應用文寫作類型03求助類求助信是當個人遇到一些自己無法解決的問題或困難時向別人請求幫助的一種書信，注意語氣要委婉、真誠。其結構一般如下：①、表明寫作目的，請求幫助②、清晰陳述求助的具體內容③、希望得到對方的幫助素材精粹【高分句型】首段：開門見山表明求助意圖Hearingyouhavemuchexperiencein...，Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp./someadvice.聽說您在……方面很有經驗，我寫信向您求助/征求建議。Ihavesomedifficultyin...，whichbothersmealot，soIhavenochoicebuttoturntoyou.我在……方面有一些困難，這讓我很困擾，所以我別無選擇只能向您求助。Facedwith/Facingsomanydifficulties，Iamanxioustoaskyouforhelp.面對如此多的難題，我非常想向您求助。主體部分：說明求助事由Iamencounteringthreeproblemswhichbothermealot.Tobeginwith，...What'sworse，...Whattroublesmemostis.…Alloftheseupsetmebecause.…我遇到了三個很困擾我的問題。首先，……。更糟糕的是，……。最讓我苦惱的是…。所有這些都讓我很不高興，因為……Ireallyhavenoidea/wonderhowtodealwiththeproblems.我真不知道/想知道如何解決這些問題。尾段：期盼回復并表示感謝Iwillbegratefulifyoucansparetimetogivemeahand/domeafavor.如果您能抽出時間幫我，我將很感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldbesokindastogivemesomeuseful/practicaltips/suggestions.如果您能非常友好地給我提供一些有用的/實用的建議，我將不勝感激。Thanksforconsideringmyrequest.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.多謝考慮我的請求。我期待您的答復。佳作共賞DearMike，I'mLiHua，oneofyourstudents.I'mwritinginthehopethatyoucangivemesomeadviceonmyEnglishstudy.Ournewwritingtaskcalled"extendedwriting"requiresustowriteareasonableendingtoastory.Obviously，thisisaveryopentaskwithmultiplepossibilities.WhileIenjoythecreativitythistaskrequires，Ifinditchallengingtoidentifytheplotandgivemyversionofthepossibleending.Ialsohavetroubleexpressingmyideasaccuratelyduetomylimitedvocabulary.Anysuggestionswouldbegreatlyappreciated.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，LiHua實戰突破Test1假定你是李華，你的美國筆友0livia負責的創造性寫作俱樂部進展良好，你也有意組建一個類似的俱樂部。請給她寫一封郵件尋求幫助，內容包括：1.寫信目的；2.你的問題；3.表示感謝。注意：寫作詞數應為80左右。DearOlivia,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearOlivia,Inspiredbyyourcreativewritingclub,Iwanttoestablishsuchaclubaswell.I'mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestionsandhelp..Firstly,wouldyoupleasetellmetheprocedureofhowtostartaclub?IalsowanttoknowwhateventsIcouldhold.Moreover,doyouhaveanydigitalversionsofteachingmaterialstosharewithme?Thankyousomuchforyourtimeandsupportinadvance.I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給美國筆友0livia寫封信，向他尋求組建俱樂部方面的幫助。【詳解】1.詞匯積累鼓勵：inspire→encourage創立：establish→found建議：suggestion→advice另外：moreover→additionally2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Moreover,doyouhaveanydigitalversionsofteachingmaterialstosharewithme?拓展句：Moreover,doyouhaveanydigitalversionsofteachingmaterialsthatyoucansharewithme?【點睛】[高分句型1]Inspiredbyyourcreativewritingclub,Iwanttoestablishsuchaclubaswell.(運用了過去分詞作狀語)[高分句型2]IalsowanttoknowwhateventsIcouldhold.(運用了what引導的賓語從句)Test2假定你是李華，當前你在英語學習方面遇到了一些問題。于是你向你校的外籍老師Tom寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點如下：1.本人簡介。2.求助內容。3.希望得到Tom的幫助。Dearteacher,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】Dearteacher,MynameisLiHua.

I’mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.

IhavemetmuchdifficultyinlearningEnglish.

First,

Ifindourtextsfullofnewwordsthatareverydifficultformetoremember.

Besides,

thetextsaretoolongformetorecite.

What’smore,

grammarisalsoverydifficulttolearn.Facedwith

somuchdifficulty,

Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.

Wouldyouliketointroducetoussomegoodwaystolearnnewwordssothatwecanrememberthemmoreeasily?

Inthemeanwhile,

Ibegyoutoteachthetextmoreslowlysothattheaveragestudentscaneasilyfollowyou.

