材料作文一2023年中考英語書面表達專練

一、寫作題

L假如你是在蘇州學習的美國交流生Linda,你的美國同學Susan給你寫了

一封電子郵件，想了解你在蘇州的學習和生活情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵

件內容，根據郵件中的內容及你的實際情況用英語給Susan回復一封電

子郵件。

To:LindaAmerica@

From:SusanAmerica@

Subject:LifeinSuzhou

DearLinda,

Howareyou?ΓminterestedinyourlifeinSuzhou.Wouldyoupleasetell

methefollowinginformation?

?Howisyourstudythisterm?

?IknowyoukeepaparrotasapetinSuzhou.Whatisspecialaboutyour

pet?

?IsthereanythinginterestinginSuzhou

?DoyouenjoyyourlifeinSuzhou?Whyorwhynot?

Γmlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Bestwishes!

Yours

Susan

注意：

L詞數70左右。回復郵件的開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數；

2.回復郵件須包括所有要點，可適當發揮，使全文連貫、通順；

3.回復郵件中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關信息。

DearSusan,

Thanksforyouremail.ΓmsorryIhaven'twrittentoyoutillnow.

Iwillsendyousomephotosnexttime.Takecare!

Lostoflove

Linda

2.假設你是學校記者，日前對初二年級一班Sam進行采訪，因為他主動申

請加入了一個名叫，G。GreeM的志愿者組織。請根據以下信息，用英語完

成這份稿件，向讀者介紹情況。

選擇原因L該組織鼓勵保護身邊環境，

2.倡導綠色生活模式，例如……

性格愛好事跡L善良，樂于助人，曾為同學集資手

術

2.愛讀書，拓寬視野

3.自擬一點。

未來計劃1.投身更多GoGreen組織的環保活

動。

2.自擬一點

注意：

L詞數90詞左右。短文開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數。

2.短文須包括所有要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順。

3.短文中不得出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息。

Sam,astudentfromClass1Grade8inourschool,wroteanapplication

lettertojoinanorganizationcalledGoGreen.

3.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Aspecialgiftto...".（以"一份給..的

特殊禮物”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。必須把

題目補充完整）

（注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評

分）

Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下問題僅供參考）

Whatisyourspecialgift?

Whowillyougiveitto?

Whydoyouwanttogivehim/herthepresent?(Giveatleasttworeasons)

4.假如你是校刊TeenWorriesAaron,請給讀者寫一封回信，并根據來信中

提到的煩惱提出建議。

Hi,Aaron,

ΓmaJunior2studentfromHFLS.Γmverystressedoutthesedaysbecause

ΓmpreparingfortheArtFestival.Myparentsareworriedthatpracticing

dancingtoomuchmightinfluencemygrades,sotheywantmetoquitmypart

intheArtFestival.Ilovebeingonthestageandreallywanttohavethis

opportunity.Butontheotherhand,sometimesΓmreallydistractedinclass

andevendaydreamingaboutthemomentsonthestageandstuff:Homework

isanotherbigheadacheforme.Couldyoupleasegivemesomesuggestions?

Γmlookingforwardtoyourreply!

Bestwishes,

X

注意：

1.回信需要針對讀者的煩惱提出建議；

2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；

3.詞數80~120o

DearX,

It'squitenormalforstudentstohavevariousworries.

5.假定你是李平，你的法國朋友LoUiS給你來信。以下是他的郵件，請你閱

讀后進行回復，詞數80左右。注意：L字數在80詞左右。2.文中不得

使用你的真實姓名和校名。

From:Louis

Hi,LiPingz

Guesswhat!IamcomingtoChinanextweektoexperiencetheSpring

Festival!

Itmustbeexciting.ButΓmabitworriedbecauseIknowlittleabout

ChinesetablemannersandwonderhowyoucelebratetheSpringFestival.Could

youpleaseintroducesomethingtome?

