ContinuationWriting續寫時的問題情節不合理句子簡單語言蒼白主題抓不住無話可說時間來不及語法錯誤拼寫錯誤句子簡單語言蒼白無話可說女孩打開她的禮物盒。Thegirl

unwrapped

hergiftbox.(主)

(謂)(賓)句子擴寫Sentenceexpansion(informative,specificandvivid)形容詞，可以是一個形容詞，也可以是并列形容詞或者形容詞短語。1.The____________(天真的)girlunwrappedher___________(精致的)giftbox.2.______________________(好奇又興奮),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.3.____________________________________________________(滿心喜悅),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.

副詞，修飾動詞、形容詞、其他副詞或整個句子，指的是時間、地點、程度、方式等概念。(_____)Thelittlegirleagerly/carefully/merrily/joyfully/expectantly/

excitedlyunwrappedhergiftbox(_____).innocentdelicateCuriousandexcitedFullofjoy/wildwithjoy/overflowingwithjoy技巧1：使用形容詞、副詞Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打開她的禮物盒。技巧2：使用介詞短語1.______________________________________________(毫不猶豫地),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.2.

_______________(驚訝地),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.3.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox__________________(非常小心地).4.Thegirl__________________________(黑色長發的)unwrappedherdelicategiftbox.Withoutanyhesitation/asecondthoughtInsurprisewithlongblackhairwithgreatcareThegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打開她的禮物盒。技巧3：使用非謂語動詞1._________________________________(興奮地尖叫著),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.2._________________________________(感受到了溫暖),

thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.3._________________________________(受到媽媽鼓勵),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.FeelingasenseofwarmthScreamingwithexcitementEncouraged

byhermom注意：1.非謂語的選擇要考慮狀語和主句的主語是否一致，以及動詞和主語的主被動關系；2.非謂語動詞結構也可以放在句中或句尾，如果放在句中，需要一前一后出現兩個逗號。請看下面例句：①Thegirl,

screamingwithexcitement,unwrappedhergiftbox.②Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox,

screamingwithexcitement.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打開她的禮物盒。技巧4：使用with復合結構/獨立主格結構with的復合結構1.

______________________________(張大了嘴巴),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.獨立主格結構2.

____________________________(心狂跳),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.3.

_______________________(眼睛閃耀光芒),

thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.WithhermouthwideopenHerheartbeatingwildlyHereyessparklingThegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打開她的禮物盒。技巧5：使用從句定語從句1.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox__________________________________________________________(一直期待的).2.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox__________________________________________________________(用紅絲帶/蝴蝶結系好的).名詞性從句1.____________________________________(好奇里面是什么),thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.狀語從句Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox______________________________(好像它是這世界上最珍貴的禮物).whichshehadbeenlookingforwardtowhichwastiedwithredribbon(/witharedbow)Curiousaboutwhatwasinsideasifitwerethemostpreciousgiftintheworld“句無霸”Curiousaboutwhatwasinside,theinnocentgirlunwrappedthedelicategiftboxwhichwastiedwitharedbow.

Withherheartbeatingwildly,theinnocentgirl,encouragedbyhermom,unwrappedherdelicategiftboxwhichshehadbeenlookingforwardtoforalongtime.Thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.女孩打開她的禮物盒。①Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.itwasahummingbird(蜂鳥),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛網)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.②Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.③WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?④AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(懸停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.⑤Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygood-bye.”Para.1Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Para.2Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Thehummingbirdflewclose.①形容詞The_______________________________________________hummingbirdflewclose.②介詞短語__________________________________________,thebrightlycoloredhummingbirdflewclose.③副詞___________________________,thebrightlycoloredhummingbirdflewclose.④with結構/非謂語_______________________________________________,thebrightlycoloredhummingbirdflewclose.⑤非謂語Thetinyhummingbirdflewclose_________________________.⑥從句Thetinyhummingbirdflewclose_________________________.___________________________,thetinyhummingbirdflewclose.tiny/cute/adorable/brightlycolored/brightlyfeatheredAftersomehesitation/Afterawhile/Inasecond/WithaflapofherwingsSuddenly/Unexpectedly/CarefullyWithherwingsbeating/HoveringintheskyforawhilewhichmadeiteasierformetokeepaneyeonhermovementsshowingnofearatallWhensherecognizedwhoIwas注意：不是成分越多越好，邏輯和句意的通順是首位。Thehummingbirdflewclose.Thetinyhummingbirdflewclose,showingnofearatall.Withaflapofherwings,thebrightlycoloredhummingbirdflewclose.→人鳥互動WhensherecognizedwhoIwas,thetinyhummingbirdflewclose.在空中盤旋了一會兒，蜂鳥飛近了，輕輕地落在我的肩膀上，唱著我從未聽過的最甜美的旋律。Hoveringintheskyforawhile,thelittlehummingbirdflewcloseandlandedgentlyonmyshoulder,singingthesweetestmelodythatIhadneverheard.Para.1Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.重回農場想起蜂鳥詢問近況尋找等候失望離開停好車，看到擠奶房→想起蜂鳥→走近瞧瞧→“她怎么樣了呢？”→朋友告知近況→在農場尋找→沒找到→失望→準備離開。WhenIpulledupmycar,Isawthemilkinghouse.→WhenIpulledupmycar,_____________________________________(通往廢棄擠奶房的小路映入眼簾)Asqueakingcallfarawayremindedmeofthehummingbird.→Alongit,severallittleunknownbirdswereflyingmerrily,_______________________(這讓人想起了幾周前的情景).I

approachedthemilkinghousetotakeacloselook.→_______________________________________(走近擠奶房),Inoticedthebrand-newwindowand____________________________________(一張充滿期待的臉映在窗格上).Howwasthehummingbird?______________________________________________(似乎朋友感覺到了我在想什么).Myfriendtoldmethatthehummingbirdregularlyvisitedthefarm.___________________________________(抱著再次見到小鳥的信念),Istartedwonderinginthefarm.However,Ifailed.Asenseoffrustrationfilledmyheart.Thesunwassinkingbehindthewood.Iwasreadytoleave.thetrackleadingtothedilapidated(荒廢的)milkinghousecameintosightwhichrecalledthemomentweeksagoApproachingthemilkinghouse/TakingastepnearertothemilkinghouseanexpectantfacewasreflectedonthepanesItseemedt