#GreenTravelinMyFamily【答案】GreenTravelinMyFamilyLastmonth,ourschoolorganizedanactivitynamed“GreenTravel,StartwithMe”,whichhasplayedaneducativerole.Seeingtheproposalonthebulletinboard,myclassmatesandIweredeeplyinterestedandhadaheateddiscussion.Everyoneexpressedtheirwillingnesstoparticipate.Aftergettinghome,Italkedtomyparentsaboutmyideas.Theywereverysupportive,sayingtheywouldn'tdrivetoworkfromthenextday.Inthefollowingweeks,aswepromised,Iwenttoschoolbybikeeveryday,whilemyparentswenttoworkbybus.Tiredaswewere,weallfelthappy.LastFriday,aclassmeetingwasheldasscheduled.Someparentswereinvited,includingmyfatherandmother.Wesharedourexperiencesandthoughtsduringtheactivity.Allofusheldthesameviewthatenvironmentalprotectionissoimportantforourlife.Throughtheactivity,wefinditourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplewilljoinusingreentravel.【解析】【分析】21本文是一篇看圖作文，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成李華，介紹上個月你參加學(xué)校組織的“綠色出行，從我做起”活動的完整過程，并以“GreenTravelinMyFamily”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件。本文只給出四幅圖，需要考生根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容組織要點(diǎn)并合理表達(dá)，總體難度較大。【詳解】第1步：審題。根據(jù)文字提示可知本文是一篇看圖作文，要求考生以“GreenTravelinMyFamily”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹上個月你參加學(xué)校組織的“綠色出行，從我做起”活動的完整過程。全文以一般過去時和第一人稱為主。第2步：組織要點(diǎn)。（1）看到倡議書，同學(xué)們都很感興趣，并進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論；（2）回家以后和父母談?wù)撐业南敕?，他們都很支持我；?）從那以后我騎自行車上學(xué)，我的父母親乘坐公共交通工具上下班。（4）我們召開了班會并邀請一些父母親參加。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，關(guān)鍵詞為haveaheateddiscussion、talkedtomyparents、gotoschoolbybike、gotoworkbybus、holdaclassmeeting等。寫作時需要注意時態(tài)和人稱的變化。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)完美，條理清晰。范文時態(tài)和人稱運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋了圖畫的所有要點(diǎn)，且有適當(dāng)?shù)膫€人發(fā)揮?？忌\(yùn)用了多樣式的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，整篇文章富有變化并不死板。使用了較多的高級詞匯和短語結(jié)構(gòu)，如playedaneducativerole、participate、schedule、environmentalprotection等；盡量運(yùn)用了豐富的句式，如定語從句whichhasplayedaneducativerole；分詞做狀語Seeingtheproposalonthebulletinboard,myclassmatesandIweredeeplyinterestedandhadaheateddiscussion.形式倒裝句Tiredas