Louis

To:Louis

DearLouis,

Yours,

LiPing

6.上周末我們和劉老師一起乘長途汽車去了首都北京。根據提示，完成短文。

placesofinterest天安門廣場、長城、故宮、王府井

大街

ActivitiesL拍照2.享受美味食物3.購買禮物

feelings自己發揮，至少2句

要求：

L所給的要點要寫全，不少于80詞。

2.語句通順，有邏輯性，要有適當的發揮。

7.請你根據以下內容提示，寫一篇短文。

L小麗的家附近有一個公園，每天她和媽媽到公園里散步。

2.近來，來公園遛狗的人越來越多，而且很多狗不拴狗繩。

3.有一天，一條狗突然追逐小麗，小麗害怕極了。

4.小麗不敢再去公園了，她感到很不開心。

5.你認為……

參考詞匯：遛狗walkadog拴tie狗繩dogrope

要求：

1.詞數80~100個。

2.短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

3.要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發揮。

ThereisaparknearXiaoli'shouse.

8.WhenIcamehomefromworklastMonday,mysonWilsonmentioned

thatakidatschoolhadcalledhimBanana!

Ikeptonwonderingwhyhewasassociated（聯系）withbananassincehe

wasnoteatingtheminschool.Hethentoldmeitwasbecauseofhisyellow

Everyday,at6am,mysonandIwouldwaitforhisschoolbus.Iwouldtell

himtowearthejacketgiventohimbymybrotherasaChristmasgift.Itwas

deartomebecauseitwasgivenbyaspecialpersoninourlives.Andbecause

ofitslightweightmaterial,itwasjustrightforhimtowearinthecoldbusfor

theone-hourride.Sometimesheforgottotakeitoffwhenarrivingatschool

becauseitwassolight.Hehadbeenwearingittoschooleverydayforone

yearandsevenmonthsbeforethishappened.Itbrokemyhearttolearnmy

sonwasfeelinghurt,soIbroughtouthisnewjacketwhichIhadbeenkeeping

forhisPrimary3year.

Whenhesawit,hesmiled.Thenextday,Iwaslookingforwardtohearing

hisstoriesfromschool.Hecouldn'twaittotelleveryoneathomethatthekid

hadstoppedcallinghimBananabutcomeupwithothernamessuchasBlack

Panther（黑豹）andBoringWilson.

Eventhoughhewasconsideredasaboringkid,heknewinhisheartthat

hehadmanyjacketsindifferentcolourstochoosefrom.MOStOfall,hehashis

familyWhOIC）Vehimdearly.

Thenamespeoplegiveus,outofloveorotherreasons,don'tdefine（定

義）us.Everyoneismorethanwhathewears.

根據上面閱讀表達文章內容，請你用英語概括描述Wilson被起綽號

（nicknames）這件事，并談談你的感受是什么？以及假如你遇到這件事

會怎么做？有什么好的建議？

寫作要求：

1.語句通順，語意連貫；

2.包括所給要點，可適當發揮；

3.80-100詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）

WilsonwasinaPrimarySchoolforthreeyears.

9.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaccordingtothegiveninformation（根據

以下材料，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）

Inrecentyears,environmentalproblemshavebecomemoreandmore

serious,whichdrawsalotofattentionfromthesociety.Becauseofit,each

classhadaclassmeetingabout"Livepeacefullywiththeenvironment".

Supposeyouareareporterofyourschoolnewspaper,pleasewriteareport

aboutit.

近年來，環境問題日趨嚴重，獲得社會的廣泛關注。因此，學校組織各班

展開了一次"與環境和平共處”的班會課。假設你是校報的小記者，請你為

此次班會寫一份報道。（注意：文中不得出現人名、班級等個人信息）

10.假如你叫李明，是美國中學生Lucy的筆友，你收到了她的電子郵件。請

根據她來信中提到的問題用英語寫一封回信，談談你的看法，同時提出一

些建議，可以有適當發揮。

To:liming@

From:Iucyl213@126.com

Subject:myproblem

DearLiMing,

Howareyougoing?Γmwritingtotellyouaboutmyproblem.

