英語寫作及答案I.Supplythemissingparagraph(10points)Thefollowingpassageisincompletewithonbodyparagraphmissing.Studythepassagecarefullyandwritethemissingparagraphofabout100words.Makesurethatthetoneandvocabularyyouuseareinunitywiththepassageprovided.Aswehaveseen,thefocusofmedicalcareinoursocietyhasbeenshiftingfromcuringdiseasetopreventingdisease—especiallyintermsofchangingourmanyunhealthybehaviors,suchaspooreatinghabits,smoking,andfailuretoexercise.Thelineofthoughtinvolvedinthisshiftcanbepursuedfurther.Imagineapersonwhoisabouttherightweight,butdoesnoteatverynutritiousfoods,whofeelsOKbutexercisesonlyoccasionally,whogoestoworkeveryday,butisnotanoutstandingworker,whodrinksafewbeersathomemostnightsbutdoesnotdrivewhiledrunk,andwhohasnochestpainsorabnormalbloodcounts,butsleepsalotandoftenfeelstired.Thispersonisnotill.Hemaynotevenbeatriskforanyparticulardisease.Butwecanimaginethatthispersoncouldbealothealthier.Thefieldofmedicinehasnottraditionallydistinguishedbetweensomeonewhoismerely“notill”andsomeonewhoisinexcellenthealthandpaysattentiontothebody’sspecialneeds.Bothtypeshavesimplybeencalled“well.”Inrecentyears,however,somehealthspecialistshavebeguntoapplytheterms“well”and“wellness”onlytothosewhoareactivelystrivingtomaintainandimprovetheirhealth._______________________________________________________________________________Peoplewhoarewellarelikelytobebetterabletoresistdiseaseandtofightdiseasewhenitstrikes.Andbyfocusingattentiononhealthywaysofliving,theconceptofwellnesscanhaveabeneficialimpactonthewaysinwhichpeoplefacethechallengesofdailylife.II.Writeanoutline(20points)Readthefollowingpassagecarefullyandcomposea"topicoutline"forit.ForaBetterUnderstandingBetweenParentandChildNowadaysthereisoftenalackofunderstandingbetweenparentandchild.Modernsocietyhasbeenchanginggreatlysomuchsothateventherelationsbetweenparentandchildhavebecomemuchdifferentfromseveraldecadesago.Farlessdotheycommunicateeachotherbuttheyalwayscomplainandquarrelinstead.Asitis,generationgaphasbecomequiteaspreadingsocialproblem.Asfortheproblem,variouspossiblereasonsmaybefound.Becauseofeithereconomicnecessityorstrongdeterminationforpersonalfulfillment,orboth,neitherfathernormotherhasanytimetostaytogetherwiththeirchildren.Ontheotherhand,teenagerseagerlyfeeltheneedforfreedomawayfromtheirparentstoexploretheiremergingidentityasayoungadult-todevelophisowninterestsortoperfecthisfavoriteskills,whichtheirparentsmaynotprefer.Hence,theparentsmustsufferthelossoftheirunrulylittleboyorgirl,incapableofkeepingtheirchildtoremaininthesafeandfamiliarroutinesofearlychildhoodortodowhattheydemand.Eventually,eitherparentorchildbecomesunsatisfied,nopatientwitheachotherandwouldnotliketofindanychancetounderstandtheother.Ifthissituationistobenavigatedsuccessfully,therearereallysomesuggestionsbothforparentandchildtofollow.Forparents,byrecallingtheirownchildhoodexperiences,theycouldunderstandandthentrytohelptheirownchildrenwheneverneeded.Theyshouldalsotrustthatonlyinveryshorttimewillthechildemergefromtheuncertaintyofbeingateenageranddisplaythemature,adultcharactertoforgivetheirparentsforthesakeoftheirhardwork..Bothesidesstrivingforabetterunderstanding,itisnodoubtthattheirrelationswillbeimprovedquickly.=3\*ROMANIIISentencetransformation(15points)Transformthefollowingsentencesintobetteroneswithoutchangingtheirmeanings.Theoutlineofeachsentenceisgiven.Pleasefillineachblankwithonlyoneword（每空僅限填一詞）1.Myfavoritesportisswimming.→There

