1TherearearangeofdistinctionsbetweentwoofThefirstpointcomingupintomymindisthatcomparedwithtravelingabroad,…is..,while…iselseal Aslongas…when,Iwouldliketotraveltodifferentceswith…who.,toceslikewhere…,ngthingslike…what.（5官出發動名詞）itwillbesoexcitingsinceIhaveneverthoughtofitbefore.IhavenoAslongasthefollowingcriteriacanbemet,itisthetimetogoaheadForexample,itisnecessary/fundamentalthatIhavetoMoreover,Iconsider…tobeindispensableaswell,withoutOnemoretomention,thefactorof…shouldberelevant…since..Sointhatcase,Ibelieveif2years’time,mydreamcanberealized.動機類八詞listingreasons/solutions learnsomethingnew/ meetfriendsfromallovertheworld broadenhorizons studythenative survivalindependenceproblem-solvingCanbeagoodRaisepeople’sawarenessofprotectionPromotetheinfrastructureFacilitiescanbewellIfthereisalackofeco-protection,thoseirresponsiblewilllitteraround,whichwillunderminethelocalenvironmentLocalernmentshouldbemore Why peopleliketotravelabroad?Whatcanpeoplebenefitfrominternational防守（接過來考官的問題）BasicallythereareawiderangeofbenefitsoftravelingFirstly,itoffersusachance Inadditiontothat, ng…,weareabletoOnemoretomention,itissuchagreatopportunityforusThat’swhyitisgettingincreasingly/moreandmorepopularWhateffectswilltourismhaveonourenvironment?好處壞處類2+1ofaspectsforour好處兩點：ThefirstpointI’dliketocoveristhatitistourismthatcan…Apartfromthat,tourismcouldofferachancefor…to…但是走呢：Butconverselyspeaking,iflocalresidentsrelytoomuchontourism,itislikelythat…localenvironmentwillbeundermined暗中的破壞結論就是——SotheconclusionIamtryingtomakeis 結論選一個就好abalancemustbe方要考慮周到 ernmentshouldbemore取決于不同的情況：itvariesfromcasetoWouldyoutravelaroundtheworldinthefuture?5W/AslongasI….在什么樣的條件下，Iwouldliketotraveltodifferentcountrieswith誰,like…都哪些國家？whilewecandoavarietyofthingslike…( ngsth請用五官法,seeing….,listeningto…,tasting….,chattingwith…,trying…,ying…, Letmeputitinthisway,probablyitistooearlytomakemydecisionnow,yetaslongasIhavesufficientfundandtime,Idon’tmindtravelingaroundtheworldwithmygirlfriend/boyfriend,ngthingslikesightseeing,makingfriends,tastingfood,visitinglandmarks,experiencingdifferentlifestyleandsoon;inthatway,myhorizonscanbegreatlybroadened.Tobefrank,thisquestionhasneveroccurredtome,butIguessaslongasthefollowingrequirementscanbemet,itisoktogoaheadThemostimportantfactoristhat…financialBesides,…isalsoconsideredtoberelevant,sincewithoutit,…是？來個反證吧itmightintroduce….帶來 alabilitiesOh,onemoretoadd,itwill/wouldbeperfectifI….haveBasedonwhatImentionedabove,IsupposeIwontbefarawayfromaround-worldtripWhat’sthedifferencebetweentravelingabroadandliving/studyinglivingabroad---Seemore/ experiencemore/moredifficultLearnlanguagetofitintheculture/acquireknowledge/getabetterpictureofothercultures emoretravelingabroad---easierandmoreinteresting/getabuzz/funoutofLoosenupandchillout放松/relievethetediumoflife/getthehangofothercultures理解The…betweentwoofthemarevarious/manifold/multipleComparedwith…,不能用 Unlike…itcalls…is…,while…isInmanywaystherearequite 需要思路+句型清晰！HeapsTobeginwith,comparedwithlivingabroad,travelingcanbestressful,sincethetimeislimited theycantaketheirtimeoflivingthere overseasstudentsMoreover,unliketravelers,studyinginlocalcesmeansworkinghardondifferentsubjectsandexamsorpapersMoreimportantly,travelersmightbealone,whilelivingabroadneedsdeveloalrelationshiptoliveaqualitylife.Whydomagazineshavehealth-relatedarticles?Sincethereareawiderangeofbenefits ngThefirstpointIcancomeupwithisthatApartfromit,thosekindsofarticlesarealsoconsideredtobean…,especiallypeoplethesedaystendto…Somethinglikethat….ThefirstaspectIwouldliketocoveristhatithelpsusabsorbinformationandacquireknowledgeabouthealth,whichisreallyessentialforustoliveahealthylife/havealifestyleMorethanthat,afterreadingthosearticles,wecanbeencouragedtodomoreexercises,likesomeinstructionstolearnnewskillsThat’swhythosearticlesareWhatdo peopledotokeepfit?manvswomanoldvsyoung?versuslisting？