Ihavesometroublewithmypocketmoney.Youknow,beingateenager

isn'tcheap.Thepricesofpublictransport,food,clothesandmobilephoneare

allgraduallyincreasing.Mypocketmoneyisnotenoughtocoverthosethings.

Severaltimes,Ididn'tevenhavemoneyforbreakfast.Butmyparentsdon't

agreetoincreasemyallowance（零用錢）.Couldyougivemesomeadviceonthe

followingquestions?

?Doyouthinkitisgoodtoaskmyparentsformoreallowance?

?Whatshouldmyallowancecover?ShouldIpayformymobilephonebills,

clothesandsoon?

?Shouldweteenagerslearnsomeskillsaboutmanagingmoney?

?Areteenagersinyourcityallowedtohaveapart-timejobtogetmore

money?

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

Lucy

注意：

L詞數90左右。回復信的開頭和結尾己經寫好，不計入總詞數；

2.回復中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關信息。

DearLucy,

Γmgladtohearfromyouagain,butIfeelsorryforyourproblem.Ionce

hadthesameproblemasyours.Hereismyadvice.

Wishyougoodluck!

Yours,

LiMing

11.讀下面關于課外活動的文章。請根據問題提示，在橫線上用自己的話寫出

大意總結。詞數不少于60,不多于80詞。注意：在文章后標清你寫的

字數。

Thesedays,Chinesechildrenaresometimesbusieronweekendsthan

weekdaysbecausetheyhavetotakesomanyafter-schoolclasses.Manyof

themarelearningexamskillssothattheycangetintoagoodhighschooland

lateragooduniversity.Othersarepracticingsportssothattheycancompete

andwin.However,thisdoesn'tonlyhappeninChina.

TheTaylorsareatypicalAmericanfamily.LifeforCathyTaylor'sthree

childrenisverybusy."Onmostdaysafterschool,"Cathysays,"Itakeoneofmy

twoboystobasketballpracticeandmydaughtertofootballtraining.ThenI

havetotakemyothersontopianolessons.MaybeIcouldcutoutafewof

theiractivities,butIbelievetheseactivitiesareimportantformychildren's

future.Ireallywantthemtobesuccessful.However,thetiredchildrendon't

gethomeuntilafter7:00p.m.Theyhaveaquickdinner,andthenit'stimefor

homework.

LindaMiller,amotherofthree,knowsallaboutsuchstress."Insome

families,competitionstartsveryyoungandcontinuesuntilthekidsgetolder,"

shesays."Motherssendtheirsmallkidstoallkindsofclasses.Andtheyare

alwayscomparingthemwithotherchildren.It'scrazy.Idon'tthinkthat'sfair.

Whydon'ttheyjustlettheirkidsbekids?Peopleshouldn'tpushtheirkidsso

hard."

Doctorssaytoomuchpressureisnotgoodforachild'sdevelopment.Dr.

AliceGreensaysalltheseactivitiescancausealotofstressforchildren."Kids

shouldhavetimetorelaxandthinkforthemselves,too.Althoughit'snormal

towantsuccessfulchildren,it'sevenmoreimportanttohavehappychildren."

1.What'sthecommonproblemforChineseandAmericanfamilies?

2.What'sCathyTayIor1Sideaaboutsomanyafter-schoolactivities?

3.WhatdoesLindaMillerthinkaboutafter-schoolactivities?

4.What'sDr.AliceGreen'sopinionaboutafter-schoolactivities?