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willChinabethefirstcountrytousenuclearweapons5Opportunitiesareunprecedentedforthosewhounderstandthecellandthepixel.→

Itisaworld________opportunitieshavenever

________________forthosewhounderstandthecellandthepixel.6Iwanttothankstudents,faculty,alumniandstaffandIhavebeenprivilegedtoworkwiththemoverthesepastyears.→Iwanttothankstudents,faculty,alumniandstaff

________________Ihavebeenprivilegedtoworkoverthesepastyears.7Atsuchamoment,wetendtoelevatecomfortandconsensusoverprogressandcleardirection.→Atsuchamoment,thereis________toelevatecomfortandconsensusoverprogressandcleardirection.8Thedecadeaheadwillbringmorehardchoicesforourcountry,andtherearesomeguidingprinciplesthatshouldgiveusdirection.→Thedecadeaheadwillbringmorehardchoicesforourcountry,andtherearesomeguidingprinciplesthatshould________ourcourse.9WecannotdenythefactthatthePalestinianpeople--MuslimsandChristians--havesufferedinpursuitofahomeland.→Itis________thatthePalestinianpeople--MuslimsandChristians--havesufferedinpursuitofahomeland.10Solettherebenodoubt:

ThePalestinianpeoplecannotstandthesituation.→Solettherebenodoubt:

ThesituationforthePalestinianpeopleis________.=4\*ROMANIVComposeanessay(55points)TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofYoungPeople'sEarlyIndependence注：考試結束后，只交答題紙I.Supplythemissingparagraph(10points)Thefollowingpassageisincompletewithonbodyparagraphmissing.Studythepassagecarefullyandwritethemissingparagraphofabout100words.Makesurethatthetoneandvocabularyyouuseareinunitywiththepassageprovided.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________II.Writeanoutline(20points)Readthefollowingpassagecarefullyandcomposea"topicoutline"forit.I.____________________________________

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bothsideshouldtrytounderstandeachother=3\*ROMANIIISentencetransformation(15points)Transformthefollowingsentencesintobetteroneswithoutchangingtheirmeanings.Theoutlineofeachsentenceisgiven.Pleasefillineachblankwithonlyoneword（每空僅限填一詞）1________________

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________________.7________.8________.9________.10________.=4\*ROMANIVComposeanessay(55points)TheAdvantagesandDisadvantagesofYoungPeople'sEarlyIndependence《英語寫作》模擬試題答案I.Supplythemissingparagraph(20points)Asweknow,foodisoneoftheexistentialelementsforhuman,andwecannotlivewithoutfood.Butasthelivingconditionhasbeenimproved,itseemsthatmostofusarebecomestricttowhatweeat-wearelikelytochoosethosewelike,toothersweshallresist.While,accordingtothenutritionists'pointofview,weneedmanykindsoffoodtokeepusinhealthycondition.Itisallrightthatwemayhaveourparticularflavor,butwemustkeepinmindthatwealsoneedotherkindsoffoodtokeepusinbalance.Thosewhocanhaveahealthybodyarethosewhoknowhowtoeat,andwhattoeat.II.Readthefollowingpassagecarefullyandcomposea"topicoutline"forit.(20points)I.Generalintroductionandexplanation

A.Problemsoflackofunderstandingbetweenparentandchild.B.Reasonsforthissituationa.economicnecessityb.strongdeterminationforpersonalfulfillment

C.satisfactionbetweeneachothera.parents'feelingb.children'sfeelingII.Suggestionstosolvetheproblems.a.parents-helpandtrustb.children-theirparents'hard-workIII.ConclusionIII.Composition(60points)DissatisfactionleadstoprogressThisarticleremindsmeofawell-knownstoryaboutafrog.Thefrogisputonthecoolwateratfirst,andthenthewaterisboiledsteadily,thefrogcannotsenseittillitdied.Ithinkthisstoryputthefacttousveryclearly:peoplelikelybecomeinsensitivetotheseemingcomfortableenvironment;theyenjoyi