（therebe的方式Oldpeople---Haveabalanceddiet&wholesomefood/keeparegularsleepItdependsondifferentgroupofpeople;foryoungsters/guys,theirpreferenceisto…;whileforseniors/girls,Isupposetheyarefansof…,including….;soitvariesfrompeopletoItdependsondifferentgenders,forguys,theyarepartialtowards表示Ilikesomethingcompetitiveandcooperative,likeyingBball,soccerandsoon,whileforgirls,Iguesstheyarefansofsomethinglessphysicaldemanding/relaxing,likeyogaorjustgoingjoggingSoitreallyvariesfrompeopleto如果不分呢 tokeepfit,likeng…（從五官的角度出發附加題目：Howtokeepahealthydiet?Whatkindsofthingsareunhealthyforpeopletoeat?Howdopeoplegetinformationabouthealth ?/listingthereOld--Newspapers&Magazines/TVshowsabouthealthAPP fingertipsold-fashioned,theytendtoYoung--Informationhighway–healthcarethereItvariesfromdifferentagegroups,foryoungergeneration,theytendtogetaccesstoinfoabouthealthfromsurfingoninternetorfromtheirfingertipsWhileforseniors,theyarelikelytodoitinold-fashionedways,likereading…,watching…or…SomethinglikethatDoyouyanysportYES-----Iamallyahugefanofngmanysports,including….Normallyspeaking,whenever/aslongasIhavesparetime(when),Iwouldliketodo…with…(who)at…(where)Ilikeit,sinceithelpsmekeepfitandmakenewfriends.BoostNo,becauseIfounditquitemoney-Doyouthinkchildrenshouldlearnhowtolivehealthily?觀點類10/0證明法if Absoluy/undoubtedlyyes,they Leadanunhealthylifewithbadhabitsthey emal-nutritious營養不良的Surelyyes,ahealthybodyisacornerstone/foundationforeverythingandnooneshouldbeanWithouthavingahealthylifeforchildren,theymight eshortsightedwhentheywatchtoomuchTVorbeobese/over-weightedaftereatingtoomuchjunkfood,that’swhytheyshouldlearntohavegoodhabitsofdietaryandregulardailyschedule每個人的健康都是做好其他事情的基石，沒有人可以例外；如果他們不知道如何健活，Onthecontrary,Itwouldintroducephysicalandmental(psychological)issuesArethereanynegativeinfluencesfromthehealthyinformation?10/0分走Withoutsupervisionandinformationtendstoberumorswouldbespreadingveryquicklyandwidely,whichcanresultinwastingDoyouthinksportscanhelppeopleimprovetheirhealth? 壞處2+1的方式whatdoyouseeabout…?SurelySurelyyes,sincefirstly,and expandsocialcircle ngYetwhenitcomestodrawbacks,IhavetoSurelyit’sagoodthing,sincefirstly,itisbeneficialforburningcaloriesandkeeagoodAdditionally,itislikelytoexpandsocialcirclewhentheymakesfriendsduringngsports,andthenthefriendshiptheygetisgoodfortheirmentalhealth/releasingpressure.Yetontheotherhand,Ifthereisalackofprotection,theymighthurtIf---workouttoointensely/causestressandDomost Tobehonest,thisquestionhasneveroccurredtomebefore,butIguessforthosepeoplewho…Takeupsomeexerciseregularly/Haveabalanceddiet/keeparegularsleepschedule/Theywillliveahealthylifestyle;otherwisetheanswerwillbebarelydoIhaveachanceofknowingthisquestion,sinceitreallyvariesfromcasetocase,yetinthefuture,Iwillfindoutmoreifthereisanecessity;乾坤大挪移；Whydopeopleliketokeeppets?Basically,thereareanumberofreasonsforpeopletokeepFirstofall,itcancheertheirmasterup,especiallywhentheyfeeltiredorMoreover,itisalsoagoodwayformasterstofosterasenseofcaring/lovingandBesides,IbelievesomekindsofpetscanbeagoodhelpforWhatshouldwedotoprotectendangeredanimals?Therebe解決方案emotionhealthp2pcareercostefficiency;quality;safetyFromwhereIstand,IguessavarietyofactivitiescanbedonetoprotectthemThefirstthingcomingintomymindisthatpeople’sawarenessofprotectionshouldberaised,sothateveryonecancontributetothisMoreover,ernmentshouldspendmoremoneyonbuildingmoreanimalsanctuary動物保護區andpunishthosewhokillendangeredanimalsillegally.SomethinglikeDoyousupport ngexperimentonanimals?