12.假設你是第二節（回答問題）材料中的Alan,請寫一篇80詞以上的英

文日記，描述對話中所發生的事情。

注意：

L要點包括時間、地點、人物、事情的經過和啟示等；

2.不得出現自己的姓名和校名等真實信息。

3.請按以下格式作答。

June20th,2021

13.按照要求完成寫作任務。

假設你是第二節（回答問題）材料中的Alan,請寫一篇80詞以上的英文

日記，描述對話中所發生的事情。注意：1.要點包括時間、地點、人物、

事情的經過和啟示等；2.不得出現自己的姓名和校名等真實信息；3.請

按以下格式在答題卡相應位置作答。

June20th,2021

14.假設你叫Jane,下面是有關你的朋友Bill的信息，請根據所給信息介紹

你的朋友。

姓名：BillMiller國籍：英國

家庭成員：祖母、父母、姐姐早餐喜愛的食物：香蕉、西紅柿、米

飯；不喜愛的食物：漢堡包

擁有的體育用品：兩個棒球棒、三個喜歡的運動及原因：打排球，令人放

排球和四個乒乓球松和有趣

要求：

L包含所有提示內容，語言表達清楚，語句正確，書寫工整，標點使用得

當。

2.詞數60左右。

15.假如你是李華，就讀于一所國際學校。今天上午你在學校圖書館撿到了一

本字典，卻丟失了一串鑰匙。請你根據下面提示寫一則尋物啟事和一則招

領啟事，貼在學校公告欄內。

姓名李華

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要求：啟事中須包含表格中所有相關信息，可適當發揮。

Lost:____

Found:

答案

一、寫作題(共15題)

1.【答案】DearSusan,

ThankSforVoUremail.I'msorryIhaven'tWrittentoVoUtillnow.

IamgoodatEnglish.IalsodowellinMathbutneedstodobetterin

Chinesenextterm.Iwilltrymybesttoreadmorebooks.

IkeepaparrotasapetinSuzhou.Hesays"Hello!"whenIcomeback

home.

Suzhouisabeautifulcity,it'sfamousforChinesegardens.Tolearnmore

aboutChineseart,IoftenwatchKunoperashowswithfriends.Ireallyenjoy

mylifeinSuzhoubecausetherearelotsofthingstodohere.

IWillSendVoUSOmePhOtoSnexttime.Takecare!

Lotsoflove,

Linda

【知識點】學校信息(SChoolinformatiOn)、材料作文、介紹地點類

2.【答案】Sam,astudentfromClass1Grade8inourschool,wrotean

applicationlettertojoinanorganizationcalledGoGreen.Samjoinedthe

organizationbecauseitencouragesenvironmentalprotectionandadvocates

agreenlifestyle.Samisakindandhelpfulpersonwhohasfundedoperations

forhisclassmates.Besides,helovesreadingandbroadenshishorizons.

Moreover,hispersonalhabitsareverygood.Samhopestobeableto

participateinmoreGoGreenenvironmentalactivitiesinthefutureandbring

morepeopleintotheorganization.

【知識點】材料作文、新聞(News)、人物介紹類、談論個人看法感受

3.【答案】略。

【知識點】日常生活(Dailyroutines)?材料作文

4.【答案】DearX,

It'squitenormalforstudentstohavevariousworries.

Asamatteroffact,youreallywanttotakethisopportunity,don'tyou?So

obviously,youcantrytofollowyourheartandgoforit.However,ifyoudothat,

whatyoucancoverinyourstudyispayingmoreattentionandtimeonit.As

whatyousaid,thegradesplayaveryimportantpartinyourparents'thought

aboutwhethertheyallowyoutobeonstageornot.

Unlessyouworkreallyhardonyourstudy,theywon'tchangetheirmind.

Soactuallytheiroptionsdependonyourbehaviors.YouknowwhatImean,

right?Thenstopdaydreamingandtostudyhard!Inadditiontoallthis,youcan

alsoenjoyyourselfindancing.Don'tworrytoomuch,justdoit!

Thanksforyouraskingandhopeyoucankeepaprefectbalance!

