句話明確闡述自己的觀點，并發出呼吁或號召。第二步遣詞造句[核心詞匯](含本單元詞匯)1.詳細的信息 ___________________2.生動優美 _________________3.熱衷于 ___________4.更喜歡 _________________________5.一些人……其他人…… ______________6.就個人而言 _________________________________detailedinformationvividandbeautifulbekeenonprefer/haveapreferenceforSome...others...personally/asfarasIamconcerned...7.堅信 __________________8.以……為原型 _____________9.改編自…… ____________firmlybelievethat...bebasedon...adapt...from[連詞成句]1.Films_______________________orbooksintheoriginal，whichdoyouprefer?你更喜歡看原著還是看由其改編的電影？2.Astothisquestion，___________________________________.對于這個問題，不同的人有不同的觀點。3.Someofusarguethat________________________________________________________.我們中的一些人認為我們應該看電影而不是看原著。whicharebasedonbooksdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsweshouldseethefilmratherthanreadthebookintheoriginal4.Becauseittakeslesstime___________________________.因為那樣能花更少的時間了解整個故事。5._____________________________________________________________但是，其他人持相反的觀點。6.Theythinkthatthey________________________________fromtheoriginalbook.他們認為看原著能獲得更多細節。7._____________________________________________________________就我個人而言，我更喜歡讀原著。tounderstandthewholestoryHowever，othershavejusttheoppositeopinion.cangetmoredetailedinformationPersonally，Ihaveapreferenceforreadingtheoriginals.8.Ithinkreadingoriginals_____________________________________________andnottobeinfluencedbytheadaptations.我認為讀原著能更好地理解作者的思想，并且不受改編的影響。enablesmetobetterunderstandthewriter’sidea第三步句式升級1.將句1中的定語從句改成過去分詞作定語。_______________________________________________________________2.將句2改為whenitcomesto...結構。_______________________________________________________________3.用Thereasonisthat...句型改寫句4。_______________________________________________________________Filmsbasedonbooksorbooksintheoriginal，whichdoyouprefer?Whenitcomestothisquestion，differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.4.用同位語從句把句5和句6合并成一個句子。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.用現在分詞作狀語把句7和句8合并成一個句子。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________However，othershavejusttheoppositeopinionthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginalbook.Personally，Ihaveapreferenceforreadingtheoriginals，believingthatitcanenablemetobetterunderstandthewriter’sideaandnottobeinfluencedbytheadaptations.第四步組句成篇用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇英語短文。范文展示Filmorbook，whichdoyouprefer?Filmsbasedonbooksorbooksintheoriginal，whichdoyouprefer?Whenitcomestothisquestion，differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Someofusarguethatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides，thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting，anditiseasiertofollow.However，othershavejusttheoppositeopinionthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginalbook.Meanwhile，thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorevividandbeautiful.Personally，Ihaveapre