M4WritingReadthetable.HealthyfoodanddrinkUnhealthyfoodanddrinkMeat,carrots,eggs,sweetpotatoes,cheese,fish,chickensoup,noodles,rice,fruitandvegetablesarehealthyfood.Juice,water,teaandmilkarehealthydrink.Icecream,hamburgers,sugar,andcandyaren’thealthyfood.Colaisn’thealthydrink.becauseitisrichinproteins

蛋白質anditcanhelpusgrowtallerandstronger.becausetheyarefried油炸的andtheyhavetoomuchoil.[?pr??ti?nz]Meatishealthy,but

hamburgersaren’theathyThesteamed蒸的fishishealthybecause...,but

roastduckisunhealthybecause....itcanretainnutrition保留營養,andthecalcium鈣initisgoodforbones骨頭.itisnotonlysalty咸的

butalso

fullofoil.[r??te?n][nju?tr??n][??l]So

it’sbetterforustosteamthefoodthanroastorfryit.What’smore,don’tusetoomuchsalt.[?k?lsi?m]Anappleis

healthybecause...but

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healthybecause...itisrichinvitamins維生素itisfullofsugarandtoosweet.Besides此外,itisbadforourteeth.Ifweeattoomuchsugar,wewillgetfateasily.[?v?t?m?nz]So,it’simportanttoeatmorefruitandlesscandy.arehealthybecause...,butisunhealthybecause...itistoocoldandsweet,and

toomuchicecreamisbadforourteethandstomach胃.theyarefullofvitamins,whichcanmakeusbeautiful.[?v?t?m?nz].Carrots,eggsandsweetpotatoesaregoodforeyes.Milk,cheeseandfisharegoodforteeth.Havelotsofdeliciouschickensoup.AdviceReadParagraph2andtrytohelphim.pooreyesightWhat'swrongwithhim?toothachetiredVitaminA(維生素A)[?v?t?m?n]Calcium(鈣)[?k?lsi?m]protein(蛋白質)[?pr??ti?n]Eattherightfoodandbehealthy.It’simportanttohavetherightfoodandstayhealthy.Doyouhavetherightfoodanddrinkforlunch?WritingTask肉類，蔬果，蛋奶，各種各樣的食物富含不同的營養。請你根據以下內容提示寫一篇短文介紹你學校的午餐。內容提示:1.Whatdoyoueatforlunchatschool?2.Aretheydelicious?Aretheyhealthy?3.Whatadvicedoyouhaveonyourschoollunch?Why?要求:1.語言準確，短文連貫，通順，包含所有的提示信息。2.60詞左右。學習目標1.學會分析寫作要求。2.學會根據課文仿寫段落。3.學會合理安排和組織寫作內容。4.能夠正確討論學校的午餐是否健康并給出適當建議。

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肉類，蔬果，蛋奶，各種各樣的食物富含不同的營養。請你根據以下內容提示寫一篇短文介紹你學校的午餐。內容提示:1.Whatdoyoueatforlunchatschool?2.Aretheydelicious?Aretheyhealthy?3.Whatadvicedoyouhaveonyourschoollunch?Why?要求:1.語言準確，短文連貫，通順，包含所有的提示信息。2.60詞左右。體裁寫作任務分析時態人稱內容要點說明文一般現在時第一人稱（1）學校午餐都吃什么（2）是否美味、健康

（3）通過合理飲食來保持健康的建議

肉類，蔬果，蛋奶，各種各樣的食物富含不同的營養。請你根據以下內容提示寫一篇短文介紹你學校的午餐。1.Isyourfoodanddrinkhealthy?Wehaverice,meat,fish,variousvegetablesforlunchatschool.

Myfavouritefoodis...because...2.Wehavedifferentkindsoffoodforlunch,suchasmeat,fish,variousvegetablesandsoon.

Iloveourschoollunchbecauseit’sreallydeliciousandhealthy.However,thereisstillsomeunhealthyfoodinit.3.Mylunchisdeliciousandhealthy.Weeatrice,vegetables,meatand...forlunch.Ilike...best,because...Beginning...ishealthy,becauseitisrichin/fullof/goodfor......isunhealthy,becauseithastoomuchandit’sbadfor...Remembertouse“and”,“but”,“so”...Whatadvicedoyouhaveonyourschoollunch?Why?Ihope

wecanhavesomemilk/dairyfoodWe

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Iwantahealthierschoollunch,whichisimportantforchildren.It’simportantto

eattherightfoodandstayhealthy,sopleasetakemyadvice!Lunchisimportantforstudents,soremember:eatwell,stayhealthy

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don’tgetfat!EndingWritingTask肉類，蔬果，蛋奶，各種各樣的食物富含不同的營養。請你根據以下內容提示寫一篇短文介紹你學校的午餐。內容提示:1.Whatdoyoueatforlunchatschool?2.Aretheydelicious?Aretheyhealthy?3.Whatadvicedoyouhaveonyourschoollunch?Why?要求:1.語言準確，短文連貫，通順，包含所有的提示信息。2.60詞左右。查（checkbyyourself）Readyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要點齊了嗎？2.句子結構對了嗎？3.句子連貫嗎？4.單詞都寫對了嗎？5.有沒錯誤的語法？6.書寫整潔嗎？大聲朗讀文章并檢查是否符合以下要求一檔17-20二檔13-16三檔9-12很好地完成規定的寫作任務，包含所有內容要點，中心突出，結構清晰，語句流暢，意思清楚連貫，使用豐富的詞匯和結構，語法結構和