我也不好說，那就給條Tobehonest,thisquestionisreallybeyondmyunderstandingandknowledge,butIguessaslongasthefollowingcriteriacanbemet,itisoktogoaheadFirstofall,thosescientistsmustobeytheruleofnottorturingthoseBesidesthat,theyshouldhavealistofqualifiedanimalstobetested,otherthanthoseendangeredAndtheyshouldbeveryhumanetodealwiththosetestinganimalsOtherwise,Iamnotafanofsupportingthem.Whydosomepeoplerefusetoeatanimals?8Idon’tknowactually,Icouldonlymakeaguess,probablytheyfeeleatinganimalsisthewaytokillmoreanimals;oritisalsolikelyforsomeofthemthinkthatbeingavegetarianisgoodforhealthandtheydon’tneedtoeatmeattoliveawholesomelifeaswell;wellitisalsooneofthepossibilitiesthatduetothereasonofreligiousbelief，theyshouldbeSomethinglikeWhatwouldhappenwhensomespeciesdisappearonearth?證明Itisreallyheardtosay,wellIsupposeifmoreandmorespeciesdisappearingonearth,thechainsystemwouldbeundermined,inthatcase,moreanimalswouldbeendangered,asaresult,humanbeingwouldlostthefoundationofsurvival;eventually,ournetwouldbedoomed,whichisunimaginable.Whatisthedifferencebetweendreamandgoal?對比題(comparedLetmethinkaboutit,thisquestionactuallyisveryinteresting,probablytherewillbesomeForexample,comparedwithadream,thegoalshouldbemorereasonableandspecific,likefindingawell-paidjoborpassingmyIelts,whileadreamcanbeimaginaryandunrealistic;Inaddition,agoalcanbeshortterm,whiledreamcanbelongterm,forinstance,Idreamtobeabillionaire,itdoesn’tmeanIwill eoneinashortwhileAndsomethinglikeif/withoutIwontdothat,sinceifthereisnodream,Iwouldhavenomotivatetokeepworkinghardinreality;forexample,mydreamistobuyahouseatNice,France,ifIonlyconsideritasadream,otherthankeefighting,mydreamwillneverberealized;Howdoyouachieveyourgoal?用時間的維度(firstly,andthen,afterwards,intheend)Letmesortitout;Iguessfirstofall,Ineedtoputforwardan,withallthedetailsanddates,afterthat,Iwillhavetospendalotoftimeandenergyonthis,throughout,ifthereisanyproblem,Iwillsolveitbymyownorwithmyfriends;eventually,IbelieveIwillgetwhateverIwantaslongasIputallmymindintothis.Whatkindsofgoalsdoyoungpeopleusuallyhave?TherebeThereareseveraltypicalgoalsforyoungpeopletorealize,likestudyingatprestigiousuniversities,findingawell-paidjob,meetingtheirMr/Mrsrightandsoon.Whatwillbethemostpopularjobsinthefuture?我也不知道，只要是Itisreallytrickytoanswer,Isupposeaslongasthefollowingpointscanbecovered,itwillbegoodFirstofall,wedoappreciatestabilityintermsoflocation Additionally,probablytheyshouldfindthatindustryisratherpromisingandhighlyvaluedintheMoreover,theiralabilitiescanbeimprovedthroughngsuchaInthatcase,Iguessjobslikeafinancialspecialist,anaccountant,teachersormanagerswouldbedesiredbythem.WhatkindsofpollutionareseriousinyourcountryTherebeTherearearangeofpollutionsourcesinmycountry,likecarorindustryemission,coalburninginwinterseasonorstrawburninginautumn,allcombinedtogetherwillleadtotheproblemofhaze,whichpushesthelevelofPM2.5sohigh,andthat’sthemostseriousoneinmycountryWhatcanindividualsdotoprotectourenvironment?Therebe五官列Itisreallyhardtosay,sinceforindividuals,environmentalprotectionseemstoocomplicatedandwell-rounded,yetIsupposetherearestillsomethingcanbedonebyindividuals,likenosmokinginpublicces,tryingtousepublictransportinsteadofprivateoneandsoon.Doyouthinkindividualsshouldberesponsibleforpollutions?