1、2023年全國各省市中考英語作文匯總新鮮出爐-下篇！附高分范文和點評 第8篇2023重慶B卷18分征文我和朋友之間的故事在我們成長的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的風景。在相知相伴的歲月里，留下了多少美好的故事和難忘的回憶！某英語報社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me為題開展征文活動，請你按要求用英語寫一篇文章參賽。要求：故事必須原創；80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。參考要點：分享故事起因，經過，結果；表達感受幸福，感動，思考；. A Story Between My Friend And MeThere is alw

2、ays something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.高分范文【寫作點撥】本文是一篇命題作文，并給出了參考要點。由題目“A Story Between My Friend and Me可知寫作的重點在于表達故事，并表達感受。寫作時，可選取個人與朋友之間印象深刻，且比擬有教育意義的事件。表達個人故事，要用第一人稱，且時態主要為一般過去時，表達感受時，用一般現在時?！靖叻址段摹縏here is always something unforgettable in my life, e

3、specially the story between my friend and me.One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.Here is the story.On a rainy day, I suddenlyfell downand hurt myself badly.My left leg was broken.So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and Iwas worried aboutmy study.Then my friend Ming

4、ming came to see me.When he knew about that,he said he could help me with my study.On hearing this,I didnt feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didnt fall behind the other studentswith Mingmings help. I thanked him a lot.In my opinion,friends are very im

5、portant in our life.No matter what happens,true friends will always be friends.第9篇2023浙江舟山20分選書的理由學校將舉辦“A Summer for Better English活動，請你從下面的推薦書單中選擇兩本想閱讀的書刊，然后用英語寫一篇短文，在學校的English Corner分享。A list of books for English skills and for funBasic English Writing Treasure IslandSecrets of English Words Robi

6、nson CrusoeA Guide to English Listening Alices Adventures in Wonderland20 Topicsfor English Speaking Time for Kidsa magazine注意：1必須從書單中選擇2本書刊，并闡述理由。2文中不得出現與你身份相關的信息。3詞數：80100。短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。短文首句：To improve our English,the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer.高分范文【寫作點撥】本文要求寫一

7、篇表達觀點的短文?？忌趯懽鲿r，一定要注意題目中要求選擇兩本想閱讀的書刊，因此在陳述理由的時候，要分別針對選擇的兩本書刊說明理由。題目中給出的書刊列表“暗藏玄機。左列書刊提高英語語言能力，右列書刊拓展英語文化。考生可針對兩列書刊不同的功能從中選擇兩本，并簡要陳述理由。【高分范文】To improve our English,the school has given a list of books for us to read this summer.Of all the suggested books,I have decided to choose Secrets of English Wo

8、rds and Time for Kids.The first one is a book which may help learn English words better.By reading this book,I will surely know more new words.This will make my future study much easier.Time for Kids is a popular magazine speciallywritten forstudents,in which I will read interesting stories and have

9、 a taste of teen life abroad.So it mustbe great fun readingit.By being part of this activity,I am expecting a big step forward in my English.第10篇2023山東泰安20分共享單車之我見如今，很多城市出現了一種綠色出行方式共享單車bike-sharing。它因環保、便捷而備受青睞，但同時也引發了一系列問題。請你根據提示以“Bike-sharing為題寫一篇英語短文，表達自己的看法和建議。要點提示：Advantagesbe convenient，less p

10、ollution，reduce the traffic pressure減緩交通壓力take exerciseProblemsthrow away,damage(損毀)，be stolenAdvicecivilized(文明的)，follow the rules，take good care of注意：短文應包括以上要點，可適當發揮，以使行文連貫；文中不得出現真實的人名、校名及地名；詞數：80100字文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。Bike-sharingToday, as a greener means of transportation,bike-sharing is becoming mo

11、re and more popular in many cities.高分范文【熱點解讀】共享單車是一種自行車共享效勞。自2023年，共享單車在各大城市如雨后春筍般茁壯成長，為人們的出行帶來了極大的便捷，有效地緩解了交通擁堵，也為低碳環保出了一份力。同時，共享單車也出現了一系列的問題，如亂停亂放，被偷被毀，充值容易退費難等。針對這些問題，各地也推出了一系列的舉措來標準共享單車的管理。共享單車是2023年中考命題人的“寵兒，以不同的形式頻頻出現在各地中考試卷中?？忌诜泵Φ膹土晜淇贾校⒅仃P注社會熱點，思考社會問題，尤其是與生活息息相關的熱點。【寫作點撥】本文要求以“Bike-sharing為

12、題，根據表格的內容提示，寫一篇短文，表達自己對共享單車的看法和建議。寫作時，考生要緊密貼合表格中的三個要點：首先，闡述共享單車的優點；其次，列舉共享單車帶來的問題；最后，根據問題給出個人建議。【高分范文】Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.Its known thatit has many advantages. So its enjoyed by lots of people.First of all,its ver

13、y convenient for people togo somewhere. Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollutionbecause ofbike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way,its helpfulto peoples health.However, it also brings some problems.For example, some people thr

14、ow them away after using bikes. Even some people damagethem , and some bikes are stolen.In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes.As long aswe take good care of bikes, it will make our lifebetter and better, and our environment will be more beautiful.第11篇

15、2023達州10分如何做一個好學生某班英語課上，就“爭當中華好少年進行小組交流活動，請你根據活動記錄情況，以“How to be a great student?為題，寫一篇英語短文。良好習慣生活規律，健康飲食，加強鍛煉學習刻苦，上課認真聽講，按時完成作業老實守信不撒謊，考試不作弊遵守校規嚴禁私自下河洗澡，嚴禁 進校園，不打架斗毆要求：全文字數90詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入單詞總數。條理清楚，書寫工整，句式標準。標點符號和大小寫使用正確。內容必須包含表格中的提示信息，并適當發揮；文中不得出現真實的人名及地名。How to be a great student?Its very import

16、ant to be a good student. As teenagers, how to be a good student?In my opinion,高分范文【寫作點撥】根據給出的題目“How to be a great student?可以判斷題目要求考生寫一篇做法建議類的短文。表格中已經給出了具體的做法，考生在寫作時需要圍繞表格中給出的三個方面寫作，并適當發揮。如：注重個人公眾場合的行為舉止、與同學互幫互助等。做法建議類文章在寫作時，主要用一般現在時。【高分范文】Its very important to be a good student. As teenagers, how t

17、o be a good student?In my opinion，there are lots of things weshould do. Firstly,its necessary todevelop good habits in life and study.For example, we shouldeat healthily and do much exercise every day. Besides, we shouldlisten tothe teacher carefully and finish homework on time. Secondly, be honest.

18、 Dont tell lies and nevercheat in tests.Honesty is the best policy. Thirdly, weare supposed toobey the school rules. Dont go swimming alonewithout permission, and dont take mobile phones to school and so on. Finally, we shouldget on well withour classmates. When someone isin trouble, we shouldgive t

19、hem a hand.第12篇 2023宜賓15分如何提高學習效率目前很多學生整天都忙于學習，成績卻不理想。請根據表格內容，結合自身實際，寫一篇關于“怎樣提高學習效率的短文。要求：短文應條理清楚，行文連貫，段落清楚，90詞左右。開頭結尾已給出，不計入 總字數短文中不能出現真實的人名、校名及地名等信息。短文應包括全部信息，可圍繞主題適當發揮。學習方法1.listen to the teacher2.take notes3.review in time4.correct mistakes體育鍛煉1.exercise其他方面1.make good use of time2.ask sb.for he

20、lpHow to improve our study effectivelyA great number of students cant finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions._If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.高分

21、范文【寫作點撥】根據題目要求可以看出本文是一篇做法建議類的說明文。考生需要結合表格中給出的中英文提示，圍繞“如何提高學習效率寫出具體的做法或建議。寫作時，要注意使用連接詞將各個要點銜接起來，使文章的表達更流暢自然。除了表格中給出的要點，考生還要適當發揮。【高分范文】How to improve our study effectivelyA great number of students cant finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How c

22、an we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.You need to find an effective learningmethod.Take advantage ofclass time to listen to the teacher. Taking notes will help you remember what the teachers say. After class, you should review your lessons in time. You should also finish your homework c

23、arefully. If you havediscovered any mistakes, correct them immediately. This will help you form a good learning habit. Besides, you need to do some exercise. It cannot onlymake you relaxedbut alsobuild up your body.All inall, you shouldmake good use oftimein studying and relaxation. If you have any

24、problems in your study, you canaskyour classmates or teachersfor help.If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.第13篇2023金華20分分享名著?老人與海?假設你應邀參加一個國際讀書會，并將分享自己讀過的一本好書。請根據以下表格中的要點，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你要分享的書。Key points要點Words and expressions for reference參考詞匯What the name isThe

25、Old Man and the SeaWho write itErnest Hemingway，AmericaWhat it is aboutfisherman，fight against fish and natureWhy I like itmeaningful，never give up，well-known sentence: “Man is notmade for defeat擊敗., interesting,helpfulwell-known sentence：注意：1可選擇使用所給的書名及內容，也可另選書籍；2短文內容可適當增加；3文中不得出現真實的人名和校名；4詞數：80100

26、；5短文首句僅供選擇使用，不計入總詞數。短文首句：The book Id like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea.高分范文【寫作點撥】根據題目要求可知本文是一篇說明文，考生需要用英語介紹?老人與海?這本國外名著。寫作要點在表格中已經給出。寫作時，首先要介紹這本書的根本信息，如作者的名字和國籍；其次，介紹這本書的大概內容；最后，介紹為什么喜歡這本書。文章的段落依然呈現“三段式的結構，層次清楚?！靖叻址段摹縏he book Id like toshare withyou is The Old Man and the Sea,written

27、 by an American writer Ernest Hemingway.This book tells about a fisherman who islucky enough tocatch a huge fish at sea,but finds it hard to take it home.On the way back,he has tofight againstthe fish,and the sea as well.What I like most about the book is that the fisherman nevergives upwhenmeeting withdifficulties.I still remember the well-known sentence from the book:Man is not made for defeat.This tellsus thatnothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.(100 words)第14篇2023安徽25分邀請參加展演活動假設你是李華，你們學校將舉行“弘揚中華傳統文化戲曲