1、2020_2021學年高中英語Unit1WomenofachievementSectionGuidedWriting人物描寫教師用書教案新人教版必修42020_2021學年高中英語Unit1WomenofachievementSectionGuidedWriting人物描寫教師用書教案新人教版必修4PAGE 2020_2021學年高中英語Unit1WomenofachievementSectionGuidedWriting人物描寫教師用書教案新人教版必修4Unit 1 Women of achievement人物描寫eq avs4al（文體指導)人物描寫屬于記敘文的范疇，它以寫人、記事為主，以

2、敘述和描寫為主要表達方式.一篇好的人物描寫一般分為三大部分，即生平介紹、事跡敘述和簡短的評論。時態的選擇要視情況而定，若寫人物的過去就用過去時態，若寫人物的現在就用現在時態。1生平介紹。人物的出生時間和地點是必不可少的信息;介紹生平時要尊重客觀事實，材料要真實。2事跡敘述.選材要著眼于人物的生活背景及其成就事跡，以形成對比，起到突出人物的特點和樹立榜樣的作用。選材要有重點,不必面面俱到.3簡短的評論。對所描述的人物的評論要客觀公正。eq avs4al(亮點句式)1介紹人物的姓名、出身及外貌特征He has fair hair and blue eyes.Abraham Lincoln，the

3、son of a poor family,was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809。She is an ordinary.looking girl,but her kindness and consideration impress me most。He is a goodlooking,kind。hearted man。2介紹人物的成就或取得的成績During her career life，she obtained 132 championships，including 4 Olympic championships。When he was stil

4、l a boy，he showed great interest in literature。He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.Her story tells us that we should value what we have,and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life。3介紹人物的影響及人們對此人的評價He became famous for his new theory。The people had come to love

5、 him as an inspiring leader。We regard him as our model.Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.eq avs4al(寫作任務）根據下面表格內的漢語提示，寫一篇100詞左右的介紹簡古道爾的短文。研究領域著名的野生動物研究專家，尤其在研究黑猩猩方面性格謙虛、坦誠、考慮周到主要事跡1.童年時期，她碰巧看到一本名叫泰山和杜拉德博士的書。受到極大鼓舞,打算研究動物；2那個時代,婦女受到歧視，但媽媽支持她;320世紀60年代，簡動身去非洲研究黑猩猩，用了25年多的時間觀察和記錄黑猩猩的日常活

6、動，完全弄懂了它們的行為。成就1。成立了幾個組織,發起一項保護動物的運動;2在世界各地演講,呼吁年輕一代參加“根與芽活動；3被授予了多個獎項.參考詞匯:1泰山和杜拉德博士Tarzan and Dr Doolittle;2“根與芽”“Shoot and Root。eq avs4al（審題謀篇）體裁記敘文主題介紹簡古道爾的生平事跡時態一般現在時及一般過去時人稱第三人稱結構首段：簡單介紹古道爾的性格中段：介紹古道爾的主要事跡尾段:介紹古道爾的成就eq avs4al(遣詞造句).對接單元詞匯1specialist專家2modest 謙虛的3considerate 考慮周全的4inspire 激勵；鼓勵

7、5come across 偶然遇到6intend to do sth。 打算做某事7campaign to do sth。 發起做某事的運動8support 支持9look down on/upon 瞧不起10observe 觀測；觀察11behaviour 行為12deliver a speech 發表演說。巧用單元句式語法(一)完成句子1簡古道爾，一位著名的專家，研究野生動物，尤其是黑猩猩。(名詞作同位語)Jane Goodall，a famous specialist,studies wild animals，especially chimps。2成立了幾個組織并發起了一項保護動物的運動

8、讓她世界聞名。(強調句型)It is setting up several organizations and campaigning to protect animals that have made her famous all over the world。3這就是簡古道爾，由于突出的成績她獲得了許多獎項。（定語從句）Such is Jane Goodall，who is awarded many prizes for her great achievements.（二）句式升級4童年時期，她碰巧看到一本名叫泰山和杜拉德博士的書。In her childhood,she came acr

9、oss a book which is called Tarzan and Dr Doolittle。In her childhood，she came across a book called Tarzan and Dr Doolittle。（過去分詞作定語）5她受到了極大鼓舞，打算研究動物.She was greatly inspired by it and intended to study animals。Greatly inspired by it,she intended to study animals.(過去分詞作狀語)eq avs4al(妙筆成篇） 【參考范文】Jane Go

10、odall，a famous specialist，studies wild animals,especially chimps.She is a modest，outspoken and considerate woman。In her childhood，she came across a book called Tarzan and Dr Doolittle.Greatly inspired by it,Jane intended to study animals.At that time，women were often looked down on，but her mother su

11、pported her decision.In the 1960s,Jane moved off to Africa to study chimps,where she spent over 25 years observing and recording their daily activities and fully understood chimps behaviour。It is setting up several organizations and campaigning to protect animals that have made her famous all over the world.In recent years,Jane has delivered speeches all over the wo