當然了Iamnotsureaboutthis,sincenoonecanhavetheconclusionnow,sinceasoneofthesocietymembers,weareallpartoftheoperation,andIthinkindividualsshouldbepartiallyresponsibleforthatproblem,afterall,weallproducesdifferentkindsofenergyconsumption;whileIstillbelievethatthepursuitofGDPshouldbethemainsourceofit.Whyisthereaneedtoinvolve 8if/withoutDefiniyyes,sinceifthereisnoinvolvementofernment,noonewouldtaketheleadershiptocoordinateallthosedepartmentstodealwithit;morethanthat,therewillbenoonewhocanlegislateandpunishthosewhoviolatethem,that’swhythereisnodoubtthaternmentisreallycentralinthisissue.Peoplenowadaysaresurroundedbyallkindsofadvertising.Advertisingaffectswhatpeoplethinkisimportantandsometimeshasanegativeinfluenceonpeople’slives.towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?八詞Adsadvertstvcommercials,flyers,billboards,postsPublicserviceannouncementCreativeBecause,if/without,especially,forexample,comparedwith,Asaresult時代背景和討論的必要性今天無處不在的已經極大地影響了人們的生活方式和公司的運營模式andcommercialmodeling/patternThebestscenarioofadsistofacilitatepeople’slifeotherthanthe我相信在嚴格的管理下，是利大于弊Accordingly,Ibelievetheoverallbenefitscanoutweighitsdisadvantagesfromthefollowingaspectstobeginwith,Forconsumers,itoffersachancetoabsorbinformationaboutdetailsofaproduct,like….打個比方：itsappearance,price,designfunctionfeaturesandreference反證：withoutit,consumershavetospendextratimeorlabortocheckitoutinthesolid進一步舉例:meanwhile,forcompanies,theywouldloseanopportunitytoincrease/fosterpublicityandmarketingexposure;accordinglytheirsaleswouldplummet第二支持段的中心句:PSAistheadvertisementthatcanraiseawarenessofanimalprotection/environmentalprotection;Withoutitwiththeabsenceofit, publicwouldloseanopportunityofbeingeducatedorinformedfrommassmedia;:Forexample,inthepsanof“wherethebuyingstops,thekillingcantoo”,Thosecelebritiessetagoodexampletocallforthepublictoboycottthoseanimal-relatedproducts,likeivoryorsharkfin,inthewaythoseendangeredspeciescouldbewellpwithout7712讓步 Admittedly/nevertheless,itwouldbeunfairtonotrecognizeitspotential13舉例說明forexample,ifthereisalackofsupervisionorregulationfromthe,itislikelyforthoseTVcommercialstocontainmisleadingormisguidinginformation,14導致的asaconsequence,consumers’moneywouldbeDeterminingtheprosandconsitisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmore16明天會更好whilethisindustryshouldbewellregulatedandcontrolledtoensurethatconsumersbenefitfromadvertisingbothefficientlyandproductively.Forcompanies,itcanbeconsideredasachannelofincreasingPSAcanraiseawarenessofLackmanagement/supervision/regulation,informationcontainedinthoseadswillbemisleadingorexaggerating夸張的Ifpeople’slifeisoverwhelmedbyallsortsofads,theirlifewouldbe解決方案,Themustbestringent,andatowhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree可以定義為argumentation論證題，觀點相，建議寫成7/3分五段式，其中7分支持給人們生活帶來的好處，3分讓步存在的弊端7分支持優勢觀點1+支持句7分支持優勢觀點2+支持句3分讓步劣勢觀點+支持句Foreachparagraph,central evidencetoEmotionhealthp2pcareer costefficiencyqualitysafetyNuclearenergy1EnergyThebestscenarioofnuclearenergydevelopmentistointroduceefficiency,powerandtheguaranteeofsafety順帶出自己的觀點inthatcase,IbelievetheprosoutweighconsfromthefollowingaspectsLearnasecondGlobalizationThebestscenarioistoputtheirpreference,productivity,goalinto順帶出自己的觀點Accordingly,studentsatearlystageiflifearebelievedtobemoreadvantageousintermsoflanguageacquisition.alsavingsorernmentsAgingsocietyTheessence/essentialsformuseumistorecordfootstepsofcivilizationandhistorical Healthisvital,theessenceofhealthisthecornerstoneofeveryone’sphysicalandpsychologicalwellbeing. 