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andJobdescription工作及工作具體內容Hobby愛好Name名字He’s/She’skind/friendly....Doyoulikehim/her?My______TrytowriteTip3:表達時，用詞恰當，語法準確，如：主語是第三人稱單數時，動詞要加s/es/ies，like后面加動詞ing形式等。Tip1:表達時，信息豐富，語言豐滿。（正文）（開頭）（結尾）Tip2:表達時，句式靈活，避免重復。photo檢查：句式、單詞拼寫、書寫、語法…Let’scooperate.同桌互助合作修改作文，有不會寫的單詞可以請教老師或同學，也可以查閱詞匯本。Step1

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