初中學生

英語寫作能力的培養

施志紅

2008.507年寫作無現成的范文可套ThingsIhatetodo

MostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…三、了解評分標準

07作文分標準７＋７＋２(內容＋語言＋組織結構)

組織結構分

1.

內容充實，不寫廢話；上下文連貫、用語規范、表達準確、無或少見語法錯誤；詞匯和句型句式運用恰當，多見好句型和習慣表達用語者，可給2分.

組織結構分2.

一般情況下，內容和語言在13分以上者(含)，

方可得到1~2分組織結構分.

組織結構分3.

內容和語言在12分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達，可酌情考慮給1分組織結構分.

組織結構分

4.

通篇句型、句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯誤，一般亦不予給組織結構分。

07作文分析舉例

Ihatetokeeppetsandtelllies.ThethingthatIhatedoingmostissmoking.Asweallknow,smokingisnotonlybadforourselvesbutalsoharmfultoothers.Whenevermyfathersmokes,Ifeelrathersick.Besides,itisawasteofmoneytosmoke,Ithink.What’smore,smokingpollutestheair.SoIhatesmokingmost.（A擋）

07作文分析舉例

Suchasthehousework.AlthoughIsometimeshelpmymothertodosomehousework,Ireallyhateit.Idon’tlikewashdishes.Ithinkitisuncomfortablethatyoumustputyourhandsintothecoldwaterandthenwashthedirtydishes.Idon’tlikecleanmyroomaswell.Somyroomisalwaysveryuntidy.MymothertoldmethatIwasverylazy.Idon’tthinkso.ButIreallyhatedoinghousework.（B擋）(5+6+0)

07作文分析舉例

SuchasdoingmuchhomeworkandwatchingTV.Everyday,wemustdoalothomeworkanditmustspendalongtimetofinishit.Whenwefinishedit.Itwasalready11o’clockintheevening.SoIhatedoingmuchhomework.IlovedwatchingTVwhenIwasachild.IalwayswatchingTVforalongtime.Soitmakesmyeyesbad.That’swhyIhatewatchingTVnow.

(C檔)

(5+5+0)四、培養寫作能力

1.指出常見問題

句型單一

東拉西扯

時態錯誤

用詞不當

2.提醒注意事項

圍繞中心

意思連貫

學會審題

注意文體

研究考試

3.避免指導缺失光給一個題目沒有任何鋪墊不考慮學生的學習基礎和生活實際

4.全面多方指導狠抓聽說訓練

重視基礎落實

介紹寫作技巧

豐富訓練方法

落實作文批改

小結一、明確教學目標二、把握變化走向

三、了解評分標準四、培養寫作能力

1.

指出常見問題2.

明確寫作要求3.

避免指導缺失4.

全面多方指導Thanksforlistening!1-1Mymotherisateacher.Sheis…Sheis…Sheis…Sheis…Ilikeherverymuch.Thisisourschool.Thereis…Thereis…Thereare…Thereare…Ilikeitverymuch.

1-2Mymotherisfortyyearsold,butshelooksyoung.Sheisadoctorandherhospitalisnotfarawayfromourhome,soshegoestoworkbybike.Sheworkshardandisalwayskindtoherpatients.Athomeshedoesalotofhouseworkandoftenhelpsmewithmylessons.IthinkmymotheristhebestmotherintheworldandIloveherverymuch.（73詞）1-3

OurschoolislocatedinthecentreofShanghaiItwasbuiltin1950.Nowthereareabout200teachersand2000studentsinourschool.Wehavealanguagelab,acomputerroomandabiglibraryinourschool.Wearegoingtobuildanewclassroombuildingnextyear.Ourschoolwillbecomebiggerandmorebeautifulinthefuture.（63詞）

2-1LastweekIgotanAinthetest.I’mveryhappyaboutitandI‘lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter.IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold.However,withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,I’vemadegreatprogress.ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup.

2-2

IbegantolearnEnglishwhenIwaseightyearsold.IknowitisveryimportanttolearnEnglishwell.ButsometimesIfounditsodifficultthatInearlygaveitup.However,withthehelpofmyteachersandclassmates,I’vemadegreatprogress.LastweekIgotanAinthetest.I’mveryhappyaboutitandI‘lltrymybesttolearnEnglishbetterandbetter.

3-1

MrWangusedtosmokealot.Hefeelillandgotoseethedoctor.Thedoctortoldhimsmokingisbadforhishealth.MrWangisgoingtotakethedoctor’sadvice.Hedecidedtogiveupsmoking.Hiswifeanddaughterwereveryhappy.

4-1

Dogsaremen’sbestfriends.Dogscanhelpblindmen.Theycantakethemeverywhere.Theyareveryclever.Theycanalsohelpthepolicementocatchrobbers.Theycanhelppeopletobuynewspapers.Somedogscancalculate.Dogsareourbestfriends.Weshouldprotectthem.Weshouldtakecareofthem.Don’thurtourbestfriends!

4-2

Dogsaremen’sbestfriends.Theyalwaysgiveusalotofhelp.Inancienttime,theyhelpedmenhuntanimalsandkepttheircavessafe.Now,dogshelppolicementocatchrobbersandfindlostpeople.What’smore,somedogscanevenhelpblindmen.Theyshowthemthewayanddoalotofthingsforthem.Wecallthiskindofdogsguidedogs,andtheyareblindmen’seyes!Inaword,dogsarenotonlyourpets,butalsoourbestfriends!

5-1

Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Growingpainsandgains”.Thepicturesbelowareforyourreferenceonly.(以“成長的煩惱與歡樂”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。以下圖片僅供參考。)（05中考）5-2112.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“IHaveaDream”.(以“我有一個夢想”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）Sentencepatternsforreference（以下句型僅供參考）Mydreamistobe…/todo…/togo…Ienjoy/like/prefer…Tomakemydreamcometrue,I…Ifmydreamcomestrue,…（06中考）5-3Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ThingsIHatetoDo”.

(以“我不喜歡……”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。段文開頭已給，所給部分不計入字數。)Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.(短文須包含下列要點)Whatarethethingsthatyouhatetodo?Whatdoyouhatedoingmost?Why?(Giveatleasttworeasons.)

ThingsIHatetoDoMostofthetimeIdothingswhichIenjoy.However,therearestillthingsthatIhatetodo.…（07中考）6-1

短文對話信件

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簡單句的五種基本句型9-1

學會使用過渡詞或連接詞鼓勵使用狀語從句、賓語從句

恰當使用英語習語、諺語9-2表示并列

and,or,also,too,aswell表示轉折

but,however,yet,while,though,otherwise表示遞進

what’smore,besides,inaddition表示讓步

though,although,evenif,whether,nowthat,whatever,whenever表示因果

because,becauseof,since,asaresultof,thanksto9-3表示條件

if,unless表示對稱

foronething…fortheotherthing,ononehand….ontheotherhand表示解釋

thatis,thatistosay,inanotherword,inotherwords表示舉例

forexample,suchas,like表示強調

Aboveall,indeed,really,especially,9-4表示空間

here,there,ononeside,…ontheotherside,