信息量 誤導信Helpsusmake fraudulentonline Consumer Informationis 2.競爭 飽Opensupthe Toomuch打開市 過多的Keepsprices Annoyingadson 3.influence 影響兒童Adsthesedaysaremore putpressureon創意性吸引眼 Socialmedia persuadechildrentofollow社交的植 Simon Incentives讓步帶來競爭，降低價格（7分支持導致購物上癮（3分讓步人們獲得產品信息和功能的有效途徑(7分支持公益傳遞正能量（7分支持公益能夠更好地教育和引大眾（7分支持虛假和網絡詐騙（3分持步Simon法分析7分支持–給生活帶來的好是,反證：否則消費者不得不花時間和精力去比較不同的產品（comparingbrandsbytheir，效果：因此可以讓消費者的決定更加簡單和快捷(moreefficienttodecideon，益可以是protectsociallyvulnerablegroups）舉例：例如一個叫做WildAid的非組織就用名人效應號召人們保護珍稀動物(raiseawarenessofprotectingendangeredspecies)分讓步—給生活帶來的弊是舉例：包括了虛假信息，網絡詐騙，夸張的功效，內容不實等問題（misleadinginformation,overratedfunctionality,falsecontent）效果：需要嚴刑峻理行業去保障消費者的權益（en morestringentIntroductionTodays’advertisinghasgreatlyposedimpactsinmanyaspectsintermsofconsumers’wayofthinkingandbehaviors.時代背景Today’sadvertisinghasimpactedourlivesinevitablyinmanyaspectsintermsofconsumptionbehaviorandbusinessconductionpattern.rather/otherthanthecontrary.個人觀點,accordingly,advertisingisbelievedtocarrymoremeritsthandisadvantages.Taskresponse 有中心句有支持Lexicalresource Bodyparagraph1(oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetowastetimeandenergysearchingforinformationandmakingcomparisonsamongbrandsifthereareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsitesads.效果：(forthesereasonsornewmediatoabsorbinformationwhentheyneedtomakeapurchasingdecision.Bodyparagraph2Besides,publicserviceannouncementsservesanessentialpurposeineducatingandraisingpublic’sawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforthesociallyvulnerablegroups.（toToillustrate,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationnamedWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,效果(whichshowsshowinghowpublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferenceinsavingendangeredanimals.Bodyparagraph讓步觀點Admittedly,irresponsibleadvertisingbringsabout/introducesaseriesofdisturbancestobothindividualsandsociety,舉例(includingandincludingmisleadinginformation,overratedfunctions,inappropriatecontentorevendefraudingmoneyontheinternet.效果Therefore,ernmentsneedtomakemorestringentlegislationstoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbywrongdoers.Conclusion綜述：(determiningtheprosandLookingatprosandcons,itisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmore，明天會更好：(meanwhile)給出解決方案becenteredbyandbesupplementedby…to但同時要更加嚴格的去和控制行業來保證消費者能夠通過而讓生活變，Attheme,thisindustryisoughttobewellregulatedandcontrolledtoensurethatconsumersbenefitfromadvertisingbothefficientlyandproductively.GrticalRangeandSimon:Theomnipresenceoftoday’sadvertisinghashadinevitableimpactinseveralaspects.Thishasbeenapparenteversinceconsumers’shophabitswerereshapedand1. conductingbusinesswasrevolutionized.Frommy,theoverallinfluence2.carriesmoremeritsthandrawbacksforthefollowingreasons.Wayne:Theomnipresenceoftoday’sadvertisinghashadaninevitableimpactinseveralaspects.Thishasbeenapparenteversinceconsumers’shophabitswerereshapedandbusinessconductwasrevolutionized.Frommy,thisoverallinfluencecontainsmoremeritsthandrawbacksforthefollowingreasons.WayneWayofconductingbusinessbusinessconductBusinessconduct表示商業行為，更加簡潔Carry造句元素：theomnipresenceof…無處不在的…;impact=influence影響；reshapeshophabits重塑了購物習慣;conductbusiness經營企業；berevolutionized被BodyparagraphSimon:Oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisthatadvertisingisbothreliableandefficientforinformingconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetoareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsitesads.2.That'swhyconsumersnowincreasinglyrelyonemerging3.waysofadvertisingsuchassocialnetwork,ornewmediatoabsorbinformationwhen4.theyneedtomakeapurchasingWayne:Oneofthemostsupportingargumentsisthatadvertisingisbothreliableandefficientforinformingconsumerswithnecessarydetailsaboutacertainproduct,includingtheappearance,function,efficiencyandavailabilityaswellastheprice.Conversely,thosepotentialbuyershavetowastetimeandenergysearchingforinformationandcomparingbrandsifthereareinsufficientadvertisingchannels,suchasTVcommercials,printedadsorclassifiedwebsiteads.Forthesereasons,consumersnowincreasinglyrelyonemergingtechniquesofadvertisingsuchassocialnetworkingornewermediatoabsorbinformationwhendecidingonapurchase.WayneMakingcomparisonsamongbrandscomparingThat’swhy改為forthesereasons, That’swhy過于口語化,不在寫作中使用Waystechniquesway過于簡單information搜集信息；insufficient=notenough不夠的；TVcommercials電視；printedads平面；classifiedwebsitesads分類的；emergingmeansofmedia新興的Bodyparagraph1.public’sawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforthesociallyvulnerablegroups.2.Toillustrate,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationnamedWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,3.showinghowpublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferenceinsavingendangeredanimals.Wayne:Besides,publicserviceannouncementsserveanessentialpurposeineducatingandraisingawarenessinawiderangeoffieldsthatincludepreservingtheenvironment,protectinganimalsorcaringforsociallyvulnerablegroups.Toillustratethispoint,theningof“nobuying,nokilling”wasconductedandpromotedbyanon-profitorganizationcalledWildAidandhassuccessfullyattractedattentionwithimpressiveTVcommercialsadvocatedbycelebrities,demonstratinghowthepublic’ssharedresponsibilityandboycottresolutioncanmakeahugedifferenceinsavingendangeredanimals.Waynepublic（Thewordpublicisusedtoomanytimesinthisparagraph）Publicawareness，即表示公眾的意識ToillustratetoillustratethisShow造句元素：ningof……的造勢運動；Nobuying,nokilling conductandpromote實施和推動；non-profitorganization非營利組織；advocate相應，支持；publicserviceannouncement公益；serveanessentialpurpose發揮重要的作用；raiseawarenessof…提高…的意識；preservetheenvironment保護環境；careforsociallyvulnerablegroup關注弱勢群體；sharedresponsibility共同責任；boycottresolution的決心；makeahugedifference做出巨大的改變；saveendangered/extinctanimals保護瀕危BodyparagraphSimon:Admittedly,irresponsibleadvertising1.bringsaboutaseriesofdisturbancestobothcontentoreven3.defraudingmoneyontheinternet.Therefore,ernmentsneedto4.makemorestringent5.legislationstoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbywrongdoers.Wayne:Admittedly,irresponsibleadvertisingintroducesaseriesofdisturbancestobothindividualsandsociety,andincludemisleadinginformation,overratedfunctionality,inappropriatecontentorevenfraudulentonlinebehavior.Therefore,ernmentsneedtoenmorestringentlegislationtoprotectconsumersfrompotentialabusesbywrongdoers.WayneBringaboutFunctionsDefraudingmoneyontheInternetfraudulentonlineMakemorestringentlegislation改為 morestringentLegislationslegislationneverLegislation保護…不受…的危害；potentialabuse潛在的權益行為；wrongdoer做壞事的人Conclusion結論段Simon:1.lookingatprosandcons,itisobviousthatadvertisingcarriesmoremerits.2.Attheme,thisindustry3.isoughttobewellregulatedandco