自然災害主題語境：人與自然自然災害在“人與自然”主題語境下，“自然災害與防范、安全常識與自我保護”等話題在讀后續寫中考查較為頻繁。其中常見的故事情節有兩種：戶外險情、自然災害。其中，自然災害通常涉及一些突發的意外災害，面對大自然的不可抗力，主人公積極嘗試逃脫避險，同時力所能及地救助他人，在敬畏自然的同時也學會了保護自己。故事情節可包括“災害來襲”“應對災害”和“劫后余生”。災害來襲Thedirtandsandstungmyskinlikeathousandbees.泥土和沙子像上千只蜜蜂一樣刺痛著我的皮膚。（沙暴）Windblownflamehadleapedfromthetopofonetreetoanother.被風吹著的火焰從一棵樹的樹頂跳到另一棵樹上。（山火）Wavesabouttwelvemetershighcamerushingin,drowningeverything.大約12米高的海浪涌了過來，淹沒了一切。（海嘯）Icouldhearwhatsoundedlikeamillioncaralarmsringingfromtheground.我能聽到地面上好像有100萬輛汽車的警報器在響。（地震）Shelookedatthebackdoor.Waterwasflowinginunderneath.Sheturnedaroundandsawdirtywaterfountainingoutofthedrainandfillingthesink.她看了看后門，水正從下面流進來。轉過身來，她看到骯臟的水從排水管中涌出，填滿了水槽。（洪水）Theavalanchegatheredspeedandsize,grabbingrocksandtreesandanythingelseinitspathasitrusheddownthemountain,tearingthehotelfromitsfoundation.雪崩的速度越來越快，規模也越來越大，卷著巖石、樹木和其他東西，沖下山去，將酒店連根拔起。（雪崩）應對災害她又冷又餓，后悔沒有為這可怕的天氣做準備！Insteadofingdowntheroof,thetwosisterscheeredeachotherupandtookturnstoshoutloudlytotryandattracttheirparents’attention.兩姐妹沒有從房頂上下來，而是互相鼓勵，輪流大聲喊叫，試圖引起父母的注意。Realizingthattheyweretrappedbythefloodandthatitwasimpossibleforhertodriveout,shepulledJamesontoherback,headingfortheroof.當她意識到他們已經被洪水困住了，自己也不可能開車出去時，她把James拉到背上，朝著屋頂走去。Suddenly,Samifelthimselfthrownontothetopofatree.Hegrabbedholdofit.Lookingaround,hesawthateverythinghadbeendestroyed.Inthedistance,hesawhisgrandpahangingonanothertree.突然，Sami覺得自己被拋到了一棵樹的樹頂上。他抓住了它。環顧四周，他發現一切都被毀掉了。在遠處，他看到他的爺爺正掛在另一棵樹上。劫后余生Itwasnotuntilthethirdmorningthattherescuersfinallyarrived.直到第三天早上，救援人員終于趕到了。Hewasalmostnumbwhenheheardthewonderfulsoundofsomeonecallinghisname.他幾乎麻木了，這時他聽到一個美妙的聲音，有人在喊他的名字。Whatwesawweakenedourheart.Wedecidedtohelpthevictimsafteranarrowescape.我們看到的一切令我們心酸。死里逃生后，我們決定幫助那些受難者。NowordscandescribemyexcitementwhenIrealizedIwassomehowstillalive.Myparentshuggedmetightlyintheirarmsastearsofjoyrandownourcheekslikeriversthatwouldn’tstopflowing.當我意識到我還活著時，我的興奮之情難以言表。父母緊緊把我抱在懷里，喜悅的淚水順著我們的臉頰流下來，像滔滔不絕的河流。椰樹逃生記TenyearoldSamilovedtovisithisgrandpa’shouse.Thehousewasnearthebeautifulbluesea.Attheseaside,therestoodthickandtallpalmtreeswithgreencoconutshangingfromthem.Whenthecoconutsfell,Samiwouldbreakthemopenanddrinkthecoconutwater.Samilikedtoplayunderthetrees.ItwasalwaysgreatfuntospendtheholidaysatGrandpa’splace.Thisvacation,Samiwassurprisedwhenhecametohisgrandpa’svillage.Therewerehardlyanytreesleft.Hesawhousesbuiltnearthesea.Peoplehadcutdownmanypalmtrees,andtherewashardlyanygreeneryleft.Grandpa’shousewasdifferent.Heneverallowedhistreestobecut.Hehuggedeachpalmtreeinhiscourtyard.Healsonamedthetwobigtreesnearthefrontdoor—PetuandBetu.Hehadplantedthemwithhisownhands,andtodaytheyhadbeelarge,massivetreeswiththicktrunks.Theyweretallandgreenandgavethesweetest,juiciestcoconuts.Onenight,Samiwasawakenedbyastrangesound.Hecouldnotsleep.Hetossed(輾轉)andturnedinbed.Suddenly,thegroundshookasiftheearthwassplitting.HesatupstraightandthenrantoGrandpa,clingingto(緊抱)theoldmantightly.Grandpacriedout,“It’sanearthquake!”Theyranoutsidethehouse.Theythoughtthatwouldbesafe.Suddenly,therewasaloudsound.Theearthstoppedshakingbuttheseawasroaring.Peoplewereshouting,screamingandcrying,“Theseaisrising!”Thevillagersstartedrunningawayfromthebeach.Samiwasdumbstruck(驚呆的).Thewaveswererisinghigherandhigher.Theywentintothehouseagainandsawwateringinfromallsides.Samifreakedout.Samirememberedhismothertellinghimlongago,“Youmustalwaysgetoutofthehouseifthefloodsetoonear.”HeranoutsidethehousewithGrandpa.Butthewatercamesurging(洶涌)in.Wavesabouttwelvemetershighcamerushingin,drowningeverything.Waterwasallaroundandeverywhere.GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.____________________————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————“Sami,Sami!”Grandpacried.“Don’tbescared,littleone,etome,quickly.”________————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————故事主要矛盾Sami假期去靠近海邊的爺爺家度假，結果遭遇了地震引起的洪水，Sami和爺爺被巨浪沖散。段首句Para.1:GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.Para.2:“Sami,Sami!”Grandpacried.“Don’tbescared,littleone,etome,quickly.”續寫重點①被洪水沖散之后，爺爺和Sami各自的反應是什么？②和Sami分開后，爺爺的反應是什么？①為了到爺爺身邊，Sami做了什么？②爺爺和Sami最后脫險了嗎？參考思路1爺爺嘗試各種方式去抓住Sami，但失敗了→爺爺看到水中的Petu，成功自救→爺爺爬到Petu的高處，尋找Sami（爺爺：心急如焚）Sami在水中掙扎，無法脫身→Sami被巨浪推得更遠（恐慌）→Sami發現Betu并順著葉子爬了上去，成功自救（松一口氣）→洪水慢慢退去，救援隊趕來，Sami和爺爺成功脫險參考思路2爺爺嘗試去抓住Sami，但失敗了→Sami看見爺爺在不遠處的Petu上，于是想方設法與爺爺匯合→Sami朝著Petu游過去卻被浪拍得更遠（絕望）爺爺讓Sami游向Betu→Sami用盡全力爬上了Betu的樹干（松了一口氣）→Sami在樹上看到洪水摧毀了一切（難過）→洪水退去，Sami擁抱椰子樹（感激）高分范文GrandpaheldSami’shandtightlybutahugewaveseparatedthem.Roaringwaveswererollingupanddown.GrandpastruggledinthewaveandtriedtoreachSamibutfailed.Washedawaybytheangryseawater,Samialmostlosthope.Suddenly,hesawapalmtreeleafinthewaterandfoundPetunotfaraway.Inthetreewashisgrandpa!Samiswamtowardsthetree,butanotherwavecamerushinginlikeaghostrisingfromagraveatthebottomofthesea.Samidriftedfartherfromthetree.Hecouldn’tholdbackhistearsanymore,cryingandscreaming.“Sami,Sam