Bestwishes,

Aaron

【知識點】麻煩與問題(Troublesandproblems)^描述事件類、材料作文

5.【答案】DearLouis,

IamgladtohearthatyouarecomingtoChinanextweektoexperience

theSpringFestival!LetmetellyousomethingaboutChina'sSpringFestival.

Asyouknow,theSpringFestivalisthemostimportantfestivalinChina,

justlikeChristmasinthewest.Itfallsonthelastdayofthelunaryearandlasts

untiltheLanternFestival.Beforethefestivalcomes,peoplecleananddecorate

theirhousestowelcometheNewYear.Duringthefestival,peoplegofrom

housetohousetopayaNewYearvisittotheirrelativesandfriends.

Wealsohaveabigmealtogether.Accordingtoourtradition,weshouldlet

theoldpeopleeatfirst.Whenyouareenjoyingthemeal,youneedtoavoid

makingnoiseswhilechewingfood.Itisimpolitetopointatotherswith

chopsticks.

Lookingforwardtomeetingyou.

Yours,

LiPing

【知識點】材料作文、飲食習俗(Eatingcustoms)＞傳統文化類

6.【答案】LastweekendwewenttoBeijing,thecapitalofChina,withour

teacherMissLiubycoach.Wevisitedmanyplacesofinterestthere.

Onthefirstday,wewenttoTian'anmenSquare.Itisverybig,wecouldn't

stoptakingphotosthere.Thenwesawmanywonderfulworksofartinthe

PalaceMuseum.Onthesecondday,weclimbedtheGreatWall.Afterthatwe

wereverytiredbuthappy.Beforewewentback,weboughtsomepresentsand

enjoyeddeliciousfoodonWangfujingStreet.

Beijingisawonderfulplacetovisit.IhopeIcanvisititagainsomeday.

【知識點】介紹地點類、旅行(Travel)＞材料作文

7.【答案】XiaoLihasaparknearherhome.Sheandhermothergofora

walkintheparkeveryday.Recently,moreandmorepeoplecometowalk

dogsinthepark,andmanydogsdonothavealeash.Oneday,adogsuddenly

chasedXiaoLi.XiaoLiwasveryscared.Xiaolididnotdaretogotothepark

again,shefeltveryunhappy.Itisirresponsibletowalkthedogwithouttying

therope.Evenagentledogmaybite.Itmaybethedog'sfaultorthe

stranger'sfault.Therefore,thedogwalkermusttiethedogleashwhenhe

goesout,whichisresponsibleforhimselfandforthesafetyofothers.

【知識點】描述事件類、社區(Community)、材料作文

8.【答案】WilsonwasinaPrimarySchoolforthreeyears.Hegotayellow

jacketashisChristmaspresent.Ithadbeenoneyearandsevenmonthssince

heworeyellowjacket.BecauseakidatschoolhadcalledhimBanana,he

changedhisjackettoanothercolor.Finally,thekiddidn'tcallhimBananabut

cameupwithothernames.AsfarasIamconcerned,it'simpolitetogive

peoplenicknames.Andoneshouldnotbejudgedbywhathewears.IfIam

nicknamed,Iwillnotcarewhatpeoplesay.Ignorewhatotherssay,justbe

yourself.

【知識點】麻煩與問題(Troublesandproblems)^材料作文、描述事件類

9.【答案】略

【知識點】材料作文、環境保護(EnvironmentaIprotection),環境保護類

10.【答案】DearLucy,

Γmgladtohearfromyouagain,butIfeelsorryforyourproblem.Ionce

hadthesameproblemasyours.Hereismyadvice.

Honestyspeaking,itisnotagoodideatoalwaysaskformoreallowance

fromparents.Youcantalkwithyourparentsaboutwhatyourallowanceshould

cover.Ifyouareexpectedtopayforyourownmobilephonebills,clothesand

otherthings,youneedtomakegoodplanseverymonth.So,itisnecessaryfor

youtolear