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Iwouldlikeyoutointroducesomerulesandgoodwaystolearngrammar.I’msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressinmyEnglishstudywithyourhelp.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給外籍老師Tom寫一封求助信,希望老師幫助解決自己在英語學習方面遇到的一些問題。【詳解】詞匯積累此外：besides→additionally記住：remember→memorize/keep…inmind與此同時：meanwhile→meantime普通學生：ordinarystudents→averagestudents進步：progress→improvement句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Besides,thetextsaretoolongformetorecite.拓展句：Besides,thetextsaresolongthatIcanhardlyrecitethem.【點睛】[高分句型1]First,Ifindourtextsfullofnewwordsthatareverydifficultformetoremember.（使用了that引導的定語從句）[高分句型2]Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihavetoaskyouforsomehelp.（使用了非謂語動詞facedwith作狀語）Test3假如你是李華，最近，你和好朋友Lisa的關系不好，讓你比較迷茫。于是你寫信向知音欄目主持人Tom求助。請你用100字左右的英文寫這封求助信。內容要點如下：1.影響你們友誼的具體事件或者原因。2.你的感受。3.求助的具體內容。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearTom,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】范文DearTom,Youareacelebrityinaidingthosewhoareintroublebecauseofpersonallifeandwork.I'mwritingtoaskyouofafavorandhopeyouwillbekindenoughtogivemesomeinstructions.Recently,Lisa,mybestfriendfrommychildhood,didn'ttreatmethewaybefore.Whatmadeourrelationshiplessclosewasanaccidentalargumentonhowtogetonwellwithparents.Weholdquitedifferentopinionsonthat.Sincethenwehaveseldomspokentoeachother,whichreallymakesmesadanddepressed.IamatsuchalossoverwhatIcandotomakeupandinneedofyourhelp.Iwillbeextremelygratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishesforyou.YoursLiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于求助信，要求考生給知音欄目主持人Tom寫信，就如何處理好與好朋友Lisa的關系向他尋求幫助。【詳解】1.詞匯積累幫助：aid→help最近、近期：recently→lately爭論、爭吵：argument→quarrel觀點：opinion→view/idea2.句式拓展原句：Recently,Lisa,mybestfriendfrommychildhood,didn'ttreatmethewaybefore.拓展句：Recently,Lisa,whohasbeenmybestfriendfrommychildhood,didn'ttreatmethewaybefore.【點睛】[高分句型1]Youareacelebrityinaidingthosewhoareintroublebecauseofpersonallifeandwork.(運用了who引導的限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Whatmadeourrelationshiplessclosewasanaccidentalargumentonhowtogetonwellwithparents.(運用了what引導的主語從句和how引導的賓語從句)[高分句型3]IamatsuchalossoverwhatIcandotomakeupandinneedofyourhelp.(運用了what引導的賓語從句)Test4假定你是李華，臨近高考，心理壓力特別大，于是向學校心理老師Tom寫一封信，求助如何緩解壓力，在高考中取得優異成績。要點如下：1.自我介紹；2.壓力大的原因；3.希望得到老師的幫助。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearTom,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearTom,IamLiHua,aSenior3student.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching,Ifeelgreatpsychologicalpressure.SoI'mwritingtoyou,askingforhelponhowtorelievethepressureandgetexcellentresultsinthecollegeentranceexamination.I'mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.First,IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakesports.Moreover,thehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakesmeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon'twanttoletthemdown.Whattroublesmemostisthatit'sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.Facedwiththeaboveproblems,I'manxioustogetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonhowtosolvetheseproblems?Yourssincerely，LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給學校心理老師Tom寫一封信，求助如何緩解壓力，在高考中取得優異成績。【詳解】1.詞匯積累即將到來：athand/aroungthecorner尋求幫助：askforhelp/turntosb.forhelp使某人失望：makesb.sad/disappointed/upset渴望做某事：beeagertodo/beanxioustodo/can'twaittodo2.句式拓展句式優化原句：First,IhavetospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakesports.優化后：First,spendingmuchtimeonmyhomework,Ihardlyhavetimetotakesports.【點睛】[高分句型1]Withthecollegeentranceexaminationapproaching，Ifeelgreatpsychologicalpressure.（運用了with的復合結構）[高分句型2]Facedwiththeaboveproblems，I'manxioustogetyourhelp.（運用了過去分詞做狀語）Test5假定你是李華，你正在為高考緊張復習，但最近你遇到了一些問題導致無法集中精力學習。于是你給你校的外籍心理老師Kate寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點如下:1.你所遇到的問題或者困惑2.希望得到Kate的幫助。注意:1.詞數100左右;2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫DearKate,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Sincerelyyours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearKate,IamLiHua,aSenior3student.Recently,lhavebeenbusypreparingformycollegeentranceexam,butunfortunatelyIